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The viruses were being watched in the shadows by a man with black eyes was watching them in the shadows. A begging hobo walked by seeing him, and saying how much his life hurts.
“You have jeopardized my mission.” The man said.
He steps out snaps the hobo’s neck and jumps back into the shadows. The man laid on the ground twitching. “I’m still alive you jerk.”
“Because of you I have failed my mission…” He kicked the hobo in his side, grabbed his grappling hook and zipped up a building trying to think where those guys went. “I hope I’m not too late, if these guys are what I think then were in trouble.” This guy was about 23 years old or that’s what he told anyone who asked. Black eyes dark blondish hair, goggles now covering his eyes, he wore an outfit with many straps but most of his outfit was covered by his cloak.
He landed in the middle of a park, seeing humanoid lizard like monsters causing some destruction, they had a black see through skin. ”This is like a move or something; hopefully I’m not one of those guys who dies.”
He took out 2 big star shaped blades they began glowing the second he did and ran after them. “I don’t get paid enough for this” He took the first one down about to take them out before he though of something else. “Wait, I don’t get paid at all…well I’ve been getting ripped off.”
Every time he took one down more came in its place, soon after that different looking ones came. Ones with spider like legs 2 on each side, a sail like at the top of his head, black eyes, sharp claws and spikes going down its back.
Back with Dylan and the others Karlis continues the trail into the city, everything inside the city seems rather too quite. It was in worse condition now since the virus came, but it seemed like it might have left. They continued on the trail heading out the city.
Minutes later they were out, across the bridge and into the desert. Karlis was shaking like crazy, and his left eye was beginning to twitch.
Brad looked at him; he was starting to feel uncomfortable around him. Cautiously he asked “You ok?”
Karlis’ twitched slowed down but he was still shaking. “Y-yeah I’m uh just…its just cold in here is all.”
He may have been saying he was just cold, but the twitch and the temperature screen near the dashboard saying 72 degrees was telling him otherwise.
Brad smiled trying not to laugh. “Sure it is.”
Karlis was swallowed by the desert slugs so many times, it was a wonder he wasn’t used to it. He was a bit claustrophobic though so that probably answered some of it as well.
Mei and Dylan were playing cards.
“Got any three’s?” Dylan asked.
Mei shook her head. “Nope go fish.”
Dylan sigh’s as he reaches for another card, he had about half the stack in his hands. “This game is weak.”
Mei giggled, Brad looked in her deck and saw she had two three’s. Brad whispered to Mei. “That’s jive, are you going tell him?”
“Yeah after the game is over, then I’ll play fair I guess its just fun messing with him.” Mei said.
About 20 minutes later they were out the desert, approaching where this whole thing started, outside of Shaxdin city. Everything looked the same from when Dylan, Mei and Aaron left. They arrived in the city and Dylan directed Karlis to Phil’s lab. A few more minutes they parked outside the lab and went inside, Dylan was the first one in, the first thing he saw was a mostly white brown spotted dog asleep on the table with Phil with his head on the table next to it drooling as he slept.
Dylan chuckled, he snuck over to Phil, the others watched clueless of what he was doing. He got right behind him and clapped his hands once, yelling. “WAKE UP!”
Phil jumped up out his chair, with dried drool on the side of his mouth startled. He moved his head rapidly from left to right seeing what was going on, when he saw Dylan, Mei and 2 others.
“Oh phew I thought you guys were someone else.” Phil said holding his chest breathing hard.
Dylan laughed. “You got some dried drool around your mouth; this is Karlis and Brad Tyrexil.”
Phil: “Did you say Tyrexil?”
Brad: “Yes indeed he did, I’m Tyler’s son, you probably would’ve recognized me without the goatee, and clothes.”
Dylan looked around the room. “We got some bad news though, Aaron got infected and left with this guy named Omega.”
Phil put his head down rubbing his heads. “Great, first I lose Zero, come close to losing Miki and Deren and now Aaron.”
Dylan jumped up hearing that. “What, losing?”
Phil pointed to the capsules against the walls, with Deren and Miki inside.
Dylan ran to the capsules surprised, Mei, Brad and Karlis were too shocked to move. “Wha-what happened to them?”
“We had a visitor named Omega, we got rid of him when we he first visited trying to pretend he was that dog, he took my newest project Zero’s, he was a being I thought once finished could help fight but before I could finish installing the program that would protect him from getting infected Omega came back, took the body and almost took us out.” Phil looked down ashamed. “It’s my fault I shouldn’t have made Zero. Mei and Deren will be alright though they just need a few more hours to heal.”
Dylan turned around with anger in his eyes. “It’s not your fault you were only trying to help; Omega did this, where did he go?”
Karlis walked over to the TV that was on the wall and turned it on. Dylan turned to him. “Karlis we need to think where this virus and Aaron are not watch TV….we could if we had time… but we don’t”
Karlis flipped through the channels. “It helps me to think, you guys have your ways I have mine.”
He kept flipping until he saw a flashy man with blonde curled hair in a suit talking.
“Come on down to the racing track, prove your skills, race for prizes, some more self-esteem of what little you have or just to get that one special girl or boy to notice you, located right outside of Vrez city, join if you got the ball- I mean guts.” As the man continued talking, they saw Omega and Aaron walking in the back, everyone was surprised seeing them.
Phil walked closer to the TV. “Wow for once the TV helped us!”
Brad walked up to Phil. “Do you have any weapons we can use against him?”
Phil looked down. “I do but…”
Brad: “But what?”
Phil:” When I created Zero I…made him a being called a “Mimic” he can copy the powers or weapons he sees and can double the output of it, he already can use force fields and super strength. You have no idea of what Zero and Omega are capable of doing together.”
Dylan walked over and took out some pulse grenades off the shelves. “We’ll find out when we’re kicking his butt, we got to try, at least get Aaron back.”
Phil tried to convince Dylan even more but he was as stubborn as always. Phil was usually a step ahead so he took out a ray gun. “This will neutralize Zero’s powers momentarily but I can’t promise it effecting Omega’s…whatever he can do.”
Brad straightened his hat. “I know where Vrez city is also, after we prepare we can head on out there.”
Phil was a weapon and bio specialist he always had extra things lying around from his “experiments”. “Alright stock up.” He pointed to a room near the corner where the basement was; they got prepared and in a few minutes were out the door.
As they went to the shuttle Phil came out with them. “Remember anything you guys have he can copy and double it, watch each others back.”
Dylan waved as the hatch was closing. “No worries!”
They blasted off heading for Vrez city.
Chapter 17: Nicks turn.
Brad loaded in a map for the shuttle to get to the city manually. Dylan was confused about something so he went up to Brad to ask hoping he would know.
“Hey brad” Dylan said “How come we haven’t seen too many virus’ so far, they all hiding somewhere or something?”
