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Naruto: Pain Lives On (A NextGen RP) (OOC Thread)



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Naruto: Pain Lives On (A NextGen RP)

Nearly thirty years after Suna and Konoha were broght to the brink of war by Orochimaru, peace in the Village Hidden in the Leaves has been restored. The Sixth Hokage, Naruto Uzumaki, and the Fifth Kazekage, Gaara of the Desert, have brought a forced peace to the small shinobi lands around them. The many small nations keep quiet to avoid the fate of the former Country of Sound, now a part of the Land of Fire.

Of course, it is to be expected that not all is as peaceful outside the village walls. The other shinobi lands feel threatened by Konoha and Suna’s seemingly unbreakable alliance. The Land of Lightning in particular feels that it’s survival is made more difficult by the allied Lands of Wind and Fire.

Even within the villages, some tensions are high. Though Naruto has tried to change the clans in Konoha, some clans still feud internally. Many clans feud with rival clans in other nations, INCLUDING Suna.

This tension may soon burst into clan wars within and between the villages. But while clans war internally, can the villages stave off the war-mongering nations outside their alliance?


Rules:
1: ONLY 2 UCHIHA. I do not want an RP full of Sasuke wannabes!
2: No Godmoding
3: No Powerplaying
4: Be Literate! Spelling and Grammar are your friends!
5: You may play as many characters as you can handle, but if you take on too much, I may ask you to give some up.
6: Children of old characters should be between Ten and Seventeen years of age, as a guideline.
7: If you REALLY want to, you can play one of the shows’ characters that isn’t dead yet.
8: I reserved the right to ask you to change your character for any reason.
9: Try to balance out the set of characters so I don’t have to ask people to change their characters. I don’t want a bazillion jonin, or all Leaf Villagers, or all girls, understand?
10: Try to make sure that your character doesn’t clash with another. For example, saying you’re Sasuke’s only child with Sakura if someone else says they’re his child with Hinata.
11: Post your template in the OOC thread, and put the password ‘Kyuubi’ at the top of your templates.

You’ll notice that I left a lot of details open-ended in order to give you as much freedom with your characters as possible. I’ll edit it some as we go on.

If you need help with characters, I can help you if you PM me.

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Parents: (If they’re from the series)
Appearance:
Personality:
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Character 1:
Name: Inuzuka Arani
Partner and Race: Sasuna - Puppy
Preferred Teammates: N/A
Village: Konoha
Rank: Chuunin
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Parents: Inuzuka Kiba and Tenten
Appearance: Arani
Personality/Bio: Arani is a daddy’s girl to the core. Like her father, she has a cocky attitude and an ego the size of Konoha Village itself. She loves to talk, and has a tendency to do so a lot, much to her teammates chagrin. Despite the personality flaws, she is a confident, charismatic leader and is good at inspiring her team to work their hardest.

Arani treasures her father above all other people. She lost her mother to a border skirmish when she was very young, so she (regretfully) knows very little about her. Her mother left her a present for the day she became a genin, something Kiba found typical of his late wife. The present was an intricately crafted katana, something Arani has deeply treasured.

Kiba has done his best as a father, but Arani’s need for a female role model has made her very close to Tenten and her daughter Meilin. Although Arani and Meilin are almost opposites, they get along fairly well.

Arani spent most of her academy days learning Inuzuka clan jutsu from Kiba. She and Sasuna spent more time chasing Akamaru around than actually training, though. At the moment, Arani is attempting to master the Konoha Crescent Moon Dance, so she being a bit lax on her training with Kiba.


Character 2:
Name: Hyuuga Meilin
Partner and Race: N/A
Preferred Teammates: N/A
Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Parents: Hyuuga Neji & TenTen
Appearance: Meilin
Personality/Bio: Meilin is quiet and calm; the peak of decorum the majority of the time. She socializes well in formal settings and is very diplomatic, but in more informal gatherings she has trouble speaking up. She is often a wallflower, waiting for others to ask her opinion as though she doesn’t believe she should speak until spoken to. She is also a hard worker, frequently taking on the duties of an entire group. For this reason, she was often taken advantage of at the ninja academy. It also causes her an exceptional amount of stress, as she is a perfectionist prone to obsessing over inconsequential details.

Partially, this is because of her relatives. Although the Hyuuga have not branded the youngest branch members despite the age of their young heir, the main branch of the family still look down upon the other branches.

Due to this, Neji raised his daughter verrrrrry strictly, so that she would never give the main branch reason to brand her. Meilin, however, does not know this, nor does she understand why her father forbids her to socialize with the main branch heir outside of the few ceremonies where both their presences are required. She doesn’t understand why her father is so protective of her, but she does not rebel against his restrictions. This timid and obedient nature has kept her at the genin level for two years.

She has discovered that although her eyes see almost as well as her fathers, she has little else of the innate Hyuuga talents. She has had to work very hard to master the gentle fist style taijutsu. Fortunately, it is in her nature to work hard at everything. She has inherited some of her mother’s touch with throwing weapons and is trying to learn to use her Byakugan to increase her accuracy.

