Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
Alright! LOL. I do love you guys. What's taking so long? The chapter 4-2 was long and boring. I was having troubles editing it. So it was left on the cutting room floor. It was just some jabbering between the police officers where they go to Kairi's house, and the note is sitting on the bed. Sora's fingerprints have been wiped completely off of the knife. Okay, now on with the story. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!
Chapter 4-3? ... I think; or should I call it 4-2? Because the real 4-2 was taken out. You know what? What ever.
4-2:
[This chapter goes great with “Tear Away” by Drowning Pool.]
“I can’t believe she would do this to me.” Riku punched a hole in his wall. He began swinging things around his room, and then he noticed Kairi’s Moogle doll. “Sora.” He whispered looking at the plush doll, squeezing it.
Sora walks to down the hall of the jail to a holding area. “Fresh meat!” A prisoner called from behind his bars; reaching out at Sora. Sora just rolled his eyes. “Over here kid.” The guard looked down at him. Sora stepped into the cell. There sitting on a bench in front of him, a huge monstrous man looked at him smiling. An evil toothy grin that says “You’re my bitch now.”
’ Sora just glared at him scared. “Remember Sora, you’ve beaten much bigger monsters than him.” He thought.
Sora went to sit down on the crowded bench. “CREEEAAAKKKK.” It went as he sat down. There was just one guy sitting on it and Sora was having trouble staying on. Suddenly a voice goes “You’re in my spot.” It was small, and shrimpy. Sora looked around, but there was nobody talking to him. “Down here bitch.” A midget with cornrows had a knife to Sora’s sack. “Get out of my spot!” (O.O) Sora looked at the midget like “I’m supposed to be scared of you?” Sora rolled his eyes and said “Get away from me. You don’t know what you’re getting yourself into.”
“What?!” The midget got angry, and stabbed Sora in the leg. “AHHHH. You bastard!” Sora stood up, and pulled the knife out. Not even a minute in the cell, and Sora was already in a fight. “You want a piece little man?” The midget got into a position to fight. He jumped at Sora, but he kicked the midget in the stomach. “He took out Juitt!” Another man from the corner called out. Suddenly there were 3 guys on him. “Look at the little bitch. He’s scared ya’ll.” The man had a tattoo on his arm, and had a Mohawk. The guard looked into the cell, and said “Fresh meat is dead.” He opened the bars, and dragged Sora away.
“The cafeteria?” Sora looked confused. “Yeah! [Sora turned around to see a fist colliding with his face.] So I can whoop your ass.” Sora flew back onto a table. “Yo’, you touched mah cornbread!” A Tyson-like man yelled. “You gonna finish your cornbread?” Another tall buff man asked Sora. He looked at him and spit on it. “Here.” Sora got up real quick to finish his fight. “Yay! Cornbread” the buff man just started grubbing. Soon there was a crowd against Sora. “I could do this the fun way, but I’d have to use the Keyblades.” Sora looked around thinking to himself. The longer he took, the bigger the crowd got. Before long, the crowd was bigger that the army of heartless at Hallow Bastion. “Yay. I do get to do this the fun way!” Sora drew the Infini-Buster, and Seraphim’s Horn. [I made them up. I wish I could put the pics on the net] “Let’s go.” Sora smiled, and charged at the crowd.
Sora tore through the crowd using Ars Arcanum, and vortex. More guys piled on him. He caught them off guard by kicking one man in the throat. “MY THROAT!” The guy screamed in agony. Sora got this demented look in his eye. “Now let’s hear that crack.” He put his foot on the man’s neck. Sora pushed harder, and harder, until he realized what he was doing. Still more people joined the crowd. Now more people were joining than he was taking out. “Crap.” He ran to the wall, bounced off of it, and roundhouse kicked 5 people behind him. Sora noticed that there was only one guy who wasn’t fighting. The one big guy from the cell he was scared of. He didn’t join the fight at all. Juitt climbed up Sora’s up Sora’s back. “I’m riding him guys!” Sora tried to buck him off, but Juitt held on tight. “That’s it!” Sora got angry. He grabbed to guys, and slammed their heads into each other. A light quickly blinded everyone in the cafeteria, and all you could hear was screaming. Sora used Trinity Limit on everyone.
