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Naruto: Pain Lives On (A NextGen RP) (OOC Thread)



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Meilin

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Back from Holiday! ^_^

Forever Lost, THE TEMPLATE.

NoMorals, I like your character. Just two things though: Metal doesn't have chakra..... AND YOU NEED TO USE THE TEMPLATE!
Jeez, guys....

RoxasXII, you are denied for not following the rules the first time.

Shadows Fall, you are approved. ^_^

Zetsumi, that makes much more sense. Please just edit that into your template.

Seigfried: I like your character, (i'm a big Anko fangirl at heart) but your spelling is killing me right here, where my heart should be.

Yes, strpies, I feel like no one is taking advantage of Sand. T_T This makes Mei-chan a saaaaad puppy....


Teams as i'm planning them thus far:
Konoha Teams:
Team 5 - Hyuuga Meilin, Caleb Motokorey, & _____
Chuunin Team 2 - Kyosuke Kagami, Inuzuka Arani, & Tsurugu Mitarashi

Sand Teams:
Team 4 - Amazila Violi, Inchina Syria, & _______

Other Ninja:
Mahistrado Kaparusahan - Haze, Ally of Leaf
Zetsumi Yakushi - Former Sound

If anyone has a problem, let me know ASAP.
 

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Wut? My temp? Is it because I have too many techniques? Help me out here. My history seems okay. If its about the Bloodline Limit, it has no relation with Kyuubi, despite the name. Gah, just tell me, I'm stuck in a loop D:
 
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You didn't follow the template I put UP.
God, that's like Basic Rping 101. What, did no one teach you people the basic manners of Roleplay when we all left?
 

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Kyuubi

Name: Uchiha Itachi
Partner and Race: Uchiha Ryu - Wolf
Preferred Teammates: N/A
Village: Hidden Leaf
Rank: Chunnin
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Parents: Uchiha Sasuke and Haruno Sakura

Appearance: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y262/eternaldragon_bjd/uchiha.jpg

Personality: Itachi is a calm character. Never one to lose his cool, Itachi takes life easy. He is a sarcastic person, always having a smart remark ready as a come back. The rest is somewhat of a mystery, he rarely let’s people know what his true intentions are.

And there is one thing Itachi is very serious about. Never mess with his village, never mock it for Uchiha Itachi loves his village and would do anything for it. His father instilled this love in him a long time ago, and he had vowed that he would always defend it.

Bio: Sasuke named his son after his brother for an unknown reason. When born, Itachi had a 10% percent chance of living because of the curse mark on his body but, he survived. Sasuke knew of the cursed mark so, he decided to train his son to utilize it and to use his sharingan better then any Uchiha could. Itachi grew up training all the time and never really having fun with others. He learned the chidori in only two minutes when it took Sasuke a whole day to learn the chidori.

Itachi became a chunnin when his eight, making his father very proud of him. There was one thing that Itachi had left to acheive and that was to get the Magenkyou Sharingan. It is said that you must kill your best friend to acheive it and besides Renzaku, a boy named Kaze was Itachi's other best friend. Kaze was a troubled child and his mind was on the break of a mental breakdown. Finally one day Kaze went crazy, killing his mother, brother, and father, leaving Itachi the only person left around him. Through a long, hard fought battle, Itachi killed Kaze with the chidori. Upon killing Kaze, the magenkyou sharingan formed in his eyes.

That was about seven years ago and since then Itachi has made it a habit of barely having friends. He has only befriended Uzumaki Renzaku and Hyuuga Meilin. As of now Itachi is traning to become stronger.

Jutsu:

Fire Element, Phoenix Fire (Katon Housenka no Jutsu) - A technique where the user blows multiple fire balls from his mouth. It can also be combined with throwing weapons, which creates weapons engulfed in flames.

Fire Dragon jutsu - Itachi does several hand symbols and ends on lion. Itachi then forms his mouth in the shape of a O and shoots out a beam of fire which takes the form of a dragon. The dragon then attacks the opponent.

