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Neko

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Forsaken was just amazing! I could feel the emotion coming from it and I love your word choices! : )
 

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You really did a good job on this one! I can't wait to see more themes. :)
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Together, but Separate

Two beings so closely related, but yet completely different.
Several of them with no emotions.
The only one among them possessing some kind of heart.
If he had only remained a Heartless then he would just like them.
His memories totally annihilated by the darkness only to leave a hollow shell.

Nobody to remember him.
And, nobody too care.

Life might seem cruel for a bunch of Nobodies.
But, again, who's there to define existence.
If you're here you exist.
Nothing too complicated about that, right?

If he only swallowed up to the darkness.
He would still be Roxas.
But, at least we would always be together.
 

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Together, but Separate

Two beings so closely related, but yet completely different.
Several of them with no emotions.
The only one among them possessing some kind of heart.
If he had only remained a Heartless then he would just like them.
His memories totally annihilated by the darkness only to leave a hollow shell.

Nobody to remember him.
And, nobody too care.

Life might seem cruel for a bunch of Nobodies.
But, again, who's there to define existence.
If you're here you exist.
Nothing too complicated about that, right?

If he only swallowed up to the darkness.
He would still be Roxas.
But, at least we would always be together.


<3 <3 <3 <3 I really love it
 

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Together, but Separate

Two beings so closely related, but yet completely different.
Several of them with no emotions.
The only one among them possessing some kind of heart.
If he had only remained a Heartless then he would just like them.
His memories totally annihilated by the darkness only to leave a hollow shell.

Nobody to remember him.
And, nobody too care.

Life might seem cruel for a bunch of Nobodies.
But, again, who's there to define existence.
If you're here you exist.
Nothing too complicated about that, right?

If he only swallowed up to the darkness.
He would still be Roxas.
But, at least we would always be together.
Hey that´s really nice! :D I should visit this thread more often
 

Fractured_Heart628

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The Fake Me and The Real Me

In the sunrise, I cloak my hideous face among the shadows.
When the darkness soars, I reveal my true self.

My heart is always in the darkness and I hide my predjudices in it.
I feel like I am in drowning in my shadows everyday.
Nothing seems to break my bond with it.
I just want to be free from the constant bickering between the mask I put on and my darkside.
Somebody please help me.
 

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The Fake Me and The Real Me

In the sunrise, I cloak my hideous face among the shadows.
When the darkness soars, I reveal my true self.

My heart is always in the darkness and I hide my predjudices in it.
I feel like I am in drowning in my shadows everyday.
Nothing seems to break my bond with it.
I just want to be free from the constant bickering between the mask I put on and my darkside.
Somebody please help me.
The beginning doesn't even seem really that poetic. Just two sentences of a story with enter hit between them.

You need to work on your flow. Get rid of unnecessary words, work with the sounds of them, the meanings, hidden meanings.
The 2nd to last sentence is waaaaay too long for a poem in my opinion, too.
 

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Hearts & Nobodies

Those of us are that are empty of heart.
With no emotions to fill our flesh.
We are the Nobodies.

Each of us seeks a purpose in this horrible life.
But, all of our answers never seemed to be answered.
There are more truths in questions than answers.

We, Nobodies can never hope to be Somebodies.
Why do we fight so hard to complete Kingdom Hearts?
What's the purpose?
Is it all for nothing?

Our memories are the only thing we can rely on in this life.
They are the only thing that binds us here.
They give us purpose.

All of us, Nobodies seek Kingdom Hearts to regain our hearts.
But, it always flees our grasps like a fast hare.
Kingdom Hearts, where are our hearts?

Is it our hearts among those in Kingdom Hearts?
How would we even recognize our hearts from the huge multitude of hearts in there?
Maybe, some part of us can feel our hearts within it.
Ok, now that is pretty good!
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Resurrection

Among the dark and dreary Bastion of Darkness lies four people.
One holds a Keyblade of Light the other a sword of Darkness.
one holds Chakrams of fire and the other a Claymore of Luna.
They all stand before a Dark Entity.

