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Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
You're doing a great job! Can't wait till the next chapter! I agree with your music choices too. They really work well with the story. Anyway...keep it up!
You're doing a great job! Can't wait till the next chapter! I agree with your music choices too. They really work well with the story. Anyway...keep it up!
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
No, I mean post even when there is no updates. It hurts a writers' feelings when his/her fic is on the second page. After so many people said that I'm such a good writer, it would be a waste to let it be on the second page wouldn't it?
eughey said:
No, I mean post even when there is no updates. It hurts a writers' feelings when his/her fic is on the second page. After so many people said that I'm such a good writer, it would be a waste to let it be on the second page wouldn't it?
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
yea gotch ya, i am postin as much as i can!!
but to make more ppl post u gotta right more chapters, we have to wait soooooo long just for a chapter. It makes us bored and we dont feel like postin
more chappies=more postin
yea gotch ya, i am postin as much as i can!!
but to make more ppl post u gotta right more chapters, we have to wait soooooo long just for a chapter. It makes us bored and we dont feel like postin
more chappies=more postin
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*pops knuckles* it is always somethin with u.
I am sorry but maybe this will make u go faster and keep ur notebook safe
*gives purified riku a black eye* u made me do it. *cries* why does it always have to end with violence??!!
*pops knuckles* it is always somethin with u.
I am sorry but maybe this will make u go faster and keep ur notebook safe
*gives purified riku a black eye* u made me do it. *cries* why does it always have to end with violence??!!
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yo purifield riku155 this story is tight. hey maybe you can put it in the song. you ever listen to r.kelly in trapped in the closet part 4. maybe it can call trapped in the love.
yo purifield riku155 this story is tight. hey maybe you can put it in the song. you ever listen to r.kelly in trapped in the closet part 4. maybe it can call trapped in the love.
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.... yea! wut aurie said!!!!! even though i dont know the song but.. ok!!!!! continue! i cant wait till monday!!!!
.... yea! wut aurie said!!!!! even though i dont know the song but.. ok!!!!! continue! i cant wait till monday!!!!
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Kinda angry to find my fic on the second page. Will ignore it, because everyone is writing fics now. Anyone would like me to continue, yes?
P.S. There is no music to go with this chapter, and it’s short. But it’s just a transition. I’m not feeling very creative today.
Trials of Love Chapter 4-2:
“Why did you kill the girl?” Sora woke to a dark room. “Please don’t be another awakening.” Sora whispered to himself. “Answer me dammit!” Sora looked around but couldn’t see anyone. “Who’s there?” He tried to move, but his hands, and feet were restricted. “WTH, what’s going on?” Sora called to see if anyone was there. A hand smacks Sora in the face. He squints hard and sees two figures. “Don’t bother, I’ll tell you who we are.” A man steps out of the shadows. His black hair was smoothed back; he had some 5 O’clock shadow on his chin. “Oh it’s you.” Sora got a quick smile on his face. He recognized to officer; it was Officer Mehoff. “So I guess I know who the other shadow is.” Sora looked out into the darkness.
“Just answer the question.” The man came out of the shadows. His short black hair was spiking everywhere. You could tell he was stressed. “Why did you kill her?” He asked. Sora looked away, and didn’t answer. “I didn’t.” Sora whispered. His mood changed from amused to sad just like that. “The caller said that you did. Why would he lie?” The second officer sat down in front of Sora. “Because, he hates me. He even told me to stay away from Kairi’s funeral.” Sora looked back to Mehoff. “I didn’t do it. Check the note.” Officer Mehoff rolled his eyes. “That’s BullSh%t! There was no note!” He yelled at Sora. “Well I could have shown it to you if someone didn’t grab me.” Sora rolled his eyes. The second officer stood in front of Sora. “You know that this is a murder charge on you. If we don’t find it, you know you’ll get life right?” The man looked at Sora. “Which is why I trust you.” Sora smiled. Sora stood up, and handed Mehoff the handcuffs. “For the record, I could have done that at any time.” He smiled. Mehoff got angry “Someone get this kid a cell!”
Kinda angry to find my fic on the second page. Will ignore it, because everyone is writing fics now. Anyone would like me to continue, yes?
P.S. There is no music to go with this chapter, and it’s short. But it’s just a transition. I’m not feeling very creative today.