Lightning Edge (Raikiri (Chidori)) - A secret move for assassination purposes. Its secret lies in the speed of the thrust, and the activation of the body to generate a large amount of Chakra. He then concentrates that large amount into the thrusting arm and rushes towards the opponent. This ability causes the body to speed up, and therefore making the attack more deadly. It emits a distinct chirping sound similar to a thousand birds (=Chidori) chirping. It's Kakashi's only original move, and it's said that he once cut through lightning with it, hence its alias: Lightning Edge. Since straight movement is easily countered by the opponent, it's used in combination with the Sharingan.

Cursed Seal of Hell - This seal consists of four tomoe, unlike the Sharingan. It is the counterpart to the Cursed Seal of Heaven, and is the strongest cursed seal then the ones Orochimaru originally created. His cursed mark sits on the back of his left shoulder. The first level has black marks spread over the left half and left arm of Itachi, giving him incredible power. The second level has the marks spread over his whole face. He starts to become more enraged and merciless in this level. Itachi has yet to unlike the third level. He gained this curse mark from his father because the cursed mark had lived inside Sasuke blood and flowed into Itachi when Sakura was impregnated.

Mangekyo Sharingan - The Mangekyo Sharingan is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyo Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. However, unlike the Sharingan, it may have a different appearance between the users, as Kakashi's version is significantly different than Itachi's. Those who have the potential to obtain it must make a great sacrifice in order to obtain it – according to Itachi, they must kill their best friend. Use of the Mangekyo Sharingan may deteriorate the user's normal eyesight.

Sharingan (Sharingan) - A pupil born technique, which allows the user to do to a large number of things. The Sharingan's first and most well known ability is to memorize any technique that it is a witness to, as well as register the movements of opponents. Second, it is able to hypnotize the opponent, giving an advantage to the user. It can also suggest movements to the hypnotized brain, and 'see through' any illusionary technique. Although it is a powerfull jutsu, it consumes a lot of chakra. The power of the Sharingan is judged through the amount of dots in the person's eye.

Sharingan-Controlled Triple Windmill Blades (Sofuushasen no Tachi) - Performed while using the Sharingan. Uses thin strings attached to many shuriken, kunai, etc. that the throw wraps around the opponent and renders them immobile. The Sharingan is used to find vital points in the opponents movement, and throw the kunai in the right location to trap them in strings. Usually followed up by another stronger jutsu.

Illusionary Underworld Moon (Tsukiyomi) - A special technique that can only be used by the Uchiha clan who posses the Mange Sharingan. The technique creates an illusion which can reflect on the past or just create an illusion where Itachi does to the target whatever he wants (ex. stick swords into the enemy's body over and over again). This technique is used to attack the opponents mind and destroy his/her spirit. The events which go on in the Tsukiyomi are translated into 3 days (72 hours), while in reality only 3 seconds pass. 72 hours seems to be Itachi's limit with the illusion. This attack is another strain causer on the Itachi and if used more then once, it can tire him out.

Lion Combo (Shishi Rendan) - A series of powerful punches and kicks, finished by knocking the opponent into the ground. Itachi learned this from his father after Sasuke used it on Itachi.

Shadow Shuriken (Kage Shuriken no Jutsu) - A technique which places a second shuriken in the shadow of a first (thrown) shuriken, confusing the enemy.

Lion Wisdom (Inketsu no jutsu) - Itachi must have the his mange sharingan activated to use this ninjutsu. Meru first watches his opponents hands as his opponent does hand symbols. Itachi begins to do the same hand symbols except he must end on a different symbol. Several clones are then created and they do the same move that opponent is doing except it is way stronger. While that attack is happening, Itachi is using the chidori to attack the opponent.

