(Author's note- What if Vanitias existed before Ventus here is how i would see it, Also flashbacks are in qoutes might update more than some because of lack of ideas)
chapter 1- The master
Matthew T. Pobocek, a 15 year-old boy who wears a white polo shirt and kacki pants alot. His keyblade is called Heart Thorn, he is also a rival of a famed swordsmen Vanitias.
Matthew was enjoying lunch until he had noticed a dark pattern forming on the floor almost reaching up to people. "Damn it Vanitias" he thought as he dissapered and watched his friends get captured in dark chains unable to move, Vanitias standing in front of them all. "Now then where can i find Matthew T. Pobocek" He said summoning his keyblade Oblivion and going up to someone and cutting their thoarts. "Vanitias" he said coming down and slashing his right check making him bleed because he had no helmet to protect him and yet he looked like Matthew, only that his hair was darker.
"How does this honer our master the one who taught us to fight" Matthew said putting his keyblade in a backwards stance. "Always about protecting others aren't you grow up in this world the strong eat the weak and it's about time i'm able to kill you" Vanitias said slashing forward kinda fast. "Our master wanted peace but you want the death of your homeworld, how selfish can you be!!!" Matthew said blocking his attack. "Hmp even i remember Rahnard the old bastard" Vanitias said
(Author's note- coping and pasting from somewhere(khplanet fourms) i posted it)
tell me what you think of it since i'm rewriting the vanitias attack thing i wrote
Heart thorn- http://www.khplanet.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=485&pictureid=4832
chapter 1- The master
Matthew T. Pobocek, a 15 year-old boy who wears a white polo shirt and kacki pants alot. His keyblade is called Heart Thorn, he is also a rival of a famed swordsmen Vanitias.
Matthew was enjoying lunch until he had noticed a dark pattern forming on the floor almost reaching up to people. "Damn it Vanitias" he thought as he dissapered and watched his friends get captured in dark chains unable to move, Vanitias standing in front of them all. "Now then where can i find Matthew T. Pobocek" He said summoning his keyblade Oblivion and going up to someone and cutting their thoarts. "Vanitias" he said coming down and slashing his right check making him bleed because he had no helmet to protect him and yet he looked like Matthew, only that his hair was darker.
"How does this honer our master the one who taught us to fight" Matthew said putting his keyblade in a backwards stance. "Always about protecting others aren't you grow up in this world the strong eat the weak and it's about time i'm able to kill you" Vanitias said slashing forward kinda fast. "Our master wanted peace but you want the death of your homeworld, how selfish can you be!!!" Matthew said blocking his attack. "Hmp even i remember Rahnard the old bastard" Vanitias said
"So what you think the master liked me more than you that's a negitative, he liked us both the same no matter what progress you had, you eventually beat me as well" Matthew said remembering the fight"Come on keep training or you will never be a swordsmen" Rahnard said swing his sword at Vanitias and was not able to block, then he did the same to Matthew and he did block back-handed. "Oh my talented young lad" he said patting him on the head "And Vanitias you too promise me you both will protect this land no matter how dis-orinted it could get and remember the name Ventus is forbinden in this land" Rahnard said patting them both on the head.
"Yes i do bastard now if you value these lives, then fight for real and hold on a sec CURE!!" Vanitias said, a green aura covering him and making his wounds dissaper. "So shall we" Vanitias said holding out his blade in a traditonal opening stance that most of their fighting schools used. "Okay lets" Matthew said grabing the sword"Now you may begin your in-cintation fight Vanitias and Matthew" Rahnard said raising a flag and Matthew and Vanitias started to fight intensly until Vanitias unleashed his sercert attack. His sercert attack was a binding fast flash like arrow X shape and Matthew fainted after that attack and fell, Vanitias claimed as the winner
(Author's note- coping and pasting from somewhere(khplanet fourms) i posted it)
tell me what you think of it since i'm rewriting the vanitias attack thing i wrote
Heart thorn- http://www.khplanet.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=485&pictureid=4832
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