well they kinda have to because of this thing that happend in the past thatbkeeps them binded together, it is papu fruit but also it's some thing else.
thats all i'm revealing
thats all i'm revealing
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Haha, I like the Quack bit.
CHAPTER 19
DEEP JUNGLE : CAMP SITE
"So your saying your other freinds are in the other parts of the jungle" answered Tarzan. "Yeah and we gotta find them" answered Sora. "Hhmm.. maybe the gorrilas know where some of them are, they saw a few of your other freinds falling, one wearing a bra and one only wearing black pants" answered Tarzan. "Evas wearing a bra?" answered Sora with a cheeky smile. "SORA YOU PERV! AT LEATS ROXAS CONTROLS HIS NEEDS!" yelled Namine as she picked his ear and slapped him. Tarzan just giggled not noticing Kairi gazing at him love struck. "Lets take the vines rout first, I saw Donald, Goffy and some small guy with big ears fall in there" answered Tarzan. "You girls need help climbing?" asked Sora. "Not me, I'll manage" answered Namine bravely. "I hurt my anckle, I'll need some help" answered Kairi in an innocent voice, ovisley she was faking. "Alright I'll help you when we get there but be vigilant, I saw a few heartless hanging around" answered Tarzan. "Alright lets go" answered Sora. Kairi was shocked at how Sora didn't ask to help her she feelt like cutting down the camp site with her sword.
DEEP JUNGLE : TOP OF THE WATER FALL
"Isn't it beautiful up here" answered Eva smelling the fresh air. "I sure is, now get off me" answered Roxas who was under Eva. "Sorry" answered Eva after getting of and helping Roxas up. But then Roxas fell on Eva and they both fell and this time Roxas was on top of Eva. "Now you get of" yelled Eva. "Roxas rolled over and stood up. "Time to do some slidin" answered Eva. "On what?" asked Roxas. "On the trees silly" answered Eva pointing on the moss filled tree. "Cool" answered Roxas.
1O MINUTES LATER
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" yelled Roxas as he held onto Evas leg as they slid. "Shut up and act like a man" answered Eva. Roxas just frowned at what she said and shut his mouth. just then the branch hit them and they went flying down.
DEEP JUNGLE : VINES
"Hey look theres Sora, Riku, Namine and Kairi" answered the king point at them down at the bottom of the vines. "Hey Sora" yelled Donald. Sora looked up and saw them coming down and went over to greet them. "You guys ok?" asked Tarzan. "Yes we're fine... you can talk" answered Donald in suprise. "Of course, you would have thought I would learn sooner or later" answered Tarzan. "Oh" answered Donald. Thay headed back to the camp site to figure out where Roxas and Eva were.
DEEP JUNGLE : BAMBOO GROVE
"ROXAS GET OUT OF MY BOOBS!" yelled Eva as she woke up. She nock Roxas unconcusie again and he went flying to the other side. "EVA! IT IS YOU!!" yelled Xemnas as he hugged her tightly. "Good to see you too uncle but, I can't breathe" yelled Eva with a croaky voice. "Oh sorry, WHAT THE HELL WAS ROXAS DOING IN YOUR BOOBS, TELL ME YOUR STILL A VIRGIN!!?" yelled Xemnas. "There you are, Roxas was in your boobs?" smirked Sora as he looked at Namine who was speechless. "What are they doing here, I'll protect you" yelled Xemnas as he got into karate mode. "They're helping me find the other members" answered Eva with her face palmed. "Oh, sorry but are you sure you want them helping?" asked Xemnas. "Of course, they're my freinds" answered Eva. "Uhhhgggg.. what happened, all I remember was being in a warm, dark but good place" answered Roxas as he rubbed his head. Xemnass face went red as a tamatoe and he yelled out while running towards Roxas "DON'T TALK ABOUT MY NIECE THAT WAY" and he pownded Roxas. "Now I see the family resemblance" answered Eva while going red with emmbarasment. While that was happening Sora and Riku were staring at Eva in a pervert way that nobody noticed.
DEEP JUNGLE : CAMP SITE
"Oh Sora, Donald Goffy, it's good to see you three, who are your freinds?" asked Jane. "This is Riku, Kairi, Eva, Roxas, Xemnas and the king" answered Sora. "Oh how nice to meet you, sadly we are leavig in a few day so we won't be seeing you to often" answered Jane. "Leaving, to where?" asked Sora. "To the tree house" answered Jane. "Oh" answered Sora. "I think I saw your ship right next to it, no scratches on it at all" answered Jane. "Strange, but oh well lets go, I don't like running around in bikinis" answered Eva. "Leaving so soon, why?" asked Jan. "We got a few things to do but we'll come back" answered Sora. "Ok but you might want to fight that" answered Jane while pointing at a giant gorilla heartless. "Aw man" answered Riku. "Lets go" answered Eva.
DEEP JUNGLE : BAMBOO GROVE
Evaryone got into an attack force and fought the heartless for a while until it was defeated. "Whew, that was hard" answered Eva. "Yeah answered Roxas who was lying down. "Time to go back to the gumy ship" answered the king. "Right" answered Sora.
