Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
wow! very dramatic..i'm lovin it!
wow! very dramatic..i'm lovin it!
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Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
Ohh Quientin you're soo kool. My favorite part was when Kairi whipered in Riku's ear "I love you Sora." Total Mood Killer.
That happened to me before. Most of the major parts are based on something that happened to me. I put a bit of myself into all the characters. I put more of me in Kairi, than anyone else. [No pun intended]. That is why angel princess can't see why any of the character would do the things that they did. All I did was take the looking glass, and put it on me. So that I may see myself as a different person, from a different point of view. Now tell me, didn't all the featured charactes seem a bit similar? Kairi's mom, Kairi, Riku, Sora's mom, and Sora? The characters are a part of me. Oh yeah angel princess, Sora did forgive Kairi. Why do you think he went to her house? He cried himself to sleep over her
Ohh Quientin you're soo kool. My favorite part was when Kairi whipered in Riku's ear "I love you Sora." Total Mood Killer.
That happened to me before. Most of the major parts are based on something that happened to me. I put a bit of myself into all the characters. I put more of me in Kairi, than anyone else. [No pun intended]. That is why angel princess can't see why any of the character would do the things that they did. All I did was take the looking glass, and put it on me. So that I may see myself as a different person, from a different point of view. Now tell me, didn't all the featured charactes seem a bit similar? Kairi's mom, Kairi, Riku, Sora's mom, and Sora? The characters are a part of me. Oh yeah angel princess, Sora did forgive Kairi. Why do you think he went to her house? He cried himself to sleep over her
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
cool! more lemons plz!?
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lemons
cool! more lemons plz!?
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lemons
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
Actually the part with Kairi is over, you asked for it too late. Kairi is dead, remember? But I have had no inspiration for a chapter. All I can tell you is that Sora & Riku will be going to look for her in Chapter 5. It wasn't about the lemons, it was about the fragile psyche of the teenage mind. But I'll admit, writing the lemons were fun. . I'll try to update tommorow.
lilazngurl963 said:cool! more lemons plz!?
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lemons
Actually the part with Kairi is over, you asked for it too late. Kairi is dead, remember? But I have had no inspiration for a chapter. All I can tell you is that Sora & Riku will be going to look for her in Chapter 5. It wasn't about the lemons, it was about the fragile psyche of the teenage mind. But I'll admit, writing the lemons were fun.
. I'll try to update tommorow.Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
Sorry guy, I'm not done Charter 4 yet, so you know it will be good when I release it Tuesday. That I am 100% sure of. I can't until, because, I have no time free until then. But I will give you a sneak peek:
"Keyboy, you're free to go." The guard opened the cell door. "About time, I told you I didn't do it." Sora stepped out of the jail cell. "See ya later sweetcheeks!" A huge cellmate called to Sora. Sora turned around "What did you say?!" He looked at the cellmate. "Nothing, Sorry sir." He screamed like a little girl.
That's right
Sora goes to jail.
But you don't have to post only when there is a new chapter, post anytime.
Sorry guy, I'm not done Charter 4 yet, so you know it will be good when I release it Tuesday. That I am 100% sure of. I can't until, because, I have no time free until then. But I will give you a sneak peek:
"Keyboy, you're free to go." The guard opened the cell door. "About time, I told you I didn't do it." Sora stepped out of the jail cell. "See ya later sweetcheeks!" A huge cellmate called to Sora. Sora turned around "What did you say?!" He looked at the cellmate. "Nothing, Sorry sir." He screamed like a little girl.
That's right
Sora goes to jail.
But you don't have to post only when there is a new chapter, post anytime.
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
wait.....how does Kairi have a mom?? Shes from Hollow Bastion. Good story though.
wait.....how does Kairi have a mom?? Shes from Hollow Bastion. Good story though.
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
awesome story! very dramatic. keep updating!
awesome story! very dramatic. keep updating!
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
Sorry guys, I know I said Tuesday, but something happened for the worst. I cant use my left hand until Wednesday. I have a friend typing this message word for word. What happened you ask? A spider bit me, and the medicine hasn't worn off yet. The hospital said it'll be Wednesday before I can use my arm again. But just to let you know, the fourth chapter is fully written, and will posted Wednesday. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Sorry guys, I know I said Tuesday, but something happened for the worst. I cant use my left hand until Wednesday. I have a friend typing this message word for word. What happened you ask? A spider bit me, and the medicine hasn't worn off yet. The hospital said it'll be Wednesday before I can use my arm again. But just to let you know, the fourth chapter is fully written, and will posted Wednesday. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
What up people? I’m bizzack! The left arm is sore as hell, but I can take it. I know Kairi’s dead, but she will be together with one of them in the end. [I’m not telling who]. Remember I said this wasn't a comedy? It still isn't, but there will be moments in this chapter. And also, there will be more lemons soon, because Sora will have flashbacks. YAY FLASHBACKS!!!