Brad was quite for a second, he knew what they were after. “I’m guessing by now you guys must know how this started, my father made the first few virus’ they were called “anti- virus’” before but long story short in the end one escaped from the leader’s hands and he wanted her back to hopefully join him. Even though it’s been a year since then, they heard sightings from scouters earlier so Omega and a group of viruses were sent down here. Melderra was supposed to be a very strong being; they probably have a big group here. That one huge Virus from the city, was not one my father created there is no doubt about it but those ones at the lab were ones I even helped him create, the leader Jin must be making his own versions of virus’”
Vrez city was only a few miles away so it didn’t take them long to get there. Within about have an hour they were there, in the distance they could see a huge racing track right on the side of the city, Vrez looked like a metropolis city and so did the track.
Omega and Kratz were waiting for the others to get to his destination, so they figured he might have some fun and race. He was in line for the try-outs; most of them had a “cut-throat” look to them, mostly big and muscular except for one boy in the beginning of the line.
The viruses were being watched in the shadows by a man with black eyes was watching them in the shadows. A begging hobo walked by seeing him, and saying how much his life hurts.
“You have jeopardized my mission.” The man said.
He steps out snaps the hobo’s neck and jumps back into the shadows. The man laid on the ground twitching. “I’m still alive you jerk.”
“Because of you I have failed my mission…” He kicked the hobo in his side, grabbed his grappling hook and zipped up a building trying to think where those guys went. “I hope I’m not too late, if these guys are what I think then were in trouble.” This guy was about 23 years old or that’s what he told anyone who asked. Black eyes dark blondish hair, goggles now covering his eyes, he wore an outfit with many straps but most of his outfit was covered by his cloak.
He landed in the middle of a park, seeing humanoid lizard like monsters causing some destruction, they had a black see through skin. ”This is like a move or something; hopefully I’m not one of those guys who dies.”
He took out 2 big star shaped blades they began glowing the second he did and ran after them. “I don’t get paid enough for this” He took the first one down about to take them out before he though of something else. “Wait, I don’t get paid at all…well I’ve been getting ripped off.”
Every time he took one down more came in its place, soon after that different looking ones came. Ones with spider like legs 2 on each side, a sail like at the top of his head, black eyes, sharp claws and spikes going down its back.
Back with Dylan and the others Karlis continues the trail into the city, everything inside the city seems rather too quite. It was in worse condition now since the virus came, but it seemed like it might have left. They continued on the trail heading out the city.
Minutes later they were out, across the bridge and into the desert. Karlis was shaking like crazy, and his left eye was beginning to twitch.
Brad looked at him; he was starting to feel uncomfortable around him. Cautiously he asked “You ok?”
Karlis’ twitched slowed down but he was still shaking. “Y-yeah I’m uh just…its just cold in here is all.”
He may have been saying he was just cold, but the twitch and the temperature screen near the dashboard saying 72 degrees was telling him otherwise.
Brad smiled trying not to laugh. “Sure it is.”
Karlis was swallowed by the desert slugs so many times, it was a wonder he wasn’t used to it. He was a bit claustrophobic though so that probably answered some of it as well.
Mei and Dylan were playing cards.
“Got any three’s?” Dylan asked.
Mei shook her head. “Nope go fish.”
Dylan sigh’s as he reaches for another card, he had about half the stack in his hands. “This game is weak.”
Mei giggled, Brad looked in her deck and saw she had two three’s. Brad whispered to Mei. “That’s jive, are you going tell him?”
“Yeah after the game is over, then I’ll play fair I guess its just fun messing with him.” Mei said.
About 20 minutes later they were out the desert, approaching where this whole thing started, outside of Shaxdin city. Everything looked the same from when Dylan, Mei and Aaron left. They arrived in the city and Dylan directed Karlis to Phil’s lab. A few more minutes they parked outside the lab and went inside, Dylan was the first one in, the first thing he saw was a mostly white brown spotted dog asleep on the table with Phil with his head on the table next to it drooling as he slept.
Dylan chuckled, he snuck over to Phil, the others watched clueless of what he was doing. He got right behind him and clapped his hands once, yelling. “WAKE UP!”
Phil jumped up out his chair, with dried drool on the side of his mouth startled. He moved his head rapidly from left to right seeing what was going on, when he saw Dylan, Mei and 2 others.
“Oh phew I thought you guys were someone else.” Phil said holding his chest breathing hard.
Dylan laughed. “You got some dried drool around your mouth; this is Karlis and Brad Tyrexil.”
Phil: “Did you say Tyrexil?”
Brad: “Yes indeed he did, I’m Tyler’s son, you probably would’ve recognized me without the goatee, and clothes.”
Dylan looked around the room. “We got some bad news though, Aaron got infected and left with this guy named Omega.”
Phil put his head down rubbing his heads. “Great, first I lose Zero, come close to losing Miki and Deren and now Aaron.”
Dylan jumped up hearing that. “What, losing?”
Phil pointed to the capsules against the walls, with Deren and Miki inside.
Dylan ran to the capsules surprised, Mei, Brad and Karlis were too shocked to move. “Wha-what happened to them?”
“We had a visitor named Omega, we got rid of him when we he first visited trying to pretend he was that dog, he took my newest project Zero’s, he was a being I thought once finished could help fight but before I could finish installing the program that would protect him from getting infected Omega came back, took the body and almost took us out.” Phil looked down ashamed. “It’s my fault I shouldn’t have made Zero. Mei and Deren will be alright though they just need a few more hours to heal.”
Dylan turned around with anger in his eyes. “It’s not your fault you were only trying to help; Omega did this, where did he go?”
Karlis walked over to the TV that was on the wall and turned it on. Dylan turned to him. “Karlis we need to think where this virus and Aaron are not watch TV….we could if we had time… but we don’t”
Karlis flipped through the channels. “It helps me to think, you guys have your ways I have mine.”
He kept flipping until he saw a flashy man with blonde curled hair in a suit talking.
“Come on down to the racing track, prove your skills, race for prizes, some more self-esteem of what little you have or just to get that one special girl or boy to notice you, located right outside of Vrez city, join if you got the ball- I mean guts.” As the man continued talking, they saw Omega and Aaron walking in the back, everyone was surprised seeing them.
Phil walked closer to the TV. “Wow for once the TV helped us!”
Brad walked up to Phil. “Do you have any weapons we can use against him?”
Phil looked down. “I do but…”
Brad: “But what?”
Phil:” When I created Zero I…made him a being called a “Mimic” he can copy the powers or weapons he sees and can double the output of it, he already can use force fields and super strength. You have no idea of what Zero and Omega are capable of doing together.”
Dylan walked over and took out some pulse grenades off the shelves. “We’ll find out when we’re kicking his butt, we got to try, at least get Aaron back.”
Phil tried to convince Dylan even more but he was as stubborn as always. Phil was usually a step ahead so he took out a ray gun. “This will neutralize Zero’s powers momentarily but I can’t promise it effecting Omega’s…whatever he can do.”