Shadow clones (Kage bunshin no jutsu) - Unlike the regular bunshin no jutsu, Kage bunshin creates real clones, not just illusions. The power and chakra of the user is evenly distributed among the clones depending how many there are. This makes it impossible to decipher which is the real body. This clone can also attack. If this clone recieves a direct hit, it will disappear. This is treated as a forbidden jutsu but many advanced shinobi still know it. It is mainly a jounin level technique. Itachi learned this jutsu while watching Zaku with his sharigan.

Rairou no Jutsu (Thunder Prison):
This jutsu is similar to the Mist Village’s Suirou no Jutsu, but different still. The user charges a large amount of chakra into one of their hands in the form of what looks like an electrical cylinder. The one necessity within this jutsu, though, is that the user must make complete contact with the opponent with an open-palmed attack, thus releasing the electrical cylinder around the opponent. Once surrounded in the literal electric prison, a constant amount of chakra is discharged into it, keeping the opponent from escaping. Another occurrence within this jutsu is that when a victim is caught within this prison it releases slight shocks every 30 seconds which disrupt the user’s ability to react properly. The major drawback of this jutsu, however, is that extreme skill in chakra control is needed to keep the prison up. If at any given point, even in a split second, the constant flow of chakra is disrupted, then the jutsu is dispelled.

Raiton Chuuki (Thunder Paralysis)
(Uses Raiun no Jutsu):
The opponent sees a flash of lightning in the distance, brilliant and bold. Immediately after this, the opponent is frozen in place, and cannot move their body. There are two drawbacks to this. If the opponent does not see the flash of lightning created by the Genjutsu, it will not effect them. Also, if the opponent falls asleep or passes out in this state, then the paralysis will immediately disappear.

Ikazuchi Kakyaku (Thunder Legs taijutsu):
This taijutsu emphasizes mainly on powerful kicks and jumping attacks. The only thing the arms are used for are for handstands, blocking, and to grab on to trees. Speed has a major role to play in this style. Especially since this style is very offensive, the only thing you really have to defend against enemy attacks is speed. Also flexibility and balance are incredibly important for this style. A lot of work has gone into this, constantly learning how to keep one balanced to be able to work on any terrain.


Name: Uzumaki Renzaku (Zaku for short)
Partner and Race: N/A
Preferred Teammates: Uchiha Itachi
Village: Hidden Leaf
Rank: Genin
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Parents: Uzumaki Naruto and Hyuuga Hinata

Appearance: Zaku is an average height of 5'7" and has an athletic build. His hair is of a golden yellow. It looks like Naruto's hair except there is a long, spikey ponytail at the end of his hair. His eyes are white because of the fact that he has the byakugan in his eye. He has the Konoha headband loosely tied around his neck. He wears a black t-shirt with a silver japanese dragon design. He wears blue jean shorts with the Konoha symbol on them. On his feet are Hi-top sneakers with the words Konoha in green on the side. He wears black fingerless gloves on his hands with the konoha symbol on the back of them. He carries a red handled katana on his back and has a small silver case on left leg where he carries his kunai and other stuff. Zaku's clothes are made of a material that allows him easier chakra control, and allows his massive chakra to flow easier without killing him.

Personality: Zaku is a laid-back but, cocky bastard that can't help but, love to fight. He's confident no matter what situation he is in and he never gives up. He's not afraid to fight anyone. His determination and aggresiveness get's him through every situation.

Bio: Zaku was born the son of Uzumaki Naruto and Hyuuga Hinata. He had also been born with the Byakugan in his eyes and the ten tail demon fox inside of him by the name of Kyuuni. No one knows where the demon comes from but, it was probably the work of the Kyuubi inside Naruto. When Zaku was born, the Kyuubi gave Zaku half of it's own power in hopes of helping Zaku become the next hokage. But, something went wrong inside of Zaku and the Kyuubi's power began to mutate because of a poison that Hinata had in her body that had been slowly killing her for a year now. This poison was tranferred into Zaku and it mixed with the Kyuubi's power creating an alternate power taking the form of a demon that called itelf the Kyuuni.