Trials of Love Chapter: 4……-1
“Kairi!” A man walked in the house. He had long red hair, smoothed back, and put into a small ponytail. The loud music was still playing. “She must be up in her room.” He said taking his sunglasses off of his bronzed face. He walked upstairs, and made that sharp U-turn to the left. “WTH?!” He looked down on the floor, and blood was running from under Kairi’s door. The man stopped for a moment to prepare himself for what he was about to see. When he opened it, all the preparation in the world couldn’t have helped him. “OMG!” He shouted when he saw Kairi’s blood on the floor, and that was when Sora woke up. “What have you done?” Sora wiped the crusted up dried tears from his eyes. The man picked Sora up by the collar. “I didn’t do this!” Sora tried to loosen the mans’ grip, but it was too tight. “Stop lying!” He punched Sora in the mouth. “What did you do to my daughter?!” O.O
“Your daughter? [He looks over at Kairi] You’re her father?!” Sora stood up, and grabbed his jaw. Sora’s bottom lip was busted, and his mouth was bleeding. “Wait! You’re the one I found in Hallow Bastion! Her real father. [Kairi’s dad looked at Sora angrily] I didn’t do this! Read the note!” Sora looked around for the note, but it had seemed to have disappeared. Kairi’s dad reached into his back pocket, and Sora drew the Keyblade. He pulled out a cell phone, and dialed 3 numbers on the keypad. “9-1-1.” He said to himself dialing. Someone could be heard on the other line. “Yes, I’d like to report a murder.” Kairi’s dad said to the operator. “What! I told you, I didn’t do it!” Sora tried to grab the cell phone from Kairi’s dad, but he punched Sora in the stomach. Sora grabbed his stomach, and fell to the floor again. “He’s still, here. The young man who killed my daughter, he’s attacking me now, I have subdued him. Please hurry.” And with that, Kairi’s dad hung up the phone. “Why?” Sora was still holding his stomach. “Why would you do this? I brought her back to you. I risked my life to save her, and you attack me.” He got up. The stereo Riku left was still playing. “Just lose it! AHHH-AHHH-AHHH-AHHH-AHHH!” Sora charged at Kairi’s dad, but he grabbed Sora by the neck, and punched him in the eye. Sora flew across the room to the bed. “I don’t trust you, and I don’t like you. You stay away from her funeral! You hear me?” Kairi’s dad shouted at Sora. Sora stood up, shook off the pain, and speared Kairi’s dad, slamming him into the stereo. The stereo then skipped, and went to another song.
“Let the bodies hit the floor. Let the bodies hit the floor. Let the bodies hit the floor. Let the bodies hit the…FLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRR!!!!!” The stereo had jumped to a good song. It set the appropriate moment for a fight. Sora started punching Kairi’s dad in the chest, but it wasn’t really working. He just pushed Sora off of him, and tripped him. “You bastard, I’ll KILL YOU!!” Kairi’s dad just crossed his arms, and Sora stupidly charged again. “You’re at this again? I can knock you down all day.” He smiled. This time Sora drew the Keyblades to his hands. Oathkeeper in one, and Oblivion in the other. “Time to smack the bitch up.” Sora smiled with blood running down his face. Kairi’s dad just moved to the side, and Sora rolled down to the end of the hall. “???” Sora looked confused cause he missed. He turned around and saw a fist. Sora tried to use guard, but it was too late. Kairi’s dad had reached his stomach again. Once again, Sora wound up on the floor, holding his stomach. “Let’s finish this.” Kairi’s dad kicked Sora down the stairs. He fell, spinning around, and hit his leg. About halfway down the stairs, Sora used Strike Raid. The Oathkeeper spun upwards at Kairi’s dad, but he just caught it. “Please.” He swatted the Oathkeeper away. “Skin against skin; blood and bone. You're all by yourself but you're not alone.” The stereo continued.
Sora weakly got up for one final attack. In another dumb attempt, Sora went to charge Kairi’s dad again. But as soon as he was about to go, someone held Sora back. Lucky for Kairi’s dad that police car was nearby, or Sora would have finished him. It may have looked like Sora was losing, but Sora wanted to move away from Kairi’s body. “GET OFF OF ME!” Sora swung his arms wildly. “YOU LIAR! I WOULD NEVER DO THIS TO HER!” Sora struggled to get away. Kairi’s dad just waved bye-bye as police dragged Sora away. Acting upon instinct, the police officer just clubbed him with the nightstick.
What up people? I’m bizzack! The left arm is sore as hell, but I can take it. I know Kairi’s dead, but she will be together with one of them in the end. [I’m not telling who]. Remember I said this wasn't a comedy? It still isn't, but there will be moments in this chapter. And also, there will be more lemons soon, because Sora will have flashbacks. YAY FLASHBACKS!!!
