Fanfiction ► The New Organization

[Demi_Shock]

AWESOME! I wonder what kinds of literature all those books contain...boggles the mind...and the heart...

 

[Suzaku]

Sorry, AJ. I don't need to imagine. It happens to everyone at some point or another.

people have said worse about characters. And its not too bad to have some comic relief.

Now I actually will stop spamming

 

[Haku]

Great previous chapter AJ sorry I haven't posted sooner xD.

 

[Xidon]

I didn't find it funny. Imagine if you created a character and somebody said that about your own character.

... I was just joking..... I don't see what the big deal is, but there I apologize if I was rude and offensive

and thanks Suzaku for getting that it was only a joke, nothing more...

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

nice work!!!! XDXDXD

my gosh this is getting better and better!!! XDXD

 

[~Lenya~]

Nice chappie,I wonder who that girl was..Whats gonna happen to Pence,Hayner and Olette..O___O

 

[Athel]

OMG!!!!!!!!! Lulu from FFX is an organization member!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but Hayner, Pence and Olette didn't talk like they normally do...they're teenagers dude, u made them sound a lot older.
no offense, just constructive criticism.

 

[Suzaku]

No prob, Xidon. If you need someone to laugh at odd and sometimes questionable jokes you know where to find me.

 

[Gullwing Yunie]

Oooh great chappeh! =D

Go chinese food! xD

 

[ansemjafar]

Pie what do you mean Lulu is an organization member? Also when I did their dialogue. I could actually picture the voices from the game doing the words. but if you feel that way. that's fine.

 

[Xidon]

Pie what do you mean Lulu is an organization member? Also when I did their dialogue. I could actually picture the voices from the game doing the words. but if you feel that way. that's fine.

He means that the new character is Lulu couse she has a puppet as a weapon too James.

Suzaku next time I get a Organization joke from this I am PMing it to you not posting here.

 

[~Lenya~]

OMG!!Me and gunblade girl figured out who the cloaked person is!!But since we're nice we're not gonna tel!!@___@

Nyaherha!!I figured it out!!XD*Jumps up and down like a coca cola can that was just shaken up and got open* XDXDXD

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

^ lenchan figured it out!! XDXD yeay!!!

and wow.. shaking likka cocacola can?? XD

btw hope u update soon ansem =3

 

[ansemjafar]

It probably won't be a while. I am busy with life and haven't started writing yet. Until then consider the fates of Hayner Pence and Olette. *begins to laugh evily and then vanish in a cloud of darkness.*

 

[~Lenya~]

Wow I didnt know Ansem could be that creepy..O__O

I hope they'll be okay though..O__O

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

okie then!!! we'll settle... and continue to ponder XDXD

 

[Athel]

i just noticed how this organization's people are like the old organization's people. like Juxi-Muboro is like Xaldin and Yatrox (the cocky guy) is like Axel and for some reason Shiruix reminds me of Larxene...maybe its the giggling...

 

[Xidon]

i just noticed how this organization's people are like the old organization's people. like Juxi-Muboro is like Xaldin and Yatrox (the cocky guy) is like Axel and for some reason Shiruix reminds me of Larxene...maybe its the giggling...

Well mine is not, the only one that can come close to him are maybe Roxas and Zexion.

 

[Athel]

good point...wait ur name is Xidon and ur characters name is Xidon? have some originality! my nobody's name is Jaxannoth. that's original. guess who he used to be.

 

[Xidon]

^Dood his weapon, template and everything else is interesting, but my Organization name is Xidon so why not use it? James used his....