Character 3: (In-Progress)
Name: Amazila Violi
Partner and Race: Azula - Prairie Falcon
Preferred Teammates: N/A
Village: Suna
Rank: Chuunin
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Parents: N/A
Appearance:
Personality:
Bio:
 
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Name: Night

Partner and Race: Kari-cat

Preferred Teammates: She doesn't want any, but if she has to one

Village: Kiri-Nin

Rank: Rookie

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Appearance: http://www.advancedanime.com/displayimage.php?pid=155774, her eyes change color depends on how she feels

Personality: She is a shy kind of teen, she never speaks up for herself. She is also a soft hearted kind of girl, basicly when you become her friend you'll be asking if she's an angel, because that is how she is towards her friends. She hides her emotions because she thinks that if someone saw her crying they would think she is weak. But the thing that no one understand is that she is really romantic, but she doesn't want anyone. She is always a dreamer. Has a refreshing personality she's nice, listens to common sense, and is always thinking about everyone when things get rough. She is thought to be the outsider in her school, but she is just shy. Her friends don't even understand her,but let's hope after this is done her friends will understand her. She is willing to put her life on the line to keep the ones she cares about safe. She is also quiet,so friends do get worried. She doesn't trust people that easy, people call her alone wolf which is true.

Bio: She is rather mature for her age, a friend of hers moved away when she was four, so you can see her looking out at the ocean by herself since then, but she does talk every once in awhile.When she gets home from school she has dinner then she passes out on her bed. She lost her parents when she was six years old. So she has been by herself ever since then. She doesn't like it when people bother her because of how her life has been. She love it when people forget she's there unless she wants them to know. She is a outsider in it comes to her school. She is a total mysterious, she doesn't tell someone if something if troubling her; instead she plays her flute to take care of it. She was always picked on because of her cat ears and tail.

Theme Song: "First to fall" by Terri Clark
 
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Name: Zetsumi Yakushi

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Preffered Teammates - N/A

Village - Hidden Sound

Appearance: A high-ranking Jounin of the Blood, he wears, as they all do, a black analogue of the combat vestments of the other countries, enhanced by a long black cloak he drapes around himself. There are various Kunai, needles, and scalpel in the compartments of his vest, and concealed over his body. He has long, dark hair, and wears a pair of glasses.

Rank: Jounin

Weapon: Zetsumi, as a Medical-style ninja, carries a number of surgical implements in addition to the Kunai, Senbon, and Shuriken carried by all ninja. He refuses to use ranged weapons on principle, claiming that it takes no skill to aim a gun and pull the trigger.

Bloodline Limit: Organics Manipulation
As the last of a long line of skilled medical-nins, Zetsumi has inherited all the medicinal effects they sought to enhance themselves with. His bloodline is far from noble, and have been known in the past to experiment on both themselves and others to achieve a higher understanding of the medical jutsu. The culmination of this bloodline's work is the Organics Manipulation skill, possesed only by Zetsumi, which allows the user to manipulate any and all organic material, change it's shape, nature, or enhance it. In practial combat terms, this means near-instantaneous healing, and the ability to damage the body of an opponent without the need to perform jutsu or attacks. At higher levels of control, the skill could potentially kill an opponant instantly.

Jutsu:

Clone Technique - Bunshin no Jutsu
The Bunshin technique creates an illusionary clone of the one performing the Jutsu.

Transformation Technique - Henge no Jutsu
This technique allows the user to transform into anything or anyone. It is however an illusion.

Body Substitute Skill - Kawarimi no Jutsu
The user switches his or her body with a plant, animal or anything for that matter.

Clone Self-Destruction Technique - Bunshin Bakuhatsu no Jutsu
A technique that involves compressing the chakra a clone is made up of until the pressure is released in the form of a powerful explosion.

Physical Maintenance, Chakra Meditation - Shian Karada no Jutsu
A meditation technique, the user builds their own Chakra by concentrating.

Eight Gates - Hachimontonkou
The more gates the user can open, the stronger and faster he/she becomes. However, with each chakra gate unlocked, there is a higher risk of seriously injuring or even killing the user. Thus, the body must be constantly trained to withstand the chakra flow.
Due to Zetsumi's bloodline limit, he can regulate his own body to the point that he can open all 8 gates with little detrimental effect.

Medical Organics Masterful Control - Kusari Karada Soujuu no Jutsu
The user of this technique, enabled by their Blood Limit, can control any portion of their body as a weapon, from their bones to their blood.

Cellular Degradation - Kanbou Shikyo no Jutsu
A technique that consumes all the chakra stored in a cell to procreate an explosion, which is mirrored by all surrouding cells, resulting in total destruction of the cells, and often, a sizable chink of anything else caught in the blast.

Blood Clone - Ketsueki Bunshin no Jutsu
A standard technique of the Blood Village, it it a cross between a summoning and a clone technique, creating a clone of the user in the mean of a summon, with equivilant power.

Body Clone - Karada Bunshin no Jutsu
A technique unique to Zetsumi, he uses his organic control to create a number of organic clones, which cannot be differantuated from the original via Byukagan, or any other number of detection techniques.

Blood Charade - Ketsueki Itsuwari no Jutsu
A technique unique to Zetsumi, he injures himself, then controls a ribbon of his own blood like a whip, lashing at the opponant. The whip can be reshaped at will, and can take almost any form.

Medical Secret Technique: Final Farewell - Kusari Kyuusho Kouki Adyu no Jutsu
A 100% death technique that relies on the Organic Control Blood Limit, the user strains their control and performs a number of techniques on the opponent's body, simultaneously cutting off their air supply, bloodflow, and chakra flow, resulting in a near-instantaneuos death.

Mass Medical Secret Technique: Final Farewell, Thousand Partings - Kusari Kyuusho Chiitoma no Jutsu
A 90% death technique that relies on the Organic Control Blood Limit, and descendant of the Final Farewell technique, it's designed for use on five or more enemies. The user tears at the foes with his skill, often resulting in death. There is a rare possibility of survival, and the chance increases with the number of beings caught in the Jutsu.

