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Chapter Four: The Attack
"Outta the way!" yelled Even, as he stabbed at the Heartless with his knife.
But it affected the Heartless none whatsoever.
"Oh no", said Xehanort as he ran through information in his head.
"What's wrong now?" said Braig, defending himself from another Heartless attack.
"No, no, no!" yelled Xehanort angrily.
"What?" asked Ienzo.
"I messed up part of the programming sequence! I forgot to add the human non-attacking thoughts into their system!" said Xehanort, looking in pain.
"To tell you the truth, I honestly don't think the sequence would have made a difference to them attacking us, Xehanort", said Braig, getting the upper hand on his Heartless.
"Really, what makes you think that?" asked Xehanort, now defending himself from a Heartless.
"I went over some of our notes and I realised that we all wrote that the heartless seemed as though they were determined to do something... I think that that "something" is a mission. A mission to steal hearts", said Braig.
"I think he's right", said Even and Dilan simultaneously.
"Me too", said Aeleus, just about to put his Heartless in a headlock.
"Well then, they must - "
But just then, Xehanort was interrupted by a small sphere floating in the air in front of him.
Shortly after it appeared, there was a flash of light and the Heartless disappeared. Then all six began to black out. But before Xehanort did, he saw something. A short figure with big, round ears.
"Outta the way!" yelled Even, as he stabbed at the Heartless with his knife.
But it affected the Heartless none whatsoever.
"Oh no", said Xehanort as he ran through information in his head.
"What's wrong now?" said Braig, defending himself from another Heartless attack.
"No, no, no!" yelled Xehanort angrily.
"What?" asked Ienzo.
"I messed up part of the programming sequence! I forgot to add the human non-attacking thoughts into their system!" said Xehanort, looking in pain.
"To tell you the truth, I honestly don't think the sequence would have made a difference to them attacking us, Xehanort", said Braig, getting the upper hand on his Heartless.
"Really, what makes you think that?" asked Xehanort, now defending himself from a Heartless.
"I went over some of our notes and I realised that we all wrote that the heartless seemed as though they were determined to do something... I think that that "something" is a mission. A mission to steal hearts", said Braig.
"I think he's right", said Even and Dilan simultaneously.
"Me too", said Aeleus, just about to put his Heartless in a headlock.
"Well then, they must - "
But just then, Xehanort was interrupted by a small sphere floating in the air in front of him.
Shortly after it appeared, there was a flash of light and the Heartless disappeared. Then all six began to black out. But before Xehanort did, he saw something. A short figure with big, round ears.
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Re: The Organization's Beginning
Dun Da DUM!!!
The plot thickens!
Muahahahahaa... I can't wait to read more!
Dun Da DUM!!!
The plot thickens!
Muahahahahaa... I can't wait to read more!
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Wow. Good one. Just try to make it a little bit bigger.
Wow. Good one. Just try to make it a little bit bigger.
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Hehehe the longer it is the more reading please I get! Muahahahahaaa.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Wow...
I just started reading this and it's pretty awesome! Can't wait until you get the next chapter up! ^^
Wow...
I just started reading this and it's pretty awesome! Can't wait until you get the next chapter up! ^^
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Err... there were meant to be replies to my last post.... meh.
Woot! im getting somewhere! lol... more action to come!!
Err... there were meant to be replies to my last post.... meh.
Chapter 5: Blood will be shed
Xehanort awoke to the noise of something hitting the floor hard. That something was Aeleus. The others awoke to this noise too - everyone except Even - and looked up.
"Are we back in the lab?" asked Ienzo, still trying to pick out his surroundings.
"Yeah, it's almost nightfall", said Aeleus, rubbing his behind.
"So we've been put almost.... three hours?" asked Ienzo.
"Close to", said Braig.
"Bloody Even is still sleeping", stated Dilan, looking at the curled up figure on the floor.
"So what happened?" asked Ienzo.
"Well.. we were on our way to the manufactory..." said Braig.
"Uh huh."
"Then we were attacked by those Heartless" , said Xehanort, as the four redirected their attention to him.
"Oh yeah... then what?" said Ienzo.
"Well I don't know if you four saw it, but there was this little light that flashed around the room, just before I blacked out", said Xehanort, trying hard to recall the event.
"I saw a litlle of that light", said Ienzo.
"Me too", said Aeleus.
"I thought i saw something else though, before I blacked out..." said Xehanort, looking slightly worried.
"Oh?" exclaimed Ienzo.
"It almost looked like a..."
"A what?"
"A mou-"
But Xehanort was cut off once again by a loud noise that originated from the manufactory.
"What now?" said Braig, looking in the diretion of the manufactory.
"Change the channel Mummy..." groaned Even in his sleep.
"Err, ok then?" said Ienzo, trying to keep a straight face.
But in the end, all five cracked up laughing. They all laughed for at least five minutes straight.