GUMMY SHIP : THE KINGS BATHROOM
The king ran towards the cabnet case and rushed throught the case and got out a bottle of darkness. He drank it all bown and threw away the bottle and started stop panicking. "Ahh, thats better" answered the king and he walked off.
DEEP JUNGLE : CAMP SITE
"So your saying your other freinds are in the other parts of the jungle" answered Tarzan. "Yeah and we gotta find them" answered Sora. "Hhmm.. maybe the gorrilas know where some of them are, they saw a few of your other freinds falling, one wearing a bra and one only wearing black pants" answered Tarzan. "Evas wearing a bra?" answered Sora with a cheeky smile. "SORA YOU PERV! AT LEATS ROXAS CONTROLS HIS NEEDS!" yelled Namine as she picked his ear and slapped him. Tarzan just giggled not noticing Kairi gazing at him love struck. "Lets take the vines rout first, I saw Donald, Goffy and some small guy with big ears fall in there" answered Tarzan. "You girls need help climbing?" asked Sora. "Not me, I'll manage" answered Namine bravely. "I hurt my anckle, I'll need some help" answered Kairi in an innocent voice, ovisley she was faking. "Alright I'll help you when we get there but be vigilant, I saw a few heartless hanging around" answered Tarzan. "Alright lets go" answered Sora. Kairi was shocked at how Sora didn't ask to help her she feelt like cutting down the camp site with her sword.
DEEP JUNGLE : TOP OF THE WATER FALL
"Isn't it beautiful up here" answered Eva smelling the fresh air. "I sure is, now get off me" answered Roxas who was under Eva. "Sorry" answered Eva after getting of and helping Roxas up. But then Roxas fell on Eva and they both fell and this time Roxas was on top of Eva. "Now you get of" yelled Eva. "Roxas rolled over and stood up. "Time to do some slidin" answered Eva. "On what?" asked Roxas. "On the trees silly" answered Eva pointing on the moss filled tree. "Cool" answered Roxas.
1O MINUTES LATER
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" yelled Roxas as he held onto Evas leg as they slid. "Shut up and act like a man" answered Eva. Roxas just frowned at what she said and shut his mouth. just then the branch hit them and they went flying down.
DEEP JUNGLE : VINES
"Hey look theres Sora, Riku, Namine and Kairi" answered the king point at them down at the bottom of the vines. "Hey Sora" yelled Donald. Sora looked up and saw them coming down and went over to greet them. "You guys ok?" asked Tarzan. "Yes we're fine... you can talk" answered Donald in suprise. "Of course, you would have thought I would learn sooner or later" answered Tarzan. "Oh" answered Donald. Thay headed back to the camp site to figure out where Roxas and Eva were.
DEEP JUNGLE : BAMBOO GROVE
"ROXAS GET OUT OF MY BOOBS!" yelled Eva as she woke up. She nock Roxas unconcusie again and he went flying to the other side. "EVA! IT IS YOU!!" yelled Xemnas as he hugged her tightly. "Good to see you too uncle but, I can't breathe" yelled Eva with a croaky voice. "Oh sorry, WHAT THE HELL WAS ROXAS DOING IN YOUR BOOBS, TELL ME YOUR STILL A VIRGIN!!?" yelled Xemnas. "There you are, Roxas was in your boobs?" smirked Sora as he looked at Namine who was speechless. "What are they doing here, I'll protect you" yelled Xemnas as he got into karate mode. "They're helping me find the other members" answered Eva with her face palmed. "Oh, sorry but are you sure you want them helping?" asked Xemnas. "Of course, they're my freinds" answered Eva. "Uhhhgggg.. what happened, all I remember was being in a warm, dark but good place" answered Roxas as he rubbed his head. Xemnass face went red as a tamatoe and he yelled out while running towards Roxas "DON'T TALK ABOUT MY NIECE THAT WAY" and he pownded Roxas. "Now I see the family resemblance" answered Eva while going red with emmbarasment. While that was happening Sora and Riku were staring at Eva in a pervert way that nobody noticed.
DEEP JUNGLE : CAMP SITE
"Oh Sora, Donald Goffy, it's good to see you three, who are your freinds?" asked Jane. "This is Riku, Kairi, Eva, Roxas, Xemnas and the king" answered Sora. "Oh how nice to meet you, sadly we are leavig in a few day so we won't be seeing you to often" answered Jane. "Leaving, to where?" asked Sora. "To the tree house" answered Jane. "Oh" answered Sora. "I think I saw your ship right next to it, no scratches on it at all" answered Jane. "Strange, but oh well lets go, I don't like running around in bikinis" answered Eva. "Leaving so soon, why?" asked Jan. "We got a few things to do but we'll come back" answered Sora. "Ok but you might want to fight that" answered Jane while pointing at a giant gorilla heartless. "Aw man" answered Riku. "Lets go" answered Eva.
