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Here's the next ^^

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Part Six
Benjie and Crystal
Ch. 2

Crystal sighed, “Benjie, when did you first love me?”

Benjie closed his eyes and tried to think about it. He couldn’t come up with the words so he just started to speak. “Crystal, ever… ever since I first saw you, when I was a few months old… I think I loved you. I… I… I can’t explain it but… I can’t remember a day I was not in love with you. I thought about you constantly, I wanted to tell you years ago but…”

Crystal grinned, “I know what you’re trying to tell me. It makes sense, I felt the same way.”

Benjie grinned. “Oh, I gotta get going.” Benjie left the bed.

“What? Why?”

“Well, either I stay until your dad gets here to kill me or I leave to get a head start,” Benjie said opening a corridor.

“But… can’t you come back?” Crystal sat on the bed gazing at him.

Benjie turned his head away, then jetted back to her and held her face and kissed her, “I’ll come back every night, if that’s what you want…”

Crystal took one of his hands that held her face, “Please do, I’ll wait for you in the garden outside in the center of the mansion.”

“What if I get caught?”

“Well, we all know how I like to say ‘I was wrong,’ and my dad will probably go crazy and blame you.”

“What? I’m going to tell him it was your idea, everything, was anyway.”

Crystal smiled, “Benjie, come back to me alright?”

Benjie nodded and entered into the corridor.
 

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Hey! Here's the next chapter! I hope you like it!

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Part Six
Benjie and Crystal
Ch. 3

Benjie closed the corridor behind him, he flopped on his bed and sighed, he felt so good. ‘Crystal… I’m so glad I got to tell her…’

‘Benjie, you’re home late,’ Mai’s voice spoke in his head.

‘Very late,’ Riku’s voice spoke too, Riku after seventeen years was able to pick up the power to read minds and to send messages to the minds. ‘What were you doing?’

Benjie swallowed. ‘I was playing video games with Crystal… would you guys stop doing that?’

‘What?’ Riku and Mai both asked.

‘Entering my mind.’

‘We have the right, besides I wanted to know why you were late,’ Riku said, Benjie could hear the annoyance in his voice.

‘Dad, it’s okay, we didn’t do anything.’

‘I trust you, Benjie,’ Riku said and he removed himself from the conversation.

‘Mom?” Benjie waited.

‘I just hope you’re not lying to me…’ she left and Benjie’s mind was silent for the rest of the night. Benjie wasn’t sure he should leave the house that night any more… but he loved her and he wanted to see her more…
 

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Awww.....poor benjie torn between his parents and the love of his life! lol I sound like a soap opera narrator....but god i hope he goes :)
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Poor Benjie!!! He doesn't want to leave and get in trouble with his parents, but he loves Crystal and doesn't want to stand her up. Oh boy, this is quite a conundrum. You know, this story kind of reads like "Romeo and Juliet". I mean, I know their parents are best friends, but the way you're writing it seems as if their love is forbidden and hell will break loose if their parents find out. Oh well, I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
 

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Here's the next chapter! I think you'll like this one ^^ I found it the cutest one so far ^^

Enjoy!

Part Six
Benjie and Crystal
Ch. 4

Benjie woke, his cell phone on vibrate so it wouldn’t ring and echo in the room. He turned off the alarm and changed out of his pj’s.

Benjie swallowed, he hoped his parents wouldn’t wake. He finished dressing and opened a corridor. He was worried that his parents might sense him missing in the house.

Benjie opened the corridor in the garden. He gasped for air, he was so nervous he was sick.

“Benjie?”

Benjie looked around and smiled, “Crystal?”

“No… someone you sorta know.”

Benjie could smell a scent that was familiar to him. Dark and evil… Dawn and Dusk! Benjie summoned Loyal Reign and turned to face the speaker. “Show your self!” His eyes searched the bushes but no one was there.

