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With Phoenix and Corbinek I shall do what nobody has ever dreamed of before. I want to take the boundaries of the digital world further than ever. Let's work together and make it happen...
Name:
Phoenix Chester Brembs
Age:
14
Gender:
A growing boy
Digivice Color:
The left side is white with the right side being gold. The underside of Phoenix's digivice is translucent.
Appearance:
^click^
Phoenix is a normal looking boy that stands at 5'6, as puberty is still something that has him growing he is kind of thin weighing only 115 pounds but it events out with his frame. His body isn't heavily muscled and overdone as he hasn't had much time to work out ridiculously like some people years older than he have done but he still is nice looking. His bright red hair and red eyes always stick out since it is such an abnormality to have such features.
He also has a pierced lip and several piercings in his ears but no tattoos or other markings.
Persona:
When you look at Phoenix it would be easy to assume that he is a sullen individual that is angry and would stay away from people but as appearances can be very deceiving that's not at all the case. In fact, Phoenix is an upbeat teenager that is often willing to help out those in need and quite a joy to be around. He's humorous and frank and very open minded to the world, especially after what happened to him when he was a child. Phoenix happens to have a very violent display of his emotions. Not to say he is always physically violent but rather eccentric in the way he classes things and acts from moment to moment. If one were to cause this child harm he would question the reason for doing so and try to figure out if they were being truthful or not.
Running off at the mouth isn't something Phoenix tries to do often but he will if that is what is necessary for his opinions to get heard. There are simply times when ignorance holds people back from the truth and Phoenix doesn't like that at all. Its the reason he is such an honest person and constantly tries to control his emotions for the better, without also hiding them away and becoming a shell of nothingness.
His individuality among others is very extreme and though he flourishes in friendships and being a friendly person. {hoenix always remains himself and refuses to step off his path no matter what the cost. This stubborn nature can sometimes get Phoenix into trouble; Even though he acts this way there is always the seeding thoughts of other people's safety, so when being reckless he tries to contain it as much as possible so that other people aren't pulled into it and harmed if he can help it.
Phoenix has an intellect that is staggering; his IQ is 188 making his own level of comprehension ridiculous. He sometimes feels bad about others, especially when they are simply too ignorant or naive to understand his thought processes, whether they be about politics, science, the digital world or any other topic that could come up from day to day. Phoenix is not the type of kid to feign any type of idiocy, his thoughts can be easily known by the way he speaks to others. He is naturally shrewd as an individual, making sure to keep his own motives in check and also respect the boundaries(within reason) of those that cross his path.
Belongings:
A cell phone that is certainly out of the ordinary. Within it there is a massive internal storage that holds unknown data via Phoenix's tampering.
A knapsack that is filled with quick charge batteries, capsules, a specialized recording device and several other random objects including a tablet, rope and a first aide kit
A hacked bit card
A pendant with a peculiar jewel that shines brightly even in the day time. This pendant also glows in the dark.
Crest:
Light
Bio:
For many years Phoenix has been playing an online game with monsters that were able to "digivolve". He was introduced to the game by his father originally, knowing that his son was beyond the comprehension of other children his age, the government had been experimenting with gaming and technology. He studied the game inside and out, often being made fun of by others who just assumed the game he played was stupid. As the game progressed he grew quite fond of a particular monster that was named Corbinek in the game.
Life got a lot busier once Phoenix got into seventh grade, he didn't have a lot of time to play games as he had before but never realized the importance of what had been happening for years on end. The use of computers and more recently his cell phone had been used to establish a great relationship with a digimon and he was clueless to this. Simply being a genius can often blind the fact about feelings and the odd sensation about how reactive Corbinek had always been inside the game, almost like he was REAL.
For the next two years Phoenix played his favorite game on and off, hacking it by screwing around with the sever logs and seeing what he could do to change the mechanics of his favorite monster. One day a month before leaving for summer camp in Virginia, Phoenix saw that his father had deleted the game from his laptop and all the servers had been wiped out. A minor case of depression swept over Phoenix. Even it had been a game he missed the smart comments that the adorable gold monster had said when he played.
He arrived at summer camp and since then has been thinking about the game and trying to make friends with some of the other weird kids there...
Digimon Partner:
Corbinek
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Agumon Hakase(Gold)
~Move List~
Harmonious Manipulation
The thought processes of Corbinek are at a level unheard of by any normal type of rookie-class digimon. By using his mind alone, Corbinek can harmonize his thoughts with the data and patterns within and surrounding objects. He is able to influence and move items in this manner but isn't strong enough to lift or pull heavy objects(items weighing more than 100 lbs)
Ether Rod
Though lightweight and thin in appearance, Corbinek's rod acts as a conduit to a force within data known as ether. He can use this rod to attack and defend with, producing enough force bash opponents and send them flying with less effort than would be needed.
Ether-Flame Breath
Corbinek channels a small amount of ether inside his mouth and then simultaneously releases a fire ball with it. This causes the fire ball to be much hotter and creates a moderate pink explosion. When defended against the flame ball can quickly burn foes.
Doctor's Hat
The hat atop Corbinek's head is used to amplify the the processing abilities of both himself and rookie digimon when they wear it. The gem near the tassel is made of crystallized ether.
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MewGreymon
~Move List~
Golden Harmonious Manipulation
Corbinek's thoughts become even more focused than they were in his rookie stage, granting him the ability to generate concussive force behind the actions he produces using his mind as an outlet. His control is more precise than before and Corbinek's body radiates a golden shine as he manipulates objects. The limits using this ability are also increased, Corbinek can lift an excess of 1000 pounds or produce said force.
Mega Ether Flame
A torrent of flames stream out from Corbinek's mouth in a display of pinkish white flames that have been influenced by ethereal force. These flames are terribly hot, potent and effective. They can ignite various materials on fire that normally wouldn't even burn, including the ground and other earthen materials.
Photon Head Smash
Corbinek glows violently with a golden aura and charges the opponent, ramming them with his horn causing piercing and impact damage. The aura manifests into a horn shaped projectile that causes concussive heat damage, then explodes in a blinding flash of light to disorient a targeted foe in the vicinity.
Solar Bang
Energy rapidly is absorbed into Corbinek's mouth via the pink markings along his body. This energy is shaped into a spherical mass of photons mixed with ethereal particles and then released. As it travels the mass of dual forces expands and then explodes causing a pink mushroom cloud.