DEEP JUNGLE : BAMBOO GROVE
Evaryone got into an attack force and fought the heartless for a while until it was defeated. "Whew, that was hard" answered Eva. "Yeah answered Roxas who was lying down. "Time to go back to the gumy ship" answered the king. "Right" answered Sora.
GUMMY SHIP : THE KINGS BATHROOM
The king ran towards the cabnet case and rushed throught the case and got out a bottle of darkness. He drank it all bown and threw away the bottle and started stop panicking. "Ahh, thats better" answered the king and he walked off.
I can change the fact of Sora being together with Eva and make Roxas be the one to be wit eva but I need a vote on it.
well to me roxas and eva should be together but sora and eva to are good
but i really think roxas x eva and sora x kairi is good
but i really think roxas x eva and sora x kairi is good
but wat about namine though does she like roxas?
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Well, I liked Eva with Seifer, but, since it is really creepy and messed up to date a corpse, I like Roxas and Eva better. Actually, scratch that, I prefer Eva and Riku. Riku is the only one not getting any love from the girls, and, to be honest, Roxas and Sora are better off with Namine and Kairi; I just don't think Eva is compatible with Sora or Roxas. Okay, back to the story. Geez, are all the boys really peverted when it comes to Eva? They better be careful because Kairi and Namine could beat them up if they wanted to for not getting enogh attention from the guys. And I'm glad that Xemnas is around, and as an overprotective, mentally retarded father figure. One more thing, why the heck is King Mickey drinking darkness? What was that all about? Oh well, all will be explained in due time. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.
Ok I can put Riku and Eva together, I'll put Sora and Namine together and how about Demyx and Kairi together.
With Kairi it can be almost any boy, apart from Sora and Riku.
With Kairi it can be almost any boy, apart from Sora and Riku.
CHAPTER 20
GUMMY SHIP : ENGINE ROOM (TOP FLOOR)
Riku and Eva were fixing the main engine since the gummy ship was internaly damaged. "Riku pass me the screw driver... Riku? hello... WHY THE HELL ARE YOU STARING AT ME!!??" yelled Eva. Riku was taking a look at Eva in her uniform and forgot to notice Xemnas was right next to him building up a spaz fit. "PASS HER THE GAWD DAMN SCREW DRIVER... don't think about screwing close to her.. I'M WATCHING YOU" yelled Xemnas. "I'M NOT STARING AT YOUR NEICE!!" yelled Riku freaked out. "OH YES YOU WERE, I WAS A BOY ONCE AND I KNOW HOW SICK YOUR MIND IS!!" yelled Xemnas. Riku handed over the screw driver still freaked out at Xemnas. "Thank you" answered Eva. Riku just blushed not knowing he was going over board. "Hey Eva we need some help down here the oils leaking" yelled Sora as he came up looking like he showered in thick oil. "I'll come down" answered Eva before she tripped. R iku saw thet she was going to trip and tried to catch her, only to be dragged with her over the rails. They went tumbling down throught the ropes and metal, wich mainly hit Riku, and the stopped in the middle of the air being held by a big bunch of ropes. Riku had cuts on his lip and the top of his eye and Eva was right on top of him pased out on his chest. As Xemnas saw Eva sleeping on Riku he and Sora got steemed, but Sora wasn't as steamed as he normaly would be filled with jealosy. Riku rapped his arms around her and jumped down by landing on each platform every time they had the chance. "Man that was close" answered Kairi who was really thinking about Eva going splat.
GUMMY SHIP : RECOVERY ROOM
As Riku laid her down Xemnas was still lurking behind his back watching his every move. "Do you have a problem about me saving your only family member?" answered Riku pissed off. "No, I just don't want Eva to get hurt" answered Xemnas still worried. "You can't treat her like a baby forever, I mean like, she's the ultimate key blade bearer" answered Riku after placing Eva down. "You probably don't know how it feels to lose a marrage and not be a father" answered Xemnas with his head down. "Failed marrage?" answered Riku confused. "The only reason I went on with the reaserch on hearless was beacause the heartless took my wife and she's gone forever" answered Xemnas. "Oh... I-I didn't know you had a bad life" answered Riku sypatheticly. "Ugg... man what happened, last thing I remember was falling and then feeling really warm" answered Eva as she rubbed her head and got up. "Great your ok" answered Riku blushing about the warm part. Xemnas just giggled and walked of saying "your a good kid".
GUMMY SHIP : DINNER ROOM : DINNER TIME
Everyone was exausted after fixing up the gummy ship the servants actualy had to make more food. Riku was sitting opposit of Eva eating causiasly and for the first time, he felt nervas. "So what world we headed to next?" asked Eva. "Olipas Colliseum" answered the king. "Nice, I finally get to crack some more skulls" answered Eva. "Thats my Eva" yelled Xemnas.
GUMMY SHIP : EVAS ROOM
Eva wrote down in her journal and put a few pictures from the world she took. Meanwhile Riku was out side of her room geetting ready to knock on the door before Sora ran to his room and pushed him a little bit. "Sorry" answered Sora. "It's ok" answered Riku befor he knock on the door. Eva opened the door and Riku asked "can I come in?". "Sure, is something wrong?" asked Eva. I'll explain later. Eva let him in and closed the door. The king saw Riku go in and got suspsioce but left it alone. "Whats wrong?" asked Eva sitting on her bed next to him.
