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OneWingedDemon

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7 D a y s

A note: After the role play has begun, you cannot join. Additionally, you may see lack-of a rule section. I'm going to ask that you apply what you've learned from other role plays to determine what you can and cannot do. It's not a difficult task and I hope you're capable of this. I may add a rule section at one point in time if called for.

The tower holds no exit or entrance, not even windows. There is no escape, and playing the game is your only option. Time does not pass. Once you’ve entered, you cannot leave. A gentleman owns this tower, though his origins and true appearance remain a mystery. He is simply referred to as “The Game-Master”.

There are eleven floors. The floors are all connected by a long spiraling set of stairs, excluding the eleventh floor, which appears to have no means of access by the residents. Upon entrance, you are henceforth a player of the Game Master’s game.

A player’s objective is to solve the riddles given to you by the Game Master, in order to survive and proceed to the next riddle. A riddle is assigned every twelve hours, equaling two a day.
If a riddle isn’t solved, the players must vote one player to the execution chamber. This will result in removal of that player from the game.
(NOTE: THE FREQUENCY OF A RIDDLE MAY BE ALTERED AS TO FIT THE NUMBER OF PLAYERS PARTICIPATING IN THE ROLEPLAY.)

Players must work together in order to ensure survival. The primary goal of the game is to survive for seven days and exit the tower.

An Individual’s Entrance to The Tower
The Tower doesn’t exist in the physical realm, yet a transcendent spiritual realm. The only way to access the Tower is through ‘way-gates’. Way-Gates are portals to the tower, and may be initiated by simple entrance of a location, or through sleep. Whatever the event may be, the individual is then transported to the tower in which he or she is enrolled as a player.

*The Riddles of One’s Inquiry
Aside from the primary riddles players must solve in order to proceed, the Game Master will offer optional riddles upon a player’s inquiry. One must first ask the Drones for availability of an optional riddle, and receive approval from the Game Master. Once this is complete, the player must proceed to Floor Three and approach the mirror through use of the ladder. One must continue on by inserting their hand into the mirror, which will in return grant a scroll of said riddle. Optional riddles may give the players exclusive information, hints, or nothing.

*His Appearance
The Game Master is commonly seen in a tuxedo, with a black top hat. He wears thin white cotton gloves, and black formal shoes. The most notable item amongst his garments is his long, blank mask. It covers his face entirely, and stretches downward a few inches below his chin. It’s entirely solid, which rises speculation of how he is able to see (though this thought is wavered upon realization of one’s location).
Upon telling of the riddle, the Game Master brings along a slender black cane with a ruby incrested at the top. It is also brought along upon execution. Rumors hold that it is the source of his power in this realm.


*Who Are They? - A Deeper Look At Drones
The origin of drones is vague. Previous players assumed them to be exclusive players that were chosen by the Game Master himself, or products of the Game Master’s imagination. Drones have come and gone ever since the beginning of the tower, as some Drones had become attached to the players and disobeyed the limitations put forth by the Game Master. Drones are sometimes regarded as separate entities of the Game Master’s mind, though this is only speculation. Whatever the case may be, Drones hold no memories of their past, which is why most become attached to the players: they want to be remembered and remember in return.


Floors

Floor OneThis is the entrance chamber. It houses a front desk, where the only available phone in the tower resides. Through the course of the seven days, each player is permitted a ONE TIME USE of the phone to contact the Game Master. The player may then ask him one question (that doesn't regard the riddle) and in return receive a truthful answer.

Floor Two A room with a large variety of clocks on the wall, all ticking in unison though the ticking is not so loud to be ear damaging. While in the room, players may hold a tendency to hallucinate or feel as if the ground were moving. It is rumored to hold the secret entrance to the balcony, though one must solve said riddle.

Floor ThreeA room with only a ladder leading to a mirror attached to the ceiling.

Floor FourThe library. The shelves seem quite empty, every two books distancing the next set by a good foot. There are numerous chairs and sofas, as well as computers, though they are incapable of being switched on. In the back, there is terminal for the player that has been voted to the execution chamber to use as transportation. The player must enter their name in order to initiate transmission. (NOTE: WHEN ASCENDING FROM FLOOR FOUR, YOU ARE BROUGHT TO FLOOR SIX.)

Floor FiveA balcony. Looking outward, all that is visible is a blue cloudy sky. It is only accessible from Room Two, if the player is to answer the riddle that will reveal the entrance. If the player jumps off, they are returned to Floor One.