Suddenly a girl came out of the bushes, she was small, cute and baby like but all woman. She looked nothing like Dawn or Dusk. “Benjie…”

“Who are you? What do you want?”

“I’m Imani. I was born from Tundra… your guardian before you were born.”

Benjie raised his silver eye brow, “Okay, I would believe that if you had proof.”

“It doesn’t matter, listen, I wanted to tell you som-”

Clash.

“Ow…” Benjie said rubbing his head and lifted his head to feel something touch his lips.

Imani and Benjie had their eyes wide open as they realized that their lips were touching.

“Benjie…”

Benjie pulled his head away and saw Crystal standing there watching. “No, Crystal… it’s not what you think!”

“You lied to me! You lied to me!” Crystal ran off and Imani rubbed her head.

“Crystal wait!” Benjie yelled out and then lowered his eyes in sadness.

“Sorry, I can be a real clumsy,” Imani said with an anime sweat droplet.

“What the heck is wrong with you?!” Benjie snapped. He growled, he was returning to his dog nature.

“I’m sorry but I really needed your help.”

Benjie snapped his teeth, “With what?”

Imani sighed, “Listen… I was hoping you could help me get someone to like me…”

Benjie was wide eyed. “You came here to tell me that?!”

“Well, I didn’t know you’d be sneaking around Doki’s house. I was going to ask both you and Crystal but you just so happened to be here while I was going to Crystal first.”

Benjie narrowed his eyes, “Are you kidding me?”

Imani sighed, “No, he’s always ignoring me and I knew I could come to you because we were once friends but ever since my parents decided to stay in Heart Haven while I was young I never had the chance to really get to know you guys.”

Benjie widened his eyes, “I remember you now… yeah, you were that girl always by herself when my mom had play dates.”

“That’s me.” She smiled.

Benjie sighed, “Alright,” Benjie stood. “Who’s the guy?”

Imani bit her lip, “Come with me,” she said opening a corridor. Instantly they were in Heart Haven. Imani sighed and walked Benjie to a garden that was enclosed by many trees and bushes. Imani pulled Benjie down and pushed some of the leaves away. “He’s right there.”

Benjie looked into the leafy window made by Imani and saw a guy under a tree reading a book. He looked young. Benjie noted that this guy was a Nobody and had the same smell as Axel. Benjie also noticed that he guy had silver hair and he had a long bang over one eye. “Who is he? And he seems a bit old for you.”

Imani blushed, “He was revived recently and they made him younger because he wanted to so he’s about eighteen. But he’s so cute… and he doesn’t socialize much and when he does he’s still distant.”

Benjie sighed, “What’s his name?”

“Zexion, he’s quite. And he’s nice… when he’s not reading.”

Benjie sat back and rested his hands behind his head and leaned against the tree. “Just go talk to him.”

“What?! I can’t do that. He ignores me…”

Benjie rolled his eyes, “Look, I don’t have to help you know. You’re the one who messed up my eight hour relationship.”

“You’re counting?”

“No… yes…”

“Alright, fair enough, I’ll help you get back together and you help me get with him.”

Benjie groaned, “Fine. Now get going.”

Imani nodded with a red face. She left the hiding spot and walked over to the man. She waved as she got close, before she could get the greeting out of her mouth she fell flat on her face.

Benjie facepalmed and watched as Zexion barely moved his eyes from the book. ‘She’s stupidly clumsy!’

“Ow…” Imani lifted her head to see Zexion walking away. Tears ran down her face and then buried her face in the grass.

Benjie left the bushes and groaned, “You’re hopeless,” he said helping her up.

“I’m so clumsy, he’ll never see me, he’s so cool he won’t see me at all!”

Benjie sighed, “C’mon. I got myself into this I’m going to get myself out.” Benjie started to walk toward the teen and tapped his shoulder.

“What do you want?” he said coldly.

“I’m Benjie, I’m sure you’ve heard of me, the first Emo-void?”

Zexion just stared at him. “And?”

“Well, listen, I was wondering if you’d do me a favor.”