GUMMY SHIP : ENGINE ROOM (TOP FLOOR)
Riku and Eva were fixing the main engine since the gummy ship was internaly damaged. "Riku pass me the screw driver... Riku? hello... WHY THE HELL ARE YOU STARING AT ME!!??" yelled Eva. Riku was taking a look at Eva in her uniform and forgot to notice Xemnas was right next to him building up a spaz fit. "PASS HER THE GAWD DAMN SCREW DRIVER... don't think about screwing close to her.. I'M WATCHING YOU" yelled Xemnas. "I'M NOT STARING AT YOUR NEICE!!" yelled Riku freaked out. "OH YES YOU WERE, I WAS A BOY ONCE AND I KNOW HOW SICK YOUR MIND IS!!" yelled Xemnas. Riku handed over the screw driver still freaked out at Xemnas. "Thank you" answered Eva. Riku just blushed not knowing he was going over board. "Hey Eva we need some help down here the oils leaking" yelled Sora as he came up looking like he showered in thick oil. "I'll come down" answered Eva before she tripped. R iku saw thet she was going to trip and tried to catch her, only to be dragged with her over the rails. They went tumbling down throught the ropes and metal, wich mainly hit Riku, and the stopped in the middle of the air being held by a big bunch of ropes. Riku had cuts on his lip and the top of his eye and Eva was right on top of him pased out on his chest. As Xemnas saw Eva sleeping on Riku he and Sora got steemed, but Sora wasn't as steamed as he normaly would be filled with jealosy. Riku rapped his arms around her and jumped down by landing on each platform every time they had the chance. "Man that was close" answered Kairi who was really thinking about Eva going splat.
GUMMY SHIP : RECOVERY ROOM
As Riku laid her down Xemnas was still lurking behind his back watching his every move. "Do you have a problem about me saving your only family member?" answered Riku pissed off. "No, I just don't want Eva to get hurt" answered Xemnas still worried. "You can't treat her like a baby forever, I mean like, she's the ultimate key blade bearer" answered Riku after placing Eva down. "You probably don't know how it feels to lose a marrage and not be a father" answered Xemnas with his head down. "Failed marrage?" answered Riku confused. "The only reason I went on with the reaserch on hearless was beacause the heartless took my wife and she's gone forever" answered Xemnas. "Oh... I-I didn't know you had a bad life" answered Riku sypatheticly. "Ugg... man what happened, last thing I remember was falling and then feeling really warm" answered Eva as she rubbed her head and got up. "Great your ok" answered Riku blushing about the warm part. Xemnas just giggled and walked of saying "your a good kid".
GUMMY SHIP : DINNER ROOM : DINNER TIME
Everyone was exausted after fixing up the gummy ship the servants actualy had to make more food. Riku was sitting opposit of Eva eating causiasly and for the first time, he felt nervas. "So what world we headed to next?" asked Eva. "Olipas Colliseum" answered the king. "Nice, I finally get to crack some more skulls" answered Eva. "Thats my Eva" yelled Xemnas.
GUMMY SHIP : EVAS ROOM
Eva wrote down in her journal and put a few pictures from the world she took. Meanwhile Riku was out side of her room geetting ready to knock on the door before Sora ran to his room and pushed him a little bit. "Sorry" answered Sora. "It's ok" answered Riku befor he knock on the door. Eva opened the door and Riku asked "can I come in?". "Sure, is something wrong?" asked Eva. I'll explain later. Eva let him in and closed the door. The king saw Riku go in and got suspsioce but left it alone. "Whats wrong?" asked Eva sitting on her bed next to him.
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Another great chapter, varsha. Aw, poor Xemnas!!! He lost his wife to the heartless; that was sad. I'm glad that you are pairing Riku and Eva together; seriously Riku needs som loving. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.
sora and kari and roxas and namine not demyx and kairi thats not a good match 
eva and riku is good i guess
eva and riku is good i guess
CHAPTER 21
GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK
As Eva, Donald and Goffy flew the ship along the paths, everyone was still nervus about the dance. "Why the hell is everyone still nervus, it's just a dance?" asked Riku as he ate and apple while juggling a few boild eggs. "Aren't you?, you don't have a partner" answered Sora as he chewed on some toast. "Of course, Eva" answered Riku as he threw his apple core away and still juggleing the eggs. "EVA! but she's going with Roxas" yelled Sora as he squrted himself with sauce and threw his sausage in the air, wich ende up in Evas lap. "Sora stop trying to create food fights" yelled Eva as she threw it into Soras mouth. "Roxas is going with Namine, he got a beating from her because he forgot to see her of" answered Riku as he peeled his eggs like a ninja with his keyblade. Sora just sat grumpy wondering why she didn't tell anyone but Riku. Eva started walking over to Riku and Sora with juice. "Hey, who's controling the ship" answered Sora as he took his cup of the mini tray. "Roxas and Namine are controling it, Namine is teaching Roxas and they ended up smooching as I left, it's good to see them act like a couple" answered Eva as she started gazing admiraly at Namine and Roxas. While she was gazing at Roxas and Namine, Riku was smiling and glancing at her every now and then. "Oh well I better get reading" answered Eva as she started walking towards her room. " Mind if I join you" answered Riku as he held the book Hamlet. "Sure" answered Eva as she walked with Riku. "Sure" mocked Sora as he saw them enter Evas room. One thing Sora didn't notice was that Xemnas was right behind him krunching his knuckles. Sora turned around and screamed as Xemnas pounced.
