Well this is my first fan-fic so... ya. Please tell me things I can do to improve my writing and comment and all that jazz. I was planning to put the prolouge and the first chapter up now but some things came up so I wont have time. Here's the prolouge ENJOY!
The young youth found himself on a rainy island. He couldn't speak or move. He could only hear and see the people on the island. And he could only feel the ice-cold rain beating down hard on him.
Unable to do anything, the boy watched as the people on the island gathered around a grave stone, he was too far away to see the name. One by one, the people who were wearing black, shuffled off the island to continue their own lives, leaving only two people remaining.
The male one had silver hair, and a wispy beard, judging from his appearence he was in his mid-twenties. The second one was a girl with long red hair, but she had that kind of look that you know she would be useless in battle.
The two stood in the same spot like statues for several minutes until something happened. The girl collapsed on the ground, crying histerically, the man not making that much of an effort to comfort her. This made the youth question many of the things going on.
"Is this real, or am I dreaming? And lastly, who is that who died." The thought, knowing he wasn't going to get answer. To his surprise the girl answered his last question. The girl who stopped crying but was still on the ground only yelled one thing.
" SORA!"
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Memory 00: Death
Memory 00: Death
The young youth found himself on a rainy island. He couldn't speak or move. He could only hear and see the people on the island. And he could only feel the ice-cold rain beating down hard on him.
Unable to do anything, the boy watched as the people on the island gathered around a grave stone, he was too far away to see the name. One by one, the people who were wearing black, shuffled off the island to continue their own lives, leaving only two people remaining.
The male one had silver hair, and a wispy beard, judging from his appearence he was in his mid-twenties. The second one was a girl with long red hair, but she had that kind of look that you know she would be useless in battle.
The two stood in the same spot like statues for several minutes until something happened. The girl collapsed on the ground, crying histerically, the man not making that much of an effort to comfort her. This made the youth question many of the things going on.
"Is this real, or am I dreaming? And lastly, who is that who died." The thought, knowing he wasn't going to get answer. To his surprise the girl answered his last question. The girl who stopped crying but was still on the ground only yelled one thing.
" SORA!"
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