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Hiya! Okay, I'm posting the first chapter only because I'm far ahead of you and I'm almost done with the story. So far the first few chapters are in order, so that means that they're written the way they were supposed to be. Ugh, this story was written because of a friend of mine whom was also a friend, although we call each other sisters she was acting more like some kind of queen forcing me to write this story.

Well, I hope you enjoyed it, I have to admit I like it so far it's just harder to write because it's longer than the original Riku and Mai.

EDIT If you like my stories follow these links! ^^ thankies!

KH: Prince and the Pauper http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/151837-kh-prince-pauper-2.html
Riku and Mai 1 http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/115864-riku-mai.html
Axel's New House http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/146543-axels-new-house-short-story.html
Stuck in the Host Club http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/133314-stuck-host-club.html
Ikari http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/123612-ikari.html
Enjoy!

Part One
Riku and Mai: Trying
Chapter One

Four weeks had passed since Riku and Mai had gotten married, and two weeks after Sora and Kairi were married.

Their house was actually a mansion, large and beautiful. The mansion had been painted white the shutters were now a light blue and the front door was now cheery wood. The brick path that led to the front door was surrounded by beautiful grass that was fully green and grown. The edges of the front yard was a line of beautiful cheery blossom trees. Under the windows of the first floor one could see beautiful bushes of roses. There house was hard to miss even though it wasn’t the only large house on the street.

But alas they were arguing again, about the same thing since they had gotten married.

“Riku, please? For us?” Mai begged.

“No,” Riku argued, he wasn’t going to give her the answer she wanted no way in the world.

This happens almost every time they’re alone, no surprise, but living in the mansion that was so beautiful that it was unheard of, the two normally would be out doing something. Mai had Benjie with her all the time. In fact he was with her while they argued. He watched silently as his “Mommy” and “Daddy” argued.

Their kitchen of cream and light green was large and had been designed by the best of the best. Their kitchen was made as if made for a chef god.

Riku sat at the island across from Mai. Mai was leaning forward and pressing Riku for what she wanted.

Mai started to stare him down, in an intimidating way.

“No,” Riku said responding to her narrowed eyes.

Mai leaned in more, “No,” Riku said leaning in forward.

“Yes,” she said with that same irritated look on her face.

“We’re GOING to wait.” Riku strained.

Mai grounded her teeth and made a fist. She inhaled slowly and turned away exhaling. She folded her arms.

“Mai don’t be like that, you know good and well that I want to.”

Mai ignored him or at least pretended to.

“Mai… Mai!”

Mai started to walk away. She headed for the door way that was to Riku’s back. Benjie went the other way. He was going to play with his chew toys in the living room. Mai was either heading for the backyard or she was going to the dinning room. Riku sighed, before he could stand to follow Mai something stopped him.

He felt a warm, pleasant, comfortable feeling on his neck. Riku swallowed as Mai’s hands slowly traveled down his chest. Mai held him from behind.

“Mai…” Riku was about to protest, and goodness it was hard to go against her. He was being pulled in as she kissed his neck ever so slowly.

“Don’t talk,” she whispered in his ear before lightly biting it. Riku was in her grasp, Mai could feel it. She got around him and sat on his lap. She kissed him and kissed him some more. She held his face in both of her hands.

Riku fought back, he caught her hands and pulled back from her face. “No, not now,” he said, it took everything in him to stop her.

Mai’s red eyes stared at him; she was amazed that he broke from her chains. She blinked. Riku stood and walked away. When he got in the living room he chuckled, he stopped her from doing the one thing he wanted her to continue in.

Later that day Mai had gone to Riku, she seemed down.

“What’s wrong?” Riku asked. He was staying on his guard, he knew for a fact that Mai would try again.

“It’s Raven, she’s not doing too good,” she answered after a long while.

“What happened?” Riku stood from the sofa and Benjie jumped off Riku’s lap and walked over to Mai.

“Raven thinks Mike is cheating on her.”

“Oh,” Riku said, he lowered his eyes to the corner of his eyes, “What else happened?”

“She’s thinking about getting a divorce,” Mai said.

“What? But they… aren’t they having…”

“No,” Mai said shaking her head a tear crawled her face.

“What happened?” Riku wrapped his arms around her.

“Mike made her get an abortion.” Mai said.