Floor Six An apartment room. It is one of the housing floors for the players. The floor contains three beds, one refrigerator, and a bathroom. As opposed to other floors’ dull white coloring of the tiles and walls, this room is carpeted and the walls are painted a regal blue. (NOTE: THE NUMBER OF BEDS MAY BE ALTERED AS TO FIT THE NUMBER OF PEOPLE PARTICIPATING IN THE ROLEPLAY. IN ADDITION TO THIS, WHEN DESCENDING FROM FLOOR SIX YOU ARE BROUGHT TO FLOOR FOUR.)

Floor SevenSee Floor Six.

Floor Eight See Floor Six.

Floor NineA hallway leading to the ascending stairs. Numerous portraits line the vivid blue walls, the frame of the portraits matching the deep brown colored carpets. On the left near the end of the hallway, there is a door. In that room, there are holes in the floor which serve as portals to the other floors, though one can only descend. There are seven holes in total, Room Five being excluded.

Floor TenThis is where the players are called forth to be told the riddle by the Game Master, as well as where they present their answer to the Game Master. There is a stage with a single chair on it, though it is commonly concealed by a red curtain. Many empty seats remain available in the crowd for the players. After the telling of the riddle, players no longer hold access to this room and it is altered to the execution chamber.

*The execution chamber is where the cast off player and the Game Master meet. It's a small room, where there are floating ascending tiles leading to a tile that places the player directly in front of a chair with a spotlight upon it, where the Game Master is sitting. Everything else is not visible and merely appears as darkness. A small conversation occurs, and then the Game Master initiates the procedure. The player is ‘ripped’ of their spirit, and their bodies are returned to their last memory before entrance to the tower, though in a coma state. Their spirit is then instilled into a portrait on Floor Nine, in which they are forced to endlessly observe future players.

Floor ElevenNothing is known of this floor. It is merely to be assumed at the Game Master’s chambers.

Player-Template:
Name:
Age: (16-21)
Sex:
Ethnic:
Biography: (Minimum three paragraphs, and be sure to include your way-gate encounter.)
Appearance: (Minimum one paragraph. Pictures are not permitted.)
Personality: (Minimum one paragraph.)
Love Interest: (Another player that you are attracted to. This is optional.)​

*Below is the template for application to becoming a drone. A drone is a servant of the Game Master, and may interact with the players as well as provide hints to the riddle, though the latter does have its limits. There are no reservations for this position, and there are only two openings.
-note: drones will be contacted via private message regarding riddles and certain restrictions within the roleplay.-


Drone-Template:
Name:
Sex:
Appearance:
Personality:
Favored Player: (This is optional.)

Game-Master: OneWingedDemon

Drones
1. Reika Noko / Elyse
2. Vexond / Tristen

Players
Ashes Remnant / Cody Laur
shattered hearts / Kallen Taylor
Cicero / Mekiagsher Soemer
AngelOfpeace / Rachel Angel
Endless Warrior Sora / Bishop Hughes (awaiting template completion)
Solareon / John Davis
Stavvy / Damian Sutters
 
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Ashes Remnant

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I'm in, most def. Seems original. :)

Name: Cody Laur

Age: 16

Sex: Male

Ethnic: Caucasian

Biography: Cody was a normal kid, living in suburban Iowa. He lived a normal life, went to a private school. He never had any trouble with anyone. He was above average in grades. He had plenty of friends, yet few close ones. No matter what though, something was always going wrong.

He had recently learned of his musical talent. He was in three bands actually. One as a drummer, another as a guitarist, and a third as a singer. Everyone at the school he attended loved to hear him play. His drum beats were always on time, his guitar riffs always complex, and his singing impactful. He was a musical genius of sorts.

Yet, something always goes wrong. He had just gotten in a car with his band-mates, the band where he was a drummer. They were driving home from the best show he'd ever played. The crowd was great, jumping along, headbanging, and other crowdlike things. On the way home, he rested against the window, and shut his eyes. When they opened, he was inside a room. A tower.

Appearance: He's tall and skinny, with brown eyes and hair. His hair is longer than most guys, and wavy. He's almost always wearing a grey t-shirt and jeans tighter than guys should wear. He has a wrist band, and belt with a checkerboard design.

Personality: He's very outgoing, and most would consider weird. He's always listening to music, or playing it back in his head. He seems to be very caring for others, especially females. He's self-sacrificing, and works well with others, never stabbing in the back. Of course, appearances can be deceiving.

Love Interest: Rachel Angel
 
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OneWingedDemon

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This has caught my eye, it smells like a fresh and never done before RP. You've got my name in for it.

