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Okay, that was really great. I really liked that Riku did not end up in the asylum. I also liked that Sora and Kairi are showing some homesickness. I also liked the description of Riku in the asylum; that was really good. What I do not like are Constance and Ezekiel. Those two are really starting to piss me off with all their plans and bad intentions. Can't think of any improvements; everything was good. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.