Bright Fallout
Corbinek uses a technique that has properties of both Solar Bang and Mega Ether Flame but manipulates the forces used without using his mouth. Instead he causes a line to tear across the ground and then makes it erupt in a huge geyser of fire, light and ethereal particles. The explosive force of this attack is very high.]
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GigaGreymon
~Move List~
Hyper Harmonious Manipulation
Once digivolved into his ulimate stage of being, Corbinek as GigaGreymon gains use of his mind to become a major influence to the digital world around him. He can produce ether around himself, forming it into various states of chrome digizoid. Corbinek has extensive motor control of his ability to manipulate data and can move and influences various objects over an extended range. The weight he can lift is now well over 2 tons and the force exerted could go beyond that. Use of this data manipulation now allows Corbinek to fly at excessive speeds.
Radiant Dramon Killers
The weapons on Corbinek's hands can be generated and retracted at will. They are composed of pink chrome digizoid which intensifies cutting power and adds virus type damage to the weapons, which makes them even more effective in battle. The radiating energy which emits from the RDK can cut through dramon type digimon with ease and extends to buffer damage from their attacks when Corbinek guards using his hands while they are equipped.
Brave and Fearless Shield
The golden adornments upon Corbinek's body are made of gold chrome digizoid; this type of specialized matter is made to withstand extreme pressure, heat, light, cold and the forces of darkness. Corbinek can close these wing-like attachments over himself and produce a larger shield made specifically for defensive purposes.
Ultra-Force Bomb
Corbinek raises his hands into the air and draws in ambient particles of energy from the atmosphere and the heavens above, forcing these energies into a single spot between his raised hands. It remains as a small speck of energy but contains immense destructive capabilities. As it travels foes often can barely see the Ultra-Force Bomb and yet they are subject to heat, light, gravity, plasma and etheral damage. While it moves closer to the ground the fierce compilation making the bomb can rip asunder the ground and produce tremors that ripple with shining light.
Orion Buster
Corbinek uses his speed and manipulation of light to move and produce doppelgangers that are composed entirely out of light, with a core made from ether. He attacks with a vicious assault combination where with each strike, a doppelganger burst around the damage Corbinek causes. After seven strikes all of the doppelgangers form into a single claw with the visage of Corbinek's RDK and Corbinek slashes across the enemy with it.
Giga-Force Supernova
By taking the limit off the Ultra-Force bomb, Corbinek can cause it to expand into a gigantic mass of holy energy that houses a nexus of ethereal force. This attack is easily ten times more powerful than the Ultra-Force Bomb and may even rival the power of WarGreymon's Terra Force attack.
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OzmaGreymon
~Move List~
Ascended Harmonic Force
Naturally, Corbinek's essences act as a conduit to the force of ether. His body can use this force to produce alarming effects of manipulation in a plethora of ways that include: Telekinesis, energy projection, force field creation, bionic enhancement, astral manipulation and warp digivolution of other digimon. As an ascended mega level digimon, Corbinek can use his mind to accomplish many tasks inside an area of influence that has gotten progressively larger each time he digivolved. At this point his manipulation is both untamed and monstrous...
Eteru Jigen-Katana
The sword that Corbinek carries in fact an entire dimension in itself. It holds within it an undetermined amount of space that houses ethereal dragons. These dragons can be drawn out of the sword to be used in attacks that are earth and sky shaking. Even while inside, act as a focal point for the tremendous power the blade has at its disposal. Being dimensional in nature allows for Corbinek to produce "Ozma" tears; being dimensional rifts that the sword forms which in sync with AHF allow OzmaGreymon to teleport vast distances across the digital world and take others with him. Due to the concentration it takes to perform dimensional travel, it is nearly impossible to create Ozma tears in battle.
Eteru Jigen no Yoroi
Much like his blade, OzmaGreymon is adorned in a golden armor that has several dimensional aspects. The armor itself is immune to any type of spiritual damage as it houses a dimension which contains ether, also brimming holy force to damage any digimon that the armor senses is going to harm Corbinek or those he cares about. This armor apparently gives Corbinek monstrous strength, defense, agility and regenerative capabilities via use of ethereal force. If Corbinek were to remove the armor, it is rumored he would transcend into another being altogether...
Shōmetsu no Shinjitsu
A simple attack where Corbinek holds out his palm and a massive eruption of ether energy mixed with solar flames emits outward at foes. The immense force of this attack can simply erase digimon if they take too much damage and the blast created from the explosion of the attack looks like a nuclear detonation.
Endo· Obu· Deizu
The end of days. OzmaGreymon shatters his armor and releases an omnidirectional wave of data breaking essence that can effect and start to dismantle a large area. Using this attack means that Corbinek is about to ascend.Spoiler Show
OrsaGreymon
~Data Breaker List~
Digimon Personality:
Corbinek is an individual digimon that is quaint and openly chipper with no fear of persecution or harm. His faith is higher than most other digimon as he holds fast the idea that his friends and the people around him can overcome anything they need to at any time. Flamboyancy is also another obvious nature that Corbinek has, he is kind of mischievous but not extremely so. Like Phoenix, he is very intelligent, his knowledge of digimon types and species has given him an immense understanding of the processes that fuel the digital world. His peculiar and dangerous line of Greymon digivolutions reflect the use of such knowledge. This digimon's own evolved sentient nature is witnessed by the use of the name Corbinek.
Other:
Bodily Skill
Phoenix is skilled in physical combat, he was used to being beaten up as a younger child and got involved with various programs to defend himself including judo, tae-kwon do, mixed martial arts and an adaptation of his knowledge of street fighting.(he grew up in Orlando) Phoenix has conditioned his body well beyond that of the slinky 14 year old body he displays and can use his body effectively to defend himself and perform acrobatics. Phoenix admits he isn't a master gymnast or martial artist, even if that would be amazing. He is simply aware that he is no push over.
Spatial Awareness
Phoenix has an odd notion of observation to possess an uncanny sense of geometry, in this sense used to describe his observation of objects around himself and the angles/distances etc found between/near surfaces of these objects.