After the light faded, there was only one man still standing. He had long, brown, messy hair. A blue suit and tall slender body. Sora was breathing hard. “Well what’s up? The man said. “Why didn’t that hurt you?” Sora asked him. “It did.” The man pointed to his shoes that were scuffed. “Well obviously, you’re strong.” Sora walked to him, stepping over the unconscious people on the floor. “You still want to fight me?” Sora asked. “Not really.” The man smiled. “It’s not my thing… I’m a cowboy.” Then he closed his eyes. “A cowboy? Like the ones in the movies; where the guy goes “How ya doin’ pilgrim?” Sora asked.
“No. Like a bounty hunter… I’m after a criminal, who’s wanted by the syndicate.” He walked up to Sora who was having trouble walking over people. “The Syndicate? What’s that?” Sora asked tripping. “That falls under the classification of none of your business.” He looked at all the unconscious people. “He could be any one of these guys… But he’s not. Am I right? ...” He pointed to the huge man Sora was scared of. “Tiny Tim?!” Tiny Tim ran to the door, and the man chased him. “Wait, what’s your name?” Sora called to him. “It’s... Spiiii….” He yelled from down the hall.
“Get in there!” The guard threw Sora in the cell with the Mohawk guy. “You still want a piece of me?” Sora stood up. “Nosir!” Mohawk screamed. "Keyboy, you're free to go." The guard opened the cell door. "About time, I told you I didn't do it." Sora stepped out of the jail cell. "See ya later sweet cheeks!" Mohawk called to Sora. Sora turned around "What did you say?!" He looked at Mohawk. "Nothing, sorry sir." He screamed like a little girl.
Alright! LOL. I do love you guys. What's taking so long? The chapter 4-2 was long and boring. I was having troubles editing it. So it was left on the cutting room floor. It was just some jabbering between the police officers where they go to Kairi's house, and the note is sitting on the bed. Sora's fingerprints have been wiped completely off of the knife. Okay, now on with the story. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!
Chapter 4-3? ... I think; or should I call it 4-2? Because the real 4-2 was taken out. You know what? What ever.
4-2:
[This chapter goes great with “Tear Away” by Drowning Pool.]
“I can’t believe she would do this to me.” Riku punched a hole in his wall. He began swinging things around his room, and then he noticed Kairi’s Moogle doll. “Sora.” He whispered looking at the plush doll, squeezing it.
Sora walks to down the hall of the jail to a holding area. “Fresh meat!” A prisoner called from behind his bars; reaching out at Sora. Sora just rolled his eyes. “Over here kid.” The guard looked down at him. Sora stepped into the cell. There sitting on a bench in front of him, a huge monstrous man looked at him smiling. An evil toothy grin that says “You’re my bitch now.”
’ Sora just glared at him scared. “Remember Sora, you’ve beaten much bigger monsters than him.” He thought. Sora went to sit down on the crowded bench. “CREEEAAAKKKK.” It went as he sat down. There was just one guy sitting on it and Sora was having trouble staying on. Suddenly a voice goes “You’re in my spot.” It was small, and shrimpy. Sora looked around, but there was nobody talking to him. “Down here bitch.” A midget with cornrows had a knife to Sora’s sack. “Get out of my spot!” (O.O) Sora looked at the midget like “I’m supposed to be scared of you?” Sora rolled his eyes and said “Get away from me. You don’t know what you’re getting yourself into.”