*
After they had stopped laughing, they woke up Even and headed down to the manufactory. Much to their relief, they didn't come across any Heartless at all along the way. Once they arrived, they could all feel something wasn't right.
"Can you feel-"
"Yeah", replied Braig to Even.
"What is it?" asked Ienzo, looking a bit worried now.
"Darkness. Pure darkness", said Dilan.
"How do you know?" asked Aeleus.
"It's that... scent..." replied Xehanort.
"Oh yeah, it kinda smells like..."
"The Heartless", said Aeleus, finishing Ienzo's sentence.
"Yeah, but where is it coming from?" asked Ienzo.
"Seven o'clock", said Dilan.
"No, it's about ten-thirty actually..." said Ienzo politely.
"No stupid, he meant the direction", said Braig.
"I don't like being called "stupid"..." said Ienzo, looking quite upset.
"Fine then, dummy", said Braig, laughing at his own joke.
"That's not funny..."
"Oh yeah, dummy? Not funny, dummy?"
"It's not funny..." said Ienzo, a little more intencely.
"What are you gonna do, huh? C'mon dummy, what are you going to do?"
Ienzo had had enough.
Xehanort awoke to the noise of something hitting the floor hard. That something was Aeleus. The others awoke to this noise too - everyone except Even - and looked up.
"Are we back in the lab?" asked Ienzo, still trying to pick out his surroundings.
"Yeah, it's almost nightfall", said Aeleus, rubbing his behind.
"So we've been put almost.... three hours?" asked Ienzo.
"Close to", said Braig.
"Bloody Even is still sleeping", stated Dilan, looking at the curled up figure on the floor.
"So what happened?" asked Ienzo.
"Well.. we were on our way to the manufactory..." said Braig.
"Uh huh."
"Then we were attacked by those Heartless" , said Xehanort, as the four redirected their attention to him.
"Oh yeah... then what?" said Ienzo.
"Well I don't know if you four saw it, but there was this little light that flashed around the room, just before I blacked out", said Xehanort, trying hard to recall the event.
"I saw a litlle of that light", said Ienzo.
"Me too", said Aeleus.
"I thought i saw something else though, before I blacked out..." said Xehanort, looking slightly worried.
"Oh?" exclaimed Ienzo.
"It almost looked like a..."
"A what?"
"A mou-"
But Xehanort was cut off once again by a loud noise that originated from the manufactory.
"What now?" said Braig, looking in the diretion of the manufactory.
"Change the channel Mummy..." groaned Even in his sleep.
"Err, ok then?" said Ienzo, trying to keep a straight face.
But in the end, all five cracked up laughing. They all laughed for at least five minutes straight.
*
After they had stopped laughing, they woke up Even and headed down to the manufactory. Much to their relief, they didn't come across any Heartless at all along the way. Once they arrived, they could all feel something wasn't right.
"Can you feel-"
"Yeah", replied Braig to Even.
"What is it?" asked Ienzo, looking a bit worried now.
"Darkness. Pure darkness", said Dilan.
"How do you know?" asked Aeleus.
"It's that... scent..." replied Xehanort.
"Oh yeah, it kinda smells like..."
"The Heartless", said Aeleus, finishing Ienzo's sentence.
"Yeah, but where is it coming from?" asked Ienzo.
"Seven o'clock", said Dilan.
"No, it's about ten-thirty actually..." said Ienzo politely.
"No stupid, he meant the direction", said Braig.
"I don't like being called "stupid"..." said Ienzo, looking quite upset.
"Fine then, dummy", said Braig, laughing at his own joke.
"That's not funny..."
"Oh yeah, dummy? Not funny, dummy?"
"It's not funny..." said Ienzo, a little more intencely.
"What are you gonna do, huh? C'mon dummy, what are you going to do?"
Ienzo had had enough.
Woot! im getting somewhere! lol... more action to come!!
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Oooo... Ienzo is getting cranky.... It reminds me of a couple of my friends, one loves irritating people the other is easily irritated, lol.
And Ahahahhaha Even. Lol What a loser, lol "Mummy?" lol How pathetic.
Oooo... Ienzo is getting cranky.... It reminds me of a couple of my friends, one loves irritating people the other is easily irritated, lol.
And Ahahahhaha Even. Lol What a loser, lol "Mummy?" lol How pathetic.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Since my very good friend unfortunately got banned, due a two certain people asking him to do something
*Glares at a certain person^^*
I will be posting his fanfic through my account until he is un-banned.
He also says thankyou to the people that read his fanfic, and asks them to pls contiinue to do so.
Since my very good friend unfortunately got banned, due a two certain people asking him to do something
*Glares at a certain person^^*
I will be posting his fanfic through my account until he is un-banned.
He also says thankyou to the people that read his fanfic, and asks them to pls contiinue to do so.
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I'm the only one which needs to be sorry. I didn't know that that was going to happen. Anyone can flame me. I deserve it.
I'm the only one which needs to be sorry. I didn't know that that was going to happen. Anyone can flame me. I deserve it.
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