SORRY BECAUSE THIS IS... WELL ONE OF THOSE SCENES, LETS SEE WHAT EVA AND RIKU WERE DOING
"So how much exited were you to see me again?" asked Riku as he got closer to Eva. "Lots" answered Eva in a dreamy voice. Then Riku was right next to her and bent over to kiss when suddenly, "Riku, are you ok?" answered Eva waving her hand up and down in front of his face. Riku went red as he found out thet he was day dreaming. "Uhh... I... uhh.. was thinking about how good the book was" answered Riku as he held the book upside down. "We haven't started" answered Eva as she looked at him strangely. Riku just shrugged and started reading. "What the hells wrong with Riku?" thought Eva as she started reading.
GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK
"Will you two knock it off!" yelled Namine as she held them by their ears. "I can't belive it, I lost to a girl" mumbled Sora. "Hey she's a girl, you can't attack her you moron" answered Xemnas. Namine hedded of to the recovery room while Riku and Eva came back. "What happened to reading?" asked Kairi. "Riku started day dreaming" answered Eva. "Oh" answered Kairi. "We're approching the Olimpas Colliseum" yelled the king.
GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK
As Eva, Donald and Goffy flew the ship along the paths, everyone was still nervus about the dance. "Why the hell is everyone still nervus, it's just a dance?" asked Riku as he ate and apple while juggling a few boild eggs. "Aren't you?, you don't have a partner" answered Sora as he chewed on some toast. "Of course, Eva" answered Riku as he threw his apple core away and still juggleing the eggs. "EVA! but she's going with Roxas" yelled Sora as he squrted himself with sauce and threw his sausage in the air, wich ende up in Evas lap. "Sora stop trying to create food fights" yelled Eva as she threw it into Soras mouth. "Roxas is going with Namine, he got a beating from her because he forgot to see her of" answered Riku as he peeled his eggs like a ninja with his keyblade. Sora just sat grumpy wondering why she didn't tell anyone but Riku. Eva started walking over to Riku and Sora with juice. "Hey, who's controling the ship" answered Sora as he took his cup of the mini tray. "Roxas and Namine are controling it, Namine is teaching Roxas and they ended up smooching as I left, it's good to see them act like a couple" answered Eva as she started gazing admiraly at Namine and Roxas. While she was gazing at Roxas and Namine, Riku was smiling and glancing at her every now and then. "Oh well I better get reading" answered Eva as she started walking towards her room. " Mind if I join you" answered Riku as he held the book Hamlet. "Sure" answered Eva as she walked with Riku. "Sure" mocked Sora as he saw them enter Evas room. One thing Sora didn't notice was that Xemnas was right behind him krunching his knuckles. Sora turned around and screamed as Xemnas pounced.
SORRY BECAUSE THIS IS... WELL ONE OF THOSE SCENES, LETS SEE WHAT EVA AND RIKU WERE DOING
"So how much exited were you to see me again?" asked Riku as he got closer to Eva. "Lots" answered Eva in a dreamy voice. Then Riku was right next to her and bent over to kiss when suddenly, "Riku, are you ok?" answered Eva waving her hand up and down in front of his face. Riku went red as he found out thet he was day dreaming. "Uhh... I... uhh.. was thinking about how good the book was" answered Riku as he held the book upside down. "We haven't started" answered Eva as she looked at him strangely. Riku just shrugged and started reading. "What the hells wrong with Riku?" thought Eva as she started reading.
GUMMY SHIP : MAIN DECK
"Will you two knock it off!" yelled Namine as she held them by their ears. "I can't belive it, I lost to a girl" mumbled Sora. "Hey she's a girl, you can't attack her you moron" answered Xemnas. Namine hedded of to the recovery room while Riku and Eva came back. "What happened to reading?" asked Kairi. "Riku started day dreaming" answered Eva. "Oh" answered Kairi. "We're approching the Olimpas Colliseum" yelled the king.
lol that was funny
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Ha ha, that was funny. Xemnas kicked the crap out of Sora, and Namine ended up beating them up to stop them. Can't wait to see more.
