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Here's the second to last chapter of the fan fic.
The Second To Last Chapter: Hard To Say (The Used)
Gerard sat back into the queens desk. Asuka stood, once again, behind him. Gerard contacted Tatsuki once again. He set up the connection and Tatsuki was on screen. She and Gerard exchanged pleasantries before Gerard could talk. "Tatsuki, take me home," Gerard said. Asuka felt a little ache in her heart.
"Sorry about what you saw last time you contacted me. I felt it too," Tatsuki apologized. Gerard smiled with a laugh.
"Don't worry... I.. I got over it,"
"Y'know, they think you're dead,"
"I know, I know,"
"No, I'm serious. It seems the High Summoner is umm... Throwing a funeral party thing,"
"Funeral party? Is that an oxymoron?"
"I don't know. You want footage?"
"Well, alright," Gerard rolled his eyes.
The footage appeared on screen. Gerard watched as they moved his casket to the dock. They put his casket on a pedastal, while Yuna stood crying on a podium. Gerard watched everyone. Yuna wiped a tear from her eye. She wore a black dress. Her veil covered her face. Gerard looked at Rikku. Gippal stood by her, wrapping his arm around Rikku, who was crying as well. She too, wore a black dress with a veil covering her face.
Yuna cleared her throat. She was about to read her eulogy for Gerard. "Ladies and gentlemen. Citizens of Spira. We have come together to commemorate a man who had shown that love is boundless. I feel it is not right for me to read this eulogy. Rikku, here, was his lover. It's only..." Yuna paused to wipe a tear from her eye, "to tell us about him,"
Rikku quickly left Gippal. She walked slowly towards the front. Gerard watched her in despair. Rikku... Don't cry... Gerard thought. She cleared her throat and went on the podium. "Gerard... We fought. That didn't mean I didn't love him..." Rikku pulled off her veil to reveal a smiling face. "Even if we did fight, he was... My hero," she said. She pulled a ring off of her finger and threw it at Gippal. "Sorry, dear. But, I can't," she smiled. Rikku ran out of the ceremony.
Gerard feigned a smile. As the words end transmission flashed on the screen, Tatsuki came back on the screen. "You alright?" Tatsuki asked.
"Yeah. I sorta... Cried for my own funeral," Gerard joked. Asuka and Tatsuki laughed.
"Hey Asuka, how's your sister?" Tatsuki asked. Asuka pushed Gerard aside and talked into the microphone.
"I haven't heard from her in a week. Is she out of the organization?"
"Well, she wasn't supposed to take over a large part. Indeed, she is booted out. I think your Dad would have been proud of her more though. He passed on his power to her,"
"It's fine. I'm not mad. You sent me here for a reason,"
"Okay then. Gerard?"
"Yeah?"
"You ready?"
"Uh huh. Take me home Tatsuki,"
"Alright. We'll be there tommorow. Don't forget the gil Gerard,"
"It's always money with you huh?"
"It's not like I wasn't worried about you,"
"Thanks Tatsuki," Gerard said. The connection was closed. "I'll be leaving tommorow," Gerard said. Asuka frowned.
"I only have one more day with you..." Asuka said.
-End Chapter-
The Second To Last Chapter: Hard To Say (The Used)
Gerard sat back into the queens desk. Asuka stood, once again, behind him. Gerard contacted Tatsuki once again. He set up the connection and Tatsuki was on screen. She and Gerard exchanged pleasantries before Gerard could talk. "Tatsuki, take me home," Gerard said. Asuka felt a little ache in her heart.
"Sorry about what you saw last time you contacted me. I felt it too," Tatsuki apologized. Gerard smiled with a laugh.
"Don't worry... I.. I got over it,"
"Y'know, they think you're dead,"
"I know, I know,"
"No, I'm serious. It seems the High Summoner is umm... Throwing a funeral party thing,"
"Funeral party? Is that an oxymoron?"
"I don't know. You want footage?"
"Well, alright," Gerard rolled his eyes.
Blame it on the weather, but I'm a mess
And this February darkness has me hating everyone
And I know I give you comfort, but this trouble makes me sick
And the longer I lay here I know it's harder to get up
without you.
And this February darkness has me hating everyone
And I know I give you comfort, but this trouble makes me sick
And the longer I lay here I know it's harder to get up
without you.
