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Blue Screen Dreams [poem]



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chaywa

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Me again, another meh-fest of poetry beckons.



Blue Screen Dreams

Your voice is a spell
that dissolves all these chains
of a self imposed hell
leaving no visible remains


Your face is a sculpture
mastered by no man alive
the knows no boundary of culture
its beauty ne'er will die


Your touch is so pure
like the glisten of Spring
where sunlight doth endure
encompassing everything


Your smile is so charming
like a beacon at sea
in water's so calming
but no light guideth thee


Your smell mirrors that
of a freshly cut rose
whose roots thrown in the cracks
bring life to below


Your eyes whisper to me
'come with me and fly,
fly higher than dreamers
we'll be gods before we die'


Yet your feet still remain
on the floor where you stand
the clouds gather, about to rain
no warmth share my hand.


dootdoot
~chaywa
 
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Beautiful. I love it.
Brought tears into my eyes. :)
 

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Beautiful. I love it.
Brought tears into my eyes. :)

Never thought i'd see anyone say that, considering I wrote this about 2am in the morning, in a state of sobering up in a desolate university kitchen...meh

danke schone nonetheless
 

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^Thanks, I kinda wrote it from that perspective as well (albeit that's probably bloody obvious)

Needs moar comments kthnx
 
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