I always aim for originality. I'll be awaiting your template.

I'm in, most def. Seems original. :)

Name: Cody Laur

Age: 16

Sex: Male

Ethnic: Caucasian

Biography: Cody was a normal kid, living in suburban Iowa. He lived a normal life, went to a private school. He never had any trouble with anyone. He was above average in grades. He had plenty of friends, yet few close ones. No matter what though, something was always going wrong.

He had recently learned of his musical talent. He was in three bands actually. One as a drummer, another as a guitarist, and a third as a singer. Everyone at the school he attended loved to hear him play. His drum beats were always on time, his guitar riffs always complex, and his singing impactful. He was a musical genius of sorts.

Yet, something always goes wrong. He had just gotten in a car with his band-mates, the band where he was a drummer. They were driving home from the best show he'd ever played. The crowd was great, jumping along, headbanging, and other crowdlike things. On the way home, he rested against the window, and shut his eyes. When they opened, he was inside a room. A tower.

Appearance: He's tall and skinny, with brown eyes and hair. His hair is longer than most guys, and wavy. He's almost always wearing a grey t-shirt and jeans tighter than guys should wear. He has a wrist band, and belt with a checkerboard design.

Personality: He's very outgoing, and most would consider weird. He's always listening to music, or playing it back in his head. He seems to be very caring for others, especially females. He's self-sacrificing, and works well with others, never stabbing in the back. Of course, appearances can be deceiving.

Love Interest: (Will be added when people join. ;D)

Accepted.
 

Zeph

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Hmm, I like the sound of this Rp. I'll be posting my temp soon.

Also, it doesn't say, so I'll ask. Are pictures accepted along with the description of appearance?

Name: Kallen (pronounced as Collin) Taylor

Age: 17

Sex: Female

Ethnic: Caucasian/American Indian

Biography: Kallen was born and raised just outside of Seattle, WA. Her father is a music producer so growing up she was always around musicians; be them seasoned professionals or newcomers, classical artists or punk. At a young age, her father put her in piano lessons and, though at first she did not like playing the instrument, she soon grew to love the piano. As she grew older, her father entered her into various musical competitions from which she usually came away the victor.

In high school now, she attends a music-oriented boarding school abroad that is the alma mater of many famous musicians. Despite such a famed reputation, the school has an unusually small student-body. The reason for this is the school screens any potential transfer students and, if they are not up to par with the schools criteria, they are rejected. Kallen was ecstatic when she learned she had been accepted, and so far has made a wide variety of friends.

Winter break came and she had plans to go home for the Holidays to visit her parents. Some of her friends though, wanted her to go on vacation with them. Kallen told them she already had plans to visit home, and declined. After calling her parents first to check with them, she invited her friends to come home with her so they could meet her father and make connections, of course they accepted. So they bought their plane tickets and packed. They were late getting to the airport the next day, and had to run to catch their flight. But instead of boarding the plane, Kallen found herself in a very different place…

Appearance: Kallen has long, straight, jet-black hair that falls in layers to just below her waist. Her skin is a rich tan, and her eyes a strange shade of pale greenish blue. The bizarre difference in her skin/eye colorings is the result of her parents different ethnicities. She is fairly short, around 5’0, and so thin that people often assume she is anorexic. The way she dresses can be described as eclectic as she loves layering her clothing in unusual ways.
She is wearing a blue skirt that comes to just above her knees, paired with a yellow and gray rugby-striped long-sleeve knit shirt under an oversized multi colored, fair-isle pattern cardigan. Additionally, she is wearing above-the-knee socks paired with tall moccasin-style boots.

Personality: Kallen is not the shy type, but neither can she be called outgoing. When meeting new people she is politely reserved, and usually stays that way until someone can be bothered to get past her defenses and get to know her. Once she counts you as a friend though, she warms up quickly and is extremely loyal. She is somewhat obsessive over “cute things” and has even gone so far as to have a “Cute Collection”. Some people see her as being slightly “off”, but her friends just find that as part of her charm. She is one of those people that, once she becomes comfortable with the people surrounding her, make friends very easily.

Love Interest: Damian Sutters

EDITED--love interest
 
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OneWingedDemon

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Hmm, I like the sound of this Rp. I'll be posting my temp soon.

Also, it doesn't say, so I'll ask. Are pictures accepted along with the description of appearance?

No, they're not. Good question though, I'll add that to the template.
If you're wondering why, I'd just like to visualize your character as described in the writing.
 