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Spoiler ShowName:
Hazen Gregory(Beelzemon)
Age:
34
Gender:
Male
Sin:
The primordial sin of gluttony, the desire to constantly consume and have more and more. The literal need to have an abundance of everything imaginable can often cause Hazen to act maniacally as the feeling itself is utterly and completely tantalizing. This is the main reason Hazen has such overwhelming force at his disposal even though he has no need to even use such resources.
Appearance: <-----
Hazen is a mega level digimon but he looks and sounds like a rookie level. He is very short, standing at 3 feet and eleven inches in height. Crimson hair unlike that of the typical Beelzemon fans backfrom from the Gluttonous Lord's head with a blue mask covering the majority of Hazen's childlike facial features.
As the lord of gluttony, there is a ridiculous amount of data and leather packed into the biker outfit Hazen adorns on his body, each separate piece of clothing is imbued with micro fibers consisting of obsidian digizoid. These fibers not only give Hazen's clothing the ability to transform, they also manifest special incarnum forces.
The two sets of wings located on Hazen's back and at a less common area near his the hips allow flight but in fact are used for another purpose involving the deadly assimilation of nether into into Hazen's body.
Personality:
Beelzemon is in fact an insanely mature digimon with a natural draw to perversion and an intense behaviorism that is mostly loud talk and amusement. He's a cock individual and rightly so as one of the Demon Lords. One could say that he likes to take things easy and by all means take everything in stride. He's normally so calm and bemused by everything that is going on that people aren't even sure if he's paying perfect attention or simply spaced out.
Frankly, Hazen is more than likely the most gluttonous digimon to ever exist thus far. He exhibits an extreme desire to obtain more and more of most things that he has seen or heard about. Hazen has continued to display these desires and as such has ALWAYS been rich within the digital world. Having a drive to have obtain things both immaterial and material has branched out from Hazen to make him a digimon knowledgeable of the world he rules in, simply from the massive amounts of info he has obtained. The gluttony he displays has no bounds so Beelzemon has no problem using horrific acts of violence, betrayal, or lies to manipulate any situation to obtain that which he MUST have.
His perspective is more intense than entire room full of people, so with each action there is an exact reason behind whatever Hazen does, even in situations where it doesn't seem like there is a lot of time for logic. Also rude and right to the point, Beelzemon plays no games and will resort to violence quickly just because he can.
Skills:
King of Nether
^click^
When Hazen uses this ability, he unleashes the forces inside himself and uses the full force of his dark power. In this ascended necrotic form, Hazen surpasses the seals on his nether manipulation and all pre-existing forms of power he can produce as both a Sin Lord and Beelzemon.
Bio:
Hazen Gregory is a digimon that is unlike others of his class and even type. He may be a Beelzemon but his smaller size and alternate color scheme alone are a hint at the difference between himself and other digital beings. When he was still an Impmon, Hazen was trapped in a parallel reality housed inside of the dark zone when an accident occurred between himself and Wizardmon his only friend. Subjected to the very soul of Wizardmon being inside him while trapped in a place that was filled with the essence of naught transformed Hazen, causing him to warp digivolve into his current form.
At first Hazen was angry that his body was much smaller than it should have been but soon came to realize that he'd become a magical being that harnessed the forces of darkness and incarnum force. He began to wield necroplasm in sync with his magical talents absorbed from Wizardmon which produced a vast array of magical tampering and powers for Hazen to desire more of. He loved the feeling of necroplasm and the things he could do with it. He used necroportals to move around the digital world and indulge himself in the many pleasures the digital world had to offer. If there were those whom wanted to harm Hazen, he simply blasted them to bits using necro force or generated a weapon out of a form of nothingness housed within his being.
There came a time when he was feeling lazy but still desired to have a huge amount of just about anything, so instead of waste extra time Hazen wandered off to a place where great and powerful digimon were located. He was amazed when a familiar present revealed itself and then spoke, "Hazen?? Is that you...I thought we'd never see each other again!!!" Hazen literally peeled his face off and put it back on in shock. His follower was none other than his old Wizardmon friend whom was now a Piedmon. The two compared and contrasted how being trapped inside the parallel dark zone had changed them completely and what it felt like to be a digimon that could perform feats others could not.
Piedmon taught Beelzemon how to manifest his dark forces more potently and how to expand upon the notions of the disaster forces, thus causing Hazen to manipulate the dark elements. Around this time Hazen was propositioned by Lucemon to become one of the Demon Lords of Sin. Hazen didn't really care about what Lucemon had to say but accepted the offer, it was yet another means to acquire a boundless amount of riches and other items that he'd more than likely never use. Now with nobody to rightly stop his gluttonous ambitions, he chooses to do whatever, whenever and destroy all that oppose, or aren't furthering his goals. Piedmon is normally close by or involved with some Hazen in some way.
Other:
The names of Hazen's guns are Ref and Gar.
Hazen Gregory is a name Beelzemon uses to further separate himself from the nature of other digimon.
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Decided to just stick with Barbamon instead of adding a digidestined character too. What with the addition of his digimon servants, I'll have to focus on them as well. ^^
Name: Barbamon
Age: 94
Gender: Male
Sin: Greed in its most corruptible form. Even if all the treasures that litter the digital world were combined, it would still not satisfy this Demon Lord’s insatiable hunger.
Appearance: Barbamon (Demon Lord Form)
Demon Lord: Barbamon’s six bat like red wings stretch from his back and shamanic style clothes, as his long beard falls to nearly his feet. While some hangs along the front of his jewels and clothes, it is quite easy to see much more remains permanently hidden underneath them. With a gold almost pointed beak like mask covering his face, the Demon Lord never reveals himself completely, at least willingly. His sickly pale skin is for all to see, thanks to his massive clawed hands and bone thin arms, adorned in all manner of rings and bracelets of solid gold.
Illusionary: Once Barbamon has acquired enough information, he may take on a form that would best steer his path to more greed and power. While it is true he needs data to do this, the Demon Lord can create a more realistic form thanks to his control over the Den of Demons within the Dark Area.
Personality: The quiet manipulator, Barbamon has a way to slip his claw like grip into any situation, high jacking it over for his own control before twisting it to his own goals and whims. Barbamon’s greed is quite evident with that aspect of his personality, to the point that almost nothing within the digital world that happens goes unnoticed by him.
With complete control over the Den of Demons deep within the Dark Area, Barbamon greets any and all who are unfortunate enough to end up there. Whether this is in his normal form, or the various illusionary bodies he creates for the more stubborn of arrivals, it is quite known that he will always get what he wants.
