Fanfiction ► The Organization's Beginning (chapter 12 soon!)
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Re: The Organization's Beginning Chapter six
Chapter Six: Paradise is Never Due
No one knows exactly how he did it, but Ienzo unleashed his inner beast, quite literally, on Braig.
"Aaaaaagh!" yelled Braig, as the "beast" chased him around the basement.
Just as Braig was getting away, he tripped. Over himself, actually. The beast was approaching him quite fast. It was almost ontop of him. As it lunged at him, Aeleus jumped infront of Braig and held the beast back.
"Go, now!" yelled Aeleus through gritted teeth.
And so Braig backed away, only to watch his friend being thrown from each side of the room against the wall.
"Braig, where's Ienzo?" yelled Even, as he ran in to assist Aeleus.
"He's over here!" yelled back Braig.
"Apologize to him!"
"What?"
"Apologize! He'll still hear you, even if he is out cold! If you do, he might stop this!"
"Ok, I'll try..."
But before Braig could even get half way over to Ienzo, the beast, which had now taken the form of a Darkside, flung him against a wall and knocked him out easily.
"Well that's buggered our chances of an easy way out..." said Even, laughing sarcastically.
Just as Even had finished his sentence, the Darkside grabbed Xehanort, Aeleus and himself with it's long "tentacles" with an unbreakable grip.
"Ugh, it stinks!" said Aeleus.
"Dilan, help us!" yelled Xehanort.
But Dilan just stood there, planted firmly to the ground with a look of shock across his face.
"Dilan, help!!" yelled out Even, as he shook off the tentacles that was trying to go up his nose.
But he still stood there, wide-eyed.
"C'mon, you sook, quit moping and help!" yelled Aeleus.
This got through to Dilan. He shook it off and took stance.
"What'd you call me?!??" yelled Dilan, taking offence in Aeleus' comment.
"A sook" , said Aeleus, as if it were intentional.
"That's it!!!!"
Aeleus' words were meant for something more than just name-calling. His words impacted on Dilan so much, that he called forth a new power.
"Wind, allow me your control!"
And so the wind gave itself to him. Six tornadoes formed around Dilan. As they formed, the wind had lifted Dilan into the air, and formed another, larger, tornado around him in the centre of the other six. What happened next was simply amazing. In a flash of darkness, the tornadoes gave way to six lances. And Dilan's tornado gave way to a completely different being. It was still Dilan in some ways, but in others, it wasnt.
No one knows exactly how he did it, but Ienzo unleashed his inner beast, quite literally, on Braig.
"Aaaaaagh!" yelled Braig, as the "beast" chased him around the basement.
Just as Braig was getting away, he tripped. Over himself, actually. The beast was approaching him quite fast. It was almost ontop of him. As it lunged at him, Aeleus jumped infront of Braig and held the beast back.
"Go, now!" yelled Aeleus through gritted teeth.
And so Braig backed away, only to watch his friend being thrown from each side of the room against the wall.
"Braig, where's Ienzo?" yelled Even, as he ran in to assist Aeleus.
"He's over here!" yelled back Braig.
"Apologize to him!"
"What?"
"Apologize! He'll still hear you, even if he is out cold! If you do, he might stop this!"
"Ok, I'll try..."
But before Braig could even get half way over to Ienzo, the beast, which had now taken the form of a Darkside, flung him against a wall and knocked him out easily.
"Well that's buggered our chances of an easy way out..." said Even, laughing sarcastically.
Just as Even had finished his sentence, the Darkside grabbed Xehanort, Aeleus and himself with it's long "tentacles" with an unbreakable grip.
"Ugh, it stinks!" said Aeleus.
"Dilan, help us!" yelled Xehanort.
But Dilan just stood there, planted firmly to the ground with a look of shock across his face.
"Dilan, help!!" yelled out Even, as he shook off the tentacles that was trying to go up his nose.
But he still stood there, wide-eyed.
"C'mon, you sook, quit moping and help!" yelled Aeleus.
This got through to Dilan. He shook it off and took stance.
"What'd you call me?!??" yelled Dilan, taking offence in Aeleus' comment.
"A sook" , said Aeleus, as if it were intentional.
"That's it!!!!"
Aeleus' words were meant for something more than just name-calling. His words impacted on Dilan so much, that he called forth a new power.
"Wind, allow me your control!"
And so the wind gave itself to him. Six tornadoes formed around Dilan. As they formed, the wind had lifted Dilan into the air, and formed another, larger, tornado around him in the centre of the other six. What happened next was simply amazing. In a flash of darkness, the tornadoes gave way to six lances. And Dilan's tornado gave way to a completely different being. It was still Dilan in some ways, but in others, it wasnt.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Ooooo, This is really exciting, you just have to torment me by cutting off at the good bits Argh! lol Just Kidding. Anyways Im still loving it.
Ooooo, This is really exciting, you just have to torment me by cutting off at the good bits Argh! lol Just Kidding. Anyways Im still loving it.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
I liked this one, but it was a little bit short. I could read it in less than a minute.
I liked this one, but it was a little bit short. I could read it in less than a minute.
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Cool! It's really starting to get some action now, yay!
I'm upset that Ienzo had to be the first to become a Heartless though...
Cool! It's really starting to get some action now, yay!
I'm upset that Ienzo had to be the first to become a Heartless though...
Re: The Organization's Beginning
Hey, nice work.
It's surprisingly creative, very enjoyable.
I like it a lot
Hey, nice work.
It's surprisingly creative, very enjoyable.
I like it a lot
Re: The Organization's Beginning
You really put some effort into it, really thought it out.
It's clever, a good fanfic. Very enjoyable.
You really put some effort into it, really thought it out.
It's clever, a good fanfic. Very enjoyable.
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Of course you did lol... Oh, and ppls, pls read my friend's fanfic, The Parts of Kingdom Hearts You Never Knew About by FishBox. It is really awesome( beware, you need a good sense of humour!)
Of course you did lol... Oh, and ppls, pls read my friend's fanfic, The Parts of Kingdom Hearts You Never Knew About by FishBox. It is really awesome( beware, you need a good sense of humour!)
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