This is your first time? Huh, well, ya coulda fooled me with the way you write half the time. owo
And, for some reason, Rife strikes me as an over sensitive person. Which, I wasn't really going for. I was trying to show that she's clueless now that she doesn't remember her own life and has a hard time comprehending death, even though in her past life she was very bold in her emotions and had the tendency to hide anything that hurt her, resulting in a semi-suicide [I plan on making her realize someone pushed her onto the tracks... Not sure how or when though].