Reika Noko

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Name/Alias
"Elyse"

Sex
Female

Appearance
Elyse basically has black hair that stops at her mid-way back, with bangs swept to the left. She has a short stature, standing at about 5'0 which makes her seem younger at first look than she already is; almost seeming like a preteen.

She wears a steel blue loose fitted, hooded jacket that goes to her thighs. It has a two black stripes that go down on the edge of the hood, down the sides on both sleeves, and the sides of the torso itself. She keeps the jacket open and the hood up. Despite wearing the hood up, it covers the navy blue cabbie hat she wears as well. Elyse also wears a white shaded chiffon blouse, also loose fitted, almost seeming like any other sweater with a scoop neckline. On the middle of the neckline, a small ribbon is on. Underneath has a loose fitted, black tank top.

She basically wears a short, black skirt with a strip that goes around the loose fitting skirt, looking as though it would be a girl's sailor suit. She wears black thigh highs and blue converse that is goes over the ankle. So basically, her outfit casual and comfortable with her.

Personality
Elyse doesn't act out much, but she is satirical, nonchalant, and maybe even a bit sadistic when it comes to the players, taking a liking to playing and messing around with their heads as they try to solve a riddle. She seems to have a liking to comparing things that would involve figurative language and among referencing to such as well, though these could go into an extent whereas sometimes she is out of character. For example, she would personally call the Game-Master's game as "The Alice Game" while calling the Game-Master "Boss" like she would refer to in a yakuza.

Elyse's mood changes depending on the situation, especially where it goes to the point of a grave atmosphere. At that point, she would still retain her character yet act more to the extent of solemn, sober, or sedate. Such as when she remains devoted to being a Drone, sticking to the rules. This is at odds with the fact that she has a dislike for consistent routine and restricted limits.

Despite the gist of her personality, not much known can be found about Elyse while faintly giving off a mysterious air around her.

Favored Player
John Davis
 
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Raiton Kensei

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I made this character to kind of contrast Reika Noko's character.

Name: Tristen

Sex: Male

Appearance:
He is around 6 ft tall 160 lbs. He has light brown skin like caramel and short black hair. He has green eyes, which are unusual for a person of his skin color to have. He is 20 yrs old.

He wears a red long sleeve thermal shirt underneath a blue short sleeve shirt. His blue shirt has "Save a Virgin Do me Instead" written in red letters. He wears baggy blue jeans where the left leg of them is cut off to below his left knee. His right shoe is completely blue and his left shoe is completely red. He wears a long blue sock on his left foot, which can be seen because the left pants leg is halfway off which suggest that there is a red sock on his right foot.

Personality:
Tristen has alot of personality. He likes to be loud, sarcastic, and amuse the players of the game. He loves to tell jokes no matter if they hurt someones feelings or not but he usually finds himself the only one laughing at his jokes. He has a habit of helping female players out more than males. To confuse players even more he sometimes talks in riddles while helping with riddles but he expects something in return.

Tristen is constantly trying to complete a rubiks cube, which he takes out of his pocket when he is bored of the game and the players. He refers to the players as "Pawns" and the Game-Master as "The Big Man". He likes to call Elyse "The Black Haired Hobbit" to try to get on her nerves on purpose although he doesnt know if it efects her or not.

He always has a positive attitude towards everything, which can be annoying to some people.

Favored Player: (Will change when more players join)
 

OneWingedDemon

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Hmm, I like the sound of this Rp. I'll be posting my temp soon.

Also, it doesn't say, so I'll ask. Are pictures accepted along with the description of appearance?

Name: Kallen (pronounced as Collin) Taylor

Age: 17

Sex: Female

Ethnic: Caucasian/American Indian

Biography: Kallen was born and raised just outside of Seattle, WA. Her father is a music producer so growing up she was always around musicians; be them seasoned professionals or newcomers, classical artists or punk. At a young age, her father put her in piano lessons and, though at first she did not like playing the instrument, she soon grew to love the piano. As she grew older, her father entered her into various musical competitions from which she usually came away the victor.

In high school now, she attends a music-oriented boarding school abroad that is the alma mater of many famous musicians. Despite such a famed reputation, the school has an unusually small student-body. The reason for this is the school screens any potential transfer students and, if they are not up to par with the schools criteria, they are rejected. Kallen was ecstatic when she learned she had been accepted, and so far has made a wide variety of friends.