Attacks:
Death Lure: Uses his demonic staff "Death Lure" to tempt/hypnotize his prey into an inescapable living hell, converting them to wickedness.
Crimson Flame: An orb of pulsating hell fire forms on the head of the staff before it can be unleashed in a consuming blast of flames.
Unfinished Business: Tapping into the energies of the Dark Area, Barbamon is able to summon digimon that have become nothing much but piles of random data, granting them a physical form momentarily in order to unleash an attack.
Brothers in Darkness: Similar to Unfinished Business, Barbamon may summon fallen digimon in order to have them drag his enemies down to the Dark Area.
Wicked Strike: Taking to the air swiftly, thanks to his numerous wings, the Demon Lord will focus his dark powers within the collection of jewels that drape around his neck, before firing in all directions around him as beams of corruptible energy.
Strong over Weak: By consuming corrupted weak digimon, he is able to add their data to the Den of Demons or himself for use of either later or immediately.
Pandæmonium Lost: Unleashes all of the Dark Area's evil energies at once as an extremely high-temperature explosion that burns up everything without a trace. Even MaloMyotismon's "Screaming Darkness" releases only a fraction of these energies.
Skills:
Return from Oblivion: As ruler of the Den of Demons Barbamon can mould and use the data of all digimon who have fallen into nothing, in order to create his almost never depleting forces. Fallen Angel digimon seem to make up the majority of this.
Reign of the Lower Realms: Even when he is not within the Den of Demons or even the Dark Area itself, he retains a somewhat symbiotic link to the realm allowing him to tap into its, and therefore his, power.
The Schemer: As his powers of manipulation is well known, only the strongest willed can resist his temptations. That said, many simple minded digimon have fallen prey to Barbamon’s treachery with surprising ease, with even the more technologically advanced lifeforms of the digital world falling under his command. With the rapid spread of the X-Antibody, creatures with an affinity of spreading destruction and disease through the very core network of the Digital World, have been seen to be apart of Barbamon's growing number of servants.
Bio: Like many of the Demon Lords, Barbamon was once one of the highest ranked of any Angel digimon, equal to that of the ranks of Lilithmon and even Lucemon. Like those of his previously mentioned angels, Barbamon allowed his sin, his greed, to consume him, causing his fall along with his brothers and sisters.
Banished to depths even lower than the deepest parts of the Net Ocean, Barbamon awoke to a realm full of the cries of deleting fallen digimon. With time, as those who ruled from up high created the Four Sovereign digimon, Barbamon and his fellow Demon Lords built their forces while growing more powerful with their new found abilities.
While the others spread out, conquering more of the Dark Area before reaching to locations like Server and Folder Continents and even File Island, Barbamon choose to remain within the Den of Demons from which this powerful digimon watched the surface world, gaining more and more knowledge from those who fell to corruption.
Other: As if as a display of his power and status, Barbamon travels throughout the digital world onboard his own personal GranLocomon, ploughing through anything unlucky enough to stand in its way. It is said that those who are drawn to greed of any kind, may find themselves feeling for the final time a loud trembling of the earth followed by the blasting sound of a whistle.
I claim courage. Just gonna use Vandesdelca.
Also Dracomon and the aerial forms are mine.
Gotcha, crest of honesty and Hagurumon line reserved.Going to hastily reserve the virtue of honesty and Hagurumon's line, staying away from adding any more Dragon-like digimon and deciding to go the Andromon route.
Geez, you people with quick responses and ninja edits XD
Can I reserve a spot for a Digidestined, with the crest of Love? Going with Renamon (and digivolutions) as a partner digimon.
DMrayZ said:Both, I'll be taking Daemon if that's alright. As for the digidestined, can we create a new crest?
Shinra said:Name: Renn Allen Gurski
Age: 13
Gender: Renn Be a Dude
Digivice Color: The left side is a steel-toned gray whereas the right is Snow white.
Appearance: <-Clicky he's the one at the bottom with the brown hair... everything seems pretty normal about him appearance-wise, Standing at about 5'5 and is a pretty average weight if not a little on the heavy side at 120 pounds. His eyes are a dark oceanic blue and he's built mostly from his core to his knees and a little bit in his arms.
Persona:most people would think he's your typical average guy but he usually proves that judgement wrong pretty often... The smile that you usually see on his face is a trick... Dispite his young age he's had to endure many hardships so he puts on a brave face even in the most trying of circumstances. He's also smarter than he lets on, but he usually likes to act as the mediator between the prodigies and those who don't get it at all by reducing it to a level that the rest can understand...
On the inside though is an almost broken youth. He's all but given up on his life just because of his ordeals but there's one thing going for him. his will to never give up and to come back stronger than before. In other words his Resolve. Bad news is it is currently a glass cannon. He doesn't use his logic when he relies on it so you can poke one hole in his pride and bring him right back down to the dumps.
But due to that he also appears very mature compared to everyone else because of it.
Belongings:
Doesn't really have much besides his wits and the clothes on his back although he does have a Cell phone and a Playstation portable with a 16GB memory stick that is mostly armed with games, MP3 files for Music and multiple audiobooks that he stashes in his right pocket as well as couple pictures that leave him with about 400MB worth of space left.
He also carries a large green book which is a copy of Inheiritance by Christopher Paolini.
Crest: Resolve
Bio: Renn's life, as I said before has been pretty harsh leading up to this point. His family had a lot of bad luck.
His Father died in an accident at a construction site two months before he was born, And since his Mom barely had any income, in order to put enough money aside for Renn's Schooling down the line, she started looking for a possible father figure while working part time. Flash forward two years and Renn's mother was starting to realize she might not make enough money in time and taking care of Renn was taxing. She was fired from her part-time job shortly after this realization. She soon turned to prostitution and began making good money for her son's education. But another snag hit her.
One of her clients got her pregnant. The shock made her lose the will to live and she died in childbirth although Renn's baby half-sister named Keirana was healthy. He kissed her cheek and smiled at her but when he looked at his Mom, Tears started falling from his eyes and his happiness turned to rage toward his sister. He was to turn 4 years old the next day and he didn't know what was going on. His mother had died because of this little half-blood abomination. His newborn mutt-sister was sent to a nursery and he to an orphanage. He spent 6 months in that Orphanage, festering the thought of that little mongrel stealing his own mother from him because she had done so much for him.
