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Fractured_Heart628

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Here are some poems of mine. Tell me what you think of it.

Loneliness

Loneliness is my rose.
Always kept close to my heart never to leave my side.
It's scarlett petals fall one by one, but I still never let it go.
It watches the other flowers outside envying them for their joy.
It's only companion is my heart.
But, even that doesn't show it love only misery.
 

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Hearts & Nobodies

Those of us are that are empty of heart.
With no emotions to fill our flesh.
We are the Nobodies.

Each of us seeks a purpose in this horrible life.
But, all of our answers never seemed to be answered.
There are more truths in questions than answers.

We, Nobodies can never hope to be Somebodies.
Why do we fight so hard to complete Kingdom Hearts?
What's the purpose?
Is it all for nothing?

Our memories are the only thing we can rely on in this life.
They are the only thing that binds us here.
They give us purpose.

All of us, Nobodies seek Kingdom Hearts to regain our hearts.
But, it always flees our grasps like a fast hare.
Kingdom Hearts, where are our hearts?

Is it our hearts among those in Kingdom Hearts?
How would we even recognize our hearts from the huge multitude of hearts in there?
Maybe, some part of us can feel our hearts within it.
 

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This is a very nice poem of Nobodies. It describes them very well, and the word choice is clever.
 

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Thanks Reverie

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Friends:

A friend is a being that stands close to you all the time.
A friend will sacrifice everything for their friends.
If that friendship is strong enough, they'll see each other again.

Friends may leave or vanish into the darkness.
But, somehow they always return.
They always find a way back to their friends.

Even if, those friends are Nobodies.
They are still close enough to regain that which was lost.

Everything must be regained in order to press on.
And, when that which was lost has been regained.
It is still not over.

It just means that those that had sacrificed themselves for the lost.
They have to be pieced back together, as well.
But, it is more complicated to fix them than the lost.
 

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No problem~
The meaning of this poem in particular is very nice.
 

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Heart

What is a Heart?
Is it something that just lives in us giving us our purpose?
Or is something more?

Whatever the heart is.
It is almost impossible to live without.

To live without it is like being confined to a dark room forever.
No matter how hard you try to get out it never works.

It just makes you feel cramped.
Swallowed up by the Darkness completely.
No where to run or escape too.

But, the Heart is not just something that holds onto memories and feelings.
It's something much more.
It is the very thrive for life, the deepest part of every soul.

It carries both darkness and light.
We all chose which side of it we want to be apart of.
If either side is vanquished than part of us die along with it.
Never to be fully complete.

It is a very fragile part of us.
We must protect it with all of our being.
Mind, soul, body, and Heart, that's what makes one complete.
 

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This poem is so beautiful. You seem to be very decent at poems.
 

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Thanks, I usually write poems when I get the free time, but I don't hang onto them. *sigh*

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Darkness & Light

Darkness is the opposite of light.
Light the opposite of darkness.
The two are nothing without each other.

Light would cease too exist without darkness.
And, Darkness without light.

Though, the two abhor each other.
They need each other.
One is nothing without the other.

If Darkness ceases power over the light.
If Light seeks control over Darkness.
Then the two shall never discover their true meaning.

They would only be fighting each other for all of eternity.
So, the middle ground, grey is where everything is caught in.
Greyness gives both sides harmony.

But, Light and Darkness both reject Greyness.
They both cock their heads saying haughtily, "You aren't a legitimate being."

Greyness goes into it's shell harboring deep resentment towards the two.
It wants to prove that it is worthy and different than the two.
But, Greyness makes up both light and darkness.

Each heart has greyness in it.
Some are more of a darker shade than the other.
But, there are always some light in everyone.
As well, as much darkness.
 

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I love the compare/contrast between Light and Darkness. Awesome job once again~
 

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I've always been jealous of those similar to me.
They laugh and play outside.
I sit and cry inside.

They kick ball in the schoolyard.
I get ticked from watching from the confined classroom.

They run to the bus stop together chattering away.
I stand near them listening.

They see life as a game.
I see life as a torment.

They draw in the sands with their grimy fingers.
I just stay indoors watching tv.

They run up to the ice cream man's vehicle everyday buying ice cream.
They giggle as they slurp on the cones.

I stay inside eating a large bowl of disgusting vegetables.

They see me as invisible and unimportant.
I see them as perfect and exciting.

I am tired of being confined to my shell of isolation.
Why do they get to love life and I dread it?
I want to be like them.
Care-free and innocent just like a child.

I only have one life.
Why should I live it miserably.
 

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Simply beautifully written, xiolio. I'm definitely looking forward to more.
 

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Torment

Sisters, they can be the best of friends or the worst of enemies.
They can tear each other's hair out or exchange kind words.
They can spend time together or separation.
They love each other or hate each other's guts.

One sister responds to her older sister with an upset glare on her face.
The older sister can do nothing but laugh.
Both of them just walk off.

Sisters can give each other's hugs in the early spring morning.
Laughing as they dance through the open dirt fields crowded with cotton.
And, spend cool nights on the outside gazing at the heavens.

But, it gets harder to work on that relationship when both girls are totally different.
One sister likes hanging out with her friends and shopping.
The other one is reclusive and talks to her elders.

Both girls hate each other's guts.
But, once every blue moon, both girls exchange hugs.
 

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Such a bittersweet poem. The description is what makes it most interesting.
Nice avatar choice, too.
 

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Thanks.

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Anger

Why do you torment so?
You hate me, because of my long brown hair.

I go to my room everyday going to see you.
Yet you turn your back on me and bully me to the dumps.

You hate me for my mistakes.
I can't stand your insults.
I grind my teeth trying to smile.

Tears come in the inside of me.
They come from you.
You, who I sought to appease.
I can never accomplish that.

I may have my mistakes.
But, that doesn't mean you have the authority to detest my eyes of sorrow.

You think I am an Attention hog.
Maybe, you're right, but you never accept me for anything.

When will you accept me for who I am and get pass my rough edges?
 
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