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This is my first fanfic!! I hope you all like it I made it for all the fans who's hearts were broken from that depressing scene in KH2 to understand the first part and if you don't mind spoilers go to http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HCYZfezTBeo&mode=related&search=
1 This is about Axel (duh)
2 I will try to include all of the KH2 characters so dont get mad if one chapter is just about Axel
3 The beginning in italic font is a SPOILER from KH2
4 PLEEZ comment i worked hard on this thanx! :)

The Return of Axel

“I think I liked it better when they were on my side,” Axel stated, breathing deeply, exhausted from battling so many nobodies. “Feeling a little...regret?”Sora asked, standing beside him. Axel thought for a moment “Nah...I can handle these punks, watch this!” as he jumped into the air. Sora watched in amazement as Axel focused all his strength and energy into one huge Kame Kaze attack, flames surrounding him, then exploding everywhere.

Sora covered his eyes, and when he looked, every nobody was gone! “Whoa!” he exclaimed as he looked around and then spotted Axel lying on the ground, as black mist floated upward from him.

Sora kneeled beside him, “You’re...fading away...” he stuttered sadly. “Well, that’s what happens when you put you’re whole being into an attack, know what I mean?” he sighed. “Not that nobodies actually HAVE beings...right?” Axel wondered “Anyway I digress, go find Kairi.” Sora suddenly remembered, Kairi needs him.”Oh, almost forgot...sorry for what I did to her.” he apologized. “When we find her, you can tell her that yourself.” Sora exclaimed. “Think I’ll pass,” he smiled “My heart just wouldn’t be in it, you know? Haven’t got one,” he laughed.

“Axel, what were you trying to do?” Sora asked. “I wanted to see Roxas” Axel said sadly. Sora felt bad, he knew just how it felt.”He...was the only one I liked...” he sighed”He made me feel...like I had a heart..it’s kind of funny,” he muttered. Axel turned to him “You make me feel...the same...” he stopped

“Kairi’s in the castle dungeon, now go!” he used the last drop of his strength and opened up a portal to the “World that Never Was”. Sora watched as Axel faded into a black blur into the darkness. “Axel..” Sora murmured sadly.
Thus our story begins....

Chapter 1: A nobody’s Dive to the Heart

Axel felt himself floating in darkness..eternal darkness..but still had all of his memories from before...what’s happening to me? He thought drifting through his thoughts..I hope Sora is okay. Suddenly he felt himself land on the ground and doves suddenly took flight What the heck? He looked down, he suddenly saw a stained glass picture of Organization 13 and gasped. “What is goin’ on here?!”

Don’t you recognize them?
“Who’s there?!” exclaimed Axel as he tried to summon his chakrams ”Huh? Where are..oh yeah...crap”

Would you like them back?
“Uh..YES!!” Axel shouted

Well focus your energy into bringing them back...

Axel thought for a moment, then closed his eyes and streched out his arms. Suddenly two bladed wheels spun into his hands. “Alright!” he smiled. “So, now what?!”.

No answer.” Hellloooooo?! strange voice?!” Then five dusks suddenly surrounded him.”You again?!” he cried “You guys just don’t know when to quit!” as he slashed through one of them, then lit his chakrams with flames and shot them at each of the dusks.”Back off!” he shouted at them, them ran up the steps to the next platform

Good, your strength is returning

“You again,” muttered Axel, not surprised that this anonymous voice was back.

To prove you strength, you must face one of your old foes...

“Bring it on!” shouted Axel.

Suddenly a portal emerged from the darkness and who was it? “Vexen?!” exclaimed Axel “You’re..alive?!” The Chilly Academic gave him an icy glare “I’m sure you remember perfectly what you did to me Axel” he stated coldly. “Well, consider this revenge!” he shouted as a blue shield emerged onto Vexen’s arm as snow started to form. “Oh shit” Axel groaned.

Vexen lunged at Axel and slashed him with his shield which sent Axel flying. As he was in the air he threw his chakrams at Vexen which he reflected off his shield. Determined, Axel shot a wave of flames at him at the same time, Vexen shot a blizzard spell at Axel. The spells exploded, shooting Vexen back. This was his chance, Axel teleported behind Vexen and stabbed him with his chakrams.

Suddenly, Vexen faded, and a door appeared “So, that wasn’t REALLY Vexen,” concluded Axel “Just a test of my strength..”

Good you learn quickly
“What do you want with me?”

I am merely helping you return to the real world, though this time, with a heart
“A...heart?!”

Yes
“...You can...do that?” he stuttered.

Of course, everyone deserves a second chance, especially after what you did for the keyblade master...
Axel considered “What’s the catch?”

