RE: Crystal Fate
Hi there, this is US again, I decided to start writing my fanfic again, actually I posted a chapter but I thought that it needed to be rewritten since I wasn't experienced enough when I started and since I fixed that with time and practice it's better to start again and maybe that way people will read this story and people who have read it before can enjoy it with a more descriptive style and better grammar and such.
Title: Crystal fate
Genre: Romance, Comedy, Fantasy.
Rated: E or PG-13 (due to me changing the last chapters and making them a bit spicy when possible..XD lol jk)
Based on: a bit of everything that I won't say XD
At the once peaceful “Rising Sun” village hundreds of Cadiz lived. Everyone was cheerful and they seemed not to have any problems.
Yes, their lives were perfect. They live peacefully just waiting for something bad to happen and show up to protect the world. There were lots of families there but the most important ones were the ''Yue'' family and the ''Onyx' family
Part of the Yue Family was a little girl named Crystal, a really beautiful little girl whose black hair shone with the light of the sun, whose green eyes sparkled as emeralds, and whose sweet smile could make even the coldest of hearts warm and stop being cruel, her parents were proud of her for indeed she was an extremely beautiful girl who was only 5 years old and whose beauty was just incredible for a little girl as her.
The Onyx Family had, instead, a son, his name was Zafiro, he had silver long hair that reached his shoulders, his hair was as wonderful as his eyes, his violet eyes that were indeed as the sapphire gems we know, the same reason why his name was ‘’Zafiro’’, the 6 year old boy was good looking for his age as well
Him and Crystal had known each other all their lives, they were very good friends, even if they were kids they still shared a nice friendship, that with time became into something more than it whether the kids realized it or not. For their parents this was more than wonderful since both of these families had a ‘’crystal’’
For them, the crystal was something of extremely importance, it meant that their kids were the chosen ones, the ones who would have to step forward when the world, either theirs or the human world, was about to reach the so called ‘’emergency state’’
However, both little kids didn’t know what destiny has prepared for them, what kind of life would they leave neither how long they would be together. Therefore they lived as normal kids, spending their childhood like any normal kid would, playing around the flower fields that surrounded the village.
Like any normal day, Crystal and Zafiro could be found playing and running after each other ‘’Why do you run so fast?!’’ an annoyed Crystal asked.
‘’It’s not that I run fast, you’re too slow accept it!’’ Zafiro replied in a teasingly way. Laughing at her, because she was too slow according to him.
Glaring at him she shouted ‘’What?! How dare you!’’ Zafiro seemed to enjoy seeing her getting mad, he liked to tease her a lot, however he knew that he had feelings towards her, even at his young age, he didn’t matter, he knew that one day he’d confess her his feelings and hoped to be corresponded.
‘’Hey um..’’
‘’What’s it?’’ the curious little girl asked
Timidly, he replied ‘’Eh.. do you see that tree over there?’’ to what Crystal returned ‘’Yeah…what’s with it?’’ the boy looked for a way to try to explain clearly what he wanted to say until he come up with ‘’ I want you to come with me there it’s a race!’’ said he, as he ran as fast as he could towards the tree without leaving Crystal a chance to catch up.
‘’What? Hey wait! That’s cheating!’’ she yelled as she tried hard to catch him. Both kids ran towards that tree, but as expected Zafiro had won once again and had yet another reason to tease her, Crystal felt embarrassed because he had won against her once again, not that she never stood a chance it’s just that the boy was too cunning.
‘’So, what do you want?’ Crystal asked while crossing her arms and waiting for an answer from the boy, who she thought was a bit crazy, some seconds passed until Zafiro spoke again ‘’Um…well.. why don’t we write our names here?’’ he asked, his voice sounded nervous as the voice of a young man confessing his feeling to the girl he liked, he started blushing in fear of her saying ‘’no’’ also just seeing her, made him go like that.
The girl blinked and remained silent for some seconds and then spoke ‘..I guess I have nothing against that!’’ she sweetly said, then walked towards the boy, putting her arms around him, being almost near his face, that was even redder than before, she whispered at his ear ‘’So, do you have a knife or something?’’
Zafiro did nothing but to nod, he was feeling extremely nervous to say anything, he then, started to look for the knife until it was found on his pocket, how it got there, who knows we can only suppose that he had already planned that. The boy turned around and asked Crystal ‘’Here it is, so who starts?’’
Crystal quit her arms of him and explained that since it was his idea he should be the one to start, she then waked towards the tree and sat next to it ‘’Come on..! I’m waiting’’ said Crystal.
Zafiro laughed ‘’You’re just so impatient!’’ he stated as he wrote his name on the wood, after some minutes he was done doing that and sat on the field, he handed Crystal the knife as he said ‘’Your turn, Crystal’’
She rose from the ground and started checking the tree ‘’Let me see’’ she then started to write her name next to the place where Zafiro wrote his, she took her time to write her name, but when she checked the tree again she thought that something was missing there.