Brad straightened his hat. “I know where Vrez city is also, after we prepare we can head on out there.”
Phil was a weapon and bio specialist he always had extra things lying around from his “experiments”. “Alright stock up.” He pointed to a room near the corner where the basement was; they got prepared and in a few minutes were out the door.
As they went to the shuttle Phil came out with them. “Remember anything you guys have he can copy and double it, watch each others back.”
Dylan waved as the hatch was closing. “No worries!”
They blasted off heading for Vrez city.
Chapter 17: Nicks turn.
Brad loaded in a map for the shuttle to get to the city manually. Dylan was confused about something so he went up to Brad to ask hoping he would know.
“Hey brad” Dylan said “How come we haven’t seen too many virus’ so far, they all hiding somewhere or something?”
Brad was quite for a second, he knew what they were after. “I’m guessing by now you guys must know how this started, my father made the first few virus’ they were called “anti- virus’” before but long story short in the end one escaped from the leader’s hands and he wanted her back to hopefully join him. Even though it’s been a year since then, they heard sightings from scouters earlier so Omega and a group of viruses were sent down here. Melderra was supposed to be a very strong being; they probably have a big group here. That one huge Virus from the city, was not one my father created there is no doubt about it but those ones at the lab were ones I even helped him create, the leader Jin must be making his own versions of virus’”
Vrez city was only a few miles away so it didn’t take them long to get there. Within about have an hour they were there, in the distance they could see a huge racing track right on the side of the city, Vrez looked like a metropolis city and so did the track.
Omega and Kratz were waiting for the others to get to his destination, so they figured he might have some fun and race. He was in line for the try-outs; most of them had a “cut-throat” look to them, mostly big and muscular except for one boy in the beginning of the line.
Thanks I was working on that chapter today which is why it came out fast lol the next one will take a bit longer 
Ok since i was reviewing chapters already written most of it was already done at the time so this is gonna be the final one for a few days
A boy in line walked to the lady in the window. “The R.G.C is not responsibly for any injuries you may or may not but most likely will receive during this race.” She said, this woman had a bored look on her face and she looked to be in her mid 30’s. She looked like a regular woman, she was very beautiful with orange eyes with make up on .
The boy smiled. “Mary, do we have to go through this every time?”
“Yeah, if I don’t I could get fired or sued for not telling the victim I mean contestant.” She said.
The boy: “Alright just put me down as Nick this time.”
Mary:” Ah your real name huh, what happened to D-abyss or Maverick?”
Nick: “I’m not feeling it today ya know.”
Mary smiled and gave him a ticket. Nick grabbed it and walked off. “Thanks see ya later.”
He was light skinned with glasses, brown eyes, and his black fitted hat on backwards, short cut hair, long black vest with a green long sleeved shirt under, with black pants and with white shoes.
He walks up to the glass walls outside that separate the people from the track and racers because of an “accident” that happened to a former fan. While Nick was checking out the track, Omega right beside Kratz was checking for any good bodies for their fellow soldiers to use.
“These big guys will do well, if they survive the race with us that is.” Zero took the ticket from Mary and walked close to where Nick was. “I can sense one of them the bigger ones coming now.” Zero thought to himself.
Nick turned to them with a smile. “Hey my names Nick, are you guys in the race?”
Omega wasn’t paying attention so Kratz had to answer to Nick. “Ahem, yes we are just to see what its like.”
Nick: “I’m in too, so I guess we’ll see how good we can race huh?”
“Way better than you chump!” Kratz thought.
“Yeah we will. Im uh…looking forward to it, to see who all is good, my friends will be watching too to see who the best is.” Omega commented.
Dylan and the others were near the line. There were only a few tickets left and no one was seen in line.
The announcer from before popped up on a few floating screens around the city and track. “Greetings one and all, the race for today is about to start so I advice everyone to take there rides and get the tickets before someone else does ha-ha. The prize our racers will be competing for are prototype D.S.G’s fresh from the very scientists hands…literally. And for those who are watching be sure to visit the food stands and for the racers who have already, I feel sorry for your stomachs when the race begins Hahaha.” He cut off the screens, which then cut to more advertisements.
Kratz didn’t care too much for weapons but Nick’s, Dylan’s and Omega’s eyes lit up seeing the prize. “With those I’d be more unstoppable then what I already am” Omega said.
Then Nick. “Finally something worth the bruises and scars that last one was a memory.” He raised his shirt looking at the long scar on his stomach. “To think I have it all because one of the racers last time had to eat before the race.”
Lastly Dylan. “I’ll tell them I’m racing to get to Omega, but I’m really trying to get that sweet prize.”
Dylan went up and got the last ticket. “Ok I’ll race and see if he tries anything, you guys stay here incase something pops up.”
Mary came on the intercom. “All racers please report to your cars the race will start momentarily.”
“Ok there’s my cue, be back soon guys!” Dylan said.
Brad: “Keep your eyes open!”
Mei: “And watch out for any sharp turns!”
Dylan: “No worries guys!”
Nick and Zero were getting on their cars. Nicks’ ticket said “number three” he looked for the car with the “3” on it. The car was a bit thin with completely spherical wheels, long and green with a black strip going down, the pit in the middle with a cover hood and two thin rockets in the back. “Ah, my favorite one.” He stepped up, got into it and started it up.
Omega was number five his was more big and bulky looking. It was brown colored, with 4 rockets and 4 regular 32 inch wheels. “This one fits me…I guess.”
Dylan was number twelve. All the cars were lined up in a straight line and his was at the other side. His was a hover bike, it was red mostly and brown near the tires and hood. Everyone was on their cars.
Lastly with Kratz he got number nine, his was the same as Nicks. Back with the others they were getting ready to watch the race. A car alarm went off in the back round, along with a familiar screech, Brad and Karlis recognized. Karlis turned around mouth gaped open. “Please tell me that was a car horn.”
Mei looked at Karlis. “What are you talking about?”
“That virus we told you about when we were heading to Phil’s place” Brad said “That sounded like its scream.”
“You don’t think that was it, do you…why would it have followed us to-“Another screeched cut Mei off, this one was louder than the first one. “Ok never mind.”
After a few seconds of looking at the box of popcorn Mei was holding Karlis was beginning to suspect something. “You gonna share those or what?”
The intercom came on. “Alright races get ready…On your mark…Get set…!”
The beginning of the track behind them bursted with the bits flying everywhere, as the virus from Karlis city emerged from it. Digging its claws into it as it climbed up, searching for its leader. Omega turned off his ride. “Well I guess the race is cancelled.” He red grew red, as he quickly blasted the other side of the track so no one could escape that way.
The announcer who was talking not to long ago, was near the track, with his camera crew, eyes wide open speechless. He dropped the microphone as the video crew turned the camera to the monster and everyone who was watching the race through TV saw it. “Uh sir we um…forgot our extra batteries in the car… so bye!” They took off, leaving the speechless announcer.