Winter break came and she had plans to go home for the Holidays to visit her parents. Some of her friends though, wanted her to go on vacation with them. Kallen told them she already had plans to visit home, and declined. After calling her parents first to check with them, she invited her friends to come home with her so they could meet her father and make connections, of course they accepted. So they bought their plane tickets and packed. They were late getting to the airport the next day, and had to run to catch their flight. But instead of boarding the plane, Kallen found herself in a very different place…

Appearance: Kallen has long, straight, jet-black hair that falls in layers to just below her waist. Her skin is a rich tan, and her eyes a strange shade of pale greenish blue. The bizarre difference in her skin/eye colorings is the result of her parents different ethnicities. She is fairly short, around 5’0, and so thin that people often assume she is anorexic. The way she dresses can be described as eclectic as she loves layering her clothing in unusual ways.
She is wearing a blue skirt that comes to just above her knees, paired with a yellow and gray rugby-striped long-sleeve knit shirt under an oversized multi colored, fair-isle pattern cardigan. Additionally, she is wearing above-the-knee socks paired with tall moccasin-style boots.

Personality: Kallen is not the shy type, but neither can she be called outgoing. When meeting new people she is politely reserved, and usually stays that way until someone can be bothered to get past her defenses and get to know her. Once she counts you as a friend though, she warms up quickly and is extremely loyal. She is somewhat obsessive over “cute things” and has even gone so far as to have a “Cute Collection”. Some people see her as being slightly “off”, but her friends just find that as part of her charm. She is one of those people that, once she becomes comfortable with the people surrounding her, make friends very easily.

Love Interest: No one yet, I might edit this later as more people join.

ADDED--biography
EDITED--personality

Accepted.

Name/Alias
"Elyse"

Sex
Female

Appearance
Elyse basically has black hair that stops at her mid-way back, with bangs swept to the left. She has a short stature, standing at about 5'0 which makes her seem younger at first look than she already is; almost seeming like a preteen.

She wears a steel blue loose fitted, hooded jacket that goes to her thighs. It has a two black stripes that go down on the edge of the hood, down the sides on both sleeves, and the sides of the torso itself. She keeps the jacket open and the hood up. Despite wearing the hood up, it covers the navy blue cabbie hat she wears as well. Elyse also wears a white shaded chiffon blouse, also loose fitted, almost seeming like any other sweater with a scoop neckline. On the middle of the neckline, a small ribbon is on. Underneath has a loose fitted, black tank top.

She basically wears a short, black skirt with a strip that goes around the loose fitting skirt, looking as though it would be a girl's sailor suit. She wears black thigh highs and blue converse that is goes over the ankle. So basically, her outfit casual and comfortable with her.

Personality
Elyse doesn't act out much, but she is satirical, nonchalant, and maybe even a bit sadistic when it comes to the players, taking a liking to playing and messing around with their heads as they try to solve a riddle. She seems to have a liking to comparing things that would involve figurative language and among referencing to such as well, though these could go into an extent whereas sometimes she is out of character. For example, she would personally call the Game-Master's game as "The Alice Game" while calling the Game-Master "Boss" like she would refer to in a yakuza.

Elyse's mood changes depending on the situation, especially where it goes to the point of a grave atmosphere. At that point, she would still retain her character yet act more to the extent of solemn, sober, or sedate. Such as when she remains devoted to being a Drone, sticking to the rules. This is at odds with the fact that she has a dislike for consistent routine and restricted limits.

Despite the git of her personality, not much known can be found about Elyse while faintly giving off a mysterious air around her.

Favored Player
(If more players come, I'll choose)

Came around, I see. Accepted.

I made this character to kind of contrast Reika Noko's character.

Name: Tristen

Sex: Male

Appearance:
He is around 6 ft tall 160 lbs. He has light brown skin like caramel and short black hair. He has green eyes, which are unusual for a person of his skin color to have. He is 20 yrs old.

He wears a red long sleeve thermal shirt underneath a blue short sleeve shirt. His blue shirt has "Save a Virgin Do me Instead" written in red letters. He wears baggy blue jeans where the left leg of them is cut off to below his left knee. His right shoe is completely blue and his left shoe is completely red. He wears a long blue sock on his left foot, which can be seen because the left pants leg is halfway off which suggest that there is a red sock on his right foot.

Personality:
Tristen has alot of personality. He likes to be loud, sarcastic, and amuse the players of the game. He loves to tell jokes no matter if they hurt someones feelings or not but he usually finds himself the only one laughing at his jokes. He has a habit of helping female players out more than males. To confuse players even more he sometimes talks in riddles while helping with riddles but he expects something in return.

