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Bliip

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V1

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V2

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Lancelot

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You've done a pretty nice job of this actually.

I'd say v2 for the fact that the clipping mask helps take away all the negative space... I think some places are oversharpened in contrast to the stock, mainly the left side. It really doesn't fit all that well. But otherwise, :awesome:
 

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Did you do something to her arm? Cause it looks incredibly skinny. Also, I feel as though no one should try imitating Kaz's style, it just doesnt work :/ I mean, you didnt fail completely, but you also didn't achieve what you were going for. I could be wrong, thats just how it seems to me. All in all, it isnt a bad tag, the colors could be a little less monotone and spice up the saturation a bit.
 

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Eh, it all seems quite random to me. The thing that's bugging me most is the flow, there's no consistency. The effects are all over the place and aren't very well integrated. Your use of sharpening also needs work, it's over-sharpened in some places and not sharp enough in others.

@42! I thought the arm was really skinny too, haha.
 

Bliip

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Actually, i didn't sharpen the whole thing even once :p and her arm is actually like that xD idk why...

but yeah, this was my first attempt at a Kaz-style tag, so i wasn't expecting anything too big from it.
 
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