He got his focus back and ran hands in the air. “Wait for me!”
Everyone on the deck followed right after screaming and pushing others out the way. The show girl who was supposed to show off the gloves to the winner was the first one who left the prize was left in the glass case on a table. The racers and everyone were soon gone except for Dylan, Nick and the others.
Nick turned his attention to Dylan; he turned his head slightly looking at him. “Hey pal you know by any chance what’s going on here?”
“Its hard to explain really, long story short, they bad guys we good guys.” Dylan said.
As Omega and Kratz were heading to the monster, Nick looked back and saw Karlis, Mei, Brad and the sweet, sweet prize left behind, the D.S.G’s. Just as he noticed them so did Omega, he looked back and saw Omega eye balling them. He clinched his fists; he was also sweating a bit due to the hot sun beating on everyone. He jetted over to the case, while Omega ran after him. “Oh no, you don’t!”
As Omega ran after Nick, Dylan took out the ray gun aiming for Omega. “Oh yes he-” Kratz jumped in the air and knocked it out of Dylan’s hands across the deck, before he could finish. Dylan finishes his sentenced surprised. “does”
“Aaron if you can hear me, you got to fight it, take some breaths and-” Kratz charges his hands and blasts Dylan into one of the cars. He lands on his side just as Lydan begins to talk.
“I can’t get a single minute of peace when Im with you can I; well I guess I should help. Here use some of my powers.”
Dylan’s marks glowed and Lydan’s arms stretched out and grabbed Kratz. “I did not see that coming.” He turned his head up to the virus. “Virus, attack!”
Dylan threw Kratz to the side as the virus came running to him screaming. “Now there are worries!” Dylan turned around, going back, the only direction he had left, leaping over the cars in the way until he reached the end where the huge gap Omega made was. “Well I think that kid and Dylan can handle this, I say we get some more popcorn.” Karlis doubted saying that would convinced Brad and Mei but he figured he could give it a shot. As he tried to walk away, Mei grabbed him by the back of his collar pulling him back.
Mei wrapped her arm around his neck pointing him to the big virus. “Yeah I think your forgetting that huge 100 foot monster heading for Dylan. Brad you help that kid out Karlis and me will help Dylan.”
“Right” Brad headed for Nick and Omega with his cane activated. Nick was trying to put the gloves on while trying to dodge Omega’s hits. He knocked Nick into a shack window; fortunately he still had a hold on his gloves. Books and papers falling all on Nick, Omega could hear him getting up. “Is that all you got?!” Nick said dizzy.
Brad snuck him from behind and stuck Omega with the electric current from the cane. Yelling in pain he turned around grabbed the cane while brad was still holding onto it and tossed him about 7 feet away. “That wasn’t very smart Brad!” Omega picked him up by his neck strangling him while Nick was struggling to get out the shack. Brad was just about to lose consciousness when Nick came running out the shack with the gloves on. He made the first sword appear in his right hand, it was a thin two edged sword with dragon designs on the handle. He swung for his arm as a bluff swing to try and make him let go of Brad, and it worked. He let him drop to the ground and leaped away from them both.
Omega got back in his stance smiling. “Clever boy…very clever.”
“You ok?” Nick asked.
“Not until we get rid of him.” Brad said.
“You guys are very talented; you’ll make an excellent edition to the army.” Omega said in a persuading way. “What do ya say, you join me and I won’t destroy you.”
Brad got up and grabbed his cane as Nick took out his other sword and made up his own style and stance. Knees slightly bent, with one sword held normal while the other blade pointed the opposite of him, the normal held sword in front and the other behind. Brad stepped forward a bit smiling. “Does this answer you question?”
Chapter 18: Zero and Kratz vs. Everyone else
Kratz got up looking at the virus chasing down Dylan. “Aaron is that you?” Mei asked. Kratz turned around smiling just how Aaron did. “Well yes in a way, this is HIS body but he isn’t really able to control it or me, but anyway, since you don’t have a fighting partner I’d like to volunteer.”
Mei took out her neon claws, she had one pair. Karlis was observing the way the weapon was designed and almost forgot where he was. “We’ll I don’t have any weapons except for these bombs.”
He took two thin red ones out his side pockets. “Should I use these?”
Mei did not at all trust Karlis with any kind of explosive; she decided to give him one of her weapons. “Take this!” She took out her curved sword and gave to him.
He slowly took it, touching the point like he was testing the sharpness of it then turned back to Mei. “Um, I’m not very good with blades, the last time I used one was when I had a pet, and lets just say because of my “clumsiness” fluffy my cat was buried in pieces.”
Mei sighed. “Just stay away from me with those and don’t try to cut Aaron, he may be infected but that is still his body.”
Dylan had no other choice but to wait until his doom came if he didn’t think of anything quick that is. The virus was just about to swoop down to swipe him until a voice, came out of nowhere saying “Time to take this sucka down!”
Along came that 23 year old man throwing his long chains that dug into the viruses back taking him off the edge of the track down about 20 feet below. The virus grabbed a hold of Dylan having all three fall down, the viruses back was facing the ground, the man landed on its chest while Dylan was still in its hand. The viruses hit the sand hard rolling down one of the bigger dunes. Letting go of Dylan he rolled down the other end followed by the man who took his chains out the monster. He took a deep breath and looked at Dylan. “That’s a kid; he wouldn’t stand a chance with this thing!” He thought, so he tried to reason with him. “Ok kid you can go now, my names Zach morrow and Im part of the M.C.S the monster clean-up society so you don’t have to worry about a thing.”
The monster was beginning to get back up, shaking the sand of it self. Dylan took out his launcher, Zach looked at it confused. “Alright but my mission is to stop these monsters not baby-sit, so far this is the biggest one I’ve seen, shooting at it just might only make it mad.” He shot his grappling hook back up to the track grabbing Dylan as they pulled up going up. The virus was just getting its focus back as it saw them going up. It roared and jumped up trying to get them, thinking fast Dylan threw down 4 grenades at it hoping it would at least slow it down.
It fell back down once the grenades hit, while Zach and Dylan were just getting back on the track.
Zach came up first putting out his hand to help Dylan up. "Today is going to be long; I have a ninth sense for these things”
Dylan raised his eyebrow. “Don’t you mean sixth sense?”
Zach started hopping over the cars. “No”
A boy in line walked to the lady in the window. “The R.G.C is not responsibly for any injuries you may or may not but most likely will receive during this race.” She said, this woman had a bored look on her face and she looked to be in her mid 30’s. She looked like a regular woman, she was very beautiful with orange eyes with make up on .
The boy smiled. “Mary, do we have to go through this every time?”
“Yeah, if I don’t I could get fired or sued for not telling the victim I mean contestant.” She said.
The boy: “Alright just put me down as Nick this time.”
Mary:” Ah your real name huh, what happened to D-abyss or Maverick?”
Nick: “I’m not feeling it today ya know.”
