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The ending of the chapter was chillin and terrifieng! Woah!
You put it very clearly I love it that way it really puts me INTO the story! ^_^ Can't wait what happends next! ^w^
thanks you guys.
Kensie-san: yeah you right, i did go overboard on tings didnt i. i'll keep that in mind, thanx.
AJ: they are visions that have occured rather than just random dreams.
FK and Suzaku-san: dont worry, im gonna keep goin. but im afraid next thursday im goin off abroad on holiday for 5 weeks! so i wont be postin the next chapters. i hope you guys dont lose interest. im tryin my best to post at least a chapter within two days. i dont wanna rush it though.
at first Nelo had visions of the past chaos bijomaru had caused. now that he's back Nelo's having visions of his recent attack. remember when mitsunare said, he has already killed a soul? that was that soul.
Great work, nelo ^_^ You're improving, that's for sure.
Try to use more noun replacers, rather than the same name over and over; it avoids repetition, that way. Also, don't forget to open and close your quotations with quotation marks, to avoid confusion.
I liked the way you wrote how Ting fought; twas good.