A Grimm Tale; Jedi Huntsman



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This is a Star Wars/RWBY fanfiction that I decided to create. It's been on my mind for awhile, and I thought that I should finally type it down. This is the first chapter, so to speak.


RWBY is an animated series created by Monty Oum featured on RoosterTeeth.


Character list(so far)
Kyle Jorrier - Human Male, Jedi Padawan to Nikoova Janin, Age 16
Darien Dolros - Human Female, Jedi Padawan to Corellan Ardross, Age 17
Master Nikoova Janin - Zabrak male, Jedi Knight, Master to Kyle Jorrier, Age 42
Master Corellan Ardross - Human male, Jedi Knight, Master to Darien Dolros, Age 39

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I have no idea where to begin, because I was full of hype to read a Star Wars related fanfic. I absolutely love Star Wars, and seeing it combined with RWBY is simply awesome. I'm curious if, Darien will be the source to so many dying as she's sucked into a black hole? I suppose time will tell. I already like Kyle, and think he's much more cuter, when he isn't trying to hold back his excitement for a new world, or becoming a Jedi Knight. This was definitely one of the most enjoyable reads I've had so far tonight. Please keep writing more, if you can, NoOmniscience.
 

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Here comes Chapter 2 of A Grimm Tale; Jedi Huntsman

Character List:
Kyle Jorrier - Human Male, Jedi Padawan to Nikoova Janin, Age 16
Darien Dolros - Human Female, Jedi Padawan to Corellan Ardross, Age 17
Master Nikoova Janin - Zabrak male, Jedi Knight, Master to Kyle Jorrier, Age 42
Master Corellan Ardross - Human male, Jedi Knight, Master to Darien Dolros, Age 39
Professor Ozpin - Headmaster of Beacon Academy
Glynda Goodwitch - Professor at Beacon, and Huntress
Dr. Bartholomew Oobleck - Professor at Beacon Academy, and Huntsman
Professor Peter Port - Professor at Beacon Academy, and Huntsman
Ruby Rose - Huntress in training, younger sister to Yang, age 15
Weiss Schnee - Huntress in Training, heiress to Schnee Dust company, age 17
Yang Xiao Long - Huntress in training, older sister to Ruby, age 17
Blake Belladonna - Huntress in Training, Faunus, age 17
Verne - Taxi driver, age unknown

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A Grimm Tale; Jedi Huntsman Chapter 3

Here is Chapter 3. Hope you enjoy
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Two exciting updates! :D

I'm really impressed with this story thus far. I can't help but worry a lot about Darien. Since that display with the beowolf makes me feel like the dark side might be a lot more connected to her then it appears. Regardless, its nice to see they're accepted by Ruby's group and Jaune's group. Even the Jedi Masters being accepted was quite a surprise to me. I do love the skepticism in chapter two, when Kyle said "Of course not, we're only trying to get to know the locals." That was amusing to read. I can't get enough of this and want to read so much more. And I really like the chemistry growing between Kyle and Darien too. I hope they end up being a couple. Although, isn't there some kind of rule where Jedi/Padawn can't end up together?
 

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in the Extended Universe when Luke is Jedi Grand Master marriage is allowed, and in the very old republic under very strict circumstances. If all goes well, I should have Chapter 4 finished in a few days or a week. Glad you are enjoying the read.
 
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A Grimm Tale; Jedi Huntsman Chapter 4

Here is Chapter 4 Folks!
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Why can't Darien feel at peace? I feel sorry for her to go through something like that. I really hope Kyle is wrong about this being a set up with their relationship. With that thought in mind, perhaps there is someone from their world calling all of the shots. I was kind of surprised Darien would cut off her assaulters hand. I suppose that can't be helped with a light saber, but still a little extreme. However, I find it justified, since she was forced into something she didn't want. On the other hand, I've grown to like Kyle a lot more too. Sure he's into Darien, but he's careful about it. Also, I've grown greatly attached to their Masters. The four of them share a great history together, and that is what draws me to them.

Again, thank you for letting me know about the update. :D I hope to see more soon, and sorry for the delay in reading this. One of my favorite stories to read for sure. <3
 

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Glad to hear you enjoyed the latest installment of the series, There should be a new chapter up sometime next week at the earliest.
 

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A Grimm Tale; Jedi Huntsman Chapter 5

This unfortunately has been a short chapter. I hope you enjoy it nonetheless.

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Sweet. You updated at last. C: Its terrific and I see you've added more to it! I think the small backstory with Nikoova asking the Jedi council to have Kyle as his Padawan was great and heart warming. As I've said before, I really like the chemistry between Kyle and Darien. I like the small build up that's being made between the two of them. I like the opening song of RWBY being featured in this chapter too. So many things I like about this chapter. It didn't feel short at all and I do hope Nikoova stands a chance of surviving this storm that's brewing.
 

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A Grimm Tale; Jedi Huntsman Chapter 6

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This was a great chapter that has full of promises on what's to come. Well worth the wait. Of all of the things I imagined Kyle doing, it wasn't learning a new technique. Might I add that I think the new ability Shatterpoint will be exciting to see in battle! I kind of feel bad for Darien having to go around in circles with so many distressing things on her mind all of the time. I hope the RWBY team prove themselves to her that she can trust them and count on them in what's to come.

So, it looks like a Sith and his Master of changing faces is planning on getting things in motion now. Something I'm really looking forward to. I am curious about this Master with his changing faces. I imagine it will prove to cause a great deal of mistress for Darien and Kyle, should the Master him/herself decide to join in the chaos that's on the verge of becoming true.
 
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