Riku looked at her, “Are you serious?” Riku tried to stay calm but clearly he was getting upset.

“No, I wish I wasn’t, Mike didn’t want the child… and…”

“I don’t want to hear any more, I might kill that jerk,” Riku said trying to keep from cursing and jumping on his bike and finding Mike to kill him.

Mai nodded and hugged him once more. She pulled away from the hug and picked Benjie up. She walked away.

Riku calmed down three or four hours later, he found his wife in the bed room still a little down about what happened to Raven.

“Babe, there’s no reason to get to so upset… I mean there is but… I mean…”

“I know what you mean,” Mai said.

Riku sighed and walked over to her. Benjie looked up from Mai’s lap and wagged his tail. Mai gave him a pat and grinned but it was sad. “Benjie is happy to see me,” Riku grinned sitting next to Mai.

“That’s because he’s sick of me being sad. Besides he sees you as Daddy,” Mai grinned at him.

Riku grinned again giving Benjie a pat on the head. “No surprise, I was his dad before you became the mom,” Riku said half chuckling.

Mai sighed, “Riku…”

“No,” he answered.

“Darn,” Mai said. “Please… just this once, this will be the last time I ask, please!” she begged.

“You’re mood-swinging again,” Riku said.

“Please?”

Riku sighed, “Alright, fine, this is the last time, if nothing happens then-”

Mai jumped on him, Benjie was on the floor now, he stared at his parents on the bed for only a moment. Benjie then walked away and went to his bed that was down stairs and away from his parents and there he couldn’t hear what would happen.

A/N: Whatcha think? I hoped you liked the first chapter, my goal this time around it to update way less only because I'm trying to get off the stuff (updating is a drug to me can't help but do it) please comment! EDIT Yes I love Riku that's why most of the stories are Riku Fanfics not all but most
 
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Whoo!!! The sequel is finally posted!!! That was a really great start to the story. My goodness, Mai is really rushing things, isn't she? I mean, those two aren't even old enough to drink, and Mai is pressing Riku for a child. Well, after the whole part about Raven and her husband, I guess I can understand why she would want to have children, but they are still really young. Anyway, great job on the first chapter, and I eagerly await for more.
 

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Whoo!!! The sequel is finally posted!!! That was a really great start to the story. My goodness, Mai is really rushing things, isn't she? I mean, those two aren't even old enough to drink, and Mai is pressing Riku for a child. Well, after the whole part about Raven and her husband, I guess I can understand why she would want to have children, but they are still really young. Anyway, great job on the first chapter, and I eagerly await for more.

Thank you, and you're right they are too young to drink, and the thing about Raven is very important to the whole story so keep that in mind for a while. Oh and the story is in five parts, not three like said in the prequel. to this part there are 14 chapters.

Yes, thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked it.
 

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Hehe, I like it :D
But since when have I never liked your stories?
I was chuckling when Mai was always like "Please" and Riku was just "No" and then he just gave in at the end saying “Alright, fine, this is the last time, if nothing happens then-”
Lol
Can't wait for the next update!
 

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Well, I'm glad you guys are liking the story so far. I plan to update less and less so that way you guys will be able to catch up if you feel left behind. Here's the next chapter for you btw.

Oh, btw this chapter takes place directly after the first one.

Enjoy!

Part One
Riku and Mai: Trying
Chapter Two

Riku slowly pulled off his shirt. Mai watched, her eyes on him, waiting eagerly. Riku came close and kissed her neck; Mai held him in her arms and felt her heart soar.

“We’re coming for you!”

Mai pushed Riku off on hand on her heart and the other on Riku’s chest. Mai gasped for air out of fear and shock.

“What’s wrong?” Riku asked her, he stared at her worried to the bone that she would jump like that.

“I… I… nothing, don’t worry about it,” Mai shook her head; she tried to grin but her fear written all over her face.

“Mai, don’t lie to me,” Riku said.

“No, it’s nothing really,” Mai smiled.

“Fine,” Riku said. Riku waited after a while then started to kiss Mai again. Mai made him eager now, so he wasn’t going to stop now. He wasn’t going to stop for nothing stupid.

Mai touched the side of his face as he kissed her. She closed her eyes and let herself get lost.

“We’re coming for you!” the voices came back.