“Like what? I don’t like to get my hands dirty, especially for someone else.”

Benjie grinned, “All you have to do is give that girl a chance and date for a month.”

Zexion looked in the direction Benjie pointed at, he swallowed, “Why her?”

Benjie frowned, “Because she likes you.”

Zexion blinked, “She… does?”

“Very much so, I’d say give her some attention.”

“But… she… I thought…”

Benjie looked at him confused, “What?”

“Well, uh… the other month she went on and on how she hated me and she said she hated it when I read books…”

Benjie raised an eyebrow. “I highly doubt, she came all the way to Destiny Island to get me to help her.”

Zexion closed his eyes and thought, “I don’t understand.”

Benjie rolled his eyes, “Can you wait here a sec?” Benjie ran over to Imani whom was standing and watching Benjie and Zexion.

“What’s wrong?” Imani asked.

“Think back and just relax.” Benjie said quickly. He touched her head and closed his eyes. He searched her memory and found the moment Zexion was talking about.

“He’s always reading books! I can’t stand it! He never looks away from it!”

“You’re right Imani,” some other girl said. “he’s shallow.”

“Heck no! He’s so dreamy! I just wish he would look up to see me gazing at him… but he never has time for me… only his books, I’m jealous of those books… as much as I love to read he has a love for books and not girls… mainly me…”

Benjie opened his eyes from what he saw, it was a whole misunderstanding. They were misunderstanding each other and that was keeping them apart. Benjie smiled and walked over to Zexion, “Dude, it’s a whole misunderstanding.”

“What are you talking about?”

“She’s crushing on you big time and you miss understood what she said.” Benjie touched Zexion’s head and gave him the memory he received from Imani. “See?”

Zexion grinned, “I always loved her golden eyes… I always figured they were good at catching interesting things. And I figured she had an eye for books too… maybe I should give her a chance… if she likes books.”

Benjie sighed, “Please?”

Zexion faced Benjie, “I mind as well, I did always think she was cute, she’s so clumsy.”

Benjie smiled, “Thanks, you’re doing a nice thing.”

“I’m generally nice I just don’t get involved too much.”

Benjie rolled his eyes, “Introverts… they’re boring.”

“You’re a mix of introverts and extroverts, so you’re no better really.” Benjie groaned. Zexion walked off and went to Imani. He gave her a cute smile with his eyes closed while tilting his head, “Imani?” Imani turned and faced him. She swallowed and blushed. “Would you like to read with me?” he said. Imani nodded her head and they walked off and Zexion looked over his shoulder and mouthed out “Thank you.” When he turned back around Imani did the same with a warm smile.

Benjie grinned, he felt better that he helped out, even though his relationship was destroyed. Benjie sighed, he wasn’t in a rush to get home now, not with Crystal hating him and all.

Benjie opened a corridor and closed it behind him as he flopped on the bed.
 
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Aww....cuteness....and EEEEEEP!!!! *girlish squeal* Zexion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i wonder whats gonna happen with crystal and benjie though....
 

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Oh boy, teenagers, they just have some of the worst problems, but that's okay because it gives me something to laugh at /jk. Hooray, Zexion is in the picture!!! He is my absolute favorite Organization member. I also like Tundra and Ninja's daughter, Imani; she seems really cute, but she is a bit clumsy. So, how in the world is Benjie going to fix things with him and Crystal. This doesn't look like he can just explain this whole situation away, even with Imani's help. Well, I guess only time will tell. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
 

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Here you go! the last and final chapter of my triogly ^^ I'm glad you all enjoyed my story!

I have worked hard over the course of I think two years... maybe only a few months and I worked hard regardless, my goal was to please the general public with a story that wasn't filled with cursing, sex and graphic deal of death. I captured understanding, surprise, cliffhangers, drama, romance, comedy (to some level) and action well according to my fans. I'm glad you guys enjoyed my work and all I ask is that you leave a reply on my page ^^ That's all. I hope you enjoy this last chapter and I hope you guys are encouraged to write your own stories or even to try to reach your own goals.