After those 6 months someone came to take Renn home. It was his grandmother from his father's side... She was pretty well off and she was told by his mother to take care of him and he was also notified of his mother creating a bank account for him and it was more loaded than he thought. It would be enough to get him through university.
Ever since then he's stayed with his grandparents. Trying to forget the pain of losing all that he valued most. In school he made his family proud. Straight A+'s every subject, every grade to date... And to decide to limit his time inside his grandparents sent him to the camp.
Okay, Renn I'm not going be a total dick, but if I am, I'm giving you a fair warning.
I understand you want to go with the cliche setting and that is cool and all, but your character's personality does not fit with the crest you have chosen. On the crest specifically, it makes little to no sense. Resolve isn't a unique personality trait, it's something you have. Like, for example, Tai in season 1 had the resolve to face Etemon cause he had to do it or else his friends and the digital world would be destroyed. Secondly, your grammar makes me want to cringe. I'm sorry, but it's true. I'm not meaning to be an asshole/douchebag/dickhole, but yeah. Thirdly, the bio you gave switches from you talking to describing the life of your character. I'm not digging that at all. Now, again, not meaning to sound mean, but you don't make it easy for me. Lastly, and I believe this is the most important. You're copying the format that Tav used right down to the very last detail. Sure, imitation is the sencerest form of flattery, but aside from inserting your own "stamp" on it, it's a complete rip of HIS character. I'm not going to deny the character based on that alone, but for everything I've said, this character is hereby denied. Sorry bro.
I also expected that critique and rejection.
Need to working on my templating skills... been getting rusty lately...
well ok it's kinda weird but it's sorta weird I can tell when I'm off my game so I can tell when I did something wrong but I was pretty tired so I just dismissed it until you brought it up again... and maybe that's true as well but I can hardly tell when I'm doing really well with a template or not or something like that... ok I'm gonna edit my template but not now because I need to hit the hay... night Kenny
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Name: Lucemon
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Sin: Lucemon is pride. The very aspect of his being is every essence that Pride is. He IS pride.
Appearance:
Child form
Wrapped with a bright, whitish-yellow light always, Lucemon in his Child Form looks like a little angel. Literally, he looks like an angel. He has ten white wings that surround his entire body, and when wrapped around him, they can be cover him in a shield. Lucemon in this form, is about four feet high and weighs at 70lbs.
He bares a white robe as his choice of attire. It actually looks like it’s from his wings. He has a purple, tribal tattoo that goes all through his entire body, legs and all. His hair is blonde, and short with his eyes being white, but not mindless. Lastly, Lucemon has four Holy Rings. One on his right arm, one on his left arm, and one on each leg. His skin is pale white.
Lucemon Chaos Form
Growing about two feet in height, Lucemon is six feet, and almost four times his original weight. So, that would equal about two hundred and ten pounds. Through this major change, the first thing you would notice about Lucemon is that he is divided in a black and white color scheme. This is extremely evident in his wings, and how his body is colored. On one side is angelic white, and the other is demonic black..
Lucemon’s attire shows the black/white division, as well. He wears an armor set that has a white mid-section, black outer with crimson in some areas. He’s got some gold-shaded parts on the upper-torso, and legging sections. On his hands, black and red gauntlets are seen. On his legs, there are two gold weeks on each side of his boots.
Lucemon’s nails grow out with a white nail polish on the white side and a black nail polish on the white side. His hair grew out quite a bit. Most of his is tied into a ponytail in the back, but the rest hangs out in two, evenly-aligned, vertical bangs. His eyes move into a violet shade.
Lucemon Shadowlord Form
To put it simple, Lucemon is a dragon in this form. He is a big purple dragon with big teeth, big claws, and big everything. Gold armor covers his claws and front part of his head that arches in the back. His tail from top to bottom, has holy rings off the yin-yang. His size is rather big, too. He comes to a whopping 200 feet long, and almost two tons in weight.
Hovering over and around Lucemon is the crowns of the seven deadly sins — Greed, Lust, Envy, Sloth, Wrath, Gluttony, and Pride. Gripped in his claws is a gigantic orb which hold the true form of Lucemon in all of his larva glory.
Personality:
Base Personality:
Lucemon is a narcissist in every sense of the word. If there was such an evil digimon that thought of himself above even the rest of the Seven Demon Lords of the Digital World, it would be Lucemon.
Lucemon Child Form Personality:
Lucemon’s demeanor is definitely narcissist, but in his child form, Lucemon is more reflecting on how little he sees others. He reflects on how better he is than them, and how insignificant they are to him. His pride gets the better of him, but just to a degree. Lucemon is highly intelligent, so he knows when to not overestimate his superiors, his equals, or his opponents. His power is only another addition to how his arrogance can sometimes take over, but he never lets it go too far.
Lucemon Chaos Form Personality:
This is where the ball game changes. Lucemon is too cocky for his own kind. He’s arrogant beyond belief, and his own ego always gets the better of him. He is indeed much more intelligent that what he is in his Child Form, but also with that comes a more dominant, self-absorbed nature. The way he makes up his decisions is how he views everything. It’s like he wants to help everyone, but his way of doing that is destroying the world. It’s sort of a contradictory ideal. Lucemon wants to help build a better world, but in order for him to do that, he must destroy it. The ego is high in this one.
Lucemon Shadowlord/Satan Mode Personality
Simply a monster. Not aware of any actions aside death and destruction. In this form, Lucemon’s most demonic, and downright ugly traits of his narcissist self takes over. Believing no one is better than him, Lucemon goes on an unstoppable rage. The only way he can be stopped is if he is killed. It’s like this. Either you kill him or he kills you. Capeesh?
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Child Form:
Grand Cross: From his ten wings comes one super-heated orb. Once all ten are formed, they are fired simultaneously in the form much like Seraphimon’s “Strike of the Seven Stars”. It is also rumored to be stronger.
Divine Feet: By using his incredible speed, Lucemon rushes in towards an opponent, and delivers a flurry of kicks at lightning-fast speeds.
Cosmic Downpour: By calling to the heavens, shooting stars strike down at a single enemy. The hit-miss rate depends on the power of the star.
Chaos Form:
Paradise Lost Punch: A combo attack that includes launching the opponent into the air, a flurry of blows, and then grabbing their limbs, and finishing with a dive into he ground.
