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Kingdom Hearts: Fragments
Main Story: Lost Journey
Chapter 11: Things Just Got A Lot Worse
The three men entered a very large room with absolutely nothing in it except at the fery top of the west wall that looked into another, much smaller room. Aero decided to head up there so as not to interfere with what Zeke was planning to do.
"So you seek to block him out," stated Riku. "In order to keep him from taking your mind from correct?"
"Yes," replied Zeke. "I have had enough of him. I want my mind and for him to just be a guest every once in a while." Riku nodded and walked away leaving Zeke in the very center of the room. He leaned against the far wall as Aero took a seat in the observation deck. Whatever was about to happen, he did not want to be in there and get killed.
"The first step is to shove him," said Riku. "Create distance between the two of you. So that he leaves you alone during this. Do you have a grip on him?" Zeke nodded. "Good. Now push him away. Knock him on his ass." Suddenly Zeke shot halfway across the room but remained standing. He closed his eyes and walked back to the center. He looked at Riku again. "I can sense the open space. Now you must create an impenetrable wall. Use the light in your mind."
Zeke began to concentrate. Small sparks began to move up and down his body in waves. Then lightning bolts were shooting every which way in the room. Riku began to realize that Xehanort was stopping the wall from going up. He didn't know what to do to help.
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"What did you just say," asked Jake with slight annoyance.
"Ven is her father," replied Aqua. "And Anthony's father is Terra."
Anthony sat shocked in disbelief. "That's impossible," he said. "He looked so old."
"We were all wearing disguises at one point," stated Aqua. "To protect us and those we care about."
Everyone in the room was silent. Even Omega had had no idea of this information. Aqua still looked as if she wasn't done. No one knew if they could handle anymore surprises.
"There is just one more thing," said Aqua ending the silence. "The prophecy was continued recently. More was told. The numbers of heroes were revealed. The numbers would be cut to three and then they would grow again. But in the end there will only be two that will stop the war from coming. So in order to make sure it happens the way it was told, I'm going to cut your numbers myself."
"WHAT?!" yelled Anthony.
"So..." continued Aqua. "Alison will need to stop training. And the rest of you will complete full release as planned. Plus you will learn to use two elements. I have retreived a few items while you were gone."
She reached for a bag under her chair. She pulled out two things that the kids recognized. Sarah and Chris's keychains. Aqua gave Sarah's to Anthony and Chris's to Michelle.
"What about me?" asked Jake.
"Alison must give you hers," said Aqua. "He will take light and water. Anthony will have dark and fire. Michelle will train with wind and earth. This is how it has to be."
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Zeke's eyes were flashing on and off in that yellow-orange color continuously. Riku looked as if he had no idea what would come of this.
"Control the light inside of you!" yelled Riku. "He can't conquer your inner light if you don't want him to."
Zeke's eyes closed and his whole body went limp but he remained standing. Then a voice echoed through the room from nowhere but everywhere.
"His light is too weak for him to use," said the old voice. "He is mine."
The lightning shooting through the room was suddenly in total control of Zeke. His eyes now remained that sinister yellow-orange.
Riku began to step forward and summoned his key blade, Way to Dawn. "Zeke," he said. "Did it work? Is he blocked out."
What replied was not Zeke at all the loud resonating and echoing voice of Xehanort.
"No," he replied. "Something much better." Aero stood up violently knocking his chair to the floor.
"I have to get out of here," he said.
"Too late for both of you," said Xehanort. He raised his hand into the air and an orb of pure darkness appeared in his hand. It began to grow very fast and he placed it on the floor. Then Xehanort vanished through a corridor of darkness leaving Riku and Aero to die. Aero then took out his keyblade and slammed it into the ground directly in front of him. Metal from his blade shot up around him creating a 360 degree shield from the orb.
It expanded and overtook the entire castle taking Riku and Aero with it.
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One by one, Michelle, Anthony, and Jake attached their new keychains to their keyblades.
Michelle's keyblade began to glow with a mix of white and green light. When the light went out, she held a keyblade resembling a combination of the Circle of Life and Follow the Wind.
Jake's keyblade began to glow as well but with a gold and blue light to reveal a simply modified blue and gold Oathkeeper.
Anthony's keyblade seemed to glow black and red. It eventually became a modified black and red Oblivion.
Aqua smiled at how well this had taken place. "Now kids I have a little bad news." They all looked up surprised at how she could just kill the joy in a moment.
"You have to reach full release," she said. "...in only 8 days."
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To be continued in
KH:F Main Story: Lost Journey
Chapter 12
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