Without further wait here is the final version of the prologue and start of the first chapter.....
Prologue:
“Too many of them created to stop in time…drastic measures had to be taken. I hoped to change the world with this project, but a defect in their programming later after their release into our world to help people made us vulnerable for their attack. I knew this would happen after the studies of them showed them to be more hostile in nature but I did not have the time to build something to stop them without having horrid consequences. But as you hear this you already know, I’m deeply sorry for this my friend. One of the stronger ones, Omega took command over what they now called themselves the “virus” with forceful actions; I soon learned that it was in fact their defect that changed the way they thought and acted.
So I activated my older experiments Jin young and Melderra, who chose their names to hopefully stop them, but Jin also received the defect and took Omega’s place as commander, and Melderra, I don’t know what happened to her. Phil if you get this message it means the worst has happened, my planets destruction was caused by me, and everyone on the planet had been infected. My son, Dylan and I were the only ones left, I cant assure you that I have survived the destruction, but my Son and Dylan who is in the capsule were last seen by me leaving the planet on the ships I provided for them. Look after Dylan for me, and if my son Brad survived…please…find him.”
End Transmission. The hologram video of Tyler ended; he was a good friend of Phil Ilias, the one who viewed the video. Phil helped in creating Dylan and some concepts of what the now named “Virus” he knew what Tyler had made but he did not know what they had become. He did not have enough time to record what has been happening to the viruses before the planets demise, but it wasn’t like it would help at all.
2 months later…
At 5 pm Phil was writing in his journal at the desk in his room about a “Mimic”, something he had been working on for a few weeks. An old fashion radio sat on the side of the desk which he had hacked so he could be tuned in to crime and other business, just in case his worst fear would come true. As he continued to write a blanking in and out conversation sounded off. Unfortunately a lot of static was in the background cutting off most of what they were saying.
“Andrew, come in…report…your status…” One voice said, the conversation continued.
“Monsters I’ve never seen before…came out of nowhere; half of the other soldiers that came in contact….against us…cant hold on much lon-…there all over us…we need back up…EVERYONE FALL BACK…GET OFF ME….AAAHH!”
“Andrew…do you read me-…come on man…Andrew… No!”
Phil’s dropped his pen and sat back in his chair, speechless, knowing exactly what attack the soldiers. He just didn’t want to believe it. Something snapped outside, it sounded like a tree branch; he turned down the radio listening out for more sounds. “Must have been the wind.” He thought. After hearing nothing else but the conversations of people outside, his mind went back to the conversation he heard.
High in the tree right outside Phil’s house where the snapping sound came from was Omega hiding, using his cloaking device. It was spying on Phil and waiting…but for what?
Chapter 1: The beginning of an adventure
A ship glides above the clouds nearing a city, as the engines echo through the sky. Inside sat 2 pilots and 4 people in the back including a teenage boy. He wore a cap over his head and had regular hair a bit halfway down his neck with goggles around it, a navy blue sleeveless hoody with a white short sleeve under it and bandages covering his arms and handcuffs on.
The ship emerged out from the clouds and below laid Shaxdin city; it was a modern type city with buildings but mostly houses around.
They landed down at the gates of the city, the boy Dylan was the first to come out the back with one of the soldiers Deren hand on his shoulder, the others stayed inside. Aaron and Miki were friends of Deren, they were at the gates as they opened and saw Deren and Dylan, in handcuffs. He had short dark brown skin and hair with a goatee. Always wears the same hat that has the flap that goes all around with a few stitches on the side while always still wearing his soldier outfit.
Miki was Deren younger sister; she wore a cap too, with a green vest black sleeveless shirt underneath, a mini skirt with pants under it while Aaron had a dark brown complexion with a cap on his head blue shirt with darker blue pants.
Miki was the first to speak as Deren and Dylan were approaching. “What is Dylan doing with those handcuffs on?”
Deren looked up at her. “Well we had an extra pair and he wanted them. He tried to store away in the ship which is why I put them on his wrist.” He turned around walking back to the ship. “I and the others aren’t done with our mission yet but I’ll be back soon.”
Miki saw how serious Deren was right now, something had to be up. She waved leaving the thought alone. “See ya!”
Dylan was eye balling his new shiny hand cuffs when he noticed he was missing something. “Wait hey Deren, these came with keys didn’t they?”