Medical Secret Technique: Final Farewell, Ripping Vengance - Kusari Kyuusho Hekiada no Jutsu
A 100% death technique that relies on the Organic Control Blood Limit, and a descendant of the Final Farewell technique. In this incarnation, the death of the enemy is far more painful, as the user slowly peels off first their skin, then muscles, and eventually reduces them to nothing more then a pile of organs, all the while ensuring maximum sensory input.

Personality: A high-ranking Jounin, Zetsumi is powerful...and he knows it. He considers himself superior to almost everyone, and cannot trust anyone other then himself, for fear they use that trust incorrectly. He is plauged by phobias and social problems.

Biography: Kabuto...

Zetsumi's father was always loyal to Orochimaru, and Orochimaru alone. More so then to himself, or his family. So much so, in fact, that he almost neglected his son's existance.

The result of various experiments on his own DNA, Zetsumi was less a son then a clone of Kabuto, though with a slightly differant appearance. Once the cloning was complete, however, the medic-nin quickly lost interest, and consigned his son to Orochimaru's service.

It was very shortly after the defeat of the Akatsuki and Orochimaru that Zetsumi himself killed his father. Having grown, as a Sound-Ninja, in the rigerous training camps, he's honed his powers to an unbelievable degree. Now, emerging with several other dark warriors, missing-nin and Sound-nin, he plans to reform the Sound in his own image, rather then that envisioned by the snake his father served.





Meilin, I should also point out that, given the oppertunity, my character has the ability to take the cells of another ninja and intergrate them into his own, and thus is able to steal bloodline limits. Couple this with him growing an artificial sharingun from cells of an opponent Uchiha, and he could copy almost any jutsu. However, to grow an entire organ, even an eye, would take days, even weeks.
 

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Name: Inchina Syria
Partner and Race: Imana- Hawk
Preferred Teammates:N/A
Village: Sand Villiage
Rank: Chunin
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Parents: Gaara (Mother dissappeared)
Appearance: http://www.advancedanime.com/pictures/tamaki.jpg
Personality: Syria is always under her father, Gaara. She is very quiet like he use to be when he was young, but she is more open, and less brutal. She is always fasinated by different things that pass her, and she's not afraid to ask questions. She is very into her training, and sometimes for days at a time that is all she can think about. She loves to make people smile in the villiage, and she is always there to help people in the villiage.
Bio: When Syria was a young baby, her mother fled the Hidden Sand Villiage, without a single word. Her mother abondend her and her father, Gaara, fo no reason at all, at least that is what Syria was told by the people in her villiage and her father. But most of her life, Syria did not think of her mother much cause her father was both her mother and father in some kind of way. Even though he had a tough time acting as a father, he did the best he could, and that was all Syria cared about.

As she became older around the age 11 she started to train the ways of the Sand Villiage. She dedicated her life at the time to her training, and holding the dream that someday she could become as powerful as her father and Naruto Uzumaki. Her father would see her train at night, putting everything into her chi, her attack and smiled apon her. As a present for her hard work, he gave her a hawk named Imana. Imana, was Syria best friend for Imana was Syria's eyes and Syria was the place of rest for Imana. Her father told her that this will help her with her trainings more then she thought.

When Syria hit the age of 15 she was strong and still into her training. She still had the dream of being more powerful then her father and Naruto, but with other things in her life, the dream didn't come much into her mind as it did when she was a young girl. Her father did not like the decessions that his daughter was making now, becoming more strict on her. Syria did not understand her father's choices, but had no say in what her father was deciding. With her father being strict on her Syria took her pressure and anger out on training and doing more missions for the Sand Villiage. She later realized what her father was doing. She understood and now at the age of 16 she trains harder the dream of being more powerful then her father and Naruto strongly in her mind.
 

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Name: Hitokage Azuke

Preferred teammates: Whatever. Just put me in a team.

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Village: Hidden Leaf

Rank:
Chuunin

Chakra Element:
Wind and Lightning

Appearance:
A 5'11 young man, his appearance invokes an aura that many can take notice. Being secretive, he often keeps things to himself, despite being very social. His spiky black hair is always in the air, that shines in the light. He possesses a solid build, developed from years in Taijutsu training.

Attire: Azuke sports a vest that resembles a Jounin vest, a garment he made himself, trying to instill the 'great ninja' mentality. The vest is black with a white four point star in the middle where the zipper is, with a hole in the middle of the star, resembling a white shuriken. He has a custom Konoha headband he made, with a fire etched onto the steel, with a circle of dots around it. The ribbon that is used to tie the headband onto something is a platinum grey. However, it is usually tied around his neck.

He has a short sleeve on his right arm, and a long sleeve on his left, both arms covered in layers of bandages underneath. He wears steel toe boots, exceptionally heavy, along with four weights, always on his body. Two on his wrists, that resemble wristbands, and two on his ankles, both that look like two steel octagonal cylinders attached to his legs, maximizing his speed when lifted.

On his back is his most prized possession, wrapped in chains and bandages. He calls it the 'Einlanzer'. A massive 16' gun capable of rapid fire or explosive purposes, it is designed to react only on his hands alone. Despite it's huge size, he can carry it around and use it efficiently and with precision. He calls it Einlanzer, due to the fact that it resembles a giant sword. Where he got the weapon shall be revealed later on.

Personality:
Azuke plays around leisurely, carefree at most, even in battle. Grafted with a steel bound determination to prove himself, he finds himself training almost constantly, to keep his body and mind finely tuned. Being the playful type he is, can be prone to doing random things, and might cause trouble in the process. Being able to finely analyze things quickly, he makes a somewhat tactician, although he doesn't know it.

