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Nelo Angelo

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ai ya!!!!! sorry sorry LS. i didnt see it. so sorry.
well ive read it and guess what? its bloody good.
id go for the screaming.
 

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DX ZOMGGGG!!! Lectori I'm so sooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I haven't picked up on this sooner! DX

Anywho - I'm picking option "B" - Bwhahahaha!

"What always breaks a dream? - A scream! A scream! A scream!"
 

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I'm late getting around here once again but otherwise I thought it was another wonderful update and my choice is going to be B.
 

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Thank you all! So here is the next chapter, and I bet you all expected a different reason for the screaming, I exspected something else as well, but this just happened... If you vote quick enough, I might be able to write another chapter monday or tuesday. And If you don't get that first part, read chapter two again.


4 I told you, anytime baby! 4
A scream. ‘Get away from me, you!’ A slap followed immediately. That was quite enough to spark my interest. I opened my door to see what was going on. The first thing I saw was a very heated Angi. The second a certain man with a now very red cheek. When I looked more closely, I could see the form of a hand on his cheek. Judging by the look on his face, he had a very different idea of being bothered… I couldn’t help but laugh!

The man, very surprised by the smack Angi supposedly gave him, went away silently. Angi turned around to face me, only to become even redder when she saw me laughing. And when I saw that, I laughed even harder. Other doors opened as well, as more people wanted to know what happened. Angi marched my room in, trying but failing to do as if nothing had happened. I was laughing so hard, she had to pull me in, because I couldn’t walk anymore.

‘What’s so funny?’ Angi sat on my bed, while I leaned at the wall. I tried to calm down a bit, but that question didn’t really help.

‘You obviously have no clue of how your face looks right now!’ That brought a little smile to Angi’s face as well.

‘Is it that bad?’

‘Hell yeah! So what was that guy doing here?’ This story should be very funny!

‘Well, after I had put Sato in bed, I wanted to talk to you,’ Angi started. What did she want to talk about, I wondered. ‘When I left our room, that creep was standing there. He said, well…’ Angi’s cheeks began to turn red again, and I grinned a bit. ‘Anyways, even when I told him clearly I wasn’t interested, he wouldn’t go away… When he tried to touch me, I kinda got angry…’

‘And he is probably still feeling that anger…’ I remarked.

‘He should, that perverse toothless creep!’ Angi said, getting angry again. But even she couldn’t keep her face straight when she saw the humour of the whole thing. ‘Do you think I overreacted a little?’

‘Not a little, a lot!’ I responded. ‘Anyways, you said you wanted to talk to me. What is it?’

‘You didn’t just faint.’ I could have guessed, what else would she have to talk about? ‘I think you were right not to trust that guy, so tell it now.’ For some reason, I felt like I could trust this girl, but this little voice in my head kept yelling that I didn’t know anything about her. That was true, the only thing I knew about her was her name. To trust or not, these two sides kept struggling with each other in my head. With Angi still staring at me, I decided to make a deal with myself. Tell a part of the truth, the perfect solution.

‘Well, when I looked at that medallion, it suddenly opened. There was a ring inside. When I put it on, it felt like everything around me faded away. I wasn’t sure if I could wake up, so I just waited. At first I knew it was a dream, but I gradually forgot, until I thought it was real. It was so very frightening. The only reason I could wake up, was because I heard your and Sato’s voices.’

‘I suppose that ring is back were it belongs now…?’ Angi asked. I nodded. After all, in my opinion, it belonged to me rather than to that guy. Besides, it was the only real link I had to my past as for now. How could I let it go?

‘Then that is that what the hell do you think you are doing?’ while Angi said this she threw a dagger at the door. Where she got it from, don’t ask me. The door, which was apparently opened a little bit, closed with a bang due to the impact of the dagger. I heard a painful sound, as if someone’s nose got hit by that door. Angi got up from the bed she still sat on. She walked to the door, pulled her dagger out if it and threw it open to reveal who was behind it. All this happened in a very short time; it took me a few seconds to realize what had happened.

A man sat on the floor, holding his nose. It was the creep. His cheek was still red. Unfortunately for us, he wasn’t alone. He had some very angry friends with him. Most of them had swords hanging at their waists. A few were planning on fighting with a sturdy wooden stick. Angi might have overreacted, but these guys were even worse…

‘You bitch!’ one of the men shouted, and he drew his sword. He charged at Angi, but she kicked his sword out of his hand. While he just looked at his hands with a blank stare, she thrusted her hand in his stomach. Knock out! To my surprise, I felt some kind of excitement. The other men looked at their comrade, seemingly needing some time to figure out what they should do. When they were ready, they charged at us from all sides. I must say, it was a good plan for these idiots, who seemed so stupid.

Angi was good, she was even very good. But even someone as good as her could hold herself against so many alone. I had to help her. One guy approached her from the back. His mistake was that he forgot me. I hit him in the neck, just one strike was enough. The move seemed strangely familiar, but I didn’t know why. Two men were out, but the rest were now all using there swords…

Four against two, not really a fair fight. Angi could hold herself against three with her daggers. The second one seemed to come out of nowhere. The question was, would I be able to beat one of those guys. I grabbed a wooden stick one of those guys dropped.

