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[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 in progress...]

That happens to me all the time... When those rare times I clean my room, I find old fanfiction writing I did, (LOTR, CI.. crap like that XD)

And some of them, i simply throw into the trash, and rip it without reading it, but there are some where I am so enthralled with it. (normally old Legolas/arwen fics...)


XD.


LMAO.... XD. Pregant kairi, now that would be quite a sight...XD

Heh.

In reality with the body type Nomura gave her... she'd probably die if she wasn't careful and shit. Babies are scary shit, yo.


I barely write enough to do that a lot so usually it's just the collab FMA fanfic I helped my friend with or uw stuff.

Or the random emo shit that I wrote to make myself feel like I'm venting.

 

[Roa]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 in progress...]

Heh.

In reality with the body type Nomura gave her... she'd probably die if she wasn't careful and shit. Babies are scary shit, yo.


I barely write enough to do that a lot so usually it's just the collab FMA fanfic I helped my friend with or uw stuff.

Or the random emo shit that I wrote to make myself feel like I'm venting.

I still think Namime and Kairi are WAY too short for their age. I'm namine's age (around there) in COM and I'd at LEAST go up to marluxia's shoulders, and i'm in the shorter half of my class. >.> it's messed up, imho.

yes i know how scary babies are. XD. I've actually written somebody younger than Kairi get pregnant.. it's really weird. o.o

XD. I write to vent a lot too.. but then i typically turn it into an actual story later. XD

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 in progress...]

Well... in this I sort of was going for them being 16-17. .-. Riku'd be 18.

IF HE FUCKED SORA IT'D BE STATUTORY RAPE. ISN'T THAT GREAT?!
TEEHEE. <3

But yeah, babies are scary. I would hope someone as tiny as Namine wouldn't get pregnant for her and the babies sake.

 

[Roa]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 in progress...]

... i wasn't referring to Namine when I said I had somebody younger than Kairi getting pregnant... >.>

I hate that stupid god damn law. '_'

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 in progress...]

... i wasn't referring to Namine when I said I had somebody younger than Kairi getting pregnant... >.>

I hate that stupid god damn law. '_'

Whyyyy? getting in the way of your romancin'?

:3


but yeah. i'll relook over chapter 3 and 4 and work on 5 when i get some granny squares down for my blanket that i'm making. i'm going to get myself work.

 

[Annoyance]

Alright.

I love how I make promises... break them.
I haven't worked on unheard whispers since I posted that I'm pretty sure...

SO.
I'M WORKING ON IT. Just wanted to put that out there. It'll probably be up iiiin... Hm. I'm going to make my deadline the 30th of June. >C
[i'll merge this post after i'm done with it.]

Also, I'm gonna be fixing up minor errors with 1-4. [out of character dialogue with riku, typos everyone missed, etc.] so look forward to that as well.

 

[AxelYoYo]

Re: unheard whispers [revised] [warning given]

I like SOra in this story. Dunno why, I just do.

 

[Vani]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 30th!]

i liked that a lot. you are very talented.

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 30th!]

I like SOra in this story. Dunno why, I just do.

I do too. c: I tried not to make him TOOOO innocent but still give him the naive little kid brain he has. Glad you like it.

i liked that a lot. you are very talented.

Oh thank you~. <3


Alright... a couple set backs and a lot of shit going down that distracted me but the chapter is 80% done. I just need to finish tweaking it, finish the end of it and get more proofreaders... If anyone's interested please tell me right away, alright~?

Gonna push for the 24th. Sorry I pushed back the deadline... I'm putting it at the 24th just in case I run into more distractions.

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

Alright. The chapter is all typed out. I just need some proofreaders and it should be out Saturday hopefully. I'm stoked are you stoked I'm stoked.

YEAH.

Let's do this.

 

[Gildragon]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

Well I'm not picking up any spelling errors. but Its too long for me to read...right now. I'll take a look at it again on my lunch break

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

Well I'm not picking up any spelling errors. but Its too long for me to read...right now. I'll take a look at it again on my lunch break

I haven't posted the last chapter yet. :c It's still on my compy. But it'd be awesome if you read the first 4 chapters before proofreading just so you know what's going on and to give me any opinions on that. c:

 

[Gildragon]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

k I will do it

but it will be a few hours before I can dedicate the time to it...if that's ok

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

k I will do it

but it will be a few hours before I can dedicate the time to it...if that's ok

As long as this gets done before Saturday, I'm cool with it. Thank you so much for helping out. When you're done reading them just tell me and I'll send you the file for the 5th chapter.

 

[Gildragon]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

oh yeah

I'll probably be able to do most if not all of it today.

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

oh yeah

I'll probably be able to do most if not all of it today.

Well, thank you for that. If anyone else is interested in helping out please tell meeee~.

 

[Nyangoro]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

I think I can stomach the yaoi overtones long enough to help.

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

I think I can stomach the yaoi overtones long enough to help.

Did you read the rest of the chapters when I made you read this?

Also, this chapter has a romance scene... so if you don't wanna read that I dunno... But that's the one thing I want to be the best out of the chapter since it's the ending one...

 

[Nyangoro]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

Not all of them

Besides, I'm a weeaboo. I should be able to handle it.

 

[Annoyance]

Re: unheard whispers [chapter 5 out on the 24th!]

Not all of them

Besides, I'm a weeaboo. I should be able to handle it.

Well read the rest of them then. >C And then tell me when you're done.