CHAPTER 22
OLIMPAS COLLISEUM : COLLISEUM
"Ahh this place looks brand new" answered Eva as she streched and accidently hit Riku and Sora in the face. "Yeah brand new" answered Kairi copying what Eva was doing. Namine just looked strangley at Kairi. "Sora!" yelled a young voice. Sora turned around and saw Hercules waving at them, everyone was facing the door. "Hey Herc" answered Sora. As soon as Eva saw Hercules she started to have dreamy eyes and Riku noticed. "What you guys been up to?" asked Hercules. "You know the usual, but this time looking for those guys in black coats" answered Sora. "Hey we have a guy training with phil wearing a black coat, he's got some sort of crystal gun" answered Hercules. "Aw man, why Xigbar, why" whined Eva. "What?, whats wrong with Xigbar?" asked Riku. "Hey! it's porno starter" yelled Xigbar. "Thats why" answered Eva digging her face in her hands to hide how emmbarased she was. Roxas just smirked while Xemnas just looked lost like everyone else, Riku just looked at Eva wondering why she was called a porno starter. "Whats wrong, you sad you didn't start a strip club? told you it was good munny than just hangging around with a few dum balls" answered Xigbar looking at Eva in her clothes. Riku and Xemnas noticed and went in front of her yelling "YOU SICK PERVERT!". "Out of my way, I have a lesson to teach this dirty old man" yelled Eva pushing them. "What are you going to do, whip me with your other freinds that are girls?" answered Xigbar not intimadated. Then Kairi and Namine looked mad and followed Eva with their swords. "You are soo dead" answered Roxas. As soon as Xigbar saw the girls he started to look happy but then his expresion changed as Eva pounced.
WELL... THIS IS ONE OF THOSE SENCES, LETS GO IN ROXAS'S MIND LIKE LAST TIME.
Oh, man, I glad I'm not Xigbar.... go Namine!. Wait a sec, he insulted my girl freind, I'm gonna soo beat him up in the ring.
OLLIMPAS COLLISEUM : COLLISEUM
"I didn't maen it" moaned Xigbar as the colliseum paramedics picked him up. "Um... you girls want to go inside?" asked Hercules as he stepped back from Eva, Kairi and Namine. "Sure" they all answered at once. as they left for the lobby they watched Xigbar fall of the mini portable bed as the paremedics move.
OLLIMPAS COLLISEUM : COLLISEUM LOBBY
"Herc can you go and move the pedistel over there" answered Phil looking at the newly formed trophy case. "Sure, Sora, why don't you introduce your freinds to Phil?" answered Hercules as he moved the pedistel. "Ok" answered Sora. "Hey Phil" answered Sora as he moved towards him. "Sora! when'd you get here?, who're your freinds?" asked Phil. "Well-" answered Sora. "I'm Eva" answered Eva cutting him of. "I'm Riku" answered Riku. "I'm Kiari" answered Kairi. "I'm Namine" answered Namine. "I'm Xemnas, Eva's Uncle" answered Xemnas eyeing him. "I'm Roxas" answered Roxas. "Nice to meet you, have you guys seen my trainee?" asked Phil. "Uh... long story" answered Sora.
OLIMPAS COLLISEUM : COLLISEUM
"Ahh this place looks brand new" answered Eva as she streched and accidently hit Riku and Sora in the face. "Yeah brand new" answered Kairi copying what Eva was doing. Namine just looked strangley at Kairi. "Sora!" yelled a young voice. Sora turned around and saw Hercules waving at them, everyone was facing the door. "Hey Herc" answered Sora. As soon as Eva saw Hercules she started to have dreamy eyes and Riku noticed. "What you guys been up to?" asked Hercules. "You know the usual, but this time looking for those guys in black coats" answered Sora. "Hey we have a guy training with phil wearing a black coat, he's got some sort of crystal gun" answered Hercules. "Aw man, why Xigbar, why" whined Eva. "What?, whats wrong with Xigbar?" asked Riku. "Hey! it's porno starter" yelled Xigbar. "Thats why" answered Eva digging her face in her hands to hide how emmbarased she was. Roxas just smirked while Xemnas just looked lost like everyone else, Riku just looked at Eva wondering why she was called a porno starter. "Whats wrong, you sad you didn't start a strip club? told you it was good munny than just hangging around with a few dum balls" answered Xigbar looking at Eva in her clothes. Riku and Xemnas noticed and went in front of her yelling "YOU SICK PERVERT!". "Out of my way, I have a lesson to teach this dirty old man" yelled Eva pushing them. "What are you going to do, whip me with your other freinds that are girls?" answered Xigbar not intimadated. Then Kairi and Namine looked mad and followed Eva with their swords. "You are soo dead" answered Roxas. As soon as Xigbar saw the girls he started to look happy but then his expresion changed as Eva pounced.
WELL... THIS IS ONE OF THOSE SENCES, LETS GO IN ROXAS'S MIND LIKE LAST TIME.
Oh, man, I glad I'm not Xigbar.... go Namine!. Wait a sec, he insulted my girl freind, I'm gonna soo beat him up in the ring.
OLLIMPAS COLLISEUM : COLLISEUM
"I didn't maen it" moaned Xigbar as the colliseum paramedics picked him up. "Um... you girls want to go inside?" asked Hercules as he stepped back from Eva, Kairi and Namine. "Sure" they all answered at once. as they left for the lobby they watched Xigbar fall of the mini portable bed as the paremedics move.