However, there are some sides to him that are kept under wraps. The voice inside the back of your head is a small voice, sometimes affecting your judgment, but in general doesn't make a difference. But Azuke's voice is different. It has grown to the point where it has become a whole new persona, another personality unknown to him, since it lies in the deep recesses if his mind. Letting this personality show would result in unknown results, and present undeniable factors for both the enemy..and allies.

History:
Azuke's fate was not become a ninja. But, due to the dangerous tides of war, his fate was irrelevant, as he was thrown into training at the age of 7. Not wanting this life, Azuke would often not participate, and as a result was forced to train even harder as his punishment. Days would pass, with him sweating blood. Many called him 'The Hopeless Shinobi', and other names that would be burned into his mind, as he did two times as much training than the others. It was then where the voice in the back of his head slowly developed.

The voice told him many things. It told him that he would be better than all of them. That those people the voice called 'infidels', would rue the day that the stepped on Hitokage Azuke. This helped shed some light on him, as he accepted his training at the age of 8. As the seasons come and go, the voice grew and grew, as if it was growing up with him. But in the cold night of a budding winter, his family was assassinated in cold blood, rendering him an orphan.

Overcome by grief and vengeance, the voice began to blossom at this time. The voice fueled his avenger status, as he tracked down those who had taken the life of his clan. Eventually, he found them, trying to ruin the life of another. This he would not condone, as he utilized his past training into defeating the assailants, finding his strength remarkably powerful, as single punches sent them reeling or flying. He kept one alive, in order to get information out of him. Unfortunately, not much information was revealed but simply 'an unknown client paying us a lot to take out your clan'. With these words, Azuke snapped his neck, and burned the evidence. The voice enjoyed this decadently, as he grew even more.

At the age of 12, he had become a Genin, with great recommendations from his teachers at the Academy. His team consisted of himself, a kunochi named Haruka Juno, and Jūshirō, Raikaze, a ninja from the Hidden Village of Lightning. Their team leader was Kinta, Haruko. And with this team, they completed 3 A rank missions, 15 B rank, 2 C rank, and 1 D rank. Needless to say, their team gained much reputation for their missions, the current Hokage looking down at them with pride. But during one mission, things would change, and not for the better.

It was simple: Exterminate a high-class ninja before he reaches his destination from his reconnaissance mission. A simple B rank mission that could've been easy for them. But fate wasn't on their side, as the shinobi had somehow brutally injured Raikaze, striking something in Azuke. Apparently, the voice in the back of his head would not stand idly by after watching this, and that's when it surfaced. It quickly grabbed hold of him, its grip fully eclipsing his mind, unleashing for the first time, his Bloodline Limit. Their teammates and team leader watched in horror as he transformed into a monstrosity. Some say, that he even 'evolved'.

The mission was completed, but all too well, some might say. But at the cost of his teammate Raikaze, Azuke was cast out, never to return to the Hidden Leaf Village. 4 years of exile gave Azuke time to train in other villages, gathering knowledge, and even developed jutsus unique only to himself. At the age of 16, Konoha had called him back, say that they 'needed him'. Skeptical, he returned anyways. However, he returned a different shinobi. Looking well experienced, and now equipped with the Einlanzer, a weapon of mystery. Finishing what he started, he took the Chuunin exam, and passed with flying colors. Now a Chuunin, Azuke was back, and felt that this time it was for good.

Weapon/s: The Einlanzer, a small set of shurikens and kunais, and himself :/

Jutsu:
Azuke is a Taijutsu user, using the strength he developed from his 'Bloodline Limit'. He has talent in Ninjutsu as well, but prefers Taijutsu, and uses Ninjutsu not as much. Unfortunately, Azuke has almost no talent in Genjutsu, so he can’t transform or perform illusionary techniques whenever he wants to.

Pressure Palm - Asshou:
A Taijutsu technique where Azuke drives his fist or Einlanzer into their opponent while they are on the ground, crushing them and grinding them into the earth. Used with Azuke's strength, it can be quite devastating.

Tackle Charge - Tokken: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja shoulder charges their enemy, driving them away or even into something stable. Azuke can also use his Einlanzer as a shoulder, or use it in the last second to throw his opponent off guard. With his strength, this technique can be quite devastating.

Rising Impact Palm - Shougekishou: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja lifts up their opponent with one arm, retracts, and then drives their palm upward into their opponent, hurling them into the air. With Azuke's strength, this technique could be quite devastating. Also can open the oppurtunity to aerial attacks whilst enemy is in the air for maximum damage.

Knee Strike - Shoushitsu: A Taijutsu technique where Azuke braces against the ground and drives a powerful knee(or Einlanzer) into their enemy, hurling them away. With his strength, this technique can be devastating.

Crushing Fist - Houshou: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja palm strikes their enemy, hurling them away. Azuke can sometimes use his Einlanzer. With his strength, this technique can be quite devastating.

One-fingered Earthquake - Isshi Resshin:
A Taijutsu technique that only the strongest ninjas can accomplish. With just one finger, the ninja can merely tap the ground and create an enormous split in the earth before them. Of course, with this strength, one finger could do more to the enemy directly. Azuke can only use a fist, but is training to make it to one finger. However, Azuke can plunge his Einlazer into the ground achieving the same effect, but can use his weapon's explosive mode, to make pillars of fire burst from underground.

Einlanzer Herculean Whirlwind - Einlanzer Goukiri Senpuu:
A Taijutsu technique where the user spins with all of their strength and delivers a powerful spinning heel kick, whilst firing his Einlanzer, creating a spray attack on all sides.