Mai pushed Riku off more calmly than the last time and shook her head. “No, please not tonight,” she sighed.

“You are so confusing, for the pass month you bug me about having a child and then when I actually agree to it you turn me down,” he groans.

“Sorry,” she jokily smiles but in her mind she was still freaking out, she was still trying to understand why she heard voices of evil and harmful intent in her mind.

“Fine, we’ll try again later,” Riku said. He turned over in bed and closed his eyes.

Mai knew he was upset.

But she wasn’t going to try for a child with thoughts like that in her mind. She turned to her side and closed her eyes to sleep.

A/N: I hope you like it!
 

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Oh goodness. Those voices can't be good whatsoever. Poor Riku, he gives into Mai's request and then she changes her mind and shuts him out. I would be frustrated if I were him. But still, those voices... Can't wait to see who/what they are and why they're appearing
 

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Hiya kiddies! I haven't updated in a while and that's a good thing! I'm trying to get my self less addicted to updating, this is going to be a long story coming, if I update less and less imagine... I'd finish maybe in the middle of next year. That sounds like a long time but I'm willing to do that to stop updating in a long while. ^^

Okay anyway, I forgot to tell you guys that I have a boyfriend, and you might be thinking what's so special about that but I have never dated. 17 years and not one boyfriend, so now that I have one I'm sorta happy about it.

Whatever! On with the story!

Enjoy!

Part One
Riku and Mai: Trying
Chapter Three

Mai woke; the voices were gone from her mind, most of the night their eeriness was with her. She rolled to her back and stretched her arm to touch Riku but he was gone. Mai sat up and wondered where he was. That was odd; normally, he was still there staring at her.

Mai had gotten use to him doing that. So use to it that she didn’t even jump if he called out to her when she woke.

Mai threw her feet out of bed to find Benjie right there at her feet. He was wagging his tail looking up at her from where he sat. Mai smiled at him and spoke to him.

“Good Morning, Benjie,” she smiled.

‘Mommy! Mommy! Look at my neck!’ he said.

Mai narrowed her eyes confused. She picked him up and looked at his neck but she quickly understood that he meant his collar. Mai looked there to find a small piece of paper. Odd, Mai looked at it, and it oddly requested Mai to come down stairs. Odd, why would Riku waste time writing that down?

Mai sighed and stood with Benjie in her arms. She headed for the kitchen and found him there… in… a wife-beater and his blue boxers, he had breakfast ready.

“Good morning,” Riku greeted her with a warm smile. He looked over his shoulder as he scraped the perfectly yellow and fluffy scrambled eggs in a large bowl. Mai smiled but quickly took up a sad look.

“Sorry about last night… I just…”

“Don’t worry, you can make it up later,” Riku said walking over to her, Mai placed Benjie down and he ran to his food bowl.

“Riku, Benjie told me you actually want a child… why are you refusing though?”

Riku was wide eyed. “What are you talking about,” he asked after thinking about it for a good second and smiling, trying to hide the fact that he was surprised.

“Riku, Benjie told me… but why? Why are you refusing, it’s something we both want,” Mai said.

Riku sighed and half growled and half chuckled at Benjie, “I don’t want to…” he sighed, “Never mind.”

“No tell me,” Mai pressed, she said the words softly as she touched the side of his face.

“I… Mai, when a woman… when she gives birth… she goes through so much…”

“So much what?”

“Pain.” Riku whispered.

Mai swallowed. ‘Yeah he did speak of pain some time after I had returned, that would make sense.’

Riku looked into her eyes; he just hated seeing her in pain. He bit his lip as he tried to push the thought out of his mind. He didn’t want to think of that thought any more. He didn’t care how small if she was in pain it was painful for him to think about it.

“I don’t want to see you hurt, not now, I want to be ready for that,” Riku said after Mai didn’t say anything.

“I don’t believe you,” Mai said shaking her head.

“What? I can’t worry about you?”

“No, not that, you’re telling me women go through pain? I don’t believe that, from what I was told being pregnant was beautiful, how can pain be beautiful?”

Riku sighed, ‘She’s thinking of the stages before the real deal.’ Riku touched the side of her face, “Babe, how do the babies come out? Do you know?”

Mai looked at him confused. “What are you talking about now?”