‘’Hey Zafiro! Don’t you think that ‘’and’’ is missing?’’
Zafiro blushed at what she said and to that he replied ‘’Hey we’re not boyfriend and girlfriend, we can’t do that’’ he then looked somewhere else that wasn’t the girl.
Crystal started to laugh and sat next to him, still laughing, she told the boy ‘’It was only a joke!’’ she had learnt how to be as cunning as him and thought it was a good moment to tease him as he did with her ‘’Can’t believe you took it seriously’’ she continued, but in fact with feelings you cannot play no matter what.
Zafiro’s face was red, bright red was the colour his cheeks had but what caused that was embarrassment. He angrily stood up ‘’I’m going home, good night’’ and before Crystal could say anything he ran off and left her alone.
The girl felt a bit bad for joking around that way, but she was tired of him teasing her all the time, she then stood up and followed the path Zafiro went, actually she didn’t follow him to apologize or continue talking, she only did that because she didn’t know the way home, especially when being alone.
When both kids reached the village, Zafiro first, Crystal after him, both on their own, Zafiro heard the sound of doors opening and when he turned around he saw Crystal entering her house, he nodded and sighed with relief, since he thought he had left her there alone. He stared at the house for some moments and thought ‘’It was good today’’ a smile came to his face and he continued his way home.
End of chapter 1
I hope it was better than the first version of it n_n hope that you liked it and continue reading when possible.
Hi there, this is US again, I decided to start writing my fanfic again, actually I posted a chapter but I thought that it needed to be rewritten since I wasn't experienced enough when I started and since I fixed that with time and practice it's better to start again and maybe that way people will read this story and people who have read it before can enjoy it with a more descriptive style and better grammar and such.
Title: Crystal fate
Genre: Romance, Comedy, Fantasy.
Rated: E or PG-13 (due to me changing the last chapters and making them a bit spicy when possible..XD lol jk)
Based on: a bit of everything that I won't say XD
PROLOGUE
Legend says that there’s a place where a special race of humans live, this ‘humans’ have the power to protect the world when it faces a state of emergency or when is near to what they call ‘Apocalypse’ or even have the power to destroy it if they misuse that power.
This special race of humans are called ‘Cadiz’ , they inhabit in a village called ‘’Rising Sun’’ there were hundreds, thousands of this ‘’Cadiz’’ until a fire destroyed the place where they had been living for hundreds of years.
No one but two of the kids who survived knows what originated the fire, all that some other people know is that the night when lost of lives were lost, the figure of a woman was there, seeing how every single person died trough the flames of that fire.
She knew two kids survived and let them live, to achieve what she wanted, she knew they escaped, she knew they weren’t on their world after the moment she let them live.
5 years passed and these two kids, almost reaching their teenager years, try to live without remembering what happened to their home that night, they just want to forget that their families were killed and that that is the reason why they are not home now and why they reside in that place where any kid without parent is. An orphanage.
CHAPTER 1
HOW IT ALL BEGAN
Legend says that there’s a place where a special race of humans live, this ‘humans’ have the power to protect the world when it faces a state of emergency or when is near to what they call ‘Apocalypse’ or even have the power to destroy it if they misuse that power.
This special race of humans are called ‘Cadiz’ , they inhabit in a village called ‘’Rising Sun’’ there were hundreds, thousands of this ‘’Cadiz’’ until a fire destroyed the place where they had been living for hundreds of years.
No one but two of the kids who survived knows what originated the fire, all that some other people know is that the night when lost of lives were lost, the figure of a woman was there, seeing how every single person died trough the flames of that fire.
She knew two kids survived and let them live, to achieve what she wanted, she knew they escaped, she knew they weren’t on their world after the moment she let them live.
5 years passed and these two kids, almost reaching their teenager years, try to live without remembering what happened to their home that night, they just want to forget that their families were killed and that that is the reason why they are not home now and why they reside in that place where any kid without parent is. An orphanage.
CHAPTER 1
HOW IT ALL BEGAN
At the once peaceful “Rising Sun” village hundreds of Cadiz lived. Everyone was cheerful and they seemed not to have any problems.
Yes, their lives were perfect. They live peacefully just waiting for something bad to happen and show up to protect the world. There were lots of families there but the most important ones were the ''Yue'' family and the ''Onyx' family
Part of the Yue Family was a little girl named Crystal, a really beautiful little girl whose black hair shone with the light of the sun, whose green eyes sparkled as emeralds, and whose sweet smile could make even the coldest of hearts warm and stop being cruel, her parents were proud of her for indeed she was an extremely beautiful girl who was only 5 years old and whose beauty was just incredible for a little girl as her.