Zaku grew up like an everyday ninja should. He trained all the time with his father and mother. His mother being stronger at taijutsu, trained Zaku in the ways of taijutsu which helped him create his own taijutsu. Zaku was a quick learner when it came to Naruto teaching Zaku different genjutsus and ninjutsus. Naruto even taught on how to use his demon chakra and change into each tailed form of his demon. Zaku was shaping up to become a great ninja.

Good thing for Zaku that he is Hinata's son making him part of the main branch. He does not have to worry about the Hyuuga seal being put on his forehead. Zaku has even learned from his grandfather on how to activate the seals that were placed on the second branch. Zaku enjoys spending time with his cousin Meilin, his brother Kimari, and his best friend Itachi. Zaku has developed a crush for Inuzuka Arani and he tries his hardest to get her to like him. Right now Zaku is currently working on making his Rasengan stronger and controlling the Kyuuni better.

Jutsus:

Rasengan (Rasengan) - The user swirls the air in there hand into a sphere, and mold it with Chakra. They then attack the opponent with it, which will usally cause them to go flying backwords, spinning around. Sometimes the attack will burn the opponent where they are hit by it

Kyuuni Rasengan - This rasengan is similar to the regular one except it charges Kyuuni chakra into the Rasengaon which allows for a more powerful Rasengan.

Blue Flash - This is the rival to the Yellow Flash jutsu. Zaku created this jutsu after his father Naruto had taught him a part of the Yellow Flash jutsu. It is basically the Yellow Flash jutsu except with a blue flash and it is faster then the Yellow Flash thanks to the addition of the kyuuni's chakra.

Byakugan (Byakugan )- Byakugan, one of the Bloodline Limits the Hyuuga clan possesses. It’s a jutsu activated in the eyes, much like the Sharingan. But if we look at its ability of insight alone, it exceeds the sharingan. This jutsu allows the user's vision to see a full 360 degrees. Byakugan also has the ability to view the inner coil system of a person's body, and in advanced cases, the chakra holes. Because of this, Byakugan is used in combination with Hyuuga’s Style Taijutsu. Attacking the inner organs, disabling or even killing their opponent, without even hitting them.

Divination Field, 64 Strikes (Hakke Rokujuu Yonshou) - Using a highly advanced form of Byakugan, the user is able to see the chakra holes on a person's body. And by using Hyuuga’s Taijutsu Style, he then closes all main chakra holes with quick blows, stopping the flow of chakra through one's body. It also works with Zaku's taijutsu style.

Dragon Shadow taijutsu - This is Zaku's own created jutsu. This taijutsu is heavy on speed, and counter attacks to do massive damage. It utilizes chakra in each part of the body to give more strength to each blow. With the help of the Byakugan, this taijutsu is one of the better taijutsus.

Wind Mirrors Jutsu - Zaku copied this jutsu from Haku. He does the hand symbol's horse, lion, bear, wolf, and dragon. Then the wind starts to blow and create mirrors. When enemies try to attack these mirrors, their attacks are thrown right back at them. There is no way of getting through them unless you are able to stop the wind from blowing or, is able to stop Zaku from making the wind blow.

Shadow clones (Kage bunshin no jutsu) - Unlike the regular bunshin no jutsu, Kage bunshin creates real clones, not just illusions. The power and chakra of the user is evenly distributed among the clones depending how many there are. This makes it impossible to decipher which is the real body. This clone can also attack. If this clone recieves a direct hit, it will disappear. This is treated as a forbidden jutsu but many advanced shinobi still know it. It is mainly a jounin level technique.

Transformation skill (Henge no jutsu) - A basic shinobi skill. Transforms the user into another different appearance. Whether they transform into another person or turn into a material thing such as a shuriken, doesn't matter.

All Direction, High Volume(many) Shuriken Firing (Zaku Ninpocho, Shihou Hapou Shuriken no Maki) - Technique created by Naruto which follows Kage Bunshin no Jutsu. The Clones throw shuriken from all directions, creating a devastating attack.