Trials of Love Chapter 4-2:
“Why did you kill the girl?” Sora woke to a dark room. “Please don’t be another awakening.” Sora whispered to himself. “Answer me dammit!” Sora looked around but couldn’t see anyone. “Who’s there?” He tried to move, but his hands, and feet were restricted. “WTH, what’s going on?” Sora called to see if anyone was there. A hand smacks Sora in the face. He squints hard and sees two figures. “Don’t bother, I’ll tell you who we are.” A man steps out of the shadows. His black hair was smoothed back; he had some 5 O’clock shadow on his chin. “Oh it’s you.” Sora got a quick smile on his face. He recognized to officer; it was Officer Mehoff. “So I guess I know who the other shadow is.” Sora looked out into the darkness.
“Just answer the question.” The man came out of the shadows. His short black hair was spiking everywhere. You could tell he was stressed. “Why did you kill her?” He asked. Sora looked away, and didn’t answer. “I didn’t.” Sora whispered. His mood changed from amused to sad just like that. “The caller said that you did. Why would he lie?” The second officer sat down in front of Sora. “Because, he hates me. He even told me to stay away from Kairi’s funeral.” Sora looked back to Mehoff. “I didn’t do it. Check the note.” Officer Mehoff rolled his eyes. “That’s BullSh%t! There was no note!” He yelled at Sora. “Well I could have shown it to you if someone didn’t grab me.” Sora rolled his eyes. The second officer stood in front of Sora. “You know that this is a murder charge on you. If we don’t find it, you know you’ll get life right?” The man looked at Sora. “Which is why I trust you.” Sora smiled. Sora stood up, and handed Mehoff the handcuffs. “For the record, I could have done that at any time.” He smiled. Mehoff got angry “Someone get this kid a cell!”
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
ok.... dat was weird... its not good no more..... no!!!!
ok.... dat was weird... its not good no more..... no!!!!
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it isnt weird!! it is awesome
but please please i am begging u purified and giving advice. If u want this fic to be interesting u gotta update more often.
this fic could be easily the best if u updated more.
all i am sayin is that we have to wait 4ever 4 one chapter. it aint fun. u want to build up anticipation and make ppl wait. but dont make us wait 4ever
it isnt weird!! it is awesome
but please please i am begging u purified and giving advice. If u want this fic to be interesting u gotta update more often.
this fic could be easily the best if u updated more.
all i am sayin is that we have to wait 4ever 4 one chapter. it aint fun. u want to build up anticipation and make ppl wait. but dont make us wait 4ever
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Actually, the period between the time Sora and Riku meet since Kairi's suicide is the next chaapter. The reason it hasn't been good is because I haven't had any inspiration. But I promise it will get better. I can't wait until Chapter 5. Want a hint? Naota, Haruko, Riku.
Yeah, I said it.
Actually, the period between the time Sora and Riku meet since Kairi's suicide is the next chaapter. The reason it hasn't been good is because I haven't had any inspiration. But I promise it will get better. I can't wait until Chapter 5. Want a hint? Naota, Haruko, Riku.
Yeah, I said it.
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
... i dont get it.... u should post more!!! im getting sick of waiting for u to write more chappies!!!!
... i dont get it.... u should post more!!! im getting sick of waiting for u to write more chappies!!!!
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Didn't you watch FLCL at all? It was an amazing anime, but lasted 6 episodes. It was sad how it ended so quickly, which is why I chose it.
Other worlds include
Ancient Japan- Samurai Champloo
Hallow Bastion
Konto- Paranoia Agent
Cowboy Bebop- It ended in a sad way
The underworld-Olympus Coliseum
I only chose worlds the are sad. FLCL, was sad to me. You'll never guess who Sora gets help from
Didn't you watch FLCL at all? It was an amazing anime, but lasted 6 episodes. It was sad how it ended so quickly, which is why I chose it.
Other worlds include
Ancient Japan- Samurai Champloo
Hallow Bastion
Konto- Paranoia Agent
Cowboy Bebop- It ended in a sad way
The underworld-Olympus Coliseum
I only chose worlds the are sad. FLCL, was sad to me. You'll never guess who Sora gets help from
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
i have no clue wut r u talkin bout...
i have no clue wut r u talkin bout...
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
keep up the good work. cant wait 2 read more.
keep up the good work. cant wait 2 read more.
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