Sunny Aqua

[RuffPuff]

Newest sig. I'm about to put it in a competition, but I'm not sure which version:

V1:

http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs51/f/2009/302/4/0/4020c71b4fde22556543e7450e855b26.jpg

V2:

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs50/f/2009/302/3/5/35e8d0f2899e0b18bd2136755c67364a.jpg

V3:

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs50/f/2009/302/c/6/Aqua_Sig_V3_by_Lil_IBeatSephy.jpg

Cnc, plz.

 

[Coeurl]

ugh, sorry i can't tell the difference. :c

it's ok but that green blob thing is really out of place. and also that shape on the right side is meh.

i'm not really sure what you should add to it. oh well.

 

[Raiko]

Hmm for some odd reason, I can't see the flow but im guessing it's going upwards.

V3 i think but the middle bit might be a bit bright. But thats probably my monitor. And the green... butterfly(?) it a bit random for me.

 

[RuffPuff]

Okay, I will get rid of the blob, and maybe make the "shape on the right's" layer at 10% Opacity.

And I really didn't get a good flow going, now that I think about it. It was supposed to flow down to the left, with the flower. :\

 

[Deleted member 36435]

Waaaaaayyyy to crowded around the focal.
Clean it up a lot it's really messy.

 

[Enri]

There's no flow and the quality seems low to me.

 

[Lancelot]

I think... remove the effects over Aqua, specifically the effects over the right arm, because it makes it look generally messy, and really doesn't blend in at all.With the over effects gone, focus on something in the background, and blend it from there I think

 

[KB]

Horrible stock quality probably due to whatever blurred effect and everything looks choppy and distracting.

Remove the foreground effects, maybe fade her arms to the sides and work from there.

 

[Unabomber]

the flow is, weird. i don't like effects.

 

[RuffPuff]

I think I might scrap it if I can't get it to look better. Thanks for the cnc, guys.

EDIT:

I think I got it to look better.

And I tried blue.

I honestly like the crimson version more, so I'm going with it.

Cnc again, if you feel like it.

 

[Amphetamine]

where is the difference between the three?

 

[Coeurl]

i like the blue version more. 'cause it matches aqua's hair color. eh just sayin.

 

[Reverie]

The sigs are quite pretty, but the stock seems to be low quality to me.
However, the blue one is my fave. :]

 

[Sean]

Take off that high intensity of light to the left of the render. And you might want to add some soft colored gradients on different blending modes.