The entity's name is only Xehanort.
The Keyblader charges towards the being with his power.
Xehanort is slain by the light.

Two beings emerge from him.
One beyond his years and dying.
The other young and returning to life.

The old one passes into the eternal darkness never to return.
The young one rises and releases a heart within the Keyblader.

Out of the mist, two Keybladers appear, one feminine and strong.
The other one, masculine and young.
They run towards the man and return to the newly reborn world from which they came.

The Keyblader has two transparent beings walk out of him.
Another comes from the Fire-user.
The three cloaked beings embrace each other.

One of the beings turns to the Keyblader smiling, before he and the others disappear.
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Wish

A dream is a wish the heart makes.
The wish can either be from a good heart or an evil heart.
But, no matter the difference, the wish can never be taken back.
It is eternal.

But, wishes are a funny thing.
They don't always come true or atleast not in the way we expect.
A wish is never forgotten upon the sky.

For every dream, there is a longing soul.
For every wish, there is a life.
For every wish, there is a person.

So, becareful what you wish for.
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Somebody Else

Staring in the mirror, all I see is a hideous monster.
Her hazel eyes empty and emotionless.
Hair so long, ut yet so dull.
And, a face of an ogre.

Oh, how I wish I was out of this body.
Oh, I wish I was somebody else.
Oh, how I wish I didn't exist.

I just rather be somebody other than me.

I don't want to stare back at this ugly face.
I don't want to remember the people I hurt.
I don't want to keep feeling the same way.

All I just want to be is rid of myself.
That's all I ever wanted.
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Awaken

Deep in the slumber of dreams lays inspiration.
Inspiration waiting to be discovered by mortal eyes.

It's light glimmers for only a couple seconds.
Then it dies down.
To go back to sleep within the darkness.

Inspiration that wants to reveal itself and not be forgotten.
Along with all the other forgotten dreams of the past.
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Thanks, Nightwolf.

BROKEN HEART

Here you stand in front of me.
Your face reminds me of a lost companion.
I have a heart now, but it is torn apart.
You are the last thing of my remembrance of him.

When the man of darkness appeared.
You were too fueled by hate to choose.
My heart cries Don't go, but that can't change anything.

What's the point of having a heart?
When everyone and everything around you disappears.
I prefer the life of a Nobody.
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Sorrow In Pain

If you look into my brown eyes.
What do you see?
A happy, go-lucky girl without a care in the world.
But, look deeper.
And, you'll the scars of a troubled life.
I don't mean to be spoiled.
I don't mean to be the center of attention.
But, I'm suffering.
I'm suffering from all the years of neglect.
I'm suffering from all the years of chaos in my house.
I'm tired of suffering for his 'hard work'.

I want to be free of this prison I call home.
I want to break free from my hard-boiled shell.
I want to break the stone tablets of 'rules'.

But, I know the crumbles will still remain.
The scares in my eyes are permanent.
And, I'll always have a burden to carry.
The only reason he sticks around is because of the pain.

__________________________

This poem is dedicated to the situation I'm in right now. I needed something to help solve the pain my family is going through right now.
So, I'll just keep trying to reach out for help in my hour of pain.
But, no matter how hard I try I'll always try in vain.
 

Fractured_Heart628

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Meant to be Forgotten

Some are meant to be saved.
While, others are meant to fade into the shadows.
The brother of the wind grew jealous with pursuit of surpassing him.
But, his envy was his downfall.
He was attacked by the dark beings, but his heart didn't pass.
It only digitalized.
His heart rests in the computer of the Wise King of Radiant Gardens.
Nobody shall awake him from his slumber.
His slumber is his punishment.
For that, his heart relies in a comatose state and the memories seep within darkness.
The darkness shrawls the memories.
 
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