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[Hybrid~Fusion]

Well, as promised, the Second Chapter:

Chapter 2: Strange Dreams - Part 2
Some days later, Sora was with Kairi and Riku.
"Sora! Sora! You haven't listened nothing, have you?" Said Kairi, a little bit angry with him.

"Sorry. I was a little lost on my thoughts." - Said Sora, with embarrassment.-"But I could not help it. Those dreams are coming every day. What Roxas wants to mean 'your king might know something'?"

"Roxas said 'king'? With what exactly you were dreaming of?" Said Riku, thinking that Sora had become crazy.

"Yes.' Your king Might know sometinhg.' But why did he say your King? I mean, what does the King have with this?"


But then, something interrupted them. There was a man on a seadrift. Riku swimmed to the plank where the man was grabbing hold of, and brought him to shore. A few minutes later, he woke up.

"Uh…Ah…Wha…Where am I?" - Asked the man, that appeared to have around 20 years and red spiky hair; he had some small tattoos below his eyes, and was wearing a black shirt and a torn white short.

"You're in the Destiny Islands. Are you okay?" - Said Kairi, wanting to know what exactly happened. The man said that he was all right. Then Kairi asked "Who are you and what happened to you?"

"I'm Ale. I don't know what exactly happened to me. In fact, I don't remember anything about me." - Said Ale. He had a strange amnesia, as he could only remember his name.

"Well, we can help you. But first, you will need new clothes. You just can't walk like this. Oh, I almost forgot. I'm Sora, this is Kairi and that one is Riku." - Said Sora, trying to be the most friendly possible.

"Wait! Did you just say Sora?" - Asked Ale, surprised.

"Y-Yeah."- Said Sora, even more surprised than Ale.

"This name is so familiar, although I never met someone with the same name before. Wait! It is coming back! Hum… ah, his name was Roxas!" - Said ale, that didn't expect the reaction of the three friends.

"Roxas? How do you know him?" - Asked Sora, wanting to have more information, only to find out that the man only knew the name."Aw… It's okay. If you remember, please tell us. "

They got new clothes for Ale later. He was wearing a white sleeveless T-Shirt with an open black sleeveless jacket, and blue jeans. So, the sunset started. The light was fading, and as the sun was leaving, Sora took Ale and the other took their ways. And, while they were going to Sora's house, Ale Asked:



"Hey, Sora… are you sure we haven't met before?" - Asked Ale, with a smile on his face, trying to remember something that he had forgotten a long time ago

"Yeah… but I can't remember when or how. That's strange." - And Sora went home with Ale, thinking about Ale's strange connections with Roxas and his own connection with Ale.


Author's Notes: Is Ale Familiar to you? Chapter Three is coming on Thursday or on Friday.

 

[blendedhearts]

it's Axel, in a full form. it's still a bit random and some things the characters say, i can't make heads or tails of. but thats just something to work on, just keep trying.

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

some things the characters say, i can't make heads or tails of.

Could you be more specific?

 

[blendedhearts]

Well, as promised, the Second Chapter:

Chapter 2: Strange Dreams - Part 2
Some days later, Sora was with Kairi and Riku.
"Sora! Sora! You haven't listened nothing, have you?" Said Kairi, a little bit angry with him.

"Sorry. I was a little lost on my thoughts." - Said Sora, with embarrassment.-"But I could not help it. Those dreams are coming every day. What Roxas wants to mean 'your king might know something'?"

"Roxas said 'king'? With what exactly you were dreaming of?" Said Riku, thinking that Sora had become crazy.

"Yes.' Your king Might know sometinhg.' But why did he say your King? I mean, what does the King have with this?"

i made the parts that confused me bold. it just sounds weird.

 

[Maverick E.S]

Niiiiice the first part of it really got me i can;t wait for the next part

 

[Nelo Angelo]

hmm not bad, not bad at all. i shall eagerly await the next chapter.

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

(Can't believe that I got readers...)
Well, thanks for the comments. I think the advices worked.

 

[Maverick E.S]

(Can't believe that I got readers...)
Well, thanks for the comments. I think the advices worked.

lol thats what i said when mine were commented on

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Now, the third chapter.

Chapter 3: The forgotten one!

Ale wasn't feeling well. He was trying to remember the things that he had forgotten, but it still looked like that the more he tried to remember, the more he forgot. Then Sora came, wanting to know if Ale was ok.