Enough of my rambling, I hope you enjoy my last chapter! Thank you my fans! Thank you!

Enjoy!

Part Six
Benjie and Crystal
Ch. 5

‘Benjie your late… and you snuck out.’ Riku came went into Benjie’s mind.

‘Sorry Dad… I was…’

‘Don’t explain, regardless you’re grounded.’

‘Dad… listen… I… I…’

“Alright, talk to me.” Riku said opening the door and sitting on Benjie’s bed.

“But won’t Mom hear us?”

“She can’t read my mind and if you don’t want her to read your mind you have to stop thinking about whatever you’re doing.”

“Alright…”

“So what’s up?” Riku asked.

Benjie remembering what his father said spat out everything in one shot. “Yesterday I went over see Crystal and we were alone and I ended up kissing her and spilling my heart to her and it turns out that she loved me and I left and I promised I’d come back and I end up kissing Tundra’s daughter and Crystal was there to see it and I helped Imani get the guy she wanted and-”

“Whoa, hold on, you kissed Crystal and then less than twenty four hours later kiss another girl? Son, what the heck is wrong with you?”

“Dad, Tundra’s daughter is clumsy, she tripped and landed on me and that’s how we kissed.”

Riku raised an eyebrow and then chuckled, “I think you shouldn’t tell her parents that one.”

“If she hasn’t told them already.”

“Ouch, you’re right. Doki’s going to kill you.” Benjie didn’t laugh with his dad. “Right, anyway, um… you’re just going to have to tell her.”

Benjie folded his legs (Indian style) and lowered his head. “She thinks I kissed Imani…”

Riku gazed off to the door and then at Benjie, “I did something worse before I married your mom, she’ll forgive you.”

Benjie looked up, “What did you do?”

Riku sighed, “I slept with my ex before I admitted my love for your mom.”

Benjie was wide eyed. “Dad… you did?”

“Yeah, and what’s worse she found out before she admitted her love to me.”

Benjie lowered his head but kept his eyes on his dad, “Whoa… your ex… was she…”

“Raven was alone and tired and sad… I couldn’t turn her away and I was alone too…”

Benjie was wide eyed. “Crystal’s mom!”

Riku sighed, “Yeah,” he said.

Benjie tried to keep his faces from twitching, he couldn’t believe his dad was once with Raven. “Um… Dad… I’ll go to see her in the morning to talk to her… is that okay?”

Riku nodded, “Okay, and if you’re going to run away at least tell me, your mom will fight you down to the ground to keep you from running off. But I’ll at least try to give you a chance… if you tell me.”

“So am I now not grounded?”

“Well, if your mom finds out yes, for me you’re off the hook.”

Benjie smiled. “Thanks dad.”

“No prob… sleep tight and go off to see her tomorrow,” Riku left the bed and closed the door behind him.

Benjie sighed and turned out the lights and went to sleep.

The next day Benjie woke and rubbed his head. He had a headache. Benjie got dressed and ran down stairs. He kissed his mom on the cheek and waved to his dad. “Benjie, where are you going?”

“I’m going to Doki’s place, Mom,” Benjie answered her. And before his mom could read his mind he opened a corridor and was gone.

Mai looked at Riku and Riku shrugged and turned back to the cooking.

Benjie arrived at the Old Mansion. He swallowed. He had to tell his true love that everything that happened was an accident. He knocked on the door and waited.

After waiting for a good ten minutes the door opened. “Oh crap…” Benjie started to turn away but was pulled back by his collar.

“YOU…” Doki had an evil deep voice.

“Doki listen, I swear I didn’t mean to do anything to her! I swear! It was all an accident!”