OLLIMPAS COLLISEUM : COLLISEUM LOBBY
"Herc can you go and move the pedistel over there" answered Phil looking at the newly formed trophy case. "Sure, Sora, why don't you introduce your freinds to Phil?" answered Hercules as he moved the pedistel. "Ok" answered Sora. "Hey Phil" answered Sora as he moved towards him. "Sora! when'd you get here?, who're your freinds?" asked Phil. "Well-" answered Sora. "I'm Eva" answered Eva cutting him of. "I'm Riku" answered Riku. "I'm Kiari" answered Kairi. "I'm Namine" answered Namine. "I'm Xemnas, Eva's Uncle" answered Xemnas eyeing him. "I'm Roxas" answered Roxas. "Nice to meet you, have you guys seen my trainee?" asked Phil. "Uh... long story" answered Sora.
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That was funny. Xigbar is such a jackass; he totally deserved to get his ass kicked by a bunch of girls. Great job, and I look forward to more.
CHAPTER 23
OLLIMPAS COLLISEUM : BATTLE ARENA
"Whoa, told him not to go of like that with girls, just ask Meg how steamed she got" answered Phil as he heard the story and walked into the battle arena. "Guys I'm starting to fell drowsy" answered Eva as she started to put her hand on her head. "You sure?" asked Riku as he and Xemnas got behind her. "I'm sure, some one catch me!" mumbled Eva as she fell backwards on Riku sleeping like a baby. "Oh dear, the capcule cemicals are finally kicking in" answered Xemnas as he got a teddy bear out. "What capcule chemical?" asked Sora. "Well as you know, you woke up in a capcule on your second juorney, Eva was in a capcule for three years and the capcule leaves it's mark by having her drowsy moments for two days,oh and she can't sleep without her hugging something" answered Xemnas taking the bears tag of. "You think?" answered Riku as Eva hugged him in her sleep saying I want to keep pooky bear. Riku went red with emmbarasment and everyone just giggled. "Aww, she remembers her first teddy bear, this time she'll be out for ten minutes, she won't let go of you until she wakes up for a two minute break, you'll have to sleep side by side with her, I'M WATCHING YOU!" yelled Xemnas. "Wait, you mean sleep close to her?" asked Riku boing even more red. "I'll go make you two a bed for alone time" smirked Sora and ran of with Phil to get a bed. "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!" yelled Riku. "Aww you two are bonding" answered Kairi while taking photographs and sticking them in her own journal. "Come on don't tease them" answered Hercules as he came through the door. "Why not?" asked Roxas as he got his own picture. "It's not nice" answered Hercules. "We're not five year olds and the world is always cruel" answered Roxas. "Whoa she finally decided to hook up" answered Xigbar with a broken arm. "How about you SHUT UP!" yelled Riku. Xigbar just shrugged and took of his cast wich said "Fake Organization". "Xigbar, you cheeted on our Organization?" answered Xemnas looking at the cast. "I did it for the money MANSEX!" answered Xigbar. what do you mean MANSEX YOU DIRTY PERV!!" yelled Xemnas as he pounced onto Xigbar wich ended up becoming a brawl between them. "Your bed is ready" answered Sora giving them a cheesy smile. Riku sneered at him and carryed Eva as she still lached onto him. The bed was only on a seat on the blechers, as soon as they lyed down the battles started. It was know seven minutes past since Eva fell asleep and Riku dosed off and Xemnas lurked over them making sure there wasn't any kissing action. Another minute and thirty seconds went by and it was almost time for them to wake up, Xemnas started eating popcorn and Xigbar peeped over to see if anything more intreresting was happening between them than fighting. Eva started to open her eyes and notice where she was, when she fully awoke her eyes widened and let her grip go and she catapoted up giving Xemnas a nose bleed. "WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED AND WHY AM I SLEEPING WITH RIKU!!" yelled Eva as she woke up Riku who catapolted up giving Xigbar a nose bleed. "Wha- oh your awake, I think I must have dosed of for a few minutes" answered Riku rubbing his eyes. "Are the love birds up?" asked Sora. "Wait you mean me and Riku... AHHH I'M NOT A VIRGIN ANY MORE!" answered Eva holding herself. "I'm afraid thats the naked truth, right in front of us" answered Sora bowing his head down. "Stop it, nothing happened" answered Riku. "How do you know? you fell asleep" smirked Sora. "Nothing happened dear your still a virgin, know hold the teddy bear until tommorow is over, AND DON'T LET GO OF IT" yelled Xemnas handing over the teddy bear. "Ok" answered Eva as she reached out forthe teddey bear until she fell asleep again on Riku. "Woah, that was two minutes? well this time it's for an hour so you two will be out of action" answered Sora fluffing the pillow. "I'm putting a camera in her room so I know what you two are up two" answered Xemnas headding for the ship. "I better get going" answered Riku going red a little bit and following Xemnas. "What a nice couple, time to destroy heartless, specialy theat big one, oh look that the only one we have to kill to make this world safe" answered Xigbar pointing at the Heartless.