“Mai, when you have the baby inside you, you go through pain when it’s time for the baby to come out.”

Mai rolled her eyes, “I don’t care, I’m sure I’ve experienced harsher pains before.” Mai said

“Mai it’s not he same, trust me,” Riku said thoughtfully.

“Riku, just stop it, you’re worrying over nothing,” Mai said.

“Mai, I think you should see a video of birth before you think so lightly on it,” Riku said.

She thinks about it, if they have videos then it must be bad. Mai thought it over, should she… no that’s Riku trick to get her to wait. Mai grabbed a plate and placed the eggs, bacon, toast and waffles on her plate. Riku joined her, they ate for a while before the conversation stared up again.

“Mai, will you at least consider?”

“I will,” Mai said, “I’ll watch one film.”

Riku grinned, “That’s all I ask,” Riku started eating again.

They finished eating and Mai picked up her plate and went to the sink with it. Riku came up behind her and placed his plate in the sink as well. Riku kissed Mai’s neck once and backed away. Mai turned to face him and caught him before he got out of her reach. Mai kissed him and they went on with their kiss. Benjie started to leave.
 

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Oh boy, this is going to be funny. I can't wait to see Mai's reaction to the birthing process. Man, it's not just painful to go through, it's also painful to watch. Anyway, awesome job, and I look forward to more.

Thankies! I have to double check to see if I made it detailed enough ( the look on Mai's face while watching the film) But other than that I think it's going to be a cool and funny moment.

Yeah, I'm updating less if you noticed. I'm trying to control my updating.
 

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I've followed your other story 'Ikari' and really liked it. I'm glad there's another sequel to it. I've enjoyed this one to and I like how you put so much effort into Riku being concerned about Mai. another great chapter, can't wait to see her face when she watches the video!
 

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I've followed your other story 'Ikari' and really liked it. I'm glad there's another sequel to it. I've enjoyed this one to and I like how you put so much effort into Riku being concerned about Mai. another great chapter, can't wait to see her face when she watches the video!

Thank you, did you read Riku and Mai? That's the first one, and you said you already went through Ikari, yes, that was actually surprisily good.

thankies for the comment/review!
 

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Oh dearie me, this'll be good. Mai's reaction to the birthing videos should be interesting.
Oh she's so adorable, how she doesn't know a thing about pregnancy.
And Riku not wanting Mai to be in pain (even though its to birth a baby) is sweet too :D
Can't wait for your next update
And thanks for the VM telling me!
 

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awesome prequel! Mai's gonna watch a giving birth video? wow, wonder what her reaction will be? can't wait for the next one.
 

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Okay peoples, I have the next chapter for you... again.

So, the little chapter with Mai watching the birth is in chapter ten... I know so far away but don't worry It'll come fast.

Enjoy!

Part One
Riku and Mai: Trying
Chapter Four

A silent night in this world, Heartless were out but they were quiet. Their yellow eyes were along the ground bored and tired. They couldn’t sense those with darkness in their hearts for some reason. Then they saw a dark line cut through the star lit sky. Some were curious and stayed to watch while others filled with fear hid.

The line was so dark that it made the night look like a light blue.

It had a long tail and it was like a shooting star that traveled faster than a normal shooting star.

The Heartless coward as the star’s voice reached their minds.

“We’re coming for you! We’re coming for you Goddess of Heart Haven!”

The black star blazed on and landed in a jungle like forest area. The star was hot in appearance but in fact was cold.

A small blue, fluffy and cute creature crawled up to the burning rock. It sniffed it and slowly reached out to touch it.

The freeze cold rock shifted and the blue creature retreated. He stared at it while in attack mode, all four of his arms were arched and ready for any attack that was coming his way.

The rock shifted once more and when the blue creature heard the voice of evil he took off to warn his family.

“We are here Goddess.”
 

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Okay the first time I read that I thought that the things inside of the rock was the fluffy blue creature
XDDD
But now I know its not.
Interesting little introduction to the antagonists in this story.
Shooting rocks from outer space seems a bit over done... And a bit too Sci-Fi for me but who knows
It may work out for the antagonists. But I don't know yet, since I don't knwo who/what they are.
So yeah.
Other than that it was good :D
 

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Nice update, I thought it was too short but it was good, I look forward to more.
 
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