*Ultimate Sacrifice: Produces a three-dimensional*magic square as a glowing orb of Light and Darkness and traps the opponent within this orb, which has a 50/50 chance of either completely annihilating them, or merely inflicting massive damage.
Deadly Role: By combining speed, power with his Chaos nature, Lucemon summons up red energy balls, and by rolling in the air in a summersalt formation, he fires one at a time until they are all gone. There are five.
Chaotic Cross: A demonic version of Grand Cross. Instead of ten white energy orbs, there are five black and five white ones. The white ones have a yellow, misty fog surrounding them, and the black ones have a staticy red energy surrounding them. They are fired in the same fashion.
Chaotic Downpour: By raising his hands to the sky, Lucemon calls for the power of the Chaotic nature to which summons a barrage of black stars that fire down at random points.
shadow lord Mode:
Tide of Despair: Flames from Lucemon’s mouth shoot, and purify anything it touches, good or bad.
Annihilation Maelstrom: Seven-colored lights shoot out from the seven crowns on Lucemon’s back. Each have their own elemental property.
Icy Blue: Ice
Orange: earth
Red: Fire
Royal Blue: Water
Purple: Pure Energy
Green: wind
Yellow: Lightning
Dimension Slahser: by roaring loudly, a rip in the dimensions comes only in the form that it slashes the opponent.
Chaos Pulse: The orb that Lucemon holds in his gigantic arms, it pulses, and a stream of destruction emits from it only causing despair. This pulse is powered by Yin&Yang manipulation.
Demonic Smack: Lucemon smacks his opponents with his gigantic tail.
Demonic Light: The rings along his tail glow, and fire little blasts of red energy at the opponent.
Strike of the Chaotic Savior: By putting everything he has , Lucemon’s entire body glows with an evil red glow. By roaring loudly, the dimensions rip. Not only is it one, but several of them are opened. From them shoots multiple rays of red, white, and black energy. Anything that it touches, depending on the color, is either purfied, burned, or vaporized.
White: Purified
Red: burned eternally
Black; Vaporized.
Skills:
Chaos Manipulation:
The pure essence of the chaotic realm. A power that involved anything impure, disasterly, or otherwise, the opposite of everything good. Lucemon has this ability. His affiliation of the Chaos nature gives him almost unlimited ranges of the Chaos affiliation. This could range from forming natural disasters and storms, actual chaotic energy manipulation, or just pure destruction. The forces that are potentially related are probably at Lucemon’s disposal.
Yin-Yang Manipulation:
Lucemon can command the even and uneven forces in the universe. These said forces are the forces that either make one have a strong sense of morality or a strong sense of justice. Lucemon can augment these forces to decide whether someone is good or evil. Lucemon can call to weak victims through telepathic means. He can make them think that wrong is right and right is wrong. He can make them give into their sins. It’s all about how weak-minded they are.
The Fallen Knights:
As the Demon Lord of Pride, Lucemon has the ability to summon the Royal Knights to his service. Much like how Beelzemon can summon up the Demon Digimon, he can call upon the Royal knights as his servants. Note that not all of the knights are up for grabs, but a majority of them are under Lucemon’s corruption.
Bio:
Lucemon started as all digimon do at one point or another; in a digi-egg. However, that’s where the general consensus ended. Even from his phase as a Digi-Egg, there was something off about Lucemon. The caretaker of the then Village of Beginnings, Togemon had serious doubts about whether or not she should attempt to raise this egg all the way up to its rookie stage. She knew there was something off about Lucemon, even in that stage, and when she came to the King of the Digital World, he agreed. However, his idea of dispersing of the evil wasn’t what Togemon thought was necessary. He told Togemon to destroy it, but she refused. The King argued with her on it, and they both came to the agreement that it should be placed deep within the Continent of Server, in a black and white box with the symbol of the vice, pride sealed with ancient Digi-seals. AND that was more than three hundred years ago(digital world time; 30 years real world time)
Lucemon had remained in his black and white box for several other decades until a foolish digimon who thought he could control the power of Lucemon opened it up. This foolish digimon was BlackWarGrowlmon. He thought that he was strong enough to even take charge of an egg-form of Lucemon, but what the foolish digimon didn’t realize was that Lucemon had already hatched from the egg and had already evolved into his child form. You see, Lucemon had then shaped the insides of the box into his own little kingdom, but the seals of the box forbid him from breaking free. He needed a foolish digimon to do that for him, and that’s where BlackWarGrowlmon comes into play. He unwraps the seals, and out comes Lucemon.
Within minutes of coming out, Lucemon had destroyed BlackWarGrowlmon from existence. It was easy and simple as the dinosaur-type digimon are simpletons. After he was released from the box, Lucemon wasn’t aware that he had been sealed away for over four hundred years. He also wasn’t aware that while the time he was sealed away, the digital world breathed life to six other digimon of his kind. Thus where he created the first ever alliance known as The Seven Digimon Demon Lord Alliance, but most just call them the Seven Sins of Evil. Within the next few years, they even got their own kingdom and became the most evil thing to happen within the digital world, and Lucemon was their leader.
Other:
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Name: Trip Ernesto Carlos Rodriguez
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Digivice Color: Red and Orange; Crest color is orange
Appearance:
People often tell Trip that he looks a bit older than what his physical appearance would give off. Physically, he looks to be about sixteen, but he really is only fourteen. His appearance really does confuse a lot of people. He also often gets really confused for being one who can drive. That’s not to say he doesn’t know how, cause he does, but that’s beside the point. He does look very mature as his hair is cut short, but not buzz cut short. His black hair really does compliment his standard Mexican tan skin. His brown eyes often give him a more robust look, but also his lean, athletic figure adds to that, as well. He finds himself being barely above five feet and two inches, but holds his weight steadily at 130.
His chosen attire often resonates with his father who wore the same thing as an adolescent. Starting off, he wears orange goggles on the top of his head with a matching red-orange patterned jacket. His T-shirt is blue on the top-half and white on the bottom-half. It has two orange rectangles on the right chest. Trip wears black pants with blue geometrical patterns. He also wears blue gloves with orange cuffs and blue-black shoes
Persona:
Some could say that Trip is modest, humble, and gentle. They are right about all of those things. His ideals are not large ones, but they are his own. People think that because he looks the way he does it means that he is rough around the edges and no compassion, but that’s quite the opposite. He’s full of love, compassion, and most of all, kindness. However, he’s very insecure about a lot of things, mainly about his physical appearance and how people assume a lot of things. Some could even say that Trip sometimes hides his true self in fear that people will take advantage of him, which sometimes they actually do that.