Einlanzer Spinning Wind - Einlanzer Senpuu: A move once used by Rock Lee himself, which used to be his signature move. It is a combination of speed, strength, and the element of suprise, as well as the perfect move to link up with other aerial attacks. For this Taijutsu, the ninja first disappears using a really fast movement. This renders the opponent in a state of confusion. However, seconds later, the shinobi appears just below the opponent, and by raising his leg, he kicks the enemy right on the chin, sending him up on the sky. Although it inflicts a lot of damage, this Taijutsu isn't very effective on its own. Used in tandem with Rapiddofaia no Jutsu or other moves for maximum damage. Einlanzer Spinning Wind is very hard to dodge, since the movement is so fast the opponent won't probably know until he gets kicked and is high up in the air.

Shadow Einlanzer Dance - Kage Einlanzer Buyou: The final step before initiating Rapiddofaia no Jutsu or other aerial attacks, it can inflict great damage with other Jutsus. Although it does no damage to the opponent, it is still considered a Taijutsu, because it uses no Chakra and doesn't require hand seals to be performed. This Jutsu is an aerial attack, meaning the enemy has to be in the air for it to fully function. Once in the air, the shinobi positions himself just below the opponent and slightly diagonally while in the air. Thus, the ninja becomes the opponent's shadow, leaving the opponent unable to escape. Also, the two ninjas kind of "hover" in the air, giving the attacker a chance to strike. Usually, this Jutsu is done after Einlanzer Spinnining Wind/Einlanzer Senpuu, which sends the opponent sky high, and it will usually be followed by other Taijutsu techniques. Azuke often does his signature move or a string of well-combined Taijutsu techniques after this, his favorite string being Houshou, Tokken and Asshou, which he likes to call Tsuyoi no Jutsu/Mighty Art. It can also be followed by Ninjutsu, but it is less possible because most Ninjutsus are ranged, and in this case attacker and defender are very close to each other, so they would both get damaged. The only downside to this Jutsu is that the enemy isn't completely motionless, so he/she can block any incoming attacks; unless, of course, the attacker is skillful enough to confuse the opponent, or strong enough to create such a powerful blow that cannot be blocked.

Mighty Art - Tsuyoi no Jutsu: A combonation attack similar to Rapiddofaia no Jutsu, both of them following Shadow Einlanzer Dance. Azuke uses Houshou, Tokken and Asshou on his opponent. He drives his palm into his opponent, drives his knee into his/her stomach and his fist in their chest/face, and finishes with plunging his Einlanzer on them, crushing them with devastating impact. Azuke might even create an explosion afterwards. It's not as costly as his signature move, making it a favourite for him. Although he might use different techniques, those three is widely used by him.

Mighty Wind Fist - Tsuyoikaze Genkotsu:
A unique technique that Azuke self-trained himself for. Concentrating his chakra into one hand, the chakra absorbs the wind around it, creating a small field of high-speed spinning wind around his fist, and also makes the wind around it just as dangerous. With this in mind, he keeps his fist a distance away from his body. Azuke once described it as having 'the essence of a tornado in his very hands'. Becomes much more lethal and efficient when Bloodline Limit is activated.

Swift Thunder Kick - Hayai Ikazuchi Handou:
A unique technique that Azuke self-trained himself for. Concentrating the chakra into his shin and feet, the chakra causes electrical charges to collide into each other at high speeds, creating volatile lightning to form around his leg. Used in tandem with Konoha Whirlwind, Konoha Senpuu or Renpuu, or any other Taijustsu technique involving a kick for maximum damage. Azuke described this technique as 'lightning-like judgment'. Becomes more lethal and efficient when Bloodline Limit is activated.

Signature Move - Rapid Fire Technique/Rapiddofaia no Jutsu: A move he created involving himself and his Einlanzer in combination. Reminiscent of Initial Lotus, he kicks his opponent into the air utilizing his maximum speed. Using the chains and bandages holding the Einlanzer, he constrains the enemy, and brings his opponent down into the ground spinning with maximum force, using the Einlanzer in the last second to create an explosion. Same side effects of Initial Lotus/Omote Renge, if not more severe.

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Kyuubi

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Name: Mattak Marx
Partner and Race: n/a
Preferred Teammates: none, but can take anyone as a chunin
Village: Hidden Sound Village
Rank: Jounin
Age: 17
Gender: male
Parents: Supposedly the child of Anko, who was taken to the sound village at age 2
Appearance: finsih later
Personality:
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"Kyuubi"

Name: Caleb Motokorey

Partner and Race: n/a

Preferred Teammates:

Rank: Chunnin

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Parents: n/a (not from the series)

Village: Leaf

Appearance:Blue/Green eye's. Short, slightley messy, brown hair. Wears a
black sleeveless shirt with an orange stripe running down on the left side. Also wears a orange, un-vipped vest with pouches to carry his gear. Black pants.


Personality: Prefers to be by himself. Doesn't usually like to talk with people he's not familier with, but he's friendly with the people he know's.

Bio: Caleb was born into the secret Motokorey clan. When Caleb entered the ninja academy, he struggle with about everything about the academy, but he just barley passed his first exam. By age ten, like all children from his clan, he was imbedded with the clan's curse seal. The curse seal is used by the clan to preform there aray of bloodlimit techniques and gives the user the abbillity to fade into the shadows and then reapear. Caleb is now trying to awaken his latent power. Because of the hate towards his clan, (mentioned in his Clan History below) he dreams of becoming Hokage to clense his clan of this hate.

Jutsu's:

Cursed Shadow Seal- Bachiatari Kage Gokuin: The cursed seal is the source of all the Motokorey's secret jutsu's. The cursed seal is developed by apply the chakra of the shadow demon which was slayn by Jinsei. The cursed seal is put onto all clan members at the age of ten. The cursed seal, when unactivated, is in the form of a red dot, with four, black, inverted teardrop shapes on the sides. When activated, the inverted teardrop shapes dissapate and a black image of a flame begins to crawl up the users arm as the cursed seal is used more in a battle.

