Did you do something to her arm? Cause it looks incredibly skinny. Also, I feel as though no one should try imitating Kaz's style, it just doesnt work :/ I mean, you didnt fail completely, but you also didn't achieve what you were going for. I could be wrong, thats just how it seems to me. All in all, it isnt a bad tag, the colors could be a little less monotone and spice up the saturation a bit.