"Hey, Ale, what's up?" - Said Sora, looking at the man's face, which showed frustration and sadness. "You know that you should not be like this."

"Sora, you really don't know what is to forget everything you know, to forget the ones you hold dear." - Said Ale, that didn't want to try more to remember at that time.

"But Ale, you didn't forget your friends. The memories of them are on your heart, sleeping. So, they will come to you at the right time. You don't have to worry. Come, Kairi and Riku are waiting for us." - Said Sora, leaving the room with a malicious smile on his face.

"What for?" - Asked Ale, with surprise, after all, they would they call him

"You and I have things to resolve. So, we're off to Twilight Town." - Said Sora, which already left his house.

"Twilight Town, huh? I think I remember that place." - Said Ale, more puzzled than he was before.

"Really? So let's go. The visit can be sure to bring you back memories." - Said Sora, glad to hear good news.

So, they caught up with their friends, and then Sora explained the situation. "We need to go to Twilight Town. There is a place there called 'The station of Serenity'. That place was where my dreams happened. Roxas told me that place was in Twilight Town. Besides, Ale said that he may remember the Town."

"Yeah, but, how are we getting there?" - Said Riku. "if you didn't notice, we don't have any means of going to any place right now."

But then, a ship floated over them. So, Chip and Dale landed the ship, the gummi ship that Sora and his friends once used to go to different worlds.

"Hey there!" - Said Chip, very happy, just like Dale. "Long time no see!"- said Dale. So, the two gummi ship mechanics said together: "Needin' something to go to other worlds?"

"I can't believe it." Said Riku.

"Hey, guys, how are Donald, Goofy and the King doing?" - said Sora, that didn't have any notice from them since the battle with Xemnas

"They're all right." - Said Chip. "But they miss you a lot." - Said Dale. "So, let's go to where you need to."

So, they headed off to Twilight Town. They landed at the Central Station. So, when Ale looked at the clock tower. Everything around him faded out, just like if he was dreaming.
Then, he saw a scene that might've come from his other memories.

Two guys in black coats were sitting on the clock tower. Eating their ice-cream, they were talking about the view. So, one of the guys, that looked like Ale, was telling the other, a blond boy, about the sun and the horizon. But, as he finished talking, Ale started to come back.

"Ale! Ale! Wake up!" - Said Sora, which thought that it was strange that Ale had passed out. Seeing that his friend was ok, he said "Don't give us a scare like that! You just passed out without any motive."

"Sorry. I did not want to do that." - Said Ale, with a face that said 'Oh, sorry. I couldn't help it'

"It's okay. You don't have to apologize." - Said Sora. "Are you all right?"

"Yes. And I had a dream. Two guys were sitting on the top of that tower. And one looked like he was me, but he wasn't me at the same time." - Said Ale, now feeling better.

"Okay. But now we need to see Hayner, Pence and Olette. They might know something about this Station of Serenity." But as Sora was walking, he felt something materializing on his pocket. Then he took it, and saw a picture of his friends from the town and Roxas
in front of the old mansion. So, he ran to the usual spot.

"Hey, guys, come here, Sora and his friends are back!" -Said Hayner, happy to see his friends again.

"Oh! You're back! It is so good to see you!" - Said Olette, now wearing a different outfit, a blue blouse, a white skirt and white and pink tennis.

"Hey Sora, how you doing? Where are Donald and Goofy?" - Asked Pence, noticing that Donald and Goofy weren't with Sora.

"Hi there. Donald and Goofy are at the King's Castle… that's why they didn't come. Hey, have you ever heard of a place called 'Station of Serenity?'" - Asked Sora, hoping to get a good answer, but the three friends made a signal with their heads meaning 'no' "And, you guys know who this one on this photo is?"

Then Sora showed them the photo. So, Olette said. "We don't know who this guy is. But still, he is kinda familiar for me." The other two said the same thing.

"Well, we're going around town asking people if they know anything about the station."
But as Sora was leaving, Hayner called him.

"Hey, Sora, who is that guy?" - Asked Hayner

"Oh, that's Ale. We found him yesterday on a seadrift." - Said Sora.

"He is so familiar. He looks a lot like the guy that kidnapped Kairi the last time you were here." - Said Hayner, that didn’t expect the reaction of Sora.

"Oh! Now that you've mentioned it, I see. Well, see you later!"