Sin Clone- Fuzen Kuro-n no jutsu: Creates clones from the shadows. The are all shadowy and have the figure of the user and and are covered in black (since there from the shadows). There are the only things that aren't covered in shadows's. This one of Caleb's bloodlimit Jutsu's

Trick Shuriken- Kibou Shuriken no Jutsu: Knocks enemy down to the ground and leaps in to air. Caleb then throws many shuriken which land over the enemy's wrists and ankles which prevent him from getting up. Caleb then dives down a delivers a strong kick to the enemy's stomach. Caleb invented this jutsu himself.

Shadow Flame- Kage Kaen no Jutsu: The Motokorey clan's most powerful bloodlimit. It creates a giant shadowy orb in the users hands. The orb generates a great black flame which consumes the users arm. The curse seal is what protects the user from the flame. Caleb is struggling to the awaken this technique.


(i'll add more Jutsu's later)

Clan History: The Motokorey clan was founded 117 years ago in the Village Hidden in a Waterfall (A real village from the series) after Jinsei Motokorey, the first Motokorey, defeated a great shadow demon. Once the demon was defeated, it's chakra preserved itself in a large blaze which consumed the demons dead body. Jinsei relized that is was possible to apply a small amount of the demon's chakra to a persons normal chakra in the form of a cursed seal, which gave that person special abbilities. With this information, he preserved the demon's chakra flame, sharded it with his wife and children and started his nija clan which lived in the Village Hidden in a Waterfall for many generation's, passing small amounts demons chakra into each new, pure-blood clan member and honing there use of the cursed seal, until an incedent invloving a young clan member stealing a loaf of bred, which after a series of events led to the rejection of Motokorey clan from there village. With no place left to turn, the clan settled in the Village hidden in the Leaves where it is still currently settled in. However, the clan has usually been kept secret and unkown which has led many to believe the clan was planning an invasion on the village, which is why some hate Caleb's clan to this day.
 
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Okay, in order, here are my concerns with each of you:

Kari'Heart, my concern with you first and foremost is that you are a kiri-nin, AKA from the land of water. As that village would be outside the Leaf-Sand alliance, I would be concerned about you quickly becoming left out. You also forgot parts of the template. The 'partner' section is for some animal, like Akamaru, if your character has one.

Zetsumi and Roxas13, I did say that Sound was now a part of Leaf in the story. Please read it again.

Stripes, I am very pleased by your bio, and look forwards to working with you. As your characters Hawk is similar to one of the other characters I plan on introing to this RP, I may have them be teammates. I'll try and PM you the details. ^_^

Forever Lost, I have a distinct feeling you disregarded my template and my story completely. I would ask that you re-read the first post and SIGNIFICANTLY alter that character, if not create a whole new one.

AngelofAdvent, I would just ask you to be a little bit more careful with your spelling and grammar. Also, if you want to create a clan like that, I would ask a much more in-depth history.
 
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Zetsumi and Roxas13, I did say that Sound was now a part of Leaf in the story. Please read it again.

I never said it wasn't, and I read the story quite thoroughly. I simply claimed my character was raised in the Sound, and he wants to start his own, new Sound empire in his desired image, adverse to the one already in existance created by Orochimaru.
 

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AngelofAdvent[/i], I would just ask you to be a little bit more careful with your spelling and grammar. Also, if you want to create a clan like that, I would ask a much more in-depth history.


Sorry. I wrote this at 7 in the morning. My grammar is usually pretty good though.

EDIT: My profile's spelling and grammar is fixed and I added the clan's history
 
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I never said it wasn't, and I read the story quite thoroughly. I simply claimed my character was raised in the Sound, and he wants to start his own, new Sound empire in his desired image, adverse to the one already in existance created by Orochimaru.

It simply seems that the timeline is off a bit, that's all. You're characters only 18, Zets, and it's been a good twenty-five or thirty years since the time jump. Woud it really take that much longer to beat Orochi?

Good job Angel, much better.

Okay, we need one more Sand character and for Takushi Rena to clean up the spam on the RP thread and we'll start. ^_^
 

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I read it. But, I don't see any errors in what I did. Mind explaining it to me? Are there too many Konoha nin already? Enlighten me on what needs changing, because I clearly can't see what I did wrong.
 

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"Kyuubi"

Name: Kimari Uzumaki

Partner and Race:

Preferred Teammates: Prefers to work alone but if needed he can work in a team

Village:Leaf Village of Konoha

Rank:Chunin

Age:17

Gender:Male

Parents: Naruto Uzumaki

Appearance: Almost identical to naruto his hair is dark colored and spiky with parts that hang over his eyes
Personality: Kimari is just as silly and outgoing as his father he doesn't care to much to be like his father the hokage he rather spend more time on his taijutsu and Ninjutsu and wants to own his own ninja academy one day

Bio:Kimari Uzumaki has heard about all of his fathers adventures and always gets annoyed when people talk about how he has to live up to the expectation of his fathers amazing deeds. Kimari can always be found training outside the village by the river he loves staring at pretty girls and usually takes things to far.
 