The footage appeared on screen. Gerard watched as they moved his casket to the dock. They put his casket on a pedastal, while Yuna stood crying on a podium. Gerard watched everyone. Yuna wiped a tear from her eye. She wore a black dress. Her veil covered her face. Gerard looked at Rikku. Gippal stood by her, wrapping his arm around Rikku, who was crying as well. She too, wore a black dress with a veil covering her face.
Lose another day here
Lose another year here
I'm with you
Find me something out there that's making sense
And it's just another trend carefully hidden in your dress
And the cycles neverending and the fashions overdone
And the further that I run away, the further I'll come back
to shelter...
Lose another year here
I'm with you
Find me something out there that's making sense
And it's just another trend carefully hidden in your dress
And the cycles neverending and the fashions overdone
And the further that I run away, the further I'll come back
to shelter...
Yuna cleared her throat. She was about to read her eulogy for Gerard. "Ladies and gentlemen. Citizens of Spira. We have come together to commemorate a man who had shown that love is boundless. I feel it is not right for me to read this eulogy. Rikku, here, was his lover. It's only..." Yuna paused to wipe a tear from her eye, "to tell us about him,"
You are the fire on my apartment floor
Sixteen stories, I'd rather burn than fall
It isn't fate that took us all by storm
It's just the turn of a card.
Sixteen stories, I'd rather burn than fall
It isn't fate that took us all by storm
It's just the turn of a card.
Rikku quickly left Gippal. She walked slowly towards the front. Gerard watched her in despair. Rikku... Don't cry... Gerard thought. She cleared her throat and went on the podium. "Gerard... We fought. That didn't mean I didn't love him..." Rikku pulled off her veil to reveal a smiling face. "Even if we did fight, he was... My hero," she said. She pulled a ring off of her finger and threw it at Gippal. "Sorry, dear. But, I can't," she smiled. Rikku ran out of the ceremony.
Goodbye, old friend
Goodbye, goodnight
I'll move on
You'll call it fate, I'll call it karma
We had our time, it was fun
while it lasted
Goodbye, goodnight
I'll move on
You'll call it fate, I'll call it karma
We had our time, it was fun
while it lasted
Gerard feigned a smile. As the words end transmission flashed on the screen, Tatsuki came back on the screen. "You alright?" Tatsuki asked.
"Yeah. I sorta... Cried for my own funeral," Gerard joked. Asuka and Tatsuki laughed.
"Hey Asuka, how's your sister?" Tatsuki asked. Asuka pushed Gerard aside and talked into the microphone.
"I haven't heard from her in a week. Is she out of the organization?"
"Well, she wasn't supposed to take over a large part. Indeed, she is booted out. I think your Dad would have been proud of her more though. He passed on his power to her,"
"It's fine. I'm not mad. You sent me here for a reason,"
"Okay then. Gerard?"
"Yeah?"
"You ready?"
"Uh huh. Take me home Tatsuki,"
"Alright. We'll be there tommorow. Don't forget the gil Gerard,"
"It's always money with you huh?"
"It's not like I wasn't worried about you,"
"Thanks Tatsuki," Gerard said. The connection was closed. "I'll be leaving tommorow," Gerard said. Asuka frowned.
I'll look back with honor
and no regrets
I won't be mad, won't feel bad
These memories will never leave me
Don't be sad
cause life goes on, life goes on
It's getting too late
Tomorrow is here
and no regrets
I won't be mad, won't feel bad
These memories will never leave me
Don't be sad
cause life goes on, life goes on
It's getting too late
Tomorrow is here
"I only have one more day with you..." Asuka said.
-End Chapter-
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....I'm not even going to think about what was implied in this chapter.
GERARD! Just because I've been incommunicado this week past, doesn't mean I don't still get the news! Keep your promises and kill Asuka!
By the way ... I'm at my aunt's house now ... so that means ... I CAN GO ON AIM!!
GERARD! Just because I've been incommunicado this week past, doesn't mean I don't still get the news! Keep your promises and kill Asuka!
By the way ... I'm at my aunt's house now ... so that means ... I CAN GO ON AIM!!
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*Presses Gerard Destruction Button*
*Presses Gerard Destruction Button*
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Update or Die. Seriously.
RIKKU! YAY! I'M SO PROUD! CRUSH THAT EYE-PATCHED FREAK! ^-^
RIKKU! YAY! I'M SO PROUD! CRUSH THAT EYE-PATCHED FREAK! ^-^
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Hmm, well ok. This is an odd fic as a whole, but im not dissin' it. Btw, I meant n00b TLP. You've had your n00b moments, and of course you were all newbies.
