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ohh i haven't ever read your poems.. you write them very well and very descriptive in the meaning. Nice job! C:
 

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Thanks, but I really think I am just an amateur at it.

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Unsure

Your heart is conflicted by memories of both truth and deceit.
You should not exist.

Every part of you is like fib folded together in a Black Widow's web.
The spider is you, Deceiver.
You catch all the helpless truths in you and make them into lies.
The lies are too fused together from the truths that it is hard to distinguish them.

Those that witness your actions detest your silk.
They spit out those disgusting insects of yours.
You have no light within you.

You were pure and innocent at birth.
But, once the sun slept, everything changed.
You became a demon.

Hunting down anyone so foolish to grieve over your false sorrows.
You catch them into your web and make them chose between truths and lies.
 

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Thanks, maybe I am too humble.

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Change

Tears flooded down her eyes.
She wept as she gripped her dying friend to her chest.

His slow breaths breathed weakly onto her freckled shoulders.
She ran her fingers through his icy black hair.

More tears only seemed to keep pouring out of her hassle eyes.
Her voice was quivering as he began to fade away.

She asked herself, "WHY?!"
But, no answer came.
All she could do was cry.

There was no one there, but the two of them.
But, she felt like her, him, and their friend were there.
She wished her feelings were true.
They never were.

When he was gone, all she could do was cry.
She collapsed to the ground yelling in anger.
But, her words never can be heard.
 

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Yeah, it was pretty tragic.

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Sacrifice

We stand together in a world between worlds.
All of us fighting off the white two-legged creatures.

They launch at us trying to separate us.
You just look a the creatures with a cocky expression.

Your slim body jumps away from the three of us.
Right in the middle of those white creatures.

Blue and red flames surround you at your control.
They spread out quickly away you at the creaturs.

All of those monsters are consumed in it.
They splatter in silver lights and the fires cease.

I only see you laying on the ground with tiny red-orange flames on you.
When I run to your side they have vanished.

I fall to your side grabbing your fading arms.
Tears run down my face hoping that you wouldn't go.

But, those hopes are dashed and you're gone.
Something between us clicks.

I can feel it in my heart.
 

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I love the theme on it.. like so much despair and fragility..
 

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Thanks, I did it on when Axel sacrificed himself.

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Might

Even if death does separate us.
I still feel like we will see each other again.

I hope against the odds that my feelings are right.
If they are then everything will be alright.

But, it will take a lot in order to see you again.
We wll finally have sea-salt ice cream together.
Just the three of us.
 

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Plus I like how you are conveying KH into all of them..almost like a story in some sorts.
 

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Thanks.
This next one is inspired by the hit Disney Song originally from Cinderella
, "A Dream Is A Wish Your Heart Makes."
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Dreams

When you fall asleep.
The Dreams into.
Dreams of the heart.

Everything within Dreams are connected to reality.
Sometimes, they are absurd and other times truthful.

Dreams are where you can lose yourself to fantasy.
Or to the Nightmares.

Whatever you lose yourself to remember that is only a dream.
And, you have to make that wish come true.
In your own way.
 

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this was one was shorter with less stanzas..but i got the meaning of it.. C:
 

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Impossible

Everything is impossible.
So, we're told.

But, what if they are wrong.
What if everything is possible.

Who's too say what we can do and what we cannot do.
Everything has a possible truth to it.

You just have to believe in yourself.
You got to keep your mind and heart wide open.

Dream and a new world will appear.
Everyone has the inner light to create something new.
 

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Are you thinking these up in your head just now?? or have you already written them before??
 

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Yes, I think them up in my mind.

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Darkness

Darkness consumes weak hearts.
Every being has light and darkness in them.

Darkness and Light are always in conflict with each other.
But, you have keep the darkness under control.
And, never let it control you.

If it controls you then you end up hurting everyone around you.
 

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hmmm..ever thought of morphing some of them together?? *just a thought*
 

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Danger

When you were little, my Little Melody.
My Melody, I loved you ever since the day you were born.

I saw you grow up.
You were like a beautiful coral that never wanted to die.

Everyday, I tried to protect you from the sea.
But, your spirit as too adventruous for me.

I sought to give you the normal life of a princess.
You are like me at that age.

Oh, how youth never knows no boundaries.
It never knows when to quit.

Most people look at the bad side of being young.
Being young has a lot of advantages to it as opposed to being old.

You're never know what limitations and always face obstacles head-on.

Oh, how I miss those days when I could go anywhere and never have to worry.
 

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Well it was a nice short poem anyhow.. i haven't watched that movie though.. :/
 

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Being In The Sea

Swimming with the dolphins.
Sitting on the giant hump-back whales of the sea.

Everything is so beautiful and free.
I never have to worry about being confined to a wall.

Watching the cute little penguins glide pass me.
Doing a summersault in the ocean.

Picking up sea-shells along the sand.
And, going to to Atlantica.

The sea is me and my heart belongs to the oceans.
 
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