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Many Joins very quickly.
Seeing you like kitties and I haven't joined a Fan Club yet, I'll Join too =D

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Esso

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it ain't Valhalla, that's for sure.
I see you there with a wide smile
As beautiful it is, a far a mile
My day gets brighter because of it
The dark in my heart feels always lit

You always know how to make one lol
It's a relationship that I hope will never fall
You mean much to me as a delicate rose
Just stop wetting me on Saturdays with a hose

Just something I came up with now. What do you gals think? What do I need to improve on?
 
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Awwww its sweet :3 The only problem I think with it is on the first line of the second paragraph, and its the delicate rose line, I think theres a little grammar problem, but I could also just be having a blonde moment lol maybe if you moved it in between the "Its a relationship I hope will never..." line and the "Just stop wetting me on saturdays with a hose" line then the rhyming would match up :p

I lol'd at the hose line though xD
 
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