Mary smiled and gave him a ticket. Nick grabbed it and walked off. “Thanks see ya later.”
He was light skinned with glasses, brown eyes, and his black fitted hat on backwards, short cut hair, long black vest with a green long sleeved shirt under, with black pants and with white shoes.
He walks up to the glass walls outside that separate the people from the track and racers because of an “accident” that happened to a former fan. While Nick was checking out the track, Omega right beside Kratz was checking for any good bodies for their fellow soldiers to use.
“These big guys will do well, if they survive the race with us that is.” Zero took the ticket from Mary and walked close to where Nick was. “I can sense one of them the bigger ones coming now.” Zero thought to himself.
Nick turned to them with a smile. “Hey my names Nick, are you guys in the race?”
Omega wasn’t paying attention so Kratz had to answer to Nick. “Ahem, yes we are just to see what its like.”
Nick: “I’m in too, so I guess we’ll see how good we can race huh?”
“Way better than you chump!” Kratz thought.
“Yeah we will. Im uh…looking forward to it, to see who all is good, my friends will be watching too to see who the best is.” Omega commented.
Dylan and the others were near the line. There were only a few tickets left and no one was seen in line.
The announcer from before popped up on a few floating screens around the city and track. “Greetings one and all, the race for today is about to start so I advice everyone to take there rides and get the tickets before someone else does ha-ha. The prize our racers will be competing for are prototype D.S.G’s fresh from the very scientists hands…literally. And for those who are watching be sure to visit the food stands and for the racers who have already, I feel sorry for your stomachs when the race begins Hahaha.” He cut off the screens, which then cut to more advertisements.
Kratz didn’t care too much for weapons but Nick’s, Dylan’s and Omega’s eyes lit up seeing the prize. “With those I’d be more unstoppable then what I already am” Omega said.
Then Nick. “Finally something worth the bruises and scars that last one was a memory.” He raised his shirt looking at the long scar on his stomach. “To think I have it all because one of the racers last time had to eat before the race.”
Lastly Dylan. “I’ll tell them I’m racing to get to Omega, but I’m really trying to get that sweet prize.”
Dylan went up and got the last ticket. “Ok I’ll race and see if he tries anything, you guys stay here incase something pops up.”
Mary came on the intercom. “All racers please report to your cars the race will start momentarily.”
“Ok there’s my cue, be back soon guys!” Dylan said.
Brad: “Keep your eyes open!”
Mei: “And watch out for any sharp turns!”
Dylan: “No worries guys!”
Nick and Zero were getting on their cars. Nicks’ ticket said “number three” he looked for the car with the “3” on it. The car was a bit thin with completely spherical wheels, long and green with a black strip going down, the pit in the middle with a cover hood and two thin rockets in the back. “Ah, my favorite one.” He stepped up, got into it and started it up.
Omega was number five his was more big and bulky looking. It was brown colored, with 4 rockets and 4 regular 32 inch wheels. “This one fits me…I guess.”
Dylan was number twelve. All the cars were lined up in a straight line and his was at the other side. His was a hover bike, it was red mostly and brown near the tires and hood. Everyone was on their cars.
Lastly with Kratz he got number nine, his was the same as Nicks. Back with the others they were getting ready to watch the race. A car alarm went off in the back round, along with a familiar screech, Brad and Karlis recognized. Karlis turned around mouth gaped open. “Please tell me that was a car horn.”
Mei looked at Karlis. “What are you talking about?”
“That virus we told you about when we were heading to Phil’s place” Brad said “That sounded like its scream.”
“You don’t think that was it, do you…why would it have followed us to-“Another screeched cut Mei off, this one was louder than the first one. “Ok never mind.”
After a few seconds of looking at the box of popcorn Mei was holding Karlis was beginning to suspect something. “You gonna share those or what?”
The intercom came on. “Alright races get ready…On your mark…Get set…!”
The beginning of the track behind them bursted with the bits flying everywhere, as the virus from Karlis city emerged from it. Digging its claws into it as it climbed up, searching for its leader. Omega turned off his ride. “Well I guess the race is cancelled.” He red grew red, as he quickly blasted the other side of the track so no one could escape that way.
The announcer who was talking not to long ago, was near the track, with his camera crew, eyes wide open speechless. He dropped the microphone as the video crew turned the camera to the monster and everyone who was watching the race through TV saw it. “Uh sir we um…forgot our extra batteries in the car… so bye!” They took off, leaving the speechless announcer.
He got his focus back and ran hands in the air. “Wait for me!”
Everyone on the deck followed right after screaming and pushing others out the way. The show girl who was supposed to show off the gloves to the winner was the first one who left the prize was left in the glass case on a table. The racers and everyone were soon gone except for Dylan, Nick and the others.
Nick turned his attention to Dylan; he turned his head slightly looking at him. “Hey pal you know by any chance what’s going on here?”
“Its hard to explain really, long story short, they bad guys we good guys.” Dylan said.
As Omega and Kratz were heading to the monster, Nick looked back and saw Karlis, Mei, Brad and the sweet, sweet prize left behind, the D.S.G’s. Just as he noticed them so did Omega, he looked back and saw Omega eye balling them. He clinched his fists; he was also sweating a bit due to the hot sun beating on everyone. He jetted over to the case, while Omega ran after him. “Oh no, you don’t!”
As Omega ran after Nick, Dylan took out the ray gun aiming for Omega. “Oh yes he-” Kratz jumped in the air and knocked it out of Dylan’s hands across the deck, before he could finish. Dylan finishes his sentenced surprised. “does”
“Aaron if you can hear me, you got to fight it, take some breaths and-” Kratz charges his hands and blasts Dylan into one of the cars. He lands on his side just as Lydan begins to talk.
“I can’t get a single minute of peace when Im with you can I; well I guess I should help. Here use some of my powers.”
Dylan’s marks glowed and Lydan’s arms stretched out and grabbed Kratz. “I did not see that coming.” He turned his head up to the virus. “Virus, attack!”
Dylan threw Kratz to the side as the virus came running to him screaming. “Now there are worries!” Dylan turned around, going back, the only direction he had left, leaping over the cars in the way until he reached the end where the huge gap Omega made was. “Well I think that kid and Dylan can handle this, I say we get some more popcorn.” Karlis doubted saying that would convinced Brad and Mei but he figured he could give it a shot. As he tried to walk away, Mei grabbed him by the back of his collar pulling him back.
Mei wrapped her arm around his neck pointing him to the big virus. “Yeah I think your forgetting that huge 100 foot monster heading for Dylan. Brad you help that kid out Karlis and me will help Dylan.”
“Right” Brad headed for Nick and Omega with his cane activated. Nick was trying to put the gloves on while trying to dodge Omega’s hits. He knocked Nick into a shack window; fortunately he still had a hold on his gloves. Books and papers falling all on Nick, Omega could hear him getting up. “Is that all you got?!” Nick said dizzy.
