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Dark-Disciple

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THis thread I will use to place a poem Daily and as I go, I would Ask of you to rate and coment on....


Here's the First, right out of the oven:

Fighting the lost.

As I gaze upon a broken heart
Great in diligence, It’s all so bright
So I can make the pieces lost…
And all that I had cared the most
And as I start to near the never-ending story…
I come upon an oceanic demise
I start to see the light had died
The tangible fallacy that now follows…
I can’t escape… The lost is lost…
And I remember what I held as lust
To see you one last time…
Was all I longed on this deep fight…
And so shall I show them this might…
But when this struggle came to end…
Thus all I cared was now suppressed
But as my feeling swayed not same…
I can now seek for what I longed…
And as I figured you were gone…
The last of last… It is all lost.
 

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Ok, here's Todays:

Likeness

I ne'er was struck before that hour
with love so sudden and so sweet.
Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower
And stole my heart away complete.

My face turned pale, a deadly pale.
My legs refused to walk away,
And when she looked what could I ail
My life and all seemed turned to clay.

And then my blood rushed to my face
And took my eyesight quite away.
The trees and bushes round the place
Seemed midnight at noonday.

I could not see a single thing;
Words from my eyes did start.
They spoke as chords do from the string,
And blood burnt round my heart.

Are flowers the winter's choice
Is love's bed always snow
She seemed to hear my silent voice
Not love appeals to know.

I never saw so sweet a face
As that I stood before.
My heart had left its dwelling place
And can return to me no more.
 

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Ok, today I'm in a friend's house, so I can't acces the poem I made for today, so I'll leave you with A motto I came up with not too long ago:

Motto

May the forgiven stay not Forgotten...
And the bright be ot turned off.

let the bright ones enlighten
and the forgiven be loved.
 

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Du er min øjesten...en bette dejlig en...er duuuu
og nåååårrr....vi to følges ad....så er jeg altid glad....some nu.....du er et stykke....af himlens blå....alverdens lykke...den vil du få.....hvem kommer så.....på den grønne gren.....det gør min øjesten.....og mig...

It's in Danish.....can't write poems in english very good...:D...
 

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here's today's

Alone

Only yesterday, they told me you were gone
All these normal people will I ever find another one?
Wounds on my back, are aching my bones
I forgot you said, "one day you'll walk alone"
I said, "I need you," does that make me wrong?
Am I weak? Are you feeling strong?
My heart was blacked; it's bloody red
A hole in my heart, a hole in my head
Who will help me up? Where's your helping hand?
Will you turn on me? Is this my final stand?
In a dream I can not see
Tangled abstract fallacy, random turmoil builds in me
Light shined on my path, turned bad into good

My brain was labored; my head would spin
Don't let me down, don't give up, and don't give in
The rain comes down, the cold wind blows
The plans we made upon the road
Turn up my collar, welcome the 'Unknown'
I remember you said that, "one day I'd walk alone
 

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haha, but do they have a poem thread promising a new poem everyday?

*feels proud...*

Ok, I'll post the one for today later on, but i do have another motto... So:

Motto 2
o In love we all fall…
But fall in not too deep,
‘Cause then you’ll scream and Call:
Why did I rushed And leaped.
 

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I'll try to post it as soon as I'm done...... But here's a short one I made yesterday, but I was in my friend's house, so I had to come up with the motto in like15 minutes because that's how long I had to use the computer, so Here's yesterdays:

Darkness

I sit in the darkness waiting for daylight to come
the golden beams to reach out to me
to touch my face as the heat creeps in to my body
warming my soul
but the darkness holds as I weep alone
in the sorrowful, dark, reaches of my mind
I see a light ahead and walk toward it
as the light skips beyond out of my mind
I am alone
no one near me
no one to hear me
when I cry out in the darkness
the impenetrable darkness
in the far reaches of my mind.
 
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