"See ya…"

Author's notes: This one was difficult to do. I almost ran out of ideas there. But, still, Sora is going to discover that the heart is more complex that than everyone thinks.

 

[Lancelot]

Hmm... i think its pretty good actually... i could notice that you were starting to run out of ideas... even still, cant wait for chap 4!

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Oh, almost forgot, Chapter 4's coming after Sunday.

 

[blendedhearts]

it's still way too random for me. but still, i'll see what i can do about staying with it.

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

C'mon, I'm needing more comments

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Chapter 4: The remembrance - Part 1

So, as Sora left the spot, he went to the sandlot. Seifer and the struggle promoter were there. Then, as Seifer saw them, he just went to the Market Street. Then, the struggle promoter went to Sora.

"You're Sora, right?" - Asked the man, as fat as always, with a happy face.

"Yes, sir." - Said Sora, wondering why the promoter would call him.

"Well, after you defeated Seifer, I could not help it but start another struggle tournament. It will start in three weeks. What do you say? Want to sign up?" - asked the man, wanting a good answer.

"Okay. I'm in. But if you can excuse me, I need to go to the Market Street." - Said Sora, running off again.

Then, Sora went into Market Street. There, he and his friends started to ask people if they knew something. Later, than…

"You guys got anything?" - Said Sora, that didn't get any positive answer.

"Nope. No one that I asked knew something." - Said Kairi, that didn't want to make Sora more stressed.

"Sorry. No one knew." - Said the calm Riku

"Well, I didn't get anything too."- Said Ale, as sad as Sora, since now they could not get any way to know the Station of Serenity.

"Hey, guys, what's up?" - Said a familiar voice.

"Your majesty!" - Said Sora, glad to see the King once more. "What are you doing here?"

"Oh, I was just passing by, Sora… So, what are you guys doing here?" - Asked King Mickey, surprised to see his friends once again.

"Your majesty, we're trying to find a place, called the Station of Serenity. Do you know where that is?" - Asked Sora, thinking that the King might know something.

"Sora…I heard of that once…If Ansem the wise was here, he could have known of that…" - Said Mickey, turning his happy expression into a sad one.

"I'm sorry. But you can't just stay here thinking about that. But, now that you've mentioned Ansem… What happened to the Mansion?" - Said Sora, trying to make the King feel better about what happened.

"Oh… Sorry, but I could not help listening you talking about the mansion. Word says that here is now a haunted place. Or it has some strange creatures. I don't know what's real. Why don't you go there?"- Said a boy who was next to them. He appeared to have fourteen years, and he had blue hair, using a red t-shirt, a yellow short and black sandals.
"You seem that you can take care of yourself."

"Uh… thanks…" - Said Sora, wanting to know the boy's name.

"I'm… I'm Jack. So, if you're going there, could you take me there? I have some… 'Business' there." - Said Jack.

"Okay, come with us. But could you tell us what business you have there?" - Asked Sora.

"I could ask you the same." - Said the boy.

"Okay, I don't know who you are, Jack, but you're in good hands. Right, Riku?" - And Riku and Ale looked themselves with surprise.

Then, they made their way to the mansion. Just after they went through the woods, a surprise awaited them.

"What? Not them again!" - Said Sora, looking at the Mansion's doors.

"But, didn't we destroy them all?" - Said Riku, as surprised as his friends.

"Yes. They should not be here…" - Said the King.

A Shadow was standing in front of the door, and, along with him, a cloaked figure. Then, the guy summoned more shadows and vanished in a corridor of darkness. So, Sora, Riku and Mickey summoned their keybades and started to fight.

"Don't worry; I'll protect Kairi and Jack!" - said Ale, determined in helping them in any way. But then, two uniquely shaped weapons appeared in Ale's hands. As he got them, he looked surprised. "Okay! Now it is time to fight!" - And then, he went to help his friends in battle. So he remembered that once he had those weapons, and he used it in some way that all those enemies that were surrounding him disappear. So, he went in the middle of the shadows, and did what he once done before: he spinned his weapons around him and destroyed all the heartless in his surroundings.

"Wow! How did you do this?" - Asked Sora, surprised with what he just saw.

"I dunno. Maybe I already knew how to do it, but I only remembered how to do it now." - Said the more surprised Ale.

So, they headed into the Mansion. As they entered in the room, a voice said

"It's been a while, my friend."