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I think it's impossible to never be a newb. *goes off to ponder question while trying to find infinity in mirrors* XD
I'm just wondering why Rikku wasn't crying at the funeral of her lover.
I'm just wondering why Rikku wasn't crying at the funeral of her lover.
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Heh heh, cause she's happy... *chuckles*.. Gerard's dead, heh eh eh.
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No. She left her new fiance and ran off. I imagine she's going to cry in the next chap.
great chapter C_U ( i was hopeing she could uses some really fast warp drive and send you to the cofin and and say"I'm alive" but what you did was good lol)
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I would lock the coffin.
HEY!
WHERE WERE ALL OF US, YO?!
Edit: I forgot. NEVERMIND, NEVERMIND!
HEY!
WHERE WERE ALL OF US, YO?!
Edit: I forgot. NEVERMIND, NEVERMIND!
well update C_U
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Next Chapter.
OMGSECONDTOLASTCHAPPIE: Someday You Will Be Loved (Death Cab For Cutie [That's right Pickle. DCAB!])
Asuka wrapped her arms around Gerard and tears fell down her eyes to his shoulder. Gerard was confused. What to do... What to do... I got it! Gerard thought. "Umm... Stop crying?" Gerard said nervously. Asuka wiped her eyes and stood in front of him. She looked up at him. Gerard hugged her back and whispered again, "Don't cry Asuka,"
The two walked outside to the bed of flowers. They sat on a bench and looked into the garden. Asuka held Gerards hand and crossed her fingers into his. She leaned her head onto his shoulder and Gerard stared into the garden.
"Gerard," Asuka said solemnly.
"Yes?" Gerard asked.
"Do you think this place will be fine when you're gone?"
"I don't think you have anything to worry about... Right?"
"I sure hope not," Asuka said.
"Chin up. You're here to protect them,"
"Yeah... I guess,"
The two at dinner alone that night. The triplets served them quietly. Not a sound was made. The noise of the utensils scratching on the plates was practically silent. Asuka only stared at her plate while Gerard poked his food gently, feeling awkward, eating while Asuka watched. "Excuse me," she said, placing her napkin on her plate.
Gerard escorted Asuka to her room. Asuka started to tear up at the door. Gerard felt a little sorry. Why are you crying so much? You'll be okay, Gerard though shrugging his shoulders. Asuka turned the doorknob and opened the door. Inside, the dark room seemed cold and lonely. Although it was decorated with elegant furniture and the finest carpets, draperies, and such she was not content. She was scared. "Gerard? Can you come in with me?" Asuka asked.
OMGSECONDTOLASTCHAPPIE: Someday You Will Be Loved (Death Cab For Cutie [That's right Pickle. DCAB!])
Asuka wrapped her arms around Gerard and tears fell down her eyes to his shoulder. Gerard was confused. What to do... What to do... I got it! Gerard thought. "Umm... Stop crying?" Gerard said nervously. Asuka wiped her eyes and stood in front of him. She looked up at him. Gerard hugged her back and whispered again, "Don't cry Asuka,"
I once knew a girl
In the years of my youth
With eyes like the summer
All beauty and truth
In the morning I fled
Left a note and it read
Someday you will be loved.
In the years of my youth
With eyes like the summer
All beauty and truth
In the morning I fled
Left a note and it read
Someday you will be loved.
The two walked outside to the bed of flowers. They sat on a bench and looked into the garden. Asuka held Gerards hand and crossed her fingers into his. She leaned her head onto his shoulder and Gerard stared into the garden.
I cannot pretend that I felt any regret
Cause each broken heart will eventually mend
As the blood runs red down the needle and thread
Someday you will be loved
Cause each broken heart will eventually mend
As the blood runs red down the needle and thread
Someday you will be loved
"Gerard," Asuka said solemnly.
"Yes?" Gerard asked.
"Do you think this place will be fine when you're gone?"
"I don't think you have anything to worry about... Right?"
"I sure hope not," Asuka said.
"Chin up. You're here to protect them,"
"Yeah... I guess,"
You'll be loved you'll be loved
Like you never have known
The memories of me
Will seem more like bad dreams
Just a series of blurs
Like I never occurred
Someday you will be loved
Like you never have known
The memories of me
Will seem more like bad dreams
Just a series of blurs
Like I never occurred
Someday you will be loved
The two at dinner alone that night. The triplets served them quietly. Not a sound was made. The noise of the utensils scratching on the plates was practically silent. Asuka only stared at her plate while Gerard poked his food gently, feeling awkward, eating while Asuka watched. "Excuse me," she said, placing her napkin on her plate.