The Onyx Family had, instead, a son, his name was Zafiro, he had silver long hair that reached his shoulders, his hair was as wonderful as his eyes, his violet eyes that were indeed as the sapphire gems we know, the same reason why his name was ‘’Zafiro’’, the 6 year old boy was good looking for his age as well
Him and Crystal had known each other all their lives, they were very good friends, even if they were kids they still shared a nice friendship, that with time became into something more than it whether the kids realized it or not. For their parents this was more than wonderful since both of these families had a ‘’crystal’’
For them, the crystal was something of extremely importance, it meant that their kids were the chosen ones, the ones who would have to step forward when the world, either theirs or the human world, was about to reach the so called ‘’emergency state’’
However, both little kids didn’t know what destiny has prepared for them, what kind of life would they leave neither how long they would be together. Therefore they lived as normal kids, spending their childhood like any normal kid would, playing around the flower fields that surrounded the village.
Like any normal day, Crystal and Zafiro could be found playing and running after each other ‘’Why do you run so fast?!’’ an annoyed Crystal asked.
‘’It’s not that I run fast, you’re too slow accept it!’’ Zafiro replied in a teasingly way. Laughing at her, because she was too slow according to him.
Glaring at him she shouted ‘’What?! How dare you!’’ Zafiro seemed to enjoy seeing her getting mad, he liked to tease her a lot, however he knew that he had feelings towards her, even at his young age, he didn’t matter, he knew that one day he’d confess her his feelings and hoped to be corresponded.
‘’Hey um..’’
‘’What’s it?’’ the curious little girl asked
Timidly, he replied ‘’Eh.. do you see that tree over there?’’ to what Crystal returned ‘’Yeah…what’s with it?’’ the boy looked for a way to try to explain clearly what he wanted to say until he come up with ‘’ I want you to come with me there it’s a race!’’ said he, as he ran as fast as he could towards the tree without leaving Crystal a chance to catch up.
‘’What? Hey wait! That’s cheating!’’ she yelled as she tried hard to catch him. Both kids ran towards that tree, but as expected Zafiro had won once again and had yet another reason to tease her, Crystal felt embarrassed because he had won against her once again, not that she never stood a chance it’s just that the boy was too cunning.
‘’So, what do you want?’ Crystal asked while crossing her arms and waiting for an answer from the boy, who she thought was a bit crazy, some seconds passed until Zafiro spoke again ‘’Um…well.. why don’t we write our names here?’’ he asked, his voice sounded nervous as the voice of a young man confessing his feeling to the girl he liked, he started blushing in fear of her saying ‘’no’’ also just seeing her, made him go like that.
The girl blinked and remained silent for some seconds and then spoke ‘..I guess I have nothing against that!’’ she sweetly said, then walked towards the boy, putting her arms around him, being almost near his face, that was even redder than before, she whispered at his ear ‘’So, do you have a knife or something?’’
Zafiro did nothing but to nod, he was feeling extremely nervous to say anything, he then, started to look for the knife until it was found on his pocket, how it got there, who knows we can only suppose that he had already planned that. The boy turned around and asked Crystal ‘’Here it is, so who starts?’’
Crystal quit her arms of him and explained that since it was his idea he should be the one to start, she then waked towards the tree and sat next to it ‘’Come on..! I’m waiting’’ said Crystal.
Zafiro laughed ‘’You’re just so impatient!’’ he stated as he wrote his name on the wood, after some minutes he was done doing that and sat on the field, he handed Crystal the knife as he said ‘’Your turn, Crystal’’
She rose from the ground and started checking the tree ‘’Let me see’’ she then started to write her name next to the place where Zafiro wrote his, she took her time to write her name, but when she checked the tree again she thought that something was missing there.
‘’Hey Zafiro! Don’t you think that ‘’and’’ is missing?’’
Zafiro blushed at what she said and to that he replied ‘’Hey we’re not boyfriend and girlfriend, we can’t do that’’ he then looked somewhere else that wasn’t the girl.
Crystal started to laugh and sat next to him, still laughing, she told the boy ‘’It was only a joke!’’ she had learnt how to be as cunning as him and thought it was a good moment to tease him as he did with her ‘’Can’t believe you took it seriously’’ she continued, but in fact with feelings you cannot play no matter what.
Zafiro’s face was red, bright red was the colour his cheeks had but what caused that was embarrassment. He angrily stood up ‘’I’m going home, good night’’ and before Crystal could say anything he ran off and left her alone.
The girl felt a bit bad for joking around that way, but she was tired of him teasing her all the time, she then stood up and followed the path Zafiro went, actually she didn’t follow him to apologize or continue talking, she only did that because she didn’t know the way home, especially when being alone.
When both kids reached the village, Zafiro first, Crystal after him, both on their own, Zafiro heard the sound of doors opening and when he turned around he saw Crystal entering her house, he nodded and sighed with relief, since he thought he had left her there alone. He stared at the house for some moments and thought ‘’It was good today’’ a smile came to his face and he continued his way home.
End of chapter 1
I hope it was better than the first version of it n_n hope that you liked it and continue reading when possible.