Uzumaki Zaku 2000 Combo (Uzumaki Zaku Nisen Rendan) - Similar to the normal Uzumaki Naruto Rendan, it just uses a larger amount of clones, producing more damage. Also comes in the 'Yonsen Rendan', which referes to the number 4000, simply means : more clones.

Uzumaki Zaku Combo (Uzumaki Zaku Rendan) - Naruto's version of Sasuke's Shishi Rendan. It's used in combination with the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu.

Lashing Air - Creating a sort of vacuum by molding chakra and the air(sort of like Rasengan), but instead of a ball form, a disk type form. a Disc per hand that has a vacuum of high pressured air inside. Once an enemy enters the vacuum, they will be lashed heavily. The cut will pull air out of ones body leaving them fatigued. A large amount of chakra is used in this jutsu.

Iyashi koubou no jutsu - Absorbs light from a light source and releases it as a beam, restoring health to the target. It can heal minor and major injuries and fatigue. It takes up some chakra.

Body Shot:
Zaku again places his hands to his sides, and charges chakra into his palms. He then charges at the opponent, and thrusts his palms into the opponents stomach. Chakra is forced out of the opponents back, and at the point of the attack. The opponent flies back 5ft, and from the force of the chakra becomes stunned. The attack doesn’t create a giant hole in the opponent; the chakra is just forced out the users back. The chakra itself forces the wind out the opponent, which causes the opponent to have to recuperate for a couple minutes. The attack itself isn’t very dangerous it just provides Zaku with an attack opportunity.

Spin Cycle:
Zaku places his hands at his side, and charges chakra into his palms. The chakra creates a force, and Zaku charges at the opponent. He then thrusts his palm into the opponent’s upper-left shoulder. The force of the chakra causes the opponent to spin to the left uncontrollable. After the opponent starts spinning Zaku positions himself for the next attack. Zaku then thrusts his other palm into the opponent’s upper-right back. The force of the combined chakra mingling in the opponent’s body causes them into an upward-swirling wind. The opponent flies 20ft sky into the sky in a spiraling motion, and hits the ground with quite some force.

Rikarage no jutsu: With this jutsu, the user must focus jutsu so that it is enough for a mass amount. The user then slams his fist on the ground, and sheilds made of rock slam around the user, with no hope of an opponent breaking it.

Flagio no jutsu: Known as the "Immortal Flame." When the user uses this jutsu, huge flames are shot, which can't be put out any way, but with water. The flames will keep burning on and on.

Hauringu Kunai No Jutsu - This jutsu was made by Zaku. The user combines the Rasengan with a kunai and he throws it at the opponent. As it flies toward the opponent a howling sound can be heard which hurts the opponents ears.

Tsunami Fukyuu Takai No Jutsu - This jutsu uses alot of chakra and there must be alot water present. Zaku first makes several hand signs and ends on bear. then water rises and creates a gigantic tidal wave. The tidal wave then comes down upon the opponent and crushes them. This jutsu can also hurt Zaku if he is not careful.
 
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Other than that or....I'd better not say it would be insulting and Meilin I can't spell worth crud I had the worst grades in spelling ever

Then run your posts through Microsoft word first. ^^

Reckless Chaos, even though it disgusts me that Sasuke would name his kid after his brother *EWWWWWWWWW inserted here* That is not what concerns me.
What concerns me is why the hell Sakura and Sasuke would move to Sunagakure. Also, some of your syntax is jsut plain wrong. -_- Again, this is the Grammar Nazi in me. If you can explain just those to me, i'll put Itachi in Meilin's team and that'll be that.

As far as your Uzumaki character, it irks me that you did not even think that byakugan=white eyes. No exceptions. It also irks me that you didn't even explain this demon. You do realize, that there are only 9 (tailed-type) demons for a reason right? It's an old legend.

Other than that, I like your characters. I particularly like the fact that you actaully LITSENED when I said to work your characters around others, so you're in. ^_^



Dear god i'm getting picky. XP
 
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