Brad snuck him from behind and stuck Omega with the electric current from the cane. Yelling in pain he turned around grabbed the cane while brad was still holding onto it and tossed him about 7 feet away. “That wasn’t very smart Brad!” Omega picked him up by his neck strangling him while Nick was struggling to get out the shack. Brad was just about to lose consciousness when Nick came running out the shack with the gloves on. He made the first sword appear in his right hand, it was a thin two edged sword with dragon designs on the handle. He swung for his arm as a bluff swing to try and make him let go of Brad, and it worked. He let him drop to the ground and leaped away from them both.
Omega got back in his stance smiling. “Clever boy…very clever.”
“You ok?” Nick asked.
“Not until we get rid of him.” Brad said.
“You guys are very talented; you’ll make an excellent edition to the army.” Omega said in a persuading way. “What do ya say, you join me and I won’t destroy you.”
Brad got up and grabbed his cane as Nick took out his other sword and made up his own style and stance. Knees slightly bent, with one sword held normal while the other blade pointed the opposite of him, the normal held sword in front and the other behind. Brad stepped forward a bit smiling. “Does this answer you question?”
Chapter 18: Zero and Kratz vs. Everyone else
Kratz got up looking at the virus chasing down Dylan. “Aaron is that you?” Mei asked. Kratz turned around smiling just how Aaron did. “Well yes in a way, this is HIS body but he isn’t really able to control it or me, but anyway, since you don’t have a fighting partner I’d like to volunteer.”
Mei took out her neon claws, she had one pair. Karlis was observing the way the weapon was designed and almost forgot where he was. “We’ll I don’t have any weapons except for these bombs.”
He took two thin red ones out his side pockets. “Should I use these?”
Mei did not at all trust Karlis with any kind of explosive; she decided to give him one of her weapons. “Take this!” She took out her curved sword and gave to him.
He slowly took it, touching the point like he was testing the sharpness of it then turned back to Mei. “Um, I’m not very good with blades, the last time I used one was when I had a pet, and lets just say because of my “clumsiness” fluffy my cat was buried in pieces.”
Mei sighed. “Just stay away from me with those and don’t try to cut Aaron, he may be infected but that is still his body.”
Dylan had no other choice but to wait until his doom came if he didn’t think of anything quick that is. The virus was just about to swoop down to swipe him until a voice, came out of nowhere saying “Time to take this sucka down!”
Along came that 23 year old man throwing his long chains that dug into the viruses back taking him off the edge of the track down about 20 feet below. The virus grabbed a hold of Dylan having all three fall down, the viruses back was facing the ground, the man landed on its chest while Dylan was still in its hand. The viruses hit the sand hard rolling down one of the bigger dunes. Letting go of Dylan he rolled down the other end followed by the man who took his chains out the monster. He took a deep breath and looked at Dylan. “That’s a kid; he wouldn’t stand a chance with this thing!” He thought, so he tried to reason with him. “Ok kid you can go now, my names Zach morrow and Im part of the M.C.S the monster clean-up society so you don’t have to worry about a thing.”
The monster was beginning to get back up, shaking the sand of it self. Dylan took out his launcher, Zach looked at it confused. “Alright but my mission is to stop these monsters not baby-sit, so far this is the biggest one I’ve seen, shooting at it just might only make it mad.” He shot his grappling hook back up to the track grabbing Dylan as they pulled up going up. The virus was just getting its focus back as it saw them going up. It roared and jumped up trying to get them, thinking fast Dylan threw down 4 grenades at it hoping it would at least slow it down.
It fell back down once the grenades hit, while Zach and Dylan were just getting back on the track.
Zach came up first putting out his hand to help Dylan up. "Today is going to be long; I have a ninth sense for these things”
Dylan raised his eyebrow. “Don’t you mean sixth sense?”
Zach started hopping over the cars. “No”
Thanks Im trying to make sure this one for sure has alot of action in it and to think if i didn't go back over the story i wouldn't have made these new and better chapters
Just keep up the good work and trust yourself to improve and you'll be just fine.
Its short cause I wanted to end it at where it is, school is killing me so this is all I have for now:
Back with Mei and Karlis, he was on the ground, lying on his stomach scrunched up with his butt in the air and sword beside him. His eyes were moving around like he was dizzy, which he was.
Mei was not even surprised he was knocked out so easily. “I thought he might’ve been a good fighter.”
Kratz slashes down trying to get down the middle of Mei, thinking quickly she puts up both hands with her neo claw gloves’, catching the blade only itches away from her face.
Her hair covering parts of her eyes, hat on the ground near Karlis and sweating, Mei was so tired but Kratz was just warming up. Kratz swung the blade to his right tossing Mei close to the stands. She struggled to get up looking at Kratz.
He lifted up his sword, with the blade pointing down at her. “This is what happens when you mess with us!”
As he drove the blade down on her, he stopped out of nowhere, arms shaking trying to stab her. “No, imp-impossible.”
Kratz’s eyes turned back to Aarons color. “Run I can’t keep him still like this for long!”
She got up slowly very tired, seeing Dylan and Zach down near the track she rushed over. Trying to get most of the hair out her face, she re-tied it in a pony tail. Zach was the first to see the girl running up to them. Zach’s eyes widened, he held his chest feeling his heart beating start to go fast. In his eyes all he could see was hear, everything else in his ears went quite and invisible but her.
“I’m in love…” Zach said.
Dylan was afraid of what he just said, his eyes opened just like Zach’s, turning his head to Zach almost afraid to ask. “You’re what?”
Mei got up to them panting. “I barely got away from the virus, Aaron was able to take back control for a moment long enough for me to get away but I don’t know how long it will last.”
Zach walked to her side trying out his “family charm” as he says. “Well don’t worry, the Zach man is here for ya.”
The enormous claws from the monstrous virus took hold of the track climbing back up. Feeling the vibration they turned around seeing it. Turning some of his attention to the ugly and angry virus, he took out his star shaped blades.
“Great, my love will have to wait” He thought to himself.
Dylan looked behind seeing Aaron running towards them, back to being controlled by Kratz. The enormous virus began charging from the other end. Kratz tried to command it. “Virus stop, they are mine!”
The virus was still going full speed with anger blocking its thoughts. Kratz leaped over, Dylan, Mei and Zach landing right in front of the virus. “Disobeying orders results in a immediate termination.”
He raises his hand, the virus still running toward him, neither it or the others were aware of what he was doing except for Lydan. “He is gonna absorb him!”
Just as Lydan said that the viruses’ body began to be sucked into Kratz one hand as a purplish black aurora surrounded him. Legs and arms bent he could feel the new power changing his body. He turned his head to them smiling, his eyes went to a lizard type look, black all inside his eyes except for around the pointing iris he now had and around his pupil, it sent chills down Dylan, Zach’s and Mei’s back.
Back with Mei and Karlis, he was on the ground, lying on his stomach scrunched up with his butt in the air and sword beside him. His eyes were moving around like he was dizzy, which he was.
