This was incredible. <3 All of the precious moments within this chapter had my heart bursting with joy. I'm glad no one has to suffer any more. Especially Soror and Atra. These two went through a lot on their separate journeys. I absolute love the fact that Atra is officially a human being now. I'm a bit surprised Soror accompanied Riku to go to a new world unlike the one they were on. But I'm happy he isn't alone. And the ending for this chapter was perfect. <3 I look forward to the remaining chapter & finale, spirit. <3
I know how you feel. It felt so good to write, and to see Atra's suffering finally come to an end. That they did, but it was that suffering that make them who they are. I'm really proud of that. When Atra's body was made of darkness his life had stopped; he couldn't even age anymore. But after dealing with everything he can start is life again. Like the said, they didn't have a place and that world anymore. They'll go to more the one. They can now go to every possible universe, even ours if they wanted (but don't worry that's not going to happen). But they'll be together and that's all that matters. I teared up a little when I wrote that part. I think you're going to love both of them, though I kind of feel I could have ended it here. But we have to see what happened to everyone else.