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Aaah..I can imagine that you almost cried.....if I would be writing this I would be crying aswell, it's lovely that your feelings merges with the ones in the story, really! You get a Rep from me and one big Thumb! *thumbs up* ^-^

Woot!!!! rep! thank u lol ^^^
 

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yea.. ^^ dont worry i'll be back before the summer is over ^^

but im in a war with my friends at home, so i gotta take care of that before something worse happens ^^ but thanks guys.

I'll probably leave after saturday ^^ so maybe i can get in chapter 5
 

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Everything is fine, but I have one criticism...

The story needs more description. The dialogue is emotive, but it would be awesome if you could explain how the characters felt about everything going on - not to mention their surroundings, and their own looks.

Keep going ~.^

<3
 

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Everything is fine, but I have one criticism...

The story needs more description. The dialogue is emotive, but it would be awesome if you could explain how the characters felt about everything going on - not to mention their surroundings, and their own looks.

Keep going ~.^

<3

YAY!!! I did something good! lol ^^ and i will take your advice ^^
 

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Sorry for the double post again! ^^

Im sorry to say this but i might not come back to the frums at all, i have some major life issues to deal with, and as of now i feel like crap ^^;

this website has been fun but being here, ive neglected real life problems, and i cant deal with that anymore.

im sorry to say this and i love all my forum buddies but i gotta go (said that before, but i definitely gotta leave this time).

Bye~ bye! ^^
 

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Thanks foreverkingdom for still keeping my thread alive ^^ i'll remember good friends like u! ^^ well i came back to see what was going on today, so with that... see ya in september! (maybe)
 

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man, i cant believe i didnt read this story. accept my apology RD, really sorry.

This is one goooood fic. wow, sephiroths got feelings! daaaamn!

A heartfelt chapter there i can tell. Please continue this RD, dont leave us.
 

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yea i almost cried writing it.. i tried to make them as down to earth as possible like your're watching a good anime u know? but they have there own lives ^^ i think i made that pretty clear in the last chapter ^^
 

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clear as mud.
its a great style your fic, i think its good.
hopefully you got Vincent Valentine in this fic, cant wait for the next chap.
 

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It's pretty good!i've only read the first chapter though. And you may want to check for typos after you type. :)
 

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yea trust me vincent is in there nelo! ^^ theres gonna be a part with vincent still in the turks though ^^; and lucretia yay! lol
 

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in the turks? hmm...i'd prefer it if he was his lonesome character but if lucrecias in there its cool. lol.
 

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oh right i see, nice one. but he's gonna be in there as his usual self also right?
 
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