Mei was not even surprised he was knocked out so easily. “I thought he might’ve been a good fighter.”
Kratz slashes down trying to get down the middle of Mei, thinking quickly she puts up both hands with her neo claw gloves’, catching the blade only itches away from her face.
Her hair covering parts of her eyes, hat on the ground near Karlis and sweating, Mei was so tired but Kratz was just warming up. Kratz swung the blade to his right tossing Mei close to the stands. She struggled to get up looking at Kratz.
He lifted up his sword, with the blade pointing down at her. “This is what happens when you mess with us!”
As he drove the blade down on her, he stopped out of nowhere, arms shaking trying to stab her. “No, imp-impossible.”
Kratz’s eyes turned back to Aarons color. “Run I can’t keep him still like this for long!”
She got up slowly very tired, seeing Dylan and Zach down near the track she rushed over. Trying to get most of the hair out her face, she re-tied it in a pony tail. Zach was the first to see the girl running up to them. Zach’s eyes widened, he held his chest feeling his heart beating start to go fast. In his eyes all he could see was hear, everything else in his ears went quite and invisible but her.
“I’m in love…” Zach said.
Dylan was afraid of what he just said, his eyes opened just like Zach’s, turning his head to Zach almost afraid to ask. “You’re what?”
Mei got up to them panting. “I barely got away from the virus, Aaron was able to take back control for a moment long enough for me to get away but I don’t know how long it will last.”
Zach walked to her side trying out his “family charm” as he says. “Well don’t worry, the Zach man is here for ya.”
The enormous claws from the monstrous virus took hold of the track climbing back up. Feeling the vibration they turned around seeing it. Turning some of his attention to the ugly and angry virus, he took out his star shaped blades.
“Great, my love will have to wait” He thought to himself.
Dylan looked behind seeing Aaron running towards them, back to being controlled by Kratz. The enormous virus began charging from the other end. Kratz tried to command it. “Virus stop, they are mine!”
The virus was still going full speed with anger blocking its thoughts. Kratz leaped over, Dylan, Mei and Zach landing right in front of the virus. “Disobeying orders results in a immediate termination.”
He raises his hand, the virus still running toward him, neither it or the others were aware of what he was doing except for Lydan. “He is gonna absorb him!”
Just as Lydan said that the viruses’ body began to be sucked into Kratz one hand as a purplish black aurora surrounded him. Legs and arms bent he could feel the new power changing his body. He turned his head to them smiling, his eyes went to a lizard type look, black all inside his eyes except for around the pointing iris he now had and around his pupil, it sent chills down Dylan, Zach’s and Mei’s back.
Sounds like an epidemic is brewing...
Good work M.S.
Good work M.S.
Thanks Im working on the next part now, Im trying to figure out what should happen now
New update coming soon, but is there anything besides grammer that I could change like anything I could change in the story or anything
I rewrote an earlier part of a chapter so here it goes:
Everyone else landed inside the city, Miki and the guards jumped out the why. The cruisers the soldiers were on crashed into a few building but no one was hurt except for Deren and the soldiers.
The girl grabbed Dylan before he hit the ground.
The girl held Dylan up. “I have one question”
“What?” Dylan asked.
“Why did you jump off the board to throw the grenades?”
Laughing Dylan put his hands in his pockets. “’Cause I’m cool.” He walked a few steps forward over to Deren, but tripped over a rock and hit the ground hard.
“Whatever you say.” She held her hand out to help Dylan up trying not to laugh.
Miki looked at the unconscious Deren and the other soldiers wondering why they attacked Dylan. She bent down at Deren holding his head up making sure he was ok, to what she could tell he was breathing fine and there were no signs of any real bad injuries.
"We should take them to the observatory to see why they attacked you." Miki said. “I hope my brother will be okay.”
The guards were just coming back from lunch.
Guard #1: Dude my stomach is bumping, that chilly dog is really messing with me
Guard #2: Ah just take some Pepto Bismal and you’ll be fine.
The guards looked at the mess Dylan and the others caused.
“What…what happened here, man I just cleaned this place up” The first guard said.
The second guard slapped his forehead. “Dude that was me, you were inside playing videogames and eating chili dogs.”
Guard 1 looked surprised but then he remembered. “Oh” he said after he burped. Clearly that was a sign of the chili dogs.
Miki ran over to them. “Guards I need you to go get some transports to get these guys over to Phil’s lab pronto"
“Will do!” The first guard said. They ran off heading for the garage.
After the guards were gone, Dylan, Miki and Mei began hearing someone or something talking, not in English but, some kind of alien language. Three humanoid looking, see through beings, suddenly emerged from Deren and the other soldiers bodies. The first one to come out seven feet tall with a spiky head, 1 foot spikes on both elbows and long hind legs. The second and third looked the same as each other, were slightly more beast like. Four narrow eyes with long jaw and sharp teeth, standing on all fours, its front legs were longer than the back with two toes on each foot. On its back it had a fin like a shark and with its tail it was long, sharp and jagged.
The first one turned around eye balling Dylan first, noticing his resemblance to someone he was looking for. Mei and Miki stood still in fright; Dylan was just surprised to see what was in front of him. “Aye those are monsters, man they look so cool!”
Mei and Miki back up slowly hoping the monsters wouldn’t hurt them. Miki tried to get Dylan to do the same. “Uh, Dylan, as much as I want to study those things now isn’t the time, and they look hungry…”
Mei moved her eyes back and forth amongst the three with one arm in her pocket where her knifes were just incase things went the wrong way. The first monster stepped forward with its eye still on Dylan, in a zombie like phase it said “Lydan…”
Dylan got confused hearing the name coming out of nowhere like that. “Nooo, my name is Dylan, D-y-l-a-n.”
Right after what Dylan said the first monster leaped over to him swinging his arm, it knocked Dylan into the gates, hard. “They don’t take correction very well…” Saying that when he fell to the ground. The monster growled as it ran toward him.
“Dylan, get up!” Miki said. Since she carried no weapons, she had no idea what to do.
The other two began to growl as they slowly approached the two girls. Mei stepped in front of Miki popping out swords that were attached to her arms. “I’ll handle these two; go see if Dylan is okay.”
Miki was almost UN sure of what she was doing, by leaving a total stranger to fight two unknown monsters. With Dylan knocked out and being one of her best friends she didn’t think twice about it. Mei slowly moved her feet in the right positions just incase they tried to attack at her sides, thinking they would in a pair.
“Alright come on whatever you are!” Mei readied for them to attack as they slowly came up to her growling. The first one roared, leaping at her right side with the other one leaping at the left. She jumped up over them trying to slash at their backs, but the blades went right through them without harming them. She could see it went through but she thought it had worked.
She landed right where the soldiers bodies were, she turned around to see the monsters landing on their feet. Her heart began to pound fast not knowing what to do, until she heard mans voice “Duck!” the voice exclaimed. She quickly turned around, seeing who it was but ducked at the same time cautiously.