Blocking his strikes wasn’t that hard. His moves were completely obvious. A wooden stick, however, can never win from a sword. It was only a matter of time before my improvised weapon would give in… If I could disarm him before that happened, I had a chance. The normal move for disarming, turning your own sword around the opponents sword in such a manner that the opponent has to let go of it, wouldn’t work. The stick would have been sliced in pieces.

My brain kept working at his hardest, while my body was fighting. Even though I didn’t remember any previous swordfights, my body did. The moves seemed to come natural. I kept concentrating, trying to find a way to win. Sword techniques, sword techniques. I tried to remember anything related to swords. Swords, swords, swords. Suddenly I felt something odd. The silver ring I was still wearing felt hot. The stone in it seemed to shine. I could pay too much attention at it, I kept thinking of swords. The light got brighter, and surrounded the wooden stick. Brighter and brighter and brighter. Suddenly, I wasn’t holding a wooden stick, but a beautiful sword…

They man fighting me was just as surprised as I was. So surprised, that there was a huge opening in his defence. My new sword was surprisingly light. I slashed his shoulder and with the not sharp end of the sword hit his head, effectively knocking him out.

I turned around to see what Angi was doing. She was just knocking out the last one. I relaxed a bit. The silver sword in my hand was a wooden stick again.

I kneeled down at the guy I knocked out. An odd feeling struck me. Something wasn’t right with these men. ‘Hey, Angi! Is it just me, or is something wrong with these guys?’

Angi kneeled down at another one and closed her eyes, concentrating. She stayed that way for a minute or so, until her eyes suddenly shot open. ‘Damn it all, you’re right. Come on!’


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What is Angi going to do?
A. Getting something from her room
B. Go to that Kirp guy
 
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Nelo Angelo

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ah i liked the action in there excellent.
id go with b. kick his ass.
 

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I have seen the voting thing once before, but that fic didn't get further than the prologue ^^ That's why I wanted to try it! I really like it so far!!!

And Nelo, I don't think they're gonna kick his ass (not sure though ^^)
 

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Sadly, I am late. But I have to go with A. We don't know much about Angi, maybe she has something to figure out just what might be driving these men.

Pretty awesome, though!
 

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I'm so late to finally coming to reading this but otherwise good as always and I'm going to stick with A.
 

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aw man no ass kicking? ah well, whatever you have in store we all know its gonna to be awesome.
 

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Haku, nojerom_14, you voted when I was already writing the chapter(I think I closed the voting), so I didn't count your votes, sorry...

The chapter is kind of late, sorry... The title of the chapter doesn't really mean anything, it's just the name of the song I was listening, while writing. Close Your Eyes, by Racoon.


5 Close Your Eyes 5
‘Care to explain what is wrong?’ I said, softly so that Sato, who was still rubbing the sleep out of his eyes, wouldn’t hear it. After we had beaten those men, Angi told me to me to wake up Sato and meet her outside with all my and her things. I had no idea where she went, but she seemed tense when she was finally back. Now we were walking again, and I had no clue where to. ‘Hey!’ I held her arm to make her face me. ‘Are you ignoring me again?’

‘Oh shut up! You noticed it, didn’t you? Is it really that hard to figure it out? And be quiet!’ Angi started with a whisper, but the volume of her voice rose while she was talking. In the end, she was almost shouting.

‘Says the one who…’ I said under my breath, but Angi looked at me really scary. A stare that would freeze you if you looked too long in her eyes. I stopped talking before I even noticed it… Scary. ‘So what was I supposed to notice?’

‘You really don’t know? Jeez, you really are hopeless!’ I decided not to react at that remark. ‘You were the one who had an ‘odd’ feeling! You mean you don’t even know what that feeling meant?’

‘I don’t have the slightest idea what it meant. I just had this feeling that something was unnatural…’ I answered honestly. Angi looked at me strangely.

‘You hit the mark. Something was unnatural with those men. I don’t think they acted out of free will, someone made them do it.’ She looked at me again. ‘If you ever have that feeling again, tell me immediately.’

‘Whatever you want… So, who wanted to attack us anyway?’

‘I think they were after me, not us.’

‘That’s not what I asked, you know?’

‘It’s not important. We just have to get away from here as soon as we can.’

‘You don’t know, do you?’ I asked suspiciously. Angi’s pace sped up. ‘I knew it! You really have no idea!’

‘Shut up! We’re here.’ Great, we were standing in front of Kirp’s tent again. I didn’t like that guy. ‘What are we doing here?’ I whispered in Angi’s ear.

‘Negotiating.’ She took the hand of a still sleepy Sato and entered the tent. I shrugged and followed them. I was very relieved when I didn’t see the guy whom I stole my ring from. The dark haired merchant was still drinking.