GUMMY SHIP : EVA'S ROOM
"No sexual contact" answered Xemnas looking at Riku. "Thats hard to do since she is hugging me like she loves me" answered Riku lying down on the bed with Eva. "Ok, but no kisssing or um... things to do with sex" answered Xemnas. Riku fell asleep and Xemnas left and found out they were leaving for the new world.
OLLIMPAS COLLISEUM : BATTLE ARENA
"Whoa, told him not to go of like that with girls, just ask Meg how steamed she got" answered Phil as he heard the story and walked into the battle arena. "Guys I'm starting to fell drowsy" answered Eva as she started to put her hand on her head. "You sure?" asked Riku as he and Xemnas got behind her. "I'm sure, some one catch me!" mumbled Eva as she fell backwards on Riku sleeping like a baby. "Oh dear, the capcule cemicals are finally kicking in" answered Xemnas as he got a teddy bear out. "What capcule chemical?" asked Sora. "Well as you know, you woke up in a capcule on your second juorney, Eva was in a capcule for three years and the capcule leaves it's mark by having her drowsy moments for two days,oh and she can't sleep without her hugging something" answered Xemnas taking the bears tag of. "You think?" answered Riku as Eva hugged him in her sleep saying I want to keep pooky bear. Riku went red with emmbarasment and everyone just giggled. "Aww, she remembers her first teddy bear, this time she'll be out for ten minutes, she won't let go of you until she wakes up for a two minute break, you'll have to sleep side by side with her, I'M WATCHING YOU!" yelled Xemnas. "Wait, you mean sleep close to her?" asked Riku boing even more red. "I'll go make you two a bed for alone time" smirked Sora and ran of with Phil to get a bed. "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!" yelled Riku. "Aww you two are bonding" answered Kairi while taking photographs and sticking them in her own journal. "Come on don't tease them" answered Hercules as he came through the door. "Why not?" asked Roxas as he got his own picture. "It's not nice" answered Hercules. "We're not five year olds and the world is always cruel" answered Roxas. "Whoa she finally decided to hook up" answered Xigbar with a broken arm. "How about you SHUT UP!" yelled Riku. Xigbar just shrugged and took of his cast wich said "Fake Organization". "Xigbar, you cheeted on our Organization?" answered Xemnas looking at the cast. "I did it for the money MANSEX!" answered Xigbar. what do you mean MANSEX YOU DIRTY PERV!!" yelled Xemnas as he pounced onto Xigbar wich ended up becoming a brawl between them. "Your bed is ready" answered Sora giving them a cheesy smile. Riku sneered at him and carryed Eva as she still lached onto him. The bed was only on a seat on the blechers, as soon as they lyed down the battles started. It was know seven minutes past since Eva fell asleep and Riku dosed off and Xemnas lurked over them making sure there wasn't any kissing action. Another minute and thirty seconds went by and it was almost time for them to wake up, Xemnas started eating popcorn and Xigbar peeped over to see if anything more intreresting was happening between them than fighting. Eva started to open her eyes and notice where she was, when she fully awoke her eyes widened and let her grip go and she catapoted up giving Xemnas a nose bleed. "WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED AND WHY AM I SLEEPING WITH RIKU!!" yelled Eva as she woke up Riku who catapolted up giving Xigbar a nose bleed. "Wha- oh your awake, I think I must have dosed of for a few minutes" answered Riku rubbing his eyes. "Are the love birds up?" asked Sora. "Wait you mean me and Riku... AHHH I'M NOT A VIRGIN ANY MORE!" answered Eva holding herself. "I'm afraid thats the naked truth, right in front of us" answered Sora bowing his head down. "Stop it, nothing happened" answered Riku. "How do you know? you fell asleep" smirked Sora. "Nothing happened dear your still a virgin, know hold the teddy bear until tommorow is over, AND DON'T LET GO OF IT" yelled Xemnas handing over the teddy bear. "Ok" answered Eva as she reached out forthe teddey bear until she fell asleep again on Riku. "Woah, that was two minutes? well this time it's for an hour so you two will be out of action" answered Sora fluffing the pillow. "I'm putting a camera in her room so I know what you two are up two" answered Xemnas headding for the ship. "I better get going" answered Riku going red a little bit and following Xemnas. "What a nice couple, time to destroy heartless, specialy theat big one, oh look that the only one we have to kill to make this world safe" answered Xigbar pointing at the Heartless.
GUMMY SHIP : EVA'S ROOM
"No sexual contact" answered Xemnas looking at Riku. "Thats hard to do since she is hugging me like she loves me" answered Riku lying down on the bed with Eva. "Ok, but no kisssing or um... things to do with sex" answered Xemnas. Riku fell asleep and Xemnas left and found out they were leaving for the new world.
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Seriously, I so love Xemnas' attitude; overly protective, mentally retarded people are always funny. Anyway, great chapter, and I look forward to more.
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