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ahh that was nice! ^_^
it was worth the wait
It was? o_O? lol I would have said it was one of my worst chapters, I was almost ashamed to bring it to you guys! XD. Overly boring in my opinion. I was writing it thinking... Hmm... this isn't going to be very good, I'll lose readers from this... Oh Well! hehehe

yaay! update! and i didn't think it was too short!
No... It wasn't when I looked at it. I mean I didn't expect it to be this long at all. lol. Still, I get carried away with myself so shoot me. :p I found it it's 35 pages long (Entire Fic) and it's now 14 956 words long.... If my memory serves me correctly lol.

hehe you could say my chapters are a little short :3
Ur chapters rock though, no boring bits! Which reminds me I need to finish reading chapter 1 you wrote lol.

but anyways, im really happy you took your time;
Yeah, I'd rather take my time in writing it than make a quick dash at it and make it stupid. Infact I wasn't planning on writing today, but I did, it actually made me feel better. lol I was talking to my friend about it the other day she was like "Why would ya? It's like writing an assignment." I replied with "It's a release of my creativity. Assignments are the things that have limits. If allowed to use my imagination freely, It's fun - No boundaries! That's why I love to write for you guys!

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That was an interesting chapter, not boring at all. Lol.
Sora was always cute xD
He is aye?
I love Sora, not in pathetic fan girl way. But I love his character, I love who he is. I mean when I first played KH I hated him to death, I'd die on purpose so he could feel pain, but then I grew to love him. He and I are the exact opposite in personalities except when ever I do a quiz over the net, I always get him. O,o - Go figure... Actually I got Kairi once, even still that's not me. Im you typical , Negitive, Sadistic, Sarcatic, Meloncholy person you could ever meet. For goodness sake I mean with me the glass is neither half full or half empty... It's poisioned! lol.
 
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He is aye?
I love Sora, not in pathetic fan girl way. But I love his character, I love who he is. I mean when I first played KH I hated him to death, I'd die on purpose so he could feel pain, but then I grew to love him. He and I are the exact opposite in personalities except when ever I do a quiz over the net, I always get him. O,o - Go figure... Actually I got Kairi once, even still that's not me. Im you typical , Negitive, Sadistic, Sarcatic, Meloncholy person you could ever meet. For goodness sake I mean with me the glass is neither half full or half empty... It's poisioned! lol.

Lol. Die on purpose? xD Ppl do not wish their character die though...
Can't imagine how is ur personality then. Lol
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Same here.I like to write, though I have never wrote my fanfic.Usually whenever I tried to start writing one, school gets in the way.
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ARGH don't you hate that?? School is always getting in my way lol.

Lol. Die on purpose? xD Ppl do not wish their character die though...
lol I only did it one day for pure amusement, lol I got bored after about a half hour and went on with it. lol.

Can't imagine how is ur personality then. Lol
JK
lol Im negitive cause untill I met the wonderful people on KHI and I played KH, I had lost complete faith in the Human race. I mean I'm the kinda girl who will make her tongue bleed from biting it, to hold from laughter while watching a movie as sad as Titanic. lol. Im not sure why I just think well that's just life aye? I know Im a very sad person... That Titanic story was true by the way, I was watching it with my friends at like 3 in the morning at a sleep over anyways My best friend was laughing beside me which was really weird cause she normally doesn't laugh at those things and she was being bashed by a mate of mine who I claim would have cried if she hadn't seen the movie like a million times, I was the only one who hadn't seen it and I tell you what if I didn't care that some people actually enjoy those movies I would have been laughing the whole time lol,
 

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Awesomeo Chapter!!! Keep up the great work! Never fails to intrigue me!
 

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Ha. Wicked.
Thanks Man!

Keep it up.
Hehehe Will do!

*votes 5 stars*
Hey! Thanks! lol I've never had a thread being voted on lol.

Awesomeo Chapter!!! Keep up the great work! Never fails to intrigue me!
Hehehe, THANKS! I'll do my best to continue pleasing you then :). Im such an addict I want to write more, so I can get to the good bits lol.
 

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My fanfic is.... not doing so hot.
Aww why's that?

It's nice to read fanfics that are successful.
That's a really nice comment, I mean I've done a lot of thinking about mine, infact really Im combining multiple fan fics into one lol. Ones that have come into my head that I thought... Heeeyyy, That'd be awesome to write! lol. I throw it all together et viola! Massive random fanfic lol.

I guess it's coz mine's a random bunch of crap
Random as in How?

UPDATE:I'm such an addict aye? lol I've decided to write you a very nice short chapter which will either be done tonight or tomorrow. lol I just thought I'd give you the heads up. lol Still this one is going to have the least amount of intresting and new info, infact, probably U could almost go on without reading this one. Still I wanted to shove it in there just for good measure, So prepare for a short chapter shortly. lol Well... short for me at least!
 
