Fanfiction ► The Return of Axel

[Cindri]

Yay!

It's beautiful, Oathy. Maybe it's just me, but you seem to be making your details sound more glamerous than before. I loved how you described Destiny Islands in the first paragraph.

I can't wait for more! Keep up the beautiful work, love. ♥

 

[snowdog]

Yay for Oathy!

That was gorgeous, even if it was just a little bit of it. Cindri's right, I think your writing style has changed a little - it's a bit more descriptive and careful, which I love - and I can't wait to see more of it. So keep up your awesome work, hun.

And, yes, what is happening to Kya's Axel?! D:

Keep going, 'cause Snow's gonna be watching. >.> <.<

<3

 

[I]

I am of agreeing with Cindri and Snowy-chan - the details are alot more shiny than before! I like it!

Hehe, My Axel XD

 

[sh im playin kh2]

Whoa, that was a pretty good update!

 

[Livi]

Will you put "Return of Axel" on FanFiccy, now that you have a sequal in progress...

Yus! I already put it up, I still have to put the whole story though. xD

To answer the 'WHUTS HAPPENING TO AXEL SAN?!' question is....You have to find out. ;D

I'm still pondering whether I should post the rest of that chappie here, or make the sequel thread. o.o

 

[snowdog]

Sequel thread! Sequel thread!

*coughs* ; But that's just me.

Gaaah! *wants to know what happened to him* I'm never posting a cliffy again. Ever. Now I know how it feels XD

 

[Livi]

xDDDD lol okay, if I can relocate my notepad I'll be able to finish it.

Snow has just gotten a taste of her own medicine ;D But I didn't think it was THAT bad of a cliffie. ;; Was it?

 

[snowdog]

Twas nasty medicine. ;-;

Yes it was XD We don't know what happened to poor Axel.

*remembers there's a cliffy in the next TFF chappy* ... disregard my "never posting a cliffy" thing.

 

[Livi]

xDD I pretty much hate medicine in general. x.X

Well, it's not like I'd kill him in the first chappie so we can scratch that out. xD

O.O

So much for learning a lesson. -__-;;

 

[snowdog]

Me too. *glares at her medication*

Maybe that's what you want us to think. *shifty eyes* ... okay. XD

I'll remember for next time, the chapters already written and stuff... -.-

 

[Livi]

xDDD Well, I'm creating this new heartless/nobody thing cause the original creatures were getting old. =/

Ah..you're too fast for your own good. xD

 

[I]

Ummm, ooookay?

LIV YOU HAD BETTER NOT KILL OFF MY AXEL IN THE FIRST CHAPTER OR I MIGHT HAVE TO COME HUNT YOU DOWN AND EAT YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *moment of violence* okay, okay, I'm done :3

 

[Livi]

O.O

Seriously, I won't kill him..yet. >.> -bricked-

Don't worry xD He just got jumped by that shadow/dusk er..thing.

 

[I]

Liv, you're not supposed to tell us what is going to happen. You little spoiler x.x

Dude, you haven't returned my PM! I feel so unloved ;.; (jk)

*squeals over having six hundred sixty-six posts* yus!

 

[Faris]

that was really really good any chance for more chapters

 

[Livi]

Liv, you're not supposed to tell us what is going to happen. You little spoiler x.x

Dude, you haven't returned my PM! I feel so unloved ;.; (jk)

*squeals over having six hundred sixty-six posts* yus!

That's not whats going to happen. xDDD You can guess if you want.

I..really have nothing to say to it. D=

O_O And you've been on this site for a shorter time than me, jeez. x.X

And aquaven keyblade, the chapters for the sequel will be on a different thread. xD

 

[I]

lol, srsly? I never noticed that *is surprised that Livi-chan has been on here longer than she*

yay! new thread to populate! though when you make it, in the first post you should give a link back to this one so other peoples can read the first part without having to search throught the wilderness of the forums...

 

[snowdog]

Wait, you're making a sequel thread? This calls for a celebration of some sort.

*wears a party hat*

:3

 

[Gullwing Yunie]

Party? I am so joining you!
*throws streamers*

 

[I]

*chases the streamers* haha, I know what's going to happen *dances* Wait, we need cookies to celebrate!