In the company of his family and friends, Trip is reserved. He holds himself at bay for any type of conversation, and he’s not good meeting strangers. Easily frightened and often insecure about meeting new people. Again, that’s where the insecurity comes to play. He’s even shy around his family sometimes. He feels as if they don’t truly understand him. He often feels alone and frightened by change and anything that is related to change. His family notices it and they try to bring him out of his shell, but they fail almost every time.
Despite all of this, Trip has a very gentle soul and he shows that when he’s around animals or when he’s doing things that he loves to do. For example, when he’s writing his poetry or listening to music, he doesn’t become loud and vocal. He’s as quiet as can be and makes sure he’s respectful. Like, seriously; his guy is so insecure about being around people, and drawing attention to himself. So, he’s not going to do something that would otherwise prompt people to notice him any more than they have to. He mainly listens to teen-angst punk music, sappy pop-punk, and instrumentals of his favorite anime.
Belongings:
When his parents sent him along to the summer camp, Trip took a lot of things with him that included the proper clothes, his Cell Phone, his favorite manga, his mp3 player, and a little notebook he writes his poetry in.
Crest: Kindness
Bio:
Being born into the Spanish, Islamic, Greek, Canadian, Mexican, and Argentinean heritage, it’s no surprise that Trip has a big family. His mom, born of the name Ashley Gabrielle Montoya, has roots of Spanish, Canadian, and Greek within her blood. His dad, born of the name, Carlos Rex Shuki Rodriguez, has roots of Islamic, Mexican, and Argentinean within his blood. The combined effort had thus created Trip, who’s birth name is actually Ernesto, but he chose the name Trip because he didn’t want to be just another kid in a Mexican country. It’s weird, but he finds pride that he is different.
Along the years, he grew up in Mexico City, Mexico. Now, one can assume that it really wasn’t that good of a childhood with the Drug Cartel always causing murders here and murders there. Trip just ignored it like anybody should. He didn’t want to get involved so that’s why he just adapted the shy persona he became known for. Sadly, this is also what led to a lot of unhappy birthdays. Even though he put on a happy face, he was unhappy for a lot of days. He had to put up the mask cause he didn’t want to disappoint his parents, but then they thought he would do good in this summer camp in America. It was a long shot, but they had to try and get their son to be more open about his feelings.
So, what Trip’s parents did was buy him a ticket to America, Richmond Virginia specifically, and sent him on his way to the summer camp where they hoped it would bring the better out of him. Trip himself wasn’t too sure about the idea. He was very nervous about meeting new people, but he is bi-lingual in English and Spanish, so he will not be at a total loss when it comes to talking to people. However, he still is very shy around new people and he fears he’ll embarrass himself. Oh well, he’ll just try to make the most of it, but he had no idea what he really was in for..
Digimon Partner: Hawkmon>Aquilamon>Silphymon>Valkyrimon
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Hawkmon
Moves:
Feather Strike:
Gripping the steel feather on top of his head, Hawkmon removes it and throws it like a boomerang. It has the cutting compacity of going through skin, bone, and for sure, steel.
Pecking Barrage:
Using his beak, Hawkmon physically assaults his opponents with his razor-sharp beak. The more that he does as such, the more a critical hit can be obtained.
Whirlwind Gust:
Usually done in the air, but can also be done on ground, Hawkmon flaps his wings to produce a small gust of wind to either damage his opponents with small cuts from the invisible wind blades in the gust or blow them away and/or unbalance their balance.
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Aquilamon
Moves:
Blast Rings:
By reaching deep into his being, Aquilamon unleashes a barrage of red, pink, and gold rings that contain data that often will deal damage in the form of what a basic energy attack would do. These rings have a decent amount of radius within them and Aquiliamon does it by opening up his mouth as he calls out “Blast Rings”
Grand Horn:
Using the power within him, Aquilamon extends his horns beyond its already amazing size and by ramming an opponent, he delivers severe damage to their physical body. Should the speed of his…well speed be high enough, Aquilamon could even strike the digicore, but not destroy it.
Feather Storm:
By making his wings glow with a red and orange radiance, Aquiliamon fires off a furious storm of razor-sharp feathers that sort of take the form of a tornado, but very different. It’s not high-octane wind. No, but rather an upgrade of Feather Strike. It has a more wide range and more cutting potential.
Whirlwind Tornado:
Flapping his wings at such fast speeds, Aquilamon creates a rather robust tornado from the force that his wings produce. Furthermore, this tornado appears to be the size of a small tornado. It will suck in anything with a light enough weight and as it sucks them in from the bottom, it will spit them out from the top sending them spinning off into the distance.
Diving Talon Crush:
When in the air, Aquilamon flies down at high speeds and uses his talons to grab an opponent or opponents, and tries to crush them to death or at least crush their bones.
Afterimage:
Quite more of a skill than an actual attack, but Aquilamon can create afterimages of himself due to the fast speeds his wings allow him to travel at. They are just that; nothing more, nothing less.
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Silphymon
Moves:
Static Force:
By concentrating his energy into each of his palms, Silphymon forms it into a ball, and fires it at his opponents. By the time its released, it’s condensed into a semi-solid beam of crimson energy.
Flaring Windstorm:
At first, Silphymon surrounds himself with a crimson, static field that emits a cracking sound. He then begins to fly at fast speeds, and while he attacks with kicks and punches, he also creates a windstorm that is produced by the actions of his fast flying. The end result is a temporary storm of crimson static and transparent, high winds that are centered around one or two opponents depending on how close they are together.
Feather Assault:
The feathers around Silphymon’s body glow and as copies are created, they fly off and multiply. They then follow the trace of any opponent, and attack mercilessly.
Astral Force:
A copy of Silphymon is created, and fights along side him for a certain amount of time. When that time limit is met, it will explode and produce a similar effect like that of Static Force.
Quicksilver Barrage
Silphymon, being such a quick flyer and fighter, goes into a frenzy as punches and kicks are met with any part of the opponent that he hits. He goes so fast that afterimages of him appear as he dashes from point a to point b.