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"Kyuubi"

Name: Kyosuke Kagami
Preferred Teammates: Prefers to work alone but doesn't really care if he has to work with anyone just as long as they don't tick him off.
Village: Konoha
Rank: Chuunin
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Parents: n/a
Appearance: Kyosuke has short brown hair as well as bangs that are long enough to cover his hazel colored eyes. He wears a red ninja-gi with red sneakers. He also wears a pair of silver, fingerless gauntlets as well as a silver waist belt and silver ankle guards. On the back of his ninja-gi is a kanji which reads "Bushin" or "Warrior God" in Japanese.
Personality: Silent and speaks as if he was trying to be rude. Devoted in fighting and training as well just to become stronger. But if you do happen to get to know Kyosuke well enough, he's a pretty descent guy. That is if anyone could get him to talk.
Bio: Since Kyosuke was five years old, he would always come home with bruises and not to mention battered. His father by the name of Zeku knew what the problem was as soon as he watched his son's appearance get worse by each day. Apparently Kyosuke would always get picked on which would eventually lead him to getting beaten up senseless. That's when he had an idea. He would teach Kyosuke the ways of the Bushinryu Ninjutsu which not only specializes in strength but speed as well.

Everyday without any breaks to take a breather, Zeku would train Kyosuke literally everything he knew about this fighting style so that maybe one day he would be able to master it. At first Kyosuke grew tired of this but saw that it paid off when he was able to defend himself once someone tried to harm him. But he took it a little too far. In the middle of the night he would be the only one awake, outside training without any rest until he could no longer go on. His father would watch without him knowing, impressed by the fact how much effort he had put into learning the Bushinryu of Ninjutsu. But this will soon change...

A few years later Kyosuke's father, Zeku, grew very ill. Putting his training on hold he took care of him and was always by his side. But to no avail, Zeku passed away leaving his son in a state of depression. Even though he had lost his father Kyosuke continued his training as a way of remembering him as well as enrolling in the academy of Konoha. Now at the age of seventeen Kyosuke continues his training, knowing that his father was looking down at him from up above.

Jutsus - (Made them up)

Bushin Hassoken: Kyosuke lunges at his opponent, striking them with different patterns of punches before launching them back with a powerful, thrusting kick.

Bushin Goraikyaku: Mostly uses this as a counter attack but Kyosuke leaps forward, striking the enemy with a punch that sends them upward and follows up with numerous punches and ends the attack with a thrusting kick that sends his opponent back to Earth. Sometimes he connects this jutsu with his Bushin Hassoken for massive damage.

Bushin Musourenka: Kyosuke's most powerful jutsu and the only one that he actually uses his chakra. After endless hours of training he had finally manage to learn this but it's also life threatening in a way. He goes into a trance as a red aura begins to surround his entire body. What he does is channel all of his chakra, or energy, into one attack. Once done Kyosuke grabs his opponent, causing the area to go pitch black for a few seconds, the sounds of punches and kicks could be heard until everything could be seen again.
 
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Kyuubi

Name: Mahistrado Kaparusahan
Partner and Race: None
Preferred Teammates: Anyone willing to work
Village: Hidden Heat Haze Village
Rank: Berugukage
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Parents:
Appearance:
-Physical
Mahistrado is about 6’1 in height and 220 in weight. Almost all of his weight is from his massive muscles, which is a necessary Kaparusahan trait that is needed to use most of their jutsu. He has very nicely tanned skin and his right arm has the Kaparushan clan insignia on it. His hair is relatively short, but not bald at all, and black. His face is chiseled and his features are very distinct just like his piercing purple eyes.

-Clothing
He sports a white wife-beater with a bullet broof vest with the Kaparushan clan insignia on the upper right part of the vest right over his heart. He sports purple, grey, white, and black camouflage margo shirts that go up to the bottom of his knees with 8 pockets on them. Two on his sides, two on the legs, two more on his arse, and two more on the inside the bottom of his pants. He wears lightweight black shoes and shirt black socks under. He wears his villages headband on his head.

Personality: Usally quite, keeping to himself. Not very good at expressing his emotions through words, he does in his actions. Mysterious in his ways, it is ery hard for him to get close to anyone, yet, still influences those who come to be-friend him.

Bio: Mahistrado was born in a nomadic group that was formally known as the Hidden Heat Haze village, located in Mountain Country that went extinct long ago by an unknown village, suspected to be the Hidden Sound. His family was the last people of the village, yet, had never settled to restore the village. His grandfather, being nearly 80 years old, had devised a plan to get the village back on its feat, but it was too late for him to do it. But Mahistrado was perfect for it, who became a great shinobi with unbelievable skill. Taking the title of Berugukage, he ventured to Kohona, leaving his family behind, to request help in rebuilding their village and recruit new shinobi, which would increase Kohona’s power. Hopefully, the Hokage would approve of his plan, and get the village back on their feat, and in return, be a loyal partner to the Hidden Leaf Village.

Weapon: Using his family’s signature metal gauntlets, he is able to perform jutsus that normally would drain a lot of charka, with ease. He also created some unique justsus just for the gauntlets. Besides these pieces of work, he carries the usual kunai, suriken, and a katana for certain situations.

Bloodline Limit: Chakra reserve & release
The ability allows the ninja to gather charka from anywhere within 100 feet. This is one reason why people of the Kaparushan clan have very high stamina during a battle and rarely lose an immense amount of chakra. Not only is the ablity allowed to intake massive amounts of chakra, but it can release a huge amount as well. This is how the gauntlets came around. It enhanced the chakra being released in a strike with the hands. When the chakra is released though, it gives off a violet color, which may explain why they have violet eyes and the reason why their signature color is violet.

Jutsu:

He is a specialist in taijutsu, but does have some pretty powerful jutsus up his sleave.

-Metal manipulation. Technique
This technique allows the ninja to manipulate metal anyway they could.

-Metalic meltdown
Using metal manipulation, the ninja will heat the metals by bunching them up in a ball and rotating them causing them to become heated and eventually turn into a scolding hot liquid.

