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Haha I can actually relate to your parents and video game reference, my mother is doing that with my bother right now. She blames the game and therefore is always trying to find ways to get rid of it. The part that sucks it that it's my game (ps3) that I saved up for two years and she doesn't care if it gets accidentally lost or smashed.
I'm joking. Like I said, I appreciated your criticism, at least on my work as a whole. I realize that I've kind of fallen into that archetype, but those are usually just the ideas that pop into my head. And I've never really thought about repeat readers, so the newbies always compliment it and connect, lol.
I WOULD like to argue against the whole gloom thing, though. I've written numerous pieces that don't really have any gloom in them: bounce bounce bounce, beep beep beep, peer pressure, ambushed, professionalism, 'didn't really stretch my imagination', and 'what is this I don't even' are all pretty much cheerful pieces, with professionalism being a possible exception.