Doki pulled the frightened Benjie in. As he pulled him in, Benjie whined like a dog. “You hurt my daughter’s heart. Now… I’m going to break you…”

Benjie whined louder. “Babe, let him go, let’s at least hear his side of the story first, he’s our best friends’ son, let’s hear him out first before we cast him out,” Raven came to Benjie’s rescue and calmed Doki down… a little. Benjie was thrown on the sofa and Doki flopped down on the opposite chair waiting and drumming his fingers. “Alright, Benjie, we’re listening.”

Benjie sighed and explained what happened. “Tundra?” Doki asked.

“Yeah, her daughter is clumsy and she tripped and that’s how we ended up kissing, I couldn’t hurt Crystal… not like that,” Benjie cried. “I know it sounds fake, I know it sounds made up but that’s what happened.”

Doki groaned, “I believe you… but she’s really hurt.”

Benjie nodded. “I wanted to tell her that it wasn’t… I wasn’t two timing her, I could never do that…”

“Alright, I’ll go get her. Benjie stay here,” Raven stood from the chair and left to go get Crystal. Raven went up the left set of stairs on the left side of the first room and went into Crystal’s room. Raven came back with Crystal. “Babe, Benjie has something to say to you.”

Crystal looked at Benjie from the stairs. “Crystal, I swear I didn’t kiss Imani, it was an accident.”

“How can I believe that? You boys are all the same! You boys can easily jump from one girl to the next without any regret or remorse as long as you’re not caught!”

“But…” Benjie’s eyes of red and ice blue were filled with tears. He looked up into her hazel and green eyes. “I swear…”

Crystal turned away, “Benjie, I never want to see you again.”

Benjie whined like a dog and then he howled as his body slowly transformed into a dog. He continued to whine and he started to walk away… on all fours, and walked towards the door. Benjie’s clothes were left where he was kneeling and he was near the door when Crystal ran to him.

“Crystal, you should give him a chance, him transforming means he’s really down. I don’t think he’ll go through this much trouble if he did do something,” Raven said. She glared at Doki, waiting for him to help in some way.

Crystal looked at small dog. He continued to whine and weep. “Benjie…”

Benjie sat in the corner of the room once clawing at the door didn’t work. Doki groaned. “Crystal, sweetie, I think Benjie’s telling the truth,” Crystal looked at her dad. “Look you’re worried about him, if you truly don’t believe him you shouldn’t show affection.”

“Dad… you’re right, Benjie hasn’t lied to me before… even when he could have lied to me he hasn’t…” Crystal sighed. She walked over to the small dog and picked him up, Benjie, although very sad and upset didn’t snap at her, he just whined as she held him. “Benjie, it’s okay.”

Poof!

Crystal waved away the smoke. When she looked at Benjie she saw his him human ice blue and red eyes. “Benjie?” Crystal said holding him.

“Crystal…” Benjie said. “I’ll never hurt you again,” there was a laugh from the group. “What, I mean it! I’ll never hurt you again Crystal.”

The group laughed. “Benjie, you’re going to need to put your clothes on…” Crystal said.

Benjie looked down and saw that his… growing manhood was exposed along with the rest of his body. Benjie turned hot red and quickly got his clothes and vanished into the bathroom.

~Later~

When all was settle Benjie and Crystal sat with their parents. Benjie and Crystal held hands and waited for their parents response. Benjie was worried that his parents would be ticked off. Raven and Doki sat waiting. Zexion and Imani were there too.

But Benjie and Crystal stared surprised as Mai and Riku let out a laugh.

“You two were made for each other, weren’t you?!” Mai laughed. “Benjie,” she said with a sigh, “I’m happy for you but you shouldn’t go into Heart Haven like that. You are a prince and I don’t know who’s a friend or not, so you have to be with me when you go or at least tell me.”

Benjie stared amazed. “Okay… but what do you think about me and Crystal dating?”

“Well,” Riku sighed, “I’m cool with it but you guys can’t go sneaking out.”

“Really?! You’re okay with it?!”

“Why wouldn’t we be?” Mai asked.