Tristen is constantly trying to complete a rubiks cube, which he takes out of his pocket when he is bored of the game and the players. He refers to the players as "Pawns" and the Game-Master as "The Big Man". He likes to call Elyse "The Black Haired Hobbit" to try to get on her nerves on purpose although he doesnt know if it efects her or not.

He always has a positive attitude towards everything, which can be annoying to some people.

Favored Player: (Will change when more players join)

I like that you did that. That should certainly raise some level of conflict.


Sounds intresting.I will have my temp up tomorrow! ^.^

Great.
 

OneWingedDemon

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Updated the Drones & Players list, which it should be noted that both Drone positions have been filled. I'll be making some additions over the day to broaden your knowledge of the RP slightly.

I think that this will turn out to be a good rp when more people join.

I agree, however narcissistic I may sound.
 
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Lady Yuki

Guest
Name:Rachel Angel(Rach for short)
Age:16
Sex:Female
Ethnic:Caucasian
Bio:You could say Rachel's life is a some what normal life.Her parents always abused her at the age of 15 she has just about had it with her parents and she went to go live on her own.She lives in a nice little town called Caven town.She found a job at a Pizza place and she found a little house by a beach.After working in the morning she goes to a night class to take all the basic boring school stuff.

Somtimes she wishes her life could have been difrent but she is also happy that she got to get out of her parents life.She struggles to get through each day.After work she is very tired and she somtimes falls asleep during school so she always had to stay later to finish all of her school work.Once Rachel gets home she is half dead.She always keeps her house up so she daosent have much to clean but when she see's a mess she leaves it there till the weekend.

One day when Rachel got home from school she went strait to bed.She had a dream she was in the tower like place.She woke up but she thought she was still in the dream but she then realized it wasent a Dream.

Personality:Rachel is a sweet girl who likes to talk but not all the time.When people joke with her they have to watch what they say cause somtimes she could take is personal.When she is in a serious mood you do not want to tak to her or joke with her cause she just wants to think about how to fix the problem.

Rachel can be rude at times and not notice it until she see's that that peroson is hurting.She dosent talk about her past much cause that can hurt her,to think of her own parents hurting her the way they did makes her angry and upset.

Appearance:Rachel has long brown hair that goes down to her back.She is 6 feet tall.At time people think she is older for her age cause of how tall she is and how she looks.She wears a blue skirt that has little white dots and a white tank top with a dimond in the middle..She is a thin girl and she also has hazel sparkiling eyes.She has thin pink lips and her skin town is a light brown.
 
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OneWingedDemon

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Name:Rachel(Rach for short)
Age:16
Sex:Female

Bio:You could say Rachel's life is a some what normal life.Her parents always abused her at the age of 15 she has just about had it with her parents and she went to go live on her own.She lives in a nice little town called Caven town.She found a job at a Pizza place and she found a little house by a beach.After working in the morning she goes to a night class to take all the basic boring school stuff.

Somtimes she wishes her life could have been difrent but she is also happy that she got to get out of her parents life.She struggles to get through each day.After work she is very tired and she somtimes falls asleep during school so she always had to stay later to finish all of her school work.Once Rachel gets home she is half dead.She always keeps her house up so she daosent have much to clean but when she see's a mess she leaves it there till the weekend.

One day when Rachel got home from school she went strait to bed.She had a dream she was in the tower like place.She woke up but she thought she was still in the dream but she then realized it wasent a Dream.

Personality:Rachel is a sweet girl who likes to talk but not all the time.When people joke with her they have to watch what they say cause somtimes she could take is personal.When she is in a serious mood you do not want to tak to her or joke with her cause she just wants to think about how to fix the problem.

Rachel can be rude at times and not notice it until she see's that that peroson is hurting.She dosent talk about her past much cause that can hurt her,to think of her own parents hurting her the way they did makes her angry and upset.

Appearance:Rachel has long brown hair that goes down to her back.She is 6 feet tall.At time people think she is older for her age cause of how tall she is and how she looks.She wears a blue skirt that has little white dots and a white tank top with a dimond in the middle..She is a thin girl and she also has hazel sparkiling eyes.She has thin pink lips and her skin town is a light brown.

Run-ons and spelling issues. That can be worked on, but please give your character a last name.
It's accepted, but you'll only be listed once you've edited in a last name.

In other news, I've added three new sections which I recommend reading. They are marked with a *.

EDIT: Also Angel, edit in your ethnic. I'm assuming it to be caucasian, but please confirm.
 
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