you must be out of your mind

[A Wicked Dawn]

tag

v2

Experimentation with celestial floating heads existing beyond a hole to a second dimension, inside the walls.

I was bored this morning.

 

[A Wicked Dawn]

Come on people. It is highly improbable that 34 people would see this and not have some sort of opinion to speak.

 

[Kiba]

Well, I think it looks nice. There is quite a bit much of empty space and he has FHS. Other than that I like the effects you have got going on here.

 

[LongLiveLife]

The lp has too much empty space, and, because of it, the focal point is unclear: there is nothing guiding the eye from the stock to the text, and it looks like the two elements have just been slapped on there.

However, this tag is amazing:

The focus is clear and so too is the flow; the colors are also, in my opinion, much better with this cooler temperature.

 

[Amphetamine]

um, the text should definitely be moved elsewhere.
probably somewhere near the design, or incorporated into it. but it's really nice looking besides that.

 

[Silverslide]

I think it looks better as a tag.
But the effects and smudging are superb.

 

[King Sora X]

Though FHS would've been a problem elsewhere, in this situation however, it works. I love the effects used, mostly around his eye. I don't know what you did to do that, but keep on doing it.

 

[A Wicked Dawn]

I appreciate all of your comments and critiques; since the text and its subsequent state of connection to the rest of the piece seems to be the only main problem, I won't be redoing it since I dislike spending too long on a single project. However I'll take text into further consideration in future pieces (admittedly I'm more of a noob to text than anything else, so.)

Thanks