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THis thread I will use to place a poem Daily and as I go, I would Ask of you to rate and coment on....
Here's the First, right out of the oven:
Fighting the lost.
As I gaze upon a broken heart
Great in diligence, It’s all so bright
So I can make the pieces lost…
And all that I had cared the most
And as I start to near the never-ending story…
I come upon an oceanic demise
I start to see the light had died
The tangible fallacy that now follows…
I can’t escape… The lost is lost…
And I remember what I held as lust
To see you one last time…
Was all I longed on this deep fight…
And so shall I show them this might…
But when this struggle came to end…
Thus all I cared was now suppressed
But as my feeling swayed not same…
I can now seek for what I longed…
And as I figured you were gone…
The last of last… It is all lost.
Here's the First, right out of the oven:
Fighting the lost.
As I gaze upon a broken heart
Great in diligence, It’s all so bright
So I can make the pieces lost…
And all that I had cared the most
And as I start to near the never-ending story…
I come upon an oceanic demise
I start to see the light had died
The tangible fallacy that now follows…
I can’t escape… The lost is lost…
And I remember what I held as lust
To see you one last time…
Was all I longed on this deep fight…
And so shall I show them this might…
But when this struggle came to end…
Thus all I cared was now suppressed
But as my feeling swayed not same…
I can now seek for what I longed…
And as I figured you were gone…
The last of last… It is all lost.