Nothing, you are the one who will decide your destiny
“okay..so what do I do?”

Open the door...

Axel stared at the door, unsure of what to do, then pulled the handle and saw a blinding light. “Here I go..” he said as he walked into the door..

I hope you all like it! please comment!
 
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It's pretty good. One thing I'd do is make a seperate paragraph every time a different character speaks. That just helps to make things organized. And maybe a BIT more description would be nice, but other than that, it's good. Yay for Axel-kun! =O
 

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An Axel fic!!!!!!! =]

Great job on it, btw. I'll be waiting for future chappies.
 

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thanx .:Mega:. and Xiao you rock i'm still working on this whole fanfic thing please stay and comment! it might be up tonight
 

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Of course I'll stay and comment. XD I like reading fanfics, and giving construtive crits is always helpful. Plus, it's got Axel in it. =3
 

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I'll definitely stay.

Axel = Love.
 

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Here's the next chappie its kind of short but i hope u like it!

Chapter 2: A friend’s Return

Axel suddenly was standing in front of two roads “Uh..exactly where am I?” You are standing by the roads of fate, here, you will choose which path you take light or dark “Oh great more trick questions..hmm..”

“I think, I’m gonna take the road in the middle.”The road to twilight? “Yeah...so, do I pass?” That’s for you to decide Suddenly, a blinding light engulfed Axel and he felt like he was shot out of a cannon..then everything went black.

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Axel awoke to the sound of the ocean’s waves crashing onto the shore. “Wha..?” He looked around and realized it was Destiny Islands! “What am I doing on Sora’s island?” he thought.

He looked down and saw he didn’t have the black robe anymore, he had a black jacket with flames and jeans(with flames).

"Huh..new duds..that must mean.." he stopped in mid sentence, his eyes widened.

He put his hand on his chest and felt an even beating. "No way..!” He jumped up and almost started spazzing when a voice called him.

“Axel!!” He turned around and saw Sora running towards him.

“Hey, it's spikey!” Axel cried, he was okay, he must of defeated Xemnas and saved the worlds.

“Axel! You’re alive!!” Sora exclaimed happily.

“Yeah! And I’m new and improved!” he said gesturing to his heart.

Sora’s eyes widened “You have a heart now!? Thats great!!” Suddenly a spikey haired figure walked out of Sora and beamed at Axel.

“Roxas?"

sorry its kind of short :)
 
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No worries that it's short. XD Interesting cliffy you have there. Hooray for Roxas! -bricked- Just remember, updates don't have to be TOO quick. Quality is always better than quanity after all.
 

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Aww....yay for Axel getting a heart <3
 

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Okay I finished the chappie I hope you all like it!


Chapter 3: A reunion

“Axel! You’re okay!” exclaimed Roxas smiling up at his friend, his blue eyes sparkling.

Axel never felt so happy in his whole life, here he was, back with his two best friends, with a heart, nothing could go wrong.

Or so he thought..

~*~*~*~*~*~*

Three hooded figures stood in the lab in the mansion of Twilight Town..

“What was his master’s orders Saix?” asked VI.

“That we find No.8 and force him to join us again” explained VII.

“And if he refuses?” asked XII, a malicious grin on her face.

“..We destroy him."

~*~*~*~*~*~

Hayner, Pence, and Olette ran out of the mansion, “What do we do? Who’s number eight?’ asked Pence.

“I’m not sure, but we should get Sora as soon as possible.” said Hayner. Olette nodded, and headed for the usual spot.

~*~*~*~*~*

“..and thats how I got a heart” concluded Axel.

Sora and Roxas thought about his story “Well all that matters is that you’re okay!” said Roxas, Sora nodded.

“Hey, we should go get Kairi and Riku!” said Sora. Axel pondered this, it was no doubt Kairi would be cautious around him since he tried to kidnap her once. He didn't know about Riku..

"Alright," he agreed, as they walked back, they didn’t notice someone following them in the shadows...
 
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The chapter itself is alright. The only thing is that it doesn't seem to have as many details as the other two. Remember that you don't have to rush your chapters. So, it was good, but next time try to take a little more time. XD
 

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yeah i guess i was only rushing was because i disnt want anyone to get impatient i'm gonna make them longer and more descriptive now
 

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lol thanx sh im playin kh2 u rock I KNEW U WOULD COMMENT!! WHHHOOO i might post it tommorow sometime U GUYS R THE BEST FANS!!
 