-Explosion Technique
An explosion of sharp fragments of metal erupts from the ground under the opponent of the ninja.

-Entrapment Technique
Using Metalic Meltdown, the ninja will use the liquid metal and surround the opponent with it, and form some sort of barrier. Then, the ninja will freeze the metal around him, trapping him insider, eventually suffocating him or, if the ninja wills it, quickly finish him off in many other ways.

-Liquid death
Using the Metalic Meltdown, shards of metal will secretly enter the opponent, hiding inside vital organs. When the ninja says, those shards destroy those organs, ultimately ending the other ninja’s life.

-Chakra wave
Using his bloodline technique, he will store a large amount of chakra in his gauntlets. Either from long range or close, he well unleash the chakra in the form of a sharp wave, destroying almost anything in its path.

-Chakra quake
Using his bloodlike technique, he will store a large amount of chakra in his gauntlets. Then, he will pound his fist into the ground, unleashing the chakra, causing a massive quake.

-Chakra shield
His fist becomes covered in chakra, almost impenetrable. Able to black almost all physical attacks.

-5 levels of pain
A taijustsu technique that will render his opponent defenseless.

1st level – Uppercuts enemy into the air

2nd level – A lunging punch to the mid section, sending opponent flying

3rd level – Using his speed, he catches up to the flying opponent, he smashes his elbow into the faces of his opponent, flipping him onto his back and on the floor.

4th level – He springs himself into the air, using his opponents back as a launching pad.

5th level – A critical blow. Using a slight release of chakra, he jets down to his opponent, landing a bone snapping kick to the spine.
 
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It simply seems that the timeline is off a bit, that's all. You're characters only 18, Zets, and it's been a good twenty-five or thirty years since the time jump. Woud it really take that much longer to beat Orochi?

Good job Angel, much better.

Okay, we need one more Sand character and for Takushi Rena to clean up the spam on the RP thread and we'll start. ^_^


Ah, I put 18, didn't I? I meant to explain that. Due to his own ability to control organics, this skill naturally allows him to stem the flow of aging. In essence, he was reverse his own ageing process. Theoretically, he could become immortal...but, as Tsunade-sama's apprentice said...To heal oneself is to shorten one's lifespan. The same applies here.

At least, until I get a certain Jutsu... >_>

In reality, he's...hmm. He was 18 at the point after the timeskip...so he's now going to be almost forty. In years alife, not in body age.
 

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A have a Suna nin. Hold up, I'll get the temp. Theres alot of god nins in this, however. I have a feeling things may get complicated.
 

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Kyuubi Baka-Kitsune

Name: Tsurugu Mitarashi

Partner and Race: Orochi - Snake

Preferred Teammates: N/A

Village: Hidden Leaf

Rank: Chunin

Weapon: A scythe that is made from one of the great Manda's scales and has a unlimited amount of deadly poison and several Kunai

Bloodline Limit: Heaven Snake Seal
A evolved form of the Curse Seal that has a 5% chance of showing up on a child with a Cursed Parent. Like the Curse Seal the baby at birth has a 10% Chance of surviving it. But unlike the Curse Seal it is genetic and more easily controlled than it's predecessor but just as dangerous. During Level One it spreads across his arms in bands and stop at his eye's. In Level Two his head becomes similar to Manda's and grow two snake like appendages from his back and his body is black.

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Parents: Anko Mitarashi

Appearance: Semi-Long spikey red hair with purple bangs. He has Almond eye's with black slits in them he has inherited his mothers face. He is slightly skinny but is very flexible. He where a regular black shirt with the Kanjin for Snake on the back. Dirt green pants and a jacket similar to his mother.

Personality:He is more than often kind but throw one crack about his mother and he will impale you with his scythe. He also has a blood lust like his mother.

Bio:He is the son of Anko Mitarashi. He never really knew his father as in his mother killed him right after she gave birth to him for calling her a snake in the grass whore. His Partner Orochi he named after the great Snake Demon not after Orochimaru who he wishes would go into a corner and die a slow and agonizing death.He is trained only by his mother.He is also immune to most poisons due to some gene his father had.

Jutsu:

Clone Technique - Bunshin no Jutsu
The Bunshin technique creates an illusionary clone of the one performing the Jutsu.

Transformation Technique - Henge no Jutsu
This technique allows the user to transform into anything or anyone. It is however an illusion.

Body Substitute Skill - Kawarimi no Jutsu
The user switches his or her body with a plant, animal or anything for that matter.

Hidden Snake Hands - Senai Jashuu
A summoning jutsu that brings snakes into the sleeve of the user, which can move out and attack/grapple anything they want to.

Body freeze skill - Kanashibari no jutsu
Used to immobilize enemies. Stops them and freezes them in their tracks.

Double Snake Assassination - Souja sousai no jutsu
This technique is a murder-suicide technique. Both the opponent and the user must die. This is also why it is treated as a forbidden jutsu.

Hidden Fire Snake Hands - Senai Katon Jashuu
A summoning jutsu that brings snakes into the sleeve of the user, which can move out and breath fire/grapple burn anything they want to.

Hidden Earth Snake Hands - Senai Doton Jashuu
A summoning jutsu that brings snakes into the sleeve of the user, which can move out and spite out mud/grapple anything they want to.

Poison Hidden Snake Hands - Doku Senai Jashuu
A summoning jutsu that brings snakes into the sleeve of the user, which can move out and poison/grapple anything they want to.

Hidden Water Snake Hands - Senai Suiton Jashuu
A summoning jutsu that brings snakes into the sleeve of the user, which can move out and Spray Ice and water/grapple anything they want to.
 
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