Tee-hee, thanks so much Spyells. It's rare that anybody wants to read what I write or even correct it. So it can get quite annoying! XD
Thanks so much for reading this story and getting up here but I'm going to close this thread and once again, start a new thread. Reason is because I have time to or a bit and I wanted to and I'm closing this one because it's old and stuff and I don't know, hard to explain, just didn't like how I started the beginning again and all.
So with that being said, THREAD CLOSED. Look forward to my new thread: Kingdom Hearts: A Figmental Truth, thanks for reading.