It was the one and only Dr. Phillip Ilias, with a short goatee, black hair with long side burns, goggles, a scientist outfit on and on one arm he wore a robotic blaster. Shooting two crescent shaped energy blasts at the leaping beasts, destroying them on impact. He helped her up, seeing in the distance Miki trying to fight off another monster from Dylan. “You ok?”
Just to have an update so another one up whenever :3 and plz make sure to tell me anything I can change besides grammer mistakes and or punctuation
Everyone else landed inside the city, Miki and the guards jumped out the why. The cruisers the soldiers were on crashed into a few building but no one was hurt except for Deren and the soldiers.
The girl grabbed Dylan before he hit the ground.
The girl held Dylan up. “I have one question”
“What?” Dylan asked.
“Why did you jump off the board to throw the grenades?”
Laughing Dylan put his hands in his pockets. “’Cause I’m cool.” He walked a few steps forward over to Deren, but tripped over a rock and hit the ground hard.
“Whatever you say.” She held her hand out to help Dylan up trying not to laugh.
Miki looked at the unconscious Deren and the other soldiers wondering why they attacked Dylan. She bent down at Deren holding his head up making sure he was ok, to what she could tell he was breathing fine and there were no signs of any real bad injuries.
"We should take them to the observatory to see why they attacked you." Miki said. “I hope my brother will be okay.”
The guards were just coming back from lunch.
Guard #1: Dude my stomach is bumping, that chilly dog is really messing with me
Guard #2: Ah just take some Pepto Bismal and you’ll be fine.
The guards looked at the mess Dylan and the others caused.
“What…what happened here, man I just cleaned this place up” The first guard said.
The second guard slapped his forehead. “Dude that was me, you were inside playing videogames and eating chili dogs.”
Guard 1 looked surprised but then he remembered. “Oh” he said after he burped. Clearly that was a sign of the chili dogs.
Miki ran over to them. “Guards I need you to go get some transports to get these guys over to Phil’s lab pronto"
“Will do!” The first guard said. They ran off heading for the garage.
After the guards were gone, Dylan, Miki and Mei began hearing someone or something talking, not in English but, some kind of alien language. Three humanoid looking, see through beings, suddenly emerged from Deren and the other soldiers bodies. The first one to come out seven feet tall with a spiky head, 1 foot spikes on both elbows and long hind legs. The second and third looked the same as each other, were slightly more beast like. Four narrow eyes with long jaw and sharp teeth, standing on all fours, its front legs were longer than the back with two toes on each foot. On its back it had a fin like a shark and with its tail it was long, sharp and jagged.
The first one turned around eye balling Dylan first, noticing his resemblance to someone he was looking for. Mei and Miki stood still in fright; Dylan was just surprised to see what was in front of him. “Aye those are monsters, man they look so cool!”
Mei and Miki back up slowly hoping the monsters wouldn’t hurt them. Miki tried to get Dylan to do the same. “Uh, Dylan, as much as I want to study those things now isn’t the time, and they look hungry…”
Mei moved her eyes back and forth amongst the three with one arm in her pocket where her knifes were just incase things went the wrong way. The first monster stepped forward with its eye still on Dylan, in a zombie like phase it said “Lydan…”
Dylan got confused hearing the name coming out of nowhere like that. “Nooo, my name is Dylan, D-y-l-a-n.”
Right after what Dylan said the first monster leaped over to him swinging his arm, it knocked Dylan into the gates, hard. “They don’t take correction very well…” Saying that when he fell to the ground. The monster growled as it ran toward him.
“Dylan, get up!” Miki said. Since she carried no weapons, she had no idea what to do.
The other two began to growl as they slowly approached the two girls. Mei stepped in front of Miki popping out swords that were attached to her arms. “I’ll handle these two; go see if Dylan is okay.”
Miki was almost UN sure of what she was doing, by leaving a total stranger to fight two unknown monsters. With Dylan knocked out and being one of her best friends she didn’t think twice about it. Mei slowly moved her feet in the right positions just incase they tried to attack at her sides, thinking they would in a pair.
“Alright come on whatever you are!” Mei readied for them to attack as they slowly came up to her growling. The first one roared, leaping at her right side with the other one leaping at the left. She jumped up over them trying to slash at their backs, but the blades went right through them without harming them. She could see it went through but she thought it had worked.
She landed right where the soldiers bodies were, she turned around to see the monsters landing on their feet. Her heart began to pound fast not knowing what to do, until she heard mans voice “Duck!” the voice exclaimed. She quickly turned around, seeing who it was but ducked at the same time cautiously.
It was the one and only Dr. Phillip Ilias, with a short goatee, black hair with long side burns, goggles, a scientist outfit on and on one arm he wore a robotic blaster. Shooting two crescent shaped energy blasts at the leaping beasts, destroying them on impact. He helped her up, seeing in the distance Miki trying to fight off another monster from Dylan. “You ok?”
Just to have an update so another one up whenever :3 and plz make sure to tell me anything I can change besides grammer mistakes and or punctuation
'The cruiser smashed into a building and exploded into a million pieces, but fortunately those aboard did not suffer any serious injuries.' Would be better. Use this sentence and try to elaborate even more. Recommend the cruiser part.
' "I have but one question in my mind now, Dylan." The girl pulled Dylan out of the crash and held him straight in the air, "Is jumping off the board and dumping grenades a sane action, or just stupid?" ' You could change it if you want, but all the same. Elaborate.
'Dylan laughed heartily and placed his hands into his pockets, his nose high up in the air, "Because I'm cool, m' lady." He walked towards Deren to help him up, but a few steps later a sound 'Thump' was heard and there he was, flat on the ground and eating dirt.
"Whatever you say, pretty boy, whatever you say." Trying hard not to laugh, she managed to regain her composure before lifting the groaning figure back to his feet.'
A refined version. Other than that, it's okay.
' "I have but one question in my mind now, Dylan." The girl pulled Dylan out of the crash and held him straight in the air, "Is jumping off the board and dumping grenades a sane action, or just stupid?" ' You could change it if you want, but all the same. Elaborate.
'Dylan laughed heartily and placed his hands into his pockets, his nose high up in the air, "Because I'm cool, m' lady." He walked towards Deren to help him up, but a few steps later a sound 'Thump' was heard and there he was, flat on the ground and eating dirt.
"Whatever you say, pretty boy, whatever you say." Trying hard not to laugh, she managed to regain her composure before lifting the groaning figure back to his feet.'
A refined version. Other than that, it's okay.
Nice man, idk why i didn't think of it like that ^_^
Are the viruses good? or should i make like more kinds, there will be more in the future but im just asking?
Nah. Except for the one in Dylan's head, make all of them nasty. Cause by nature, it should be this way.
No I mean do you like the viruses I have created so far?...or by nasty do you mean like nasty more monstrous looking?
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