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Valkyrimon
Moves:
Feral Sword Slash
Using his golden, Feral Sword, Valkyrimon swiftly slashes away. He can do up to ten slashes in five seconds without even so much as losing momentum while he does it.
Golden Flare Blast
Heavenly forces gather from Flyre’s mouth(the bird on Valkyrimon’s arm). These heavenly forces take the form of a pure white and gold beam that circles a wide radius cause Valkyrimon spins when this happens. Anything within a ten foot circumference will be hit with a purifying force that washes away any and all evil.
Optical Laser Beam
Strait from his eyes, Valkyrimon fires golden, thin beams at his opponents. These beams fire fast and quick, but most importantly, they have great piercing power.
Divine Kick
Using his swift movement, Valkyrimon uses his legs to kick the opponent9s) several times with great force behind it.
Arrows of Purification
Using his crossbow, Valkyrimon shoots out ten arrows one after another that are imbedded with a powerful data component that purifies any virus digimon of its virus. Should the digimon be evil to the core, it will simply destroy the digimon and make it cease from existence.
Sanction Storm
By simply raising up his right arm up, the calls of the Fryre call upon the winds and increase the wind currents in the air to create a hurricane-like storm that will only effect those who are truly evil or wish to do evil things.
Digimon Personality:
Overall, Hawkmon will act very calm and collected. In some aspects, he’s a been wild and protective, but that’s just in the nature of his namesake. Going off of that logic, when he ascends into his champion form, Aquilamon, he sometimes will act on his own accord, but only to an extent. He is extremely loyal to his master/partner/tamer, and will follow any order he or she would give no matter the extent of its reach. Into his last two forms, he remains the same in terms of how loyal he is. He is like the angel that protects whom he was sent to protect. His master/partner is the one he is sent to protect and he will do so with every fiber of his being. Hawkmon does have a sense of humor, and he will unknowingly make little cracks here and there.
Other:
Trip’s talking speech is orange
Hawkmon’s talking speech is brown
Likes
Anime
Listening to music
Reading Poetry
Writing Poetry
“Alone time”
Spicy food(not too spicy, though)
Dislikes
Crowds
Meeting more than one person at a time
Super salty food
Flying in an airplanes
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Attacks
Data Bite: Bites the opponent, fragmenting their data and collapsing them into malfunction based on where they were bitten.
Beat Knuckle: Assaults with earth-shattering force and wallops the opponent with its powerful claws.
Torrent Tornado: A ranged attack in which Monodramon runs towards his opponent, jumping into the air while simultaneously twisting his body and heading downward, leading with his horn which strikes any opponent that is within range.
Gliding Kick: Leaps high into the air before driving a powerful kick into his opponent.
Energy Claw: Some consider this the base form of Desolation Claw. By gathering data around his claws, Moondramon slashes the air to which literal claw-shaped energy constructs are formed and attack the opponent, damaging their data at a minimal stage.
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Attacks
Strike Fang: Causes all of the portions of its Metal Plate to burn red hot so that its whole body becomes a mass of flames, then rams the opponent.
Strike Claw: Infuses his fists with red hot energy before delivering a powerful uppercut.
Furious Flurry: Releases a flurry of devastating punches, the very energy of which travels several feat beyond his reach.
Spirit Spike: Builds up an enormous mass of energy in his horn, before charging head first into his opponent with enough force to pierce through many opponents
Flaring Speed Slash: Undergoing the transformation into what some call his 'Destructive Form', Strikedramon’s hair begins to glow almost as if it was on fire, his claws themselves become immersed in fiery-like energy data which he uses to slashe the opponent (or opponents) rapidly, until the data runs out or his opponent can no longer fight.
Tail Slam: Strikedramon uses his tail to slam the opponent down.
Jumping Cyclone Kick: By spinning up in the air as he himself jumps into it, Strikedramon delivers a barrage of rotating roundhouse kicks in a devastating cyclone of deadly force.
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Desolation Claw: Produces a super-oscillatory wave from both of its arms that destroys configuration data, completely erasing each of the opponents in the surrounding space without leaving behind a single scrap of data.
Cyberdramon fires energy threads that slowly wrap around the opponent and begin to induce incredible amounts of data that tears at the configuration of its victim. Lastly, as that happens, Cyberdramon fires a powerful beam out of his mouth The beam is blue and white with a shade of deep purple in it.
Shadow Shield: Raises a shield made of dark energy and digital information, both protecting him and poisoning his opponent with toxic data.
Chaos Collider: Creates orbs of dark energy that gather in his fists, then hammers them together, creating a wave of powerful dark energy that spreads out in front of him.
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Trinity Arm: Transforms its right arm into the "Accel Arm" for physical attacks, "Blitz Arm" for energy attacks, or "Critical Arm" for sharp cutting attacks.
Thunderclap (Accel Arm): Slams the Accel Arm to the ground, generating shockwaves.
Thunder Punch: Strikes the opponent with all his might, as electricity courses through his arm.
Number Cruncher (Accel Arm): Using the strength of his Accel Arm, Justimon grabs his opponent and crushes it's very data in his fist.
Justice Burst (Blitz Arm): Rapidly fires orbs of lightning from the Blitz Arm.
Loaded Justice (Blitz Arm):Charges up one powerful mass of energy, which he can then release at any moment.
Justice Purge (Blitz Arm):A single, thin-line beam shoots out of Justimon’s cannon-arm, and simply put, purges the threat in front of him. Does it do it completely? Not all the time, but when used, it will cease a virus from spreading, however its affect is only temporary.
Voltage Blade (Critical Arm): Slashes at the opponent with the Critical Arm, sending electricity coursing through their body.
Code Cutter (Critical Arm): Directly attacks an enemies data with a flurry of slashes, delivering devastating damage, and possibly data loss, causing loss of memory and attacks.
Flamethrower Slash (Critical Arm): Using Critical Arm, Justimon increases the heat acceleration within that mode, and by following the fire generated, he slashes at the opponent multiple times, producing fire-based damage each time a slash is delivered.
Justice Kick: Delivers a kick with the force of 45 tons
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Shinra said:I hope this is up to snuff because I stayed at this template for 3+ hours going over what I did wrong... and I hope faith is a legible crest this time.