Zexion rested his elbows on his knees, “He figured that with all the mess that happened last night you’d guys would be against it.”

“Hm… I see,” Mai nodded. “Zexion, I’m glad you’re alive too, being that you’re around I need you to organize and read books in the royal library.”

“Saix told me already, but I’ll gladly do it.”

“Alright, good. Well, it’s settled. You guys can date… no sneaking out and be home by ten on weekends and on week days be home by eight thirty. And if your grades drop at all I will have you, Benjie, will be grounded in Heart Haven for a long long time.”

Benjie swallowed. He understood clearly that although he’d be in Heart Haven for maybe a week it wasn’t the same amount of time in the Human realm so he’d be without Crystal for maybe thousands of weeks… if not months. “Got it…” he nodded.

Mai smiled. “Doki?”

Doki grinned at Mai, closed his eyes and leaned forward to Crystal, “Listen, I love you but don’t think I won’t have a field day with your punishment either. I’ll send you to live with Tundra, and we all know how she’s strict.”

Crystal swallowed, grinning, “Yeah, Dad, I got it.” She nodded.

“Riku?” Doki turned to him.

“Benjie, no contact until you’re both married. Got it?”

Benjie nodded, “Yeah, Dad.”

“Good, Raven?”

Raven nodded to Riku. “Crystal, don’t try to provoke him.”

Crystal rolled her eyes. “Yeah, like I’d do that.”

Raven narrowed her eyes, “Crystal, if I know anything in this world is that you learn how to control people, and you get that from me.”

“Got it.” Crystal said with a nod.

“Well, that’s that.” Mai smiled.

Riku stood. “Well, I guess this is done now.”

“Yeah,” Doki stood. He met Riku’s gaze. “So are we going to donate the money or what?”

“I want to, we have too much left over as it is…” Mai, Riku, Raven and Doki left the room and left the teens alone.

“Well, thank you Benjie,” Imani grinned.

“You didn’t keep your side of the deal, Imani,” Benjie said.

“Oh… right…” Imani blushed. “How should I repay you?”

Benjie grinned, “Just be our friend.” Benjie wrapped his arm around Crystal’s shoulders.

Crystal sighed and rested her head on Benjie’s shoulder. Zexion smiled and stood, “C’mon, I gotta get home.”

“That’s right, Saix is your ‘dad’. Okay, I’ll go with you.” Imani said. “See ya Benjie and Crystal, I’ll see you soon.”

“See ya… I wonder what they were talking about donations and stuff,” Crystal said.

Benjie grinned, “They’re planning to donate millions of dollars to a ‘stop starvation drive’, so they’re basically going to feed a lot of mouths and this is coming right of their pockets.”

“It pays to read minds. You’re lucky.”

“You’re right.” Benjie pulled her into a kiss. “I love you.”

“I love you too…” she kissed him again.

~And they all lived… in some cases… happily ever after~

A/N: Again thank you for reading! But if you have any questions please leave them on my page. All replies please leave on my page, that's all I ask. Thank you for reading! It was nice pleasing your eyes and minds with a fanfic that was- not only orignial- but good for any age or gender. I'm glad I wrote something that people were able to read and feel like it was an actual book.

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That was AWESOME!!! I really loved that ending. I am just really glad that everything worked out in the end, especially with Crystal and Benjie and Imani and Zexion. I so loved Doki's reaction to Benjie at the door; that was funny. I also liked it when Benjie turned into a dog and then turned back with no clothes on; almost fell out of the chair laughing. One question, when Imani said that Saix was Zexion's 'dad', what did she mean by that? Did you mean like Saix is some kind of guardian to Zexion? I mean, I can understand the whole guardian thing, if that is waht you mean, but I was confused when you said dad because Saix isn't that much older than Zexion, well, at least to me. Anyway, great job on the stories.
 

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Aw thaty was cute with benjie turning into a small dog.
Still can't beleive it's over.
aw well, still was a good read.
 
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