He had one foot inside the ship when he responded. “I was hoping you wouldn’t have noticed until after I left, here.” He dug in his pocket and threw them to him. Dylan tried to lean down to get them but fell down thanks to the chains Deren gave him that he put on his legs.
“A little help here.” With handcuffs and chains on his legs he couldn’t get up. Miki and Aaron laughed walking away. He grabs the keys and crawls trying to catch up. “Come on guys, I can’t get up!”
Deren was just about to head back inside the ship, when someone called out to him. “Deren, wait!” The mysterious figure rode down the right side cliffs that surrounded the city on a black and light grey hover bike. This guy was about 18 years old or that’s what he told anyone who asked. Black eyes, dark blondish hair, goggles over his eyes and a outfit with many straps but covered by a black cloak. Dylan, Aaron and Miki turned around hearing the man calling Deren’s name.
Deren walked out recognizing the voice. He had a surprised look on his face walking up to him. “Zach?” He asked. “What are you doing here, aren’t you suppose to be helping Andrew with that desert mission?”
Zach looked down sighing; he looked as if something went wrong. “That’s why I’m here, Andrew is missing in action I slept in missing the ship to go check out an area uncovered by the recent sand storm. Everyone else at the station is out on other missions, while I was trying to talk to him on our headset communicators his voice kept going in and out. He was saying something about monsters he had never seen, from what I heard in the background the battle wasn’t going good.”
Deren UN hooked his plasma canon and loaded it heading into the ship. “We haven’t got to lose, haul it now.” They got in and the ship blasted off with Zach’s directions to the desert where Andrew was last heard from.
Dylan cocked his head, in confusion. “Who was that guy, and who is Andrew?”
Aaron put his hand on his shoulder and like a smart-aleck he said. “I think you should have asked that BEFORE they left.” Miki and Aaron walked back inside leaving Dylan looked up at the sky, thinking about the “monsters” Zach had mentioned.
Occ: Ok not much but the end and a a few tweaks have changed but this will switch up the story a little bit, now Zach and Andrew are mentioned earlier in the story which will add more things to come and some more interesting things so stayed tuned for the next update...
Prologue:
“Too many of them created to stop in time…drastic measures had to be taken. I hoped to change the world with this project, but a defect in their programming later after their release into our world to help people made us vulnerable for their attack. I knew this would happen after the studies of them showed them to be more hostile in nature but I did not have the time to build something to stop them without having horrid consequences. But as you hear this you already know, I’m deeply sorry for this my friend. One of the stronger ones, Omega took command over what they now called themselves the “virus” with forceful actions; I soon learned that it was in fact their defect that changed the way they thought and acted.
So I activated my older experiments Jin young and Melderra, who chose their names to hopefully stop them, but Jin also received the defect and took Omega’s place as commander, and Melderra, I don’t know what happened to her. Phil if you get this message it means the worst has happened, my planets destruction was caused by me, and everyone on the planet had been infected. My son, Dylan and I were the only ones left, I cant assure you that I have survived the destruction, but my Son and Dylan who is in the capsule were last seen by me leaving the planet on the ships I provided for them. Look after Dylan for me, and if my son Brad survived…please…find him.”
End Transmission. The hologram video of Tyler ended; he was a good friend of Phil Ilias, the one who viewed the video. Phil helped in creating Dylan and some concepts of what the now named “Virus” he knew what Tyler had made but he did not know what they had become. He did not have enough time to record what has been happening to the viruses before the planets demise, but it wasn’t like it would help at all.
2 months later…
At 5 pm Phil was writing in his journal at the desk in his room about a “Mimic”, something he had been working on for a few weeks. An old fashion radio sat on the side of the desk which he had hacked so he could be tuned in to crime and other business, just in case his worst fear would come true. As he continued to write a blanking in and out conversation sounded off. Unfortunately a lot of static was in the background cutting off most of what they were saying.
“Andrew, come in…report…your status…” One voice said, the conversation continued.
“Monsters I’ve never seen before…came out of nowhere; half of the other soldiers that came in contact….against us…cant hold on much lon-…there all over us…we need back up…EVERYONE FALL BACK…GET OFF ME….AAAHH!”
“Andrew…do you read me-…come on man…Andrew… No!”