Author's notes: Okay, I said that I'd be posting it on Sunday, but I could not wait for that. So, here it is.
P.S.: The Struggle Part wil lead to the sub-chapter part, that will work like a filler. Coming after the end of this Fic.
P.S.S.o Jack remember you guys of someone? (For those who have played FFXII, it will be easier to know.)

 

[Nelo Angelo]

hey not bad at all.
you've definetly improved. great job. sorry for lateness.

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

You don't need to be sorry. Besides, Chapter 5's coming tomorrow or Wednesday.

 

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Chapter 5: Remembrance - Part 2

"Impossible. Is it…is it you?" - Asked Mickey, looking at the mysterious figure.

"Yes. It is me, my friend." - And then the figure revealed itself - it was Ansem the wise.

"Ansem? But… Didn't we see you disappear in the world that never was?" - Said Sora, surprised in seeing Ansem there, standing next to them.

"Yes. But after I disappeared, I ended up once more in the realm of nothingness. So, I tried to find a way out of that place. But, I did not find any way out. So, the fool that stands in the front of you accepted darkness once more to get out of that place. But, doing it, I did not realize that I was doing the wrong thing. It would be better for me if I stood there. Now, the Nobodies are back. And with them, the heartless. And the fault is only mine. Now, there is a new Xemnas. Stronger than the one you fought some time ago."
- Said Ansem, which was feeling that he should not be there. His eyes were turned to the other side, almost closed, with a sad expression.

"Ansem, you don't need to worry. I know that sometimes we make mistakes, but ya shouldn't be like that. We'll take care of that." - Said Mickey, trying to make Ansem feel better. "You didn't know that that was going to happen. And I'm glad you're here. We need you. So your comeback wasn't in vain."

"My friend, you always try to find a way to make others feel better. You are wiser than me. I am just a fool. I only sought my research, and things could be worse now if you didn't have come to me." - Said Ansem, with a better look. "But, you said you needed my help?"

"Actually, Sora is the one who needs your help. Go on, Sora, ask him." - Said Mickey, giving a signal for Sora makes his question.

"Ansem, I need to know if you know anything about a place called 'Station of Serenity'"
- Said Sora, who was glad to see someone that could know of something.

"In fact, I do know." - And, when Sora heard those words, he looked like more relaxed and happy. "Each person in the Organization has it's own grave in a place called 'Proof of Existence' Then, Each place is named an placed as the liking of the member. Roxas chose that place. But why do you want to know about it?" - Said Ansem, looking in Sora's eyes, trying to find out what the boy really wanted.

"It's because I had some strange dreams lately. And, Roxas was on them. He mentioned something about this place. So that's why we came to you." - Said Sora, explaining everything bit by bit. "So, is there a way to get there?"

"I'm afraid not. When you defeated Xemnas for the last time, the entire world that never was destroyed. Sorry, but there is no way to reach that place."- Said Ansem, sad because he couldn't help the keyblade master. "Only if your dreams could create it. And even if your dreams could re-create that place, what would we do next?"

"Okay. Hey, where is Jack? Wasn't he with us just now?" - asked Sora, wondering where could the boy have gone.

"That is no 'Jack'. It is my son, Ken. Sorry, but he likes to trick people when they mention the mansion and my name as well. Sorry for his behavior." - Said Ansem the wise. All of the others were shocked. How could Ansem have a child and even the King didn't even know about it? "But, I think that there is another way. We will have to go to the Radiant Garden. Maybe we can restore my laboratory and see what we can do. Until then, Sora you must defeat the new Xemnas. " - And then, they left the mansion, going towards Radiant Garden

Author's notes: Well, this one is shorter because is the last part of the "Rememberance.".
P.S. - I forgot that I would be going to travel tomorrow, so that's why I posted I today. So, no updates until next Thursday.

 

[Ban Mido]

Major improvement. Good work.:thumbup:

 

[Lancelot]

Definately improved heaps from the start! keep it up!

 

[Zanarkand Lover]

I just read the first chapter. It was good, but it needs work. It should be in paragraph format, explain everything to it's best potential. Also, try to even out the text. Meaning, keep it to the point and have only what you need in there.

Take a look at the fic in my sig, you'll know what I'm talking about.

Over all, it was pretty good though, I like it.

Edit: I just saw the 5th chapter. It's in paragraph! I didn't read it yet, but thats an improvement already!