‘So you want to do business with this poor old merchant while he’s drunk? That’s not very polite, you know?’ Although Kirp said he was drunk and acted like he was drunk, I didn’t believe him. Not that I trusted him to start with…

‘I remembered some urgent business elsewhere. You know what we want and what we have to offer, just say how much you want.’ Angi’s answer was short and formal, quite the opposite of Kirp.

‘You are ruining all the fun of the game, sweetheart.’ Angi’s expression didn’t tell what she was thinking. She must really need whatever she’s buying. ‘I heard you play this game very well, I was really looking forward to it…’

‘Name your price please.’ Angi didn’t budge.

‘You are really cold. No fun at all!’ Kirp sighed. ‘And I was so looking forward to negotiate with you… The proposal named in the letter is fine…’

‘Good! Do you have it here?’

‘Yeah yeah. It’s in one of those bags.’ He pointed at a pile of bags similar to the one Angi had on her back. ‘I suppose you have your part of the deal here?’

‘Of course!’ Angi had put the bag on the floor and took something out of it. Meanwhile Kirp had walked to the pile and pulled one out of it. He sure didn’t walk like he was drunk. He, too, took something out of the bag. Two smaller bags quickly changed owners.

‘It was a pleasure doing business with you!’ Kirp said, looking very content.

‘I wish I could say the same,’ Angi said under her breath and quickly after that out loud. ‘Farewell!’

‘Hehe, I hope to see you again!’ And that was the last we heard of him. Hopefully forever.

‘So, I guess you’ll be going home then?’ Why was I feeling sad? It’s not like I knew Angi and Sato very well. I shouldn’t be feeling sad.

‘Yeah, it’s not safe to stay here.’ She started walking away from the water, to the direction we came from several hours before. I stayed where I was. Not even a farewell… Then a small hand grabbed mine, again.

‘Come on!’ Sato pulled me forth.

‘What are you waiting for?’ Angi said. She turned around to see where we stayed. I still had a surprised look on my face, probably an obvious one. ‘You didn’t think we would leave you here, did you? Who do you think I am?’

‘Thank you.’

Ten minutes later…

‘Don’t tell me this was the only reason you let me tag along?’ I was talking about the kid I carried on my back. Sato was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he could stop walking. And that moment would be when Angi told me to carry him.

‘What did you expect?’ Angi grinned. I gave her a faked angry glare. She just looked away. After a few minutes she talked again. ‘You know I’m joking, right?’

‘Yeah.’

It was kind of strange. When I didn’t know anything about who I was or where I was from, I didn’t worry about it. I guess because you can’t think or worry about what you don’t know. Anyways, since I had that vision or whatever it was, I couldn’t stop thinking about it. Was the girl through whose eyes I looked me? Who were those people fighting? Where was it? It was so tiring to think about…

The stars were sparkling, the same as always. At least they were calm. I yawned. How long had we been walking?

‘Tired?’ Angi asked. She almost sounded concerned.

‘Nah, more…bored. And hungry!’ I almost forgot that I hadn’t eaten for quite a while.

‘Here.’ She held out some kind of bread. It looked kind of strange, but edible and that was good enough. To my surprise, it tasted great.

‘Thanks!’ I said with my mouth full? I swallowed the bite. ‘What is this?’

‘Special recipe! There is something in it that keeps you from getting tired. I made it together with grandma!’ Angi said proudly. I nodded and took another bite. She got another one out of her bag and started eating as well.

‘Should we save some for him?’ I pointed to Sato with my head.

‘No, I have one for him in my bag.’ We walked silently for a long time.

I heard Sato’s stomach rumble. Soon after that he woke up. Angi gave him his bread thingy and started to eat silently. He was kinda cute. I wondered if I had a little brother…

‘Say, why don’t you have a name?’ Sato asked me. His voice had this typical curious little kid tone.

‘Well, I have a name, I just don’t remember it.’ I answered honestly. Sato thought about this for a while.

‘Do you want a name?’

‘Of course, who doesn’t want a name?’

‘Well…’ Sato seemed to doubt before he continued. ‘Should I give you a new name?’ That question surprised me, but I nodded.

‘Be careful with names little brother. Once you give one, you can’t take it back or change it!’ Angi warned. Still, she smiled as well. It could have been her idea… Sato looked at the night sky, thinking as hard as he could. It was silent again.

‘Tsuki!’ Sato exclaimed. I looked at him surprised. ‘It’s your new name!’ Tsuki, I liked the sound of that. I looked at Angi, she nodded. ‘Do you like it?’

‘I love it. Thank you very much.’ The little boy smiled.

‘And that’s done.’ Angi looked very satisfied. ‘Right on time, were there.’

‘What do you mean with there?’ I asked curiously.

‘Our home.’


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Where is their home?
A. Somewhere high
B. Somewhere low
 
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Nelo Angelo

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tsukis a great name.
great update LS. excellent.

hmm. ill go for b. low. deep within the bowels of the earth. hehe. mwahaha.
 

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Wonderful update it had what I'd expected but on the choices I'm going to go with A.
 
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