Phil’s dropped his pen and sat back in his chair, speechless, knowing exactly what attack the soldiers. He just didn’t want to believe it. Something snapped outside, it sounded like a tree branch; he turned down the radio listening out for more sounds. “Must have been the wind.” He thought. After hearing nothing else but the conversations of people outside, his mind went back to the conversation he heard.
High in the tree right outside Phil’s house where the snapping sound came from was Omega hiding, using his cloaking device. It was spying on Phil and waiting…but for what?
Chapter 1: The beginning of an adventure
A ship glides above the clouds nearing a city, as the engines echo through the sky. Inside sat 2 pilots and 4 people in the back including a teenage boy. He wore a cap over his head and had regular hair a bit halfway down his neck with goggles around it, a navy blue sleeveless hoody with a white short sleeve under it and bandages covering his arms and handcuffs on.
The ship emerged out from the clouds and below laid Shaxdin city; it was a modern type city with buildings but mostly houses around.
They landed down at the gates of the city, the boy Dylan was the first to come out the back with one of the soldiers Deren hand on his shoulder, the others stayed inside. Aaron and Miki were friends of Deren, they were at the gates as they opened and saw Deren and Dylan, in handcuffs. He had short dark brown skin and hair with a goatee. Always wears the same hat that has the flap that goes all around with a few stitches on the side while always still wearing his soldier outfit.
Miki was Deren younger sister; she wore a cap too, with a green vest black sleeveless shirt underneath, a mini skirt with pants under it while Aaron had a dark brown complexion with a cap on his head blue shirt with darker blue pants.
Miki was the first to speak as Deren and Dylan were approaching. “What is Dylan doing with those handcuffs on?”
Deren looked up at her. “Well we had an extra pair and he wanted them. He tried to store away in the ship which is why I put them on his wrist.” He turned around walking back to the ship. “I and the others aren’t done with our mission yet but I’ll be back soon.”
Miki saw how serious Deren was right now, something had to be up. She waved leaving the thought alone. “See ya!”
Dylan was eye balling his new shiny hand cuffs when he noticed he was missing something. “Wait hey Deren, these came with keys didn’t they?”
He had one foot inside the ship when he responded. “I was hoping you wouldn’t have noticed until after I left, here.” He dug in his pocket and threw them to him. Dylan tried to lean down to get them but fell down thanks to the chains Deren gave him that he put on his legs.
“A little help here.” With handcuffs and chains on his legs he couldn’t get up. Miki and Aaron laughed walking away. He grabs the keys and crawls trying to catch up. “Come on guys, I can’t get up!”
Deren was just about to head back inside the ship, when someone called out to him. “Deren, wait!” The mysterious figure rode down the right side cliffs that surrounded the city on a black and light grey hover bike. This guy was about 18 years old or that’s what he told anyone who asked. Black eyes, dark blondish hair, goggles over his eyes and a outfit with many straps but covered by a black cloak. Dylan, Aaron and Miki turned around hearing the man calling Deren’s name.
Deren walked out recognizing the voice. He had a surprised look on his face walking up to him. “Zach?” He asked. “What are you doing here, aren’t you suppose to be helping Andrew with that desert mission?”
Zach looked down sighing; he looked as if something went wrong. “That’s why I’m here, Andrew is missing in action I slept in missing the ship to go check out an area uncovered by the recent sand storm. Everyone else at the station is out on other missions, while I was trying to talk to him on our headset communicators his voice kept going in and out. He was saying something about monsters he had never seen, from what I heard in the background the battle wasn’t going good.”
Deren UN hooked his plasma canon and loaded it heading into the ship. “We haven’t got to lose, haul it now.” They got in and the ship blasted off with Zach’s directions to the desert where Andrew was last heard from.
Dylan cocked his head, in confusion. “Who was that guy, and who is Andrew?”
Aaron put his hand on his shoulder and like a smart-aleck he said. “I think you should have asked that BEFORE they left.” Miki and Aaron walked back inside leaving Dylan looked up at the sky, thinking about the “monsters” Zach had mentioned.
Occ: Ok not much but the end and a a few tweaks have changed but this will switch up the story a little bit, now Zach and Andrew are mentioned earlier in the story which will add more things to come and some more interesting things so stayed tuned for the next update...