Trials of Love Chapter: 4……-1
“Kairi!” A man walked in the house. He had long red hair, smoothed back, and put into a small ponytail. The loud music was still playing. “She must be up in her room.” He said taking his sunglasses off of his bronzed face. He walked upstairs, and made that sharp U-turn to the left. “WTH?!” He looked down on the floor, and blood was running from under Kairi’s door. The man stopped for a moment to prepare himself for what he was about to see. When he opened it, all the preparation in the world couldn’t have helped him. “OMG!” He shouted when he saw Kairi’s blood on the floor, and that was when Sora woke up. “What have you done?” Sora wiped the crusted up dried tears from his eyes. The man picked Sora up by the collar. “I didn’t do this!” Sora tried to loosen the mans’ grip, but it was too tight. “Stop lying!” He punched Sora in the mouth. “What did you do to my daughter?!” O.O
“Your daughter? [He looks over at Kairi] You’re her father?!” Sora stood up, and grabbed his jaw. Sora’s bottom lip was busted, and his mouth was bleeding. “Wait! You’re the one I found in Hallow Bastion! Her real father. [Kairi’s dad looked at Sora angrily] I didn’t do this! Read the note!” Sora looked around for the note, but it had seemed to have disappeared. Kairi’s dad reached into his back pocket, and Sora drew the Keyblade. He pulled out a cell phone, and dialed 3 numbers on the keypad. “9-1-1.” He said to himself dialing. Someone could be heard on the other line. “Yes, I’d like to report a murder.” Kairi’s dad said to the operator. “What! I told you, I didn’t do it!” Sora tried to grab the cell phone from Kairi’s dad, but he punched Sora in the stomach. Sora grabbed his stomach, and fell to the floor again. “He’s still, here. The young man who killed my daughter, he’s attacking me now, I have subdued him. Please hurry.” And with that, Kairi’s dad hung up the phone. “Why?” Sora was still holding his stomach. “Why would you do this? I brought her back to you. I risked my life to save her, and you attack me.” He got up. The stereo Riku left was still playing. “Just lose it! AHHH-AHHH-AHHH-AHHH-AHHH!” Sora charged at Kairi’s dad, but he grabbed Sora by the neck, and punched him in the eye. Sora flew across the room to the bed. “I don’t trust you, and I don’t like you. You stay away from her funeral! You hear me?” Kairi’s dad shouted at Sora. Sora stood up, shook off the pain, and speared Kairi’s dad, slamming him into the stereo. The stereo then skipped, and went to another song.
“Let the bodies hit the floor. Let the bodies hit the floor. Let the bodies hit the floor. Let the bodies hit the…FLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRR!!!!!” The stereo had jumped to a good song. It set the appropriate moment for a fight. Sora started punching Kairi’s dad in the chest, but it wasn’t really working. He just pushed Sora off of him, and tripped him. “You bastard, I’ll KILL YOU!!” Kairi’s dad just crossed his arms, and Sora stupidly charged again. “You’re at this again? I can knock you down all day.” He smiled. This time Sora drew the Keyblades to his hands. Oathkeeper in one, and Oblivion in the other. “Time to smack the bitch up.” Sora smiled with blood running down his face. Kairi’s dad just moved to the side, and Sora rolled down to the end of the hall. “???” Sora looked confused cause he missed. He turned around and saw a fist. Sora tried to use guard, but it was too late. Kairi’s dad had reached his stomach again. Once again, Sora wound up on the floor, holding his stomach. “Let’s finish this.” Kairi’s dad kicked Sora down the stairs. He fell, spinning around, and hit his leg. About halfway down the stairs, Sora used Strike Raid. The Oathkeeper spun upwards at Kairi’s dad, but he just caught it. “Please.” He swatted the Oathkeeper away. “Skin against skin; blood and bone. You're all by yourself but you're not alone.” The stereo continued.
Sora weakly got up for one final attack. In another dumb attempt, Sora went to charge Kairi’s dad again. But as soon as he was about to go, someone held Sora back. Lucky for Kairi’s dad that police car was nearby, or Sora would have finished him. It may have looked like Sora was losing, but Sora wanted to move away from Kairi’s body. “GET OFF OF ME!” Sora swung his arms wildly. “YOU LIAR! I WOULD NEVER DO THIS TO HER!” Sora struggled to get away. Kairi’s dad just waved bye-bye as police dragged Sora away. Acting upon instinct, the police officer just clubbed him with the nightstick.
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
i love it!!! (although i cant believe that sora went to jail!)
i love it!!! (although i cant believe that sora went to jail!)
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
this is a very very good story update asap
this is a very very good story update asap
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
Right now I'm working on Chapter 4-3.
I can't reveal anything right now, but I can tell you Riku takes medication. All I can tell you is that he's bi-polar. That means his emotions are random, the switch from happy to depressed or mad to sad for no reason. Just because.
Sora has ADHD. You'll see
Right now I'm working on Chapter 4-3.
I can't reveal anything right now, but I can tell you Riku takes medication. All I can tell you is that he's bi-polar. That means his emotions are random, the switch from happy to depressed or mad to sad for no reason. Just because.
Sora has ADHD. You'll see
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
awesome cant wait
awesome cant wait
Re: Untitled- This is not a comedy
Having technical difficulties. So until I fix the problem, how would you like me to repost Chap 3-3, and 3-4? Its unedited You know what that means!!
LEMONS!!!!!!
Having technical difficulties. So until I fix the problem, how would you like me to repost Chap 3-3, and 3-4? Its unedited
You know what that means!! LEMONS!!!!!!
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