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he means none of it makes much sense to anything i think
 

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lol Im negitive cause untill I met the wonderful people on KHI and I played KH, I had lost complete faith in the Human race. I mean I'm the kinda girl who will make her tongue bleed from biting it, to hold from laughter while watching a movie as sad as Titanic. lol. Im not sure why I just think well that's just life aye? I know Im a very sad person... That Titanic story was true by the way, I was watching it with my friends at like 3 in the morning at a sleep over anyways My best friend was laughing beside me which was really weird cause she normally doesn't laugh at those things and she was being bashed by a mate of mine who I claim would have cried if she hadn't seen the movie like a million times, I was the only one who hadn't seen it and I tell you what if I didn't care that some people actually enjoy those movies I would have been laughing the whole time lol,

^^'.. kind of weird. Lol
Anyway, wait for ur next chapter. =)
 

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A nice short chapter for the moment. It's short cause I couldn't see it fitting into the next chapter, It would seem almost out of place. I knew my last chapter was getting too long for me to shove it on the end aswell. Soo... Enjoy. If I don't bore you to death, I'm trying somthing a little different, KH always has weird bits in it so I hope I don't weird/bore you too much with this one! A warning goes with this, It might be a little hard to understand how I'm writing it, if you don't get anything I'll try and explain as best I can, but ofcourse like every chapter of mine, I try to have a few things that are un-explained.... Muahahaha...

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Chapter 8 - A Dream of an Unspoken Legend.

Sora lay asleep in his bed, his mind was not at rest though, no, Deep inside his mind was a dream...

In a dusty twilight desert, four paths were formed from thousands upon thousands of Keyblades. Three armored warriors appeared. One was a tall and really strong looking warrior. He appeared to be waiting for the other two. A female looking warrior came along the path on his right and on his left a younger looking male warrior came beside him.

There were three keyblades in front of them. Each one picked one up. The older looking man picked up what looked like Sora's keyblade. The girl picked up a keyblade that looked exactly like the king's! The younger man, picked up Riku's keyblade. The wind picked up and dust began to fly everywhere. The three soldiers turned their heads towards the fourth path.

A dark slow moving figure was walking through the dust. An old man appeared and his aprentice came out from inside him. The three appeared to have different looking keyblades now, they appeared to be an ancient type of keyblade. The old man moved closer towards the three warriors with his aprentice beside him.

Xeh...han....ort... Xeh...han...ort.... is that you?
Xeh... hanort... Xehanort!


The younder looking soldier began to run towards the dark-looking two, but was stopped by the older one who ran ahead first. Almost as if he wanted to finish things with the pair before they'd begun. He ran towards them and leaped in the air. The old man lifted the earth from underneathe him which tossed him to the ground. The earth then moved downwards, forming a cliff between the old man and the soldier. A thunder spell was cast which struck the tallest soldier as he stood up.

Earth kept shifting everywhere, the youngest soldier ran past his companion ready to give it his shot. The ground the old man stood on kept rising as the taller soldier watched. The old man waved his fingers and hundereds of keyblades rose to his command.

The Keyblade is said to hold phenomenal power.

The sky was growing dark and cloudy.

The aprentice was now in action and was heavily throwing swings at the youngest soldier. The aprentice kept throwing powerful blizzard spells towards him. Not only was he dodging the ice, the youngest soldier was also doing his best to aviod the mass of flying keyblades that the old man had sent. They were now comming his way. Trying his best to avoid them, the younger soldier lost his balance and ended up rolling on the ground. A firgure jumped out and swiped at the dark soldier. It was the taller soldier.

Thunder attacks were being thrown towards him again. On top of that the keyblades tossed the taller soldier into the sky, the earth crumbled. The only way was down.

Underneath all the goings on was the female soldier. She watched anxiously as the eldest soldier slipped down the cliff. He tryed to grab on to aviod falling to the ground but the whole cliff face came crumbling. The keyblades came crashing down towards her, and she fell to the ground. The younger soldier now on his feet ran to her aid. Thanks to her very strong armor she was ok, but her helmet had been completely destroyed. It revealed her short, blue hair which complemented her eyes. She pushed herself up knowning that one member of their trio was in trouble. She cast a reflect spell up towards him just before the keyblades hit. All the keyblades were scattered in different directions as a spherical sheild protected the eldest soldier. It didn't stop them for long though, they keyblades furiously attacked the sheild.

The old man stood and watched the keyblades create a tower underneath the sheild. A bright orange light flashed across the old man's face as the sheild exploded. The other two soldier watched helplessly as their friend and many keyblade rained from the sky. He was ok though, hitting the ground he skidded in his feet right infront of the old man. He quickly picked himself up and sung his keyblade. The old man blocked the attacks with one of his own.

One legend says its weilder saved the world, while another says that he wrought chaos and ruin upon it.