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okay guys I'm not gonna be here the rest of the day so pleez comment and I'll try to respond sometime today here's the next chappie ITS LONGER THIS TIME! XD

Chapter 4: The Luna Diviner

As Axel and Sora approached Riku and Kairi, Kairi gasped and Riku jumped.

“Its okay guys Axel is good now don’t worry” Sora reassured them. “And he has something to say to you Kairi. “Riiiiight Axel?” Sora nudged him.

"Wha-? Oh yeah, I'm sorry for what I did to you before Kairi, it was wrong, and yeah..I'm not used to apologies,” he stuttered scratching his head.

Kairi smiled at him”It’s okay Axel, I forgive you, especially because you gave your life for Sora and me, that’s apology enough,” Axel smiled at her, it was no doubt she was a princess of heart, with her kindness and compassion for everyone.

“So, you were part of the organization?” asked Riku

“ I WAS but I’m not like them anymore, they’re toast anyway” he explained.

“So you think!” a cloaked figure yelled as he grabbed Axel. “Don’t think you can have a happy ending Axel, you’re pain starts now!” cried the voice.

Axel didn’t know what the hell was goin’ on, but if he didn’t fight back, he was done for.
He back flipped 8 ft in the air so the hooded person would let go of him, and summoned his chakrams. Sora and Riku summoned their blades as well, ready to attack at any moment.

“Who are you and what do you want with Axel?!”cried Sora.

“I’m here to take him back to the organization, dead or alive!!” he shouted and summoned a long blue, sword with a star blade.

“Saix!?” exclaimed Axel “I thought you were dead!”

“Nobody’s never really fade into darkness, they just become spirits” he stated as he went berserk on Axel. Sora and Riku ran and joined the fight while Kairi ran to the treehouse.

“I’m not going back to the organization! I’m whole now!” he shouted as he slashed a flaming chakram at him,”Get that through your friggin head!”while Sora and Riku tried to attack Saix.

“Not for long!” Saix chuckled evilly. Riku shot a dark firaga at Saix, which weakened him a bit, but he wasn’t giving up yet. Sora took one of Saix’s blades that he left in the ground while doing berserk, and smacked him with it until he fell to the ground.

“This isn’t over yet, we will make you join us again Axel, and we will destroy your friends as well!” Saix yelled casting a glance at Sora, then disappearing into a portal.

Axel slumped to the ground, he couldn’t believe it, the organization was back, they wanted him and meanwhile, they were causing havoc to the worlds, AGAIN!
“This never ends! And it’s all my fault!” Axel groaned.

“No it’s not Axel” Sora said sadly “It just means we have to work together to save the worlds(again) but this time you’re a hero, not a villain,”

“Yeah, you’re right” Axel muttered.

Suddenly another portal emerged and a shorter cloaked figure came out of it with big round ears, followed by Donald and Goofy.

“Donald! Goofy! Your majesty?!” cried Sora and Riku.

“Shhhh, I’ve heard everything already, Axel, it’s good to see that you’re back, but we’ve gotta leave this place now!” hissed King Mickey.

“Yeah, organization 13 is back!” said Goofy.

“So we’ve noticed” Riku grumbled.

“So, this means..” started Sora

“Yep, ANOTHER adventure,” sighed Kairi

“Don’t worry Kairi, you and Axel are coming with us this time!” reassured Sora

Kairi smiled, she and Sora wouldn’t be separated this time!

“C’mon, we’ve gotta board the gummi ship and go!” said the King

Everyone nodded and followed the King to where the gummi ship was parked and went inside. There were 5 rooms inside, one for Donald and Goofy, one for Kairi, one for the king, one for Sora and Riku, and one for Axel. (Plus the bathroom)

Sora took the wheel, and departed from the islands, then zooming off into space.
“So where are we headed first?” he asked.

“Twilight Town, Hayner, Pence, and Olette said heartless were appearing around town” the King informed them “Put it on auto pilot and get some rest,”

They all agreed and went to bed, Axel couldn’t sleep, he was too nervous about the organization. I’ll be fine, now that I’m with the others... he thought, then drifted off to sleep.

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“Did you find Axel?” asked Zexion.

“Yes, but now he is a complete being, I don’t understand it,” said Saix.

“It might be because the dude gave his life for that Sora kid, then someone thought he was worthy of coming back..but who?” questioned Xigbar, The Freeshooter.

“I don’t know, but we have to destroy him and the Keyblader at all costs,” concluded Saix

Suddenly a portal appeared, and Lexaeus walked out of it “We have picked up their vessel traveling to Twilight Town,” he said.

“Good, be sure to send heartless ships after them,” smiled Saix

“Indeed,” and he disappeared back into the portal.


I hope u all like it!
 
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