......i'm only 12 , so if you criticize, please don't criticize too hard on me
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I rather like the detailing of (I'm assuming it is) Kairi's eyes, but aside from that, a lot of detail is lost in the hair, seemingly from accidental smudging. Aside from that, there's very little shading detail, whether it be directional shading or anything to sho a light source, aside from that under her breats, it seems.
Ollette... Is looking rather Asian there. I think, specifically, you should bring the eyes closer together, and probably the tip of her nose up a bit, as well.
I'd recommend as a general to try to keep the black areas more constant, and in one direction, because it is really showing up at the moment
You're really good for 12 (or are you 13 now? hah.) I'd love to see what you can do when you get older and develop more.
I think you just need to work a bit on the shoulders but holy hell the faces are amazing.
Twelve year olds dont draw like this where I'm from.
You're great at this, if anything, you make me feel embarassed about any of my attempts at people. As others have said, you only need to practice in a spot or two but other then that, you're excellent and I bow to your pre-teen prowess. ^.^
bloody hell you don't need to be critized, you need to be praised. ^^
seriously, you have good talent at this ( i suck now XD)
maybe more shading will shape it up more.
ok. u know i love praising you, akami,
hmmm... i think..maybe work on ..boobs? maybe... or at least like the neck maybe... but only if ya going to try to be more realistic.. but if ya go for the anime style..then nvm. unless it's like a guy drawing...i think. lol.
her head isn't going too well with the body