“What?!” The midget got angry, and stabbed Sora in the leg. “AHHHH. You bastard!” Sora stood up, and pulled the knife out. Not even a minute in the cell, and Sora was already in a fight. “You want a piece little man?” The midget got into a position to fight. He jumped at Sora, but he kicked the midget in the stomach. “He took out Juitt!” Another man from the corner called out. Suddenly there were 3 guys on him. “Look at the little bitch. He’s scared ya’ll.” The man had a tattoo on his arm, and had a Mohawk. The guard looked into the cell, and said “Fresh meat is dead.” He opened the bars, and dragged Sora away.
“The cafeteria?” Sora looked confused. “Yeah! [Sora turned around to see a fist colliding with his face.] So I can whoop your ass.” Sora flew back onto a table. “Yo’, you touched mah cornbread!” A Tyson-like man yelled. “You gonna finish your cornbread?” Another tall buff man asked Sora. He looked at him and spit on it. “Here.” Sora got up real quick to finish his fight. “Yay! Cornbread” the buff man just started grubbing. Soon there was a crowd against Sora. “I could do this the fun way, but I’d have to use the Keyblades.” Sora looked around thinking to himself. The longer he took, the bigger the crowd got. Before long, the crowd was bigger that the army of heartless at Hallow Bastion. “Yay. I do get to do this the fun way!” Sora drew the Infini-Buster, and Seraphim’s Horn. [I made them up. I wish I could put the pics on the net] “Let’s go.” Sora smiled, and charged at the crowd.
Sora tore through the crowd using Ars Arcanum, and vortex. More guys piled on him. He caught them off guard by kicking one man in the throat. “MY THROAT!” The guy screamed in agony. Sora got this demented look in his eye. “Now let’s hear that crack.” He put his foot on the man’s neck. Sora pushed harder, and harder, until he realized what he was doing. Still more people joined the crowd. Now more people were joining than he was taking out. “Crap.” He ran to the wall, bounced off of it, and roundhouse kicked 5 people behind him. Sora noticed that there was only one guy who wasn’t fighting. The one big guy from the cell he was scared of. He didn’t join the fight at all. Juitt climbed up Sora’s up Sora’s back. “I’m riding him guys!” Sora tried to buck him off, but Juitt held on tight. “That’s it!” Sora got angry. He grabbed to guys, and slammed their heads into each other. A light quickly blinded everyone in the cafeteria, and all you could hear was screaming. Sora used Trinity Limit on everyone.
After the light faded, there was only one man still standing. He had long, brown, messy hair. A blue suit and tall slender body. Sora was breathing hard. “Well what’s up? The man said. “Why didn’t that hurt you?” Sora asked him. “It did.” The man pointed to his shoes that were scuffed. “Well obviously, you’re strong.” Sora walked to him, stepping over the unconscious people on the floor. “You still want to fight me?” Sora asked. “Not really.” The man smiled. “It’s not my thing… I’m a cowboy.” Then he closed his eyes. “A cowboy? Like the ones in the movies; where the guy goes “How ya doin’ pilgrim?” Sora asked.
“No. Like a bounty hunter… I’m after a criminal, who’s wanted by the syndicate.” He walked up to Sora who was having trouble walking over people. “The Syndicate? What’s that?” Sora asked tripping. “That falls under the classification of none of your business.” He looked at all the unconscious people. “He could be any one of these guys… But he’s not. Am I right? ...” He pointed to the huge man Sora was scared of. “Tiny Tim?!” Tiny Tim ran to the door, and the man chased him. “Wait, what’s your name?” Sora called to him. “It’s... Spiiii….” He yelled from down the hall.
“Get in there!” The guard threw Sora in the cell with the Mohawk guy. “You still want a piece of me?” Sora stood up. “Nosir!” Mohawk screamed. "Keyboy, you're free to go." The guard opened the cell door. "About time, I told you I didn't do it." Sora stepped out of the jail cell. "See ya later sweet cheeks!" Mohawk called to Sora. Sora turned around "What did you say?!" He looked at Mohawk. "Nothing, sorry sir." He screamed like a little girl.
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