hi, here's my first fan fic attempt, so feel free to comment, but please go lightly on the criticism.
Prologue.
The endless abyss: an aptly named void, where there is only darkness, and a place called Kingdom Hearts. But Kingdom Hearts is more than just a place. It is the heart of all, the heart of existence. For it to be lost would be chaos. But that is not to be worried about, for there is a key, and a keybearer to wield it. That key protects all hearts from being taken by darkness, it protects kingdom hearts from being taken by darkness, and it protects the worlds from being destroyed. At least, it usually does.
A portal appeared suddenly, and a man emerged from it. The man looked old and hunched. He had no hair on his head except for a small beard, his ears were pointed, he wore black boots, white gloves, a white shirt, and a black cloak. But his most noticeable feature was his eyes. Cold, yellow, and soulless, they were very unpleasant. The man had appeared in front of a very large door. He then came closer, with a hungry look in his eye, and as he approached the door, he summoned a sword that looked very much like a giant key. Once he had reached the door, he pointed the key-blade upward and a strange thread of light connected itself with the door. Then there was a click to signify the door being unlocked.
Another portal appeared along with another man. The new man wore only black gloves, black boots, and a black robe with a hood that hid his face from view.
“Get away from the door!” said the second man. “Now, Xehanort!”
“Heh heh heh… And how did you find me, exactly?” said the man called Xehanort.
“The dark scent of course,” said the second man. “It’s so strong on you, there was no way it was mistakable.” He then summoned a keyblade of his own, and charged. But Xehanort was ready for him.
“Stop!” was all he had to say, and at once, the second man froze. “Now… it’s about time to reveal the identity of my stalker.” He pulled down the second mans hood to show his face. He had brown hair, with brown eyes to match, and looked like he was in his mid twenty’s. “Ah, Relzark. I should have known. Well, I believe a nice memory wipe should suffice…” he backed away slightly from Relzark, and held up his free hand. In his hand, a ball of dark energy seemed to be forming. He then fired it, and it hit Relzark, square in the head. Xehanort opened yet another portal, and threw Relzark in. “Now, back to business…”
End of prologue.
hope you liked this, and will like the rest of it when it comes out.
Prologue.
The endless abyss: an aptly named void, where there is only darkness, and a place called Kingdom Hearts. But Kingdom Hearts is more than just a place. It is the heart of all, the heart of existence. For it to be lost would be chaos. But that is not to be worried about, for there is a key, and a keybearer to wield it. That key protects all hearts from being taken by darkness, it protects kingdom hearts from being taken by darkness, and it protects the worlds from being destroyed. At least, it usually does.
A portal appeared suddenly, and a man emerged from it. The man looked old and hunched. He had no hair on his head except for a small beard, his ears were pointed, he wore black boots, white gloves, a white shirt, and a black cloak. But his most noticeable feature was his eyes. Cold, yellow, and soulless, they were very unpleasant. The man had appeared in front of a very large door. He then came closer, with a hungry look in his eye, and as he approached the door, he summoned a sword that looked very much like a giant key. Once he had reached the door, he pointed the key-blade upward and a strange thread of light connected itself with the door. Then there was a click to signify the door being unlocked.
Another portal appeared along with another man. The new man wore only black gloves, black boots, and a black robe with a hood that hid his face from view.
“Get away from the door!” said the second man. “Now, Xehanort!”
“Heh heh heh… And how did you find me, exactly?” said the man called Xehanort.
“The dark scent of course,” said the second man. “It’s so strong on you, there was no way it was mistakable.” He then summoned a keyblade of his own, and charged. But Xehanort was ready for him.
“Stop!” was all he had to say, and at once, the second man froze. “Now… it’s about time to reveal the identity of my stalker.” He pulled down the second mans hood to show his face. He had brown hair, with brown eyes to match, and looked like he was in his mid twenty’s. “Ah, Relzark. I should have known. Well, I believe a nice memory wipe should suffice…” he backed away slightly from Relzark, and held up his free hand. In his hand, a ball of dark energy seemed to be forming. He then fired it, and it hit Relzark, square in the head. Xehanort opened yet another portal, and threw Relzark in. “Now, back to business…”
End of prologue.
hope you liked this, and will like the rest of it when it comes out.
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