You may feel alone when you're falling asleep
And everytime tears roll down your cheeks
But I know your heart belongs to someone you've yet to meet
Someday you will be loved
And everytime tears roll down your cheeks
But I know your heart belongs to someone you've yet to meet
Someday you will be loved
Gerard escorted Asuka to her room. Asuka started to tear up at the door. Gerard felt a little sorry. Why are you crying so much? You'll be okay, Gerard though shrugging his shoulders. Asuka turned the doorknob and opened the door. Inside, the dark room seemed cold and lonely. Although it was decorated with elegant furniture and the finest carpets, draperies, and such she was not content. She was scared. "Gerard? Can you come in with me?" Asuka asked.
You'll be loved you'll be loved
Like you never have known
The memories of me
Will seem more like bad dreams
Just a series of blurs
Like I never occurred
Someday you will be loved
Like you never have known
The memories of me
Will seem more like bad dreams
Just a series of blurs
Like I never occurred
Someday you will be loved
awesome. all other comments... lol. nice. OMFG, SECONDTOLASAT CHAPPIE!!XD
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Maybe....
Maybe you should look in the chat, Gerard. I'm not allowed to say such things out here.
((THAT'S HOW MUCH TROUBLE HE'S IN! YEAH!))
Maybe you should look in the chat, Gerard. I'm not allowed to say such things out here.
((THAT'S HOW MUCH TROUBLE HE'S IN! YEAH!))
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You make my day TLP, I swear if it wasn't for you and C_U I would have left by now.
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*hums* I don't mind spendin' every day, out on your corner in the pourin' rain....
Anyway.
*sprays lime air-freshener* It is seriously starting to smell WAAAYYY too lemony in here.
And people call ME indecisive ... damn.
Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you, Gerard, RikkuxGippal are no longer my favorite couple. So, you can find some comfort in that.
Anyway.
*sprays lime air-freshener* It is seriously starting to smell WAAAYYY too lemony in here.
And people call ME indecisive ... damn.
Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you, Gerard, RikkuxGippal are no longer my favorite couple. So, you can find some comfort in that.
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You're a meanie Gerard.
ASUKA IS A HOMEWRECKING, MUFFIN-STUFFING, PASTRY-FILLING, PENGUIN-SUCKING, UGLY, DISGUSTING, HOMEWRECKING AGAIN, HOMEWRECKING, HOMEWRECKING, STUPID, CHEESEY, UGLY, USING, ROBOTIC HAIRY MAN-BEAST WHO SHOULD DIE A HORRIBLE DEATH!
I WILL FEED HER EYEBALLS TO POISONOUS FUNGI, SAW OFF HER TOES, MAKE HER WATCH PUBLIC TELEVISION, MAKE EVERY GUY IN THE WORLD CALL HER UGLY, MAKE HER EAT CHALK, MAKE HER SWALLOW HER OWN LIVER WHOLE, AND... AND...
JUMPROPE WITH HER LONG INTESTINE!
AND I'LL VIDEOTAPE IT AND SEND IT TO YOU AND TELL RIKKU YOU'RE GONNA CHEAT ON HER BECAUSE YOU WERE ASKED TO!
ASUKA IS A HOMEWRECKING, MUFFIN-STUFFING, PASTRY-FILLING, PENGUIN-SUCKING, UGLY, DISGUSTING, HOMEWRECKING AGAIN, HOMEWRECKING, HOMEWRECKING, STUPID, CHEESEY, UGLY, USING, ROBOTIC HAIRY MAN-BEAST WHO SHOULD DIE A HORRIBLE DEATH!
I WILL FEED HER EYEBALLS TO POISONOUS FUNGI, SAW OFF HER TOES, MAKE HER WATCH PUBLIC TELEVISION, MAKE EVERY GUY IN THE WORLD CALL HER UGLY, MAKE HER EAT CHALK, MAKE HER SWALLOW HER OWN LIVER WHOLE, AND... AND...
JUMPROPE WITH HER LONG INTESTINE!
AND I'LL VIDEOTAPE IT AND SEND IT TO YOU AND TELL RIKKU YOU'RE GONNA CHEAT ON HER BECAUSE YOU WERE ASKED TO!
.... scareh. update C_U.... or send me the *citrusey-er* version. XD either will work. XXDDD
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Oh-Em-Ef-Gee, as they say, Pickle. I mean, wow. *hides beyond newly acquired fave couple obsession.* ((Not wrong!))
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