Fanfiction ► Kingdom Hearts: Destati

[Riku Fan1415]

I love your quotes, Merlin! "I have no time to get into a screaming match with a caveman..." Dr. M, Sly 3: Honor Among Thieves

Oooo, it's heating up. The grand finale! Dun dun duuuuun!

 

[Merlin326]

I love your quotes, Merlin! "I have no time to get into a screaming match with a caveman..." Dr. M, Sly 3: Honor Among Thieves

Oooo, it's heating up. The grand finale! Dun dun duuuuun!

There is also another reference to Raven Rise in here. Can anyone spot it?

With all due respect,
Merlin326

 

[TwilightRiku_13]

Awesome update as usual, Merlin. This is really starting to get good; cannot wait to see the ending.

 

[Orion]

Not remembering, eh?

Or would it be a number of pillars, like the dream Sora had not long before getting the Keyblade.

I guess you don't recall our messages and my description, but it seems the mental image remains in the back of your mind.

“Sorry, but I have no intention to get into a screaming match with a caveman.”

Besides its actual source, was there any link between this phrase and, say, my RP character?

 

[Davy Jones]

Finally caught back up, and ENDGAME is shaping up wonderfully, as expected. Well played, Merlin!

 

[Merlin326]

Re: Not remembering, eh?

I guess you don't recall our messages and my description, but it seems the mental image remains in the back of your mind.

*shrugs* I thought of the Awakening sequence from KH1 and i thought this might be a good place to put it. I always thought of Kingdom Hearts as a majestic castle (after all, kingdoms usually have castles). The rural town came to mind while i was writing. Thinking of Raven Rise for some reason, i decided to include it.

Besides its actual source, was there any link between this phrase and, say, my RP character

only the fact that Aloz directed the quotation in question to Riku. lol. that was unintended.

With all due respect,
Merlin326

 

[Orion]

Unintended, yet I still manage to find a link.
*Sigh*

 

[Lanydx]

New new chap .also new chapter of my is and impoved plz RaR. Sorry for asking again Meriln ur just my hero with this.
Lanydx

 

[Orion]

Grammar please... If you worship Merlin to that extent, maybe it'd be good if some of his proper writing skills rubbed of on you.

 

[Lanydx]

Grammar please... If you worship Merlin to that extent, maybe it'd be good if some of his proper writing skills rubbed of on you.

I dont WORSHOP him. I just want his advie jeez.

 

[Riku Fan1415]

Grammar please... If you worship Merlin to that extent, maybe it'd be good if some of his proper writing skills rubbed of on you.

Does grammar really matter as long as the meaning is clear?

I hardly think that calling someone "my hero" qualifies as worshiping

 

[Lanydx]

Does grammar really matter as long as the meaning is clear?

I hardly think that calling someone "my hero" qualifies as worshiping

Thank yopu for backing me up. I'm new to the fan fic game and I like someone to look at my new chapter.

 

[Orion]

Grammar makes the meaning a lot clearer.

I said you worship him, not worshop him, and I think you want some advice, not whatever the hell advie is.

 

[Lanydx]

I suck at spelling ok and yes need advice on how i improve my story jeez.

 

[Riku Fan1415]

Grammar makes the meaning a lot clearer.

I said you worship him, not worshop him, and I think you want some advice, not whatever the hell advie is.

1. You're stupid enough not to guess at what he means so you take it out on him.

OR

2. You just like criticizing other people.

 

[Merlin326]

okay, let's keep things civil here.

Also, the next chapter shall be up in the next day or two.

With all due respect,
Merlin326

 

[Lanydx]

I cant wait .So who's first to down MY money's on MX.SORA KICK HIS OLD ASS! I got bets on you. jk

 

[Orion]

I'm going to take a wild guess and say that your new avatar has something to do with the Twilight Zone.

Even my idiot within isn't dumb enough to not know what he's saying.

Damn, I hate this now. At least Xuan used to go on in post wars, and even then it wasn't serious or anything.

 

[TheRealNapster]

the grammer really sucks, but the general idea of the story is ok.

 

[Merlin326]

I'm going to take a wild guess and say that your new avatar has something to do with the Twilight Zone.

Yes. The man is Rod Serling, the creator of The Twilight Zone. He was also the narrator for all of its episodes in the origional series.

the grammer really sucks, but the general idea of the story is ok.

I presume you're talking to Lanydx? if so, please review his story in his thread.

With all due respect,
Merlin326