......i'm only 12 , so if you criticize, please don't criticize too hard on me
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bloody hell you don't need to be critized, you need to be praised. ^^
seriously, you have good talent at this ( i suck now XD)
maybe more shading will shape it up more.
seriously, you have good talent at this ( i suck now XD)
maybe more shading will shape it up more.
Whoa It looks amazing....
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I rather like the detailing of (I'm assuming it is) Kairi's eyes, but aside from that, a lot of detail is lost in the hair, seemingly from accidental smudging. Aside from that, there's very little shading detail, whether it be directional shading or anything to sho a light source, aside from that under her breats, it seems.
Ollette... Is looking rather Asian there. I think, specifically, you should bring the eyes closer together, and probably the tip of her nose up a bit, as well.
I'd recommend as a general to try to keep the black areas more constant, and in one direction, because it is really showing up at the moment
Ollette... Is looking rather Asian there. I think, specifically, you should bring the eyes closer together, and probably the tip of her nose up a bit, as well.
I'd recommend as a general to try to keep the black areas more constant, and in one direction, because it is really showing up at the moment
ok. u know i love praising you, akami, 
hmmm... i think..maybe work on ..boobs? maybe... or at least like the neck maybe... but only if ya going to try to be more realistic.. but if ya go for the anime style..then nvm. unless it's like a guy drawing...i think. lol.
hmmm... i think..maybe work on ..boobs? maybe... or at least like the neck maybe... but only if ya going to try to be more realistic.. but if ya go for the anime style..then nvm. unless it's like a guy drawing...i think. lol.
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her head isn't going too well with the body
Twelve year olds dont draw like this where I'm from.
You're great at this, if anything, you make me feel embarassed about any of my attempts at people. As others have said, you only need to practice in a spot or two but other then that, you're excellent and I bow to your pre-teen prowess. ^.^
You're great at this, if anything, you make me feel embarassed about any of my attempts at people. As others have said, you only need to practice in a spot or two but other then that, you're excellent and I bow to your pre-teen prowess. ^.^
I think you just need to work a bit on the shoulders but holy hell the faces are amazing.
heheh, thanks for the advices! lol, (nope that person is not kairi)
and about olette...yes i'm sorry T_T it seems like whenever i draw something, it turns out to look a bit asian.
I do need to be criticized XD!
and thanks
, yes, I really...really need to work on the shadingok. u know i love praising you, akami,
hmmm... i think..maybe work on ..boobs? maybe... or at least like the neck maybe... but only if ya going to try to be more realistic.. but if ya go for the anime style..then nvm. unless it's like a guy drawing...i think. lol.
yep....i love making my drawings have small boobs XD *shhh* and i did notice i have to fix the neck...I'm going for the Kingdom Hearts style though
...and no it's not a guy drawing XD
Wow, I could only draw smiley faces and transparent cubes when I was twelve. Good work.
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