Fanfiction ► The New Organization

[Athel]

oooh u got me there...oh well. what is his weapon? Jaxannoth's is a whip

 

[Xidon]

Well I'll PM it to you if thats OK

 

[Athel]

yeah its ok (25 characters)

 

[~Lenya~]

i just noticed how this organization's people are like the old organization's people. like Juxi-Muboro is like Xaldin and Yatrox (the cocky guy) is like Axel and for some reason Shiruix reminds me of Larxene...maybe its the giggling...

Shiruix reminds you of Larxene?O_O Wow that was unexpected,but just to tell you(im not insulting you) shes more of a childish person and Larxene is more well,you know.XD

 

[ansemjafar]

Hi everyone. I know that you guys like my ff. Here is an original story I wrote before I started on this one. I hope that everyone here reads it and comments it. Angel, I am sorry that I never typed up chapter 3 for you to read. Can you forgive me? =/

http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fiction/64258-traveler.html

 

[~Lenya~]

Gaaahk!!Ansem!!Wheres the next chappie???>O< XD

 

[Athel]

blah. take that! blah. have some more! blah.
haha!









im random. dont flame me

 

[ansemjafar]

while you wait for it you should check out the link I put up. ^_^

 

[Athel]

well maybe i will, GOSH!!!
(i like Napoleon Dynamite)

 

[Faith Crest]

Yeah, read the story that he's done, peeps. It's quite good!

 

[Suzaku]

All right I read the story, but if you don't want me to seriously critique it here then I could PM it to you. Or if you've heard enough from me I can refrain from that.

But overall it was a pretty good read.

 

[ansemjafar]

which story. if it is this one then please critque it here. If it is The Traveler then please critque it on that thread. Thanks

 

[Haku]

I think that I liked this one better than the other one because it seemed as though this one has alot more meaning to it.

 

[TheLastKnight]

hey hey hey, bud. I loved all of the chapters!!

It was great, but like I asked angels, how the hell do you get them so popular?

 

[ansemjafar]

I am glad that you liked the chapters. What ya think of the members and who do you think the traitor is? Also could you please check out the other story I wrote. The link is here somewhere. As to answer your question, I guess it is because the story is based off of Kingdom Hearts

 

[TheLastKnight]

Symphonic Darkness sort of is...and Another Story is as well

 

[Xidon]

Symphonic Darkness sort of is...and Another Story is as well

He has a lot of friends who know that he writes well, so they come to read his stories... as did I now, trying to find a new chapter.

 

[Athel]

AJ, u said u were gonna start writing ch. 6 last night!! wippee!!! i cant wait

 

[√]

chappie still not up?
man, cant wait!!!

 

[Faith Crest]

Seriously, you guys need to be patient. He does have a life outside this forum too, you know?