The old man cast a powerful blizzard spell. At close range, the eldest soldier was an easy target. Jumping back, he watched as the ice moved up and froze his arm. He heard someone running up, it was the younger soldier. The old man pointed his keyblade towards the taller soldier, the younger one came up behind him in mid air and swung his keyblade. Being quick the old man grabbed him by the back of the neck. The soldier tried to struggle free.

Sometime before, didn't you save me?
After what we've been through, we're friends, so...
I have a friend.


The taller soldier watched was in shock as he watched his friend struggle in the hands of the old man. The old man had incredible strength her crushed the youngest warrior's helmet in his hands revealing his frightened face. He looked exactly like Roxas. The other warrior rushed to his feet destretly trying to get to his friend in time to save him but the ground once again crumbled underneath him sending him down with the crumbling earth. The Aprentice was now beside the old man watching the tallest soldier fall beneathe them with a thousand keyblades.

Watching in horror was the female soldier, she saw her comrade in the hands of the enemy and was powerless to save him. The old man sent a frozen spell right through the youngest soldier's body causing him to become frozen solid through out his entire body. The old man threw him down the cliff.

The youngest soldier's body fell from the cliff and hit the jaggered rocks causing his keyblade to shatter. His frozen body hit the the ground and slid into the female soldier's lap. She lifted him up and looked in horror into his eyes. Trying to do what he could to reasure her that things were going to be ok, the youngest soldier's eyes moved.


"Ahhh!" Sora sat up panting and shivering. He felt freezing.

"Sora?!?" Jiminy woke up in alarm.

Sora was still out of breath. "It... was just a nightmare..." Sora looked towards the open window. A cold breeze was coming through and the curtain was brushing against his arm. He leaned over and shut the window.

"Are you ok?" Jiminy asked sitting up looking at his still shivering friend.

Sora rubbed his hands over his arms to warm them up a bit. "Y..yeah..." He replied grabbing his rug from the end of his bed and pulling it over himself.

"Well, alright then" Jiminy lay back down in his bed and closed his eyes. Sora sighed and lay back down. He turned to his clock, it read 4 am. Rolling back he yawned an nodded off again but the dream continued.

The female soldier looked into her friend's frozen face.

I don't want to be depended on... Just erase me...

The old man summoned a dark ball and lifted it towards the sky. The power from it struck the sky and the clouds began to part. A blue light lit up the dark desert. The female warrior looked up to see a blue Kingdom Hearts. She was still clutching onto the frozen body of her friend. The old man appeared the be enhancing his power from it.

Badly weakned from the fall, the eldest soldier burned with rage. He used his keyblade to help himself up. He ripped off his helmet and his brown hair blew in the wind. Looking up a Kingdom Hearts the strangest thing happened, His bright blue eyes changed and began to glow yellowy-orange.

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Ok I hope that wasn't too weird or boring for you. I know pretty much I was just re-writing the BBS trailer, but it does have revealance I assure you. I just want to clear up some of the characters

Tera = Oldest Warrior/Soldier, Taller Warrior/Soldier and Elder or eldest warrior/soldier

Aqua= Female warrior/soldier

Ven= Younger warrior/soldier

D.S= Dark soldier/ aprentice

M.X= Old man.

lol I hope that helps a little anyway. All that has been said are tranlations from various BBS sources. I added them in places to get people thinking a bit. 1. to make things more intresting - give feeling, sprout ideas ect
2. to add to the characters a bit, instead of just making it the bbs trailer. lol. Also I thought it was kinda cool sticking the random phrases in those spots, it gave them more meaning. :)

I hope it all made sense and you enjoyed the considerably shorter one of my chapters. lol Even this one's a bit long!
 
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OMG! X) I love this chapter so much!
SeaSalt , u are really cool!
Hehehe, I wasn't really expecting that kinda reaction from it but hey, that's cool! :) I really happy you enjoyed it! Like I said in the text I was trying somthing new, cause there wasn't much dialogue in it at all. None in the BBS trailer, so I added my own little spin to it. :) Trying new things is often scary in fear of crashing and burning, I was a little araid on how I wrote this chapter but I'm so glad to see that it had a positive outcome!
 

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Short, but good.
I know, lol I did make it shorter cause of the reason it didn't really fit in either the chapter before or the chapter after it. So I gave it it's own chapter lol. I'm glad you liked it!

I think that you want BBS to come out the fastest it can.
Oh not really, I dont have the cash for it at the moment, and I need a psp lol. I actualy want 358 most, cause I have a DS and it's closest! lol. The chapter has revelance, I assure you. :)

YOWTCH! Cef's nosebleed just went overtime!
Um... that's not really good. Are you ok? lol Im weird in my entire life I've never had a nosebleed lol.

Great job!
Hey, Thanks!
 

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Random as in How?

Here's a little sample from the second chapter:


"Sora: Woah! What was that?
Donald: An earthquake?
Goophie: Gawrsh! I have the letter E inside my shirt"


Yeah... I 'spose not everyone is a total random xD
 
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