OOC: Sorry about the late entry post, everyone.
IC: The cool breeze caressed her cheek, tugging at the loose locks of brown as she drove down the block, she knew that Biotech wasn't far off. Her thoughts in complete order, Senka pulled up to the security guard, her blue Mustang stopping smoothly. Reaching over to the passenger seat she listened to the man as he asked, "What can I help you with?"
Grabbing the letter she handed it over, watching him scan it she returned his cold stare with one of her own. "I'm here for the scholarship meeting, sir." She said, her violet eyes remaining alight.
Nodding his head, she paid close attention to his instructions, when he had finished and allowed her to continue on her way. She did just that. Finally, reaching the required area, she parked the Mustang and opened the door. Stepping out she wore her normal tank-top, black jeans and sneakers just like every other day. Her short hair showed signs that she come here right after she took a shower.
Looking ahead of her at the doors, she broke into a run, reach them she took a steadying breath before she pushed it open. Her gaze searched the lobby, finding what she needed and the woman behind the counter. Senka's face remained emotionless as she walked over, reaching the woman she said, "Excuse me, I was wondering where the scholarship meeting is being held?"
The woman's gaze searched her appearance as she replied, "This way, and at least you don't seem to be like those couple of punks."
Groaning mentally since that was the last thing she wanted, Senka followed the woman as she went down the right hall. A small, tiny spark of surprise came to her eyes when they reached a door. "Wait a minute ma'am, I just have to check with the doctor."
Doctor? Why would they need a doctor here? She thoguht, the rapping on the door cut into her thoughts. Watching as the woman lowered her fist and asked, "Dr Dantez, there's another one here, would you like me to send her in?"
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OOC: There you go, and why am I think it could have turned out better?
IC: The cool breeze caressed her cheek, tugging at the loose locks of brown as she drove down the block, she knew that Biotech wasn't far off. Her thoughts in complete order, Senka pulled up to the security guard, her blue Mustang stopping smoothly. Reaching over to the passenger seat she listened to the man as he asked, "What can I help you with?"
Grabbing the letter she handed it over, watching him scan it she returned his cold stare with one of her own. "I'm here for the scholarship meeting, sir." She said, her violet eyes remaining alight.
Nodding his head, she paid close attention to his instructions, when he had finished and allowed her to continue on her way. She did just that. Finally, reaching the required area, she parked the Mustang and opened the door. Stepping out she wore her normal tank-top, black jeans and sneakers just like every other day. Her short hair showed signs that she come here right after she took a shower.
Looking ahead of her at the doors, she broke into a run, reach them she took a steadying breath before she pushed it open. Her gaze searched the lobby, finding what she needed and the woman behind the counter. Senka's face remained emotionless as she walked over, reaching the woman she said, "Excuse me, I was wondering where the scholarship meeting is being held?"
The woman's gaze searched her appearance as she replied, "This way, and at least you don't seem to be like those couple of punks."
Groaning mentally since that was the last thing she wanted, Senka followed the woman as she went down the right hall. A small, tiny spark of surprise came to her eyes when they reached a door. "Wait a minute ma'am, I just have to check with the doctor."
Doctor? Why would they need a doctor here? She thoguht, the rapping on the door cut into her thoughts. Watching as the woman lowered her fist and asked, "Dr Dantez, there's another one here, would you like